Trouble never comes alone Options

[jack cloudy]

Yes, so I just couldn't resist and had to get this off my chest. We'll see how long it lasts. Same deal as with redemption, I'll be using this post as a character list and the first part will be in the next one. For now the list is simple.

A question. Should I add a separate entry for Spar at the very bottom that is basically the extra-spoilers edition?

Spar: A female Imperial and the main character of this story. Is guided by 'Them'.
(Portrait)

Silent Fist: A Companion Spar hires to escort her into Bleak Falls Barrow. He doesn't speak, wear shirts or use weapons. Click here for portrait

Faendal: A wood elf who lives in a small village known as Riverwood. He works as a hunter and lumberjack.

Lucan Valerius: The shopkeeper of Riverwood.

Jarl Balgruuf: The Jarl of Whiterun, a city located in the center of Skyrim between the fronts of the Imperial and Stormcloak factions.

Hrongar: Jarl Balgruuf's brother. Looks like he walked off the set of a Conan-film.

Irileth: A Dunmer who serves as Jarl Balgruuf's bodyguard.

Proventus Avenicci: Jarl Balgruuf's steward.


Vilkas: One of the Companions, a mercenary group in Whiterun
Vignar Grey-Mane: Formerly of the Companions, now retired.

Ulfric Stormcloak: The rebel leader in Skyrim, once on of the Emperor's generals.

Arkarik: Someone Spar was supposed to meet in Cyrodiil.

This post has been edited by jack cloudy: Aug 1 2013, 06:34 PM

[mALX]

First, I am so sorry it took so long to get here to read. This is only the first chapter, I am not caught up yet.

This has to be the best rendition I've seen of the dragon attacks, the confusion and fear (and love that you gave it your own spin instead of the cart ride)!

Your main character is so intriguing, as is the "Them." I was picturing some long dead person (or god) from TES history that had been brought back to life via necromancy, ROFL!!! (never give me a mystery, I take and run with them, lol).

There was more food in mine

Faendal is a gentleman!

The mating contest, I'm guessing for Camilla? Lol. Or is she Camilla? Love the mystery, I remember the beginning of Redemption where you gave us clues like this and it was always intriguing to figure out who the character was. Awesome Write!