No Elves in Sovngarde, I've decided to to turn my "A day in Skyrim" adventure i Options

[Elisabeth Hollow]

Hey y'all! The "Today in Skyrim" thing made mee remember how MUCH I love writing, and how much better it is to not just write shutff and hide it. So the first post is going to be the old "chapters" combined along with the new one I just wrote. Feedback welcome, but remember, no one has seen anything I've written in over 8 years, lol

[King Of Beasts]

"Kayla?" I barely registered Onmund's voice. I smiled regardless. He was awake. He was cured, and would be alright. I was ready to go to the Colored Rooms of Meridia's realm. No Sovngarde for me, but that was alright too. I was tired of fighting. I felt a liquid go down my throat, but knew it was too late. I heard voices and the sound of chaos, firebolts being hurled, and death screams. Someone shook me and sobbed while they held me. They rocked back and forth and kissed my face.

And then that was it.

Is Kayla alright or is this really the end? I'm pretty sure she's alright though.

Movarth is quite cruel and greatly deserved to die the way he did.

stomach I stood up and held Dawnguard

Do you mean "Dawnbreaker" Don't worry, I make spelling mistakes ALL the time, and usually don't catch them.

Excellent chapter, it's nice to sit down and read after a long, stressful day if being yelled at by teachers. All I have left to say is:

Well Done


EDIT: I even make spelling mistakes in my comments I fixed it though

This post has been edited by King Of Beasts: Jan 9 2013, 12:04 AM

[Elisabeth Hollow]

stomach I stood up and held Dawnguard

Do you mean "Dawnbreaker" Don't worry, I make spelling mistakes ALL the time, and usually don't catch them.

-snort- Thanks for catching that!! I missed that with the three edits I made lol