Phoenix: Rise of a Legend, Breeva's life in Cyrodiil Options

[Diamandis]

HI! Here is my second attempt at starting my OBLIVION fanfic! I changed the format, as before the plan was to do a sort of story within a story format, but I couldn't get it to work.

But here it is!

This is the tale of Breeva, a fifteen year old Dunmer and Dark Brotherhood assassin. The story follows her life as she struggles with adolescence as she tries to find a place in the world.

She has a dark beginning, but I hope you like her story

Now, I'm not too familiar with a huge amount of Lore, but i'm gradually learning as I play the game and read other stories, so the story is literally how I perceive the game to be. Until I get more of a grip on lore, anyway.

A warning: the prologue does contain very... graphic imagery of gore, but don't let this put you off. The rest of the story wont be as gory!

This post has been edited by Eva: Mar 3 2013, 08:15 PM

[ghastley]

It's very much in keeping with her stated philosophy that she makes Rufio's execution fit his crime, by freezing his heart further. She'd said before
I knew that I would be punishing the guilty ad I’d made it clear that those were the only kinds of contracts I wanted…
But then the line
In some respect yes, I was a bad person seeing as I was on my way to commit murder…
especially in the first person, seemed to contradict that. Maybe "perform an execution" would be more her way of thinking about it? But then you mention her feeling guilt later on,
The guilt and worry eased from my body.
so maybe not. And after re-reading the line, I'm thinking that she's trying to see it from the publican's viewpoint. That ambiguity could of course be what you intended.

Anyway, this story has sucked me in, and made me care about what she's thinking, so you must be doing something right!