Fallout of Grace: New Vegas, Eva Bree's journey through the Mojave Wasteland Options

[Diamandis]

Hello all!

I'm Eva and I'd like to share with you my story based on Fallout: New Vegas.

The story follows Eva Bree, a courier who found her self being almost mortally wounded for reasons she is unsure of.

Her story starts after waking up from her ordeal in the town of Goodsprings after being rescued from near death.

First, I shall tell you a little bit about Eva.

Eva is originally the protagonist of my original Fallout 3 fanfic (which I will post as a prequel as soon as I find it as I lost the portable hard drive it was on! Oops). After the events in Fallout 3 she decided to travel the wasteland, eventually getting a job as a courier as she tried to live as normal a life as possible. Unfortunately, this was not meant to be...

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Chapter 2 - boy did this chapter bring back some fond memories! Then the last line reminded me of the giant radroach outside Goodsprings that killed me like 7 times trying to get up to the cemetery on that plateau overlooking Goodsprings, lol.

Chapter 2 Part One - I loved this little interchange:

“You seem very eager to help out a bunch of people you don’t even know?” She said.

I smiled and folded my arms playfully, “Would you rather I wasn't?.”

Sunny smirked at me, and then nodded. I winked at her before heading outside.

You have a talent for writing natural dialogue that makes your story very immersive! Great Write!

Chapter 2 Part 2 - One of the very few things I found disappointing in New Vegas - the burned out cars don’t explode. I wasted all my bullets trying to blow up a gang of Powder Gangers, ended up dead and had to reload a save.

I am loving being brought through the beginning of the game again, and your writing is very immersive! Keep up the great work !!!