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| Elisabeth Hollow |
 Dec 18 2012, 07:32 AM
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Hey y'all! The "Today in Skyrim" thing made mee remember how MUCH I love writing, and how much better it is to not just write shutff and hide it. So the first post is going to be the old "chapters" combined along with the new one I just wrote. Feedback welcome, but remember, no one has seen anything I've written in over 8 years, lol
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| mALX |
Jan 20 2013, 05:58 AM
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 Ancient Joined: 14-March 10 From: Cyrodiil, the Wastelands, and BFE TN |
QUOTE Lydia stepped aside, but not enough to where Onmund could slip by easily. She glared at him, her mouth pulled back in what looked like a snarl. That is Lydia's perpetual look, it scared me too. I'm glad she let him leave though. His excuse for why he dallied with Alva was flimsy and self-serving. The fact that he wanted to blame Kayla for his weakness made him even less of a man. Kayla's calling all the shots for Onmund's life and thinking she had to "protect Onmund" from danger - that would be un-manning to any male, but the fact that Onmund let her do it shows he wasn't living up to his testosterone anyway. What I love here is that you have given us real flawed characters to work with, so we can see how life shapes them to overcome those flaws. Loving this story so far! Awesome Write! -------------------- |
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Elisabeth Hollow No Elves in Sovngarde Dec 18 2012, 07:32 AM
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... Dec 21 2012, 11:45 AM Acadian A fun scene with Onmund, and balanced by the enter... Dec 21 2012, 09:36 PM King Coin This chapter was fun! Getting to know the two ... Dec 22 2012, 06:09 PM McBadgere Ooooh, excellent stuff!!!...
I do lov... Dec 22 2012, 07:10 PM Elisabeth Hollow D'awwww, y'all are making me blush!... Dec 23 2012, 06:31 AM Elisabeth Hollow I'm going nuts writing this. The last time I w... Dec 24 2012, 08:21 AM McBadgere
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I know!! I was like "I wasn't a... Dec 24 2012, 04:26 PM Acadian Oh, those pesky ellipses.... Let me check. . . he... Dec 24 2012, 06:19 PM McBadgere unless your name is McBadgere, not to overuse them... Dec 24 2012, 07:26 PM Elisabeth Hollow Crap, I thought I was so careful this time XD I re... Dec 24 2012, 08:16 PM Grits No space after the elipses?! You…madwoman... Dec 27 2012, 04:34 PM Elisabeth Hollow
No space after the elipses?! You…madwoman... Dec 27 2012, 07:17 PM jack cloudy I've got nothing to add that hasn't been s... Dec 27 2012, 09:40 PM King Coin The Gildergreen quest goes a lot better with that ... Dec 28 2012, 02:26 AM Elisabeth Hollow
-snort- I tried to marry Mjoll the Lioness. I lov... Dec 28 2012, 03:10 AM King Coin
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I'm partial to "The Dragonborn Comes... Dec 28 2012, 03:17 AM Elisabeth Hollow Ah, erm...I checked the word count on chapter 5, a... Dec 28 2012, 05:24 AM Acadian
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‘Doors! Why doesn't this place hav... Jan 1 2013, 08:39 AM mALX Chapter 3 was a quieting after the power of the se... Jan 1 2013, 10:23 PM Elisabeth Hollow
Nit? - Chapter 6 is missing?
Chapter 6 migh... Jan 2 2013, 03:44 AM McBadgere So much that is so goood!!... :D ...
Oh, ... Jan 4 2013, 07:46 PM Elisabeth Hollow My boss walked into work, and since I've been ... Jan 4 2013, 10:19 PM King Of Beasts Great chapter! Alva is gonna get hers, that... Jan 4 2013, 10:27 PM mALX Kayla’s inner dialogue ROCK’d this whole chapter, ... Jan 5 2013, 04:18 PM Elisabeth Hollow Thanks y'all! ^.^ Jan 5 2013, 06:59 PM Acadian ‘I picked the lock, snapping two in the process. ... Jan 5 2013, 07:05 PM Elisabeth Hollow I didn't know that a-r-s-e was considered a cu... Jan 5 2013, 07:17 PM mALX
I didn't know that a-r-s-e was considered a c... Jan 5 2013, 07:23 PM Elisabeth Hollow Well then. lol Jan 5 2013, 07:28 PM mALX
Well then. lol
Lol! One of the best ways t... Jan 6 2013, 02:11 AM Elisabeth Hollow Yeah. And then I'll have to become more creati... Jan 6 2013, 04:59 AM mALX
Yeah. And then I'll have to become more creat... Jan 6 2013, 05:12 AM Elisabeth Hollow
Yeah. And then I'll have to become more crea... Jan 6 2013, 05:12 AM King Of Beasts
Yeah. And then I'll have to become more crea... Jan 6 2013, 06:03 AM Elisabeth Hollow
[quote name='mALX' post='148542' date='Jan 5 2013... Jan 6 2013, 06:48 AM King Of Beasts
[quote name='mALX' post='148542' date='Jan 5 201... Jan 6 2013, 07:59 AM jack cloudy Things are heating up! (Or cooling down, depen... Jan 7 2013, 10:27 PM Elisabeth Hollow
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I have no plan.
I realized t... Jan 8 2013, 11:48 PM King Of Beasts
Is Kayla alright or is this really the end? I... Jan 9 2013, 12:03 AM Elisabeth Hollow
Do you mean "Dawnbreaker" :) Don... Jan 9 2013, 12:08 AM Acadian This was a great episode! What a fantastic an... Jan 9 2013, 12:47 AM Elisabeth Hollow Really? -girlish squeal- I was so nervous about ge... Jan 9 2013, 01:53 AM Grits Oh wow, what a great chapter!
Even if there... Jan 9 2013, 05:17 AM Elisabeth Hollow Thanks, Grits! Y'all are gonna give me a h... Jan 9 2013, 05:29 AM mALX The first paragraph was so gritty you could smell ... Jan 10 2013, 02:08 AM Elisabeth Hollow -blushes- tooo kiiiind! Jan 11 2013, 04:18 AM Elisabeth Hollow I'm going to let you guys in on a little secre... Jan 12 2013, 09:44 PM King Of Beasts Onmund was a real [censored] in this chapter. I Sa... Jan 12 2013, 10:00 PM mALX Very powerful and emotional chapter! I can un... Jan 12 2013, 10:06 PM jack cloudy Oh my, it's not getting any better, is it? :( ... Jan 13 2013, 10:32 PM Elisabeth Hollow I think they did the "Only 1 or 2 babies... Jan 13 2013, 10:37 PM Acadian Powerful stuff indeed. The scene you set for Meri... Jan 14 2013, 02:01 AM Elisabeth Hollow
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What's Kayla going to do with a paralyzatio... Jan 16 2013, 06:31 PM mALX
What's Kayla going to do with a paralyzati... Jan 16 2013, 07:08 PM Acadian I really enjoyed this update!
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It absolutely has merit. I find it to be a simpl... Jan 20 2013, 04:50 AM McBadgere Blimey...You really are on a roll with this emotio... Jan 20 2013, 07:55 AM mALX
I know what it is that it's saying...I can pi... Jan 20 2013, 08:22 AM McBadgere You dated Doctor Octopus?!! :O :huh: Jan 20 2013, 08:53 AM mALX
You dated Doctor Octopus?!! :O :huh:
... Jan 20 2013, 09:16 AM Elisabeth Hollow -snort!- Same here, mALX, but it was never dur... Jan 20 2013, 04:30 PM mALX
-snort!- Same here, mALX, but it was never du... Jan 20 2013, 05:59 PM |
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