Phoenix: Rise of a Legend, Breeva's life in Cyrodiil Options

[Diamandis]

HI! Here is my second attempt at starting my OBLIVION fanfic! I changed the format, as before the plan was to do a sort of story within a story format, but I couldn't get it to work.

But here it is!

This is the tale of Breeva, a fifteen year old Dunmer and Dark Brotherhood assassin. The story follows her life as she struggles with adolescence as she tries to find a place in the world.

She has a dark beginning, but I hope you like her story

Now, I'm not too familiar with a huge amount of Lore, but i'm gradually learning as I play the game and read other stories, so the story is literally how I perceive the game to be. Until I get more of a grip on lore, anyway.

A warning: the prologue does contain very... graphic imagery of gore, but don't let this put you off. The rest of the story wont be as gory!

This post has been edited by Eva: Mar 3 2013, 08:15 PM

[Grits]

I like that you showed Breeva training in the Sanctuary.

Ocheeva then unleashed the most wicked of smiles, “It appears we forgot that it was your birthday last week.”

Nice! I was all tense thinking that they were going to give their youngest member some horrible punishment!

It’s interesting that Breeva is questioning whether or not she should kill her target. It speaks well to her character that she has her own conscience, but it also spells trouble in an organization that follows the orders of the Night Mother.

I’m looking forward to more of Breeva’s adventures!