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ThatSkyrimGuy
post May 4 2013, 04:41 AM
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Brief Intro By The Author

A Question of Fate would be the title of my piece.

I have been back and forth about trying to start and post a fan fic piece. The idea has always intrigued me, but I never considered myself to be a writer, let alone a good writer. I have read a sampling of some of the works that are posted on this site, and quite frankly, it is intimidating. The material is amazing. I must say say that despite the intimidation, it is also inspiring. So I am willing to throw caution to the wind and go for it. There are a few provisos. I work for a living. Often times, the hours I work are long. There may be periods of dormancy in this thread. I will apologize in advance for that. Life outside the internet does have it's restrictions. Also, I am sure that there is an unspoken etiquette that states, "You read mine and comment, and I shall do the same". This is also where I could run into trouble, for the same reasons that there may be dormant periods in this thread. There are stories on this site that I could never hope to read all the way through, with triple digit page counts, while I try to keep posting my own story and work through everyday life. So, with all that being said, I will wait to start posting chapters until I get a sense of what the audience demands. Please let me know if I should start posting a fan fic piece, based on what you have just read.

Thanks.

EDIT - This was originally posted in "General Discussion"

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post May 25 2013, 04:34 PM
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It's time for the weekend installment, but first...

@ Acadian - You were absolutely correct with your nit. Thanks for pointing it out, and I used your suggestion of the word "testimony" to correct it. That word fit perfect with the word "contradicted" later in the sentance.

Ellinar, eh?
Am I missing something? blink.gif

Thanks as well for your comments and compliments. I'm glad you enjoyed it. smile.gif

@ SubRosa - I do agree with you 100% about changing whatever I see fit with regard to actual game mechanics, and you will encounter this in a future post. As a matter of fact, it concerns using the Command Animal ability, so I'm killing two birds with one stone on that one. cool.gif

Very good guess on the "shelf" being Val's mom. laugh.gif

Regarding {The} Imperial City, I left out "The" on purpose. Imperial City is how the name is shown on the map as the actual name of the city, and one would not say or write The Oklahoma City or The New York City. Using "the" only works if I am describing the city rather than naming it.

As always, thanks for the compliments and comments smile.gif

@ McBadgere - Thanks for the applause. smile.gif As to three weeks becoming a lifetime...well...a lifetime is a very long time, so we'll see...

Thanks again for reading and commenting. Very much appreciated. smile.gif

Previously... So after giving you all a glimpse into Valrimor's beginnings, it's time to get back to the story. Ralof and Valrimor had fought their way through Imperials, spiders, and a bear to finally reach the exit from underneath Helgen Keep, where Valrimor had collapsed to his back and was laughing at the sky...

Chapter 6 – Free of Pursuit


17th Last Seed, 4E201 - Continued

Ralof must have thought I had lost my acorns. I couldn’t help myself. Cramped spaces like tunnels and caves are no place for a Bosmer, especially a claustrophobic one. Add one part of seeing the dragon fly away to two parts lack of pursuit, and then three parts wine; it was the perfect recipe for relief filled laughter. I sat up and caught the Nord staring at me with a worrisome look.

“I’m okay. I’m just glad to be in open space and not worrying about what might be around the next corner,” I told him.

“I can appreciate that, Valrimor, but-”

“Call me Val,” I interjected, “everyone else does. Well, everyone that has known me and remained a friend despite knowing me.”

“Val it shall be then, friend,” Ralof said with a grin, but then became serious again and added, “we need to get moving. While we are currently not being pursued, this area will likely be crawling with Imperials before the sun sets. We are close to Riverwood, and my sister lives there. I’m sure she will help us with a hot meal and a place to rest.”

“Does she have any of that great Skyrim mead that I have heard so much about?” I queried thirstily.

“I’m sure her husband, Hod, has a bottle or three lying around.”

“Well what are we waiting for then?” I said, jumping up and staggering just a smidge while adjusting the backpack, “Let’s get going!”

We started following a pathway that led from the cave. Here at the base of the snow line, scattered patches of snow would occasionally crunch beneath our feet. There were birds chirping, and the wind was sighing through the evergreens. The trees were tall and majestic, like great spruce sentinels guarding the mountainsides. As we walked further down the slope, the forest floor became more verdant, changing from scrub oaks and thorny brush to ferns, grasses, and wildflowers. Closer examination revealed an assortment of fungi and flora suitable for alchemical purposes. This was good to know, but I wouldn’t be doing any harvesting at the moment. Getting to Riverwood for shelter and more libations had top priority.

As we walked, Ralof had been trying to convince me to join the Stormcloak rebellion. I did hate the Thalmor, and therefore by proxy, General Tullius and his troops. However, I chose to remain non-committal. That seemed to be my natural state of existence, non-committal. I had never married nor had children. I never settled into a steady trade or planted roots with a home of my own. It seemed my entire adult life had been an exercise in finding my next source of coin to care for my mother, finding my next drink, or finding my way out of some sort of trouble. Now I had found my way here, to find some sort of meaning to my life.

When we reached the pathway’s terminus at a rough stone roadway, I noticed a large ruin in the distance. It was near the summit of a peak, on the other side of a narrow valley.

“What is that place?” I asked Ralof.

“That is Bleak Falls Barrow. I never understood how my sister could live in the shadow of that place. I guess one just gets used to it after a while,” he replied.

“Why is that? I mean, what bothers you about it?”

“It has ever had naught but evil associated with it. It’s said to be haunted by draugr,” the Nord explained.

I nodded and didn’t question him further. It was enough to know that the place should probably be avoided. We walked on in silence for a bit. Now and again, I would catch a glimpse of a circling hawk, or hear the rustle of a small animal scurrying through the undergrowth. These were like therapeutic balms to my Bosmer senses. The road had become steeper when we reached a sharp switchback, allowing the roadway to hug the mountainside. When we turned the corner, a magnificent vista appeared before us. There was a lake nestled within the valley. A river was draining it and sending the contents northward toward us. On a rocky promontory overlooking the lake were three stone monoliths. When we reached them, Ralof stopped.

“These are the Guardian Stones, three of the thirteen that dot Skyrim’s landscape. See for yourself…” he said, gesturing toward the paved platform they rested on.

I stepped on to the large circular dais and examined the stones. Each had a different design cut into the rock they were made from. Two seemed more weathered than the third. I asked Ralof about this.

“It is said that the stones choose you," the Nord explained, "In some way, it will connect with your spirit. It is imbued with an ancient power. None today completely understand it. The one you see most clearly is the one that is trying to connect with you.”

It showed a hooded man in a crouching pose, and holding a pouch and dagger. As I moved closer, the symbol seemed to become even clearer and more detailed. Gemstones, like stars, began to shine within the etching. I reached out with both hands and touched the sides of the stone. Instantly, beneficent power surged through me. I could see an aquamarine glow shimmering around me. Then just as suddenly, a shaft of teal colored light shot toward the heavens. I felt, rather than heard, a “pop” and it was over. When I released my grip on the stone, all three monoliths appeared equally weathered.

“Thief, eh?” said Ralof, “It’s never too late to take charge of your own fate.”

How does one take charge of fate? It seemed that I had been shoved around by fate my entire life.

“Let’s get moving. I’m getting thirsty,” I said and continued down the road.

The road was following the river northward along the eastern bank. The water wasn’t babbling like the creek in the cave. It was having a full blown argument with the intervening rocks along the way. Now and again, spray found its way to the road on a gust of wind. Ralof was telling me a little more about his sister and Riverwood to pass the time when he was interrupted by the howl of a wolf. We both froze and searched for the source. I saw them, two of them, on a rise ahead of us and to the right. I touched Ralof on the shoulder and motioned for him to stay put. This was my forte. I nocked an arrow and crept silently through the undergrowth at the side of the road for as long as I dared. The wine had worn off, or perhaps it was the effect of the Guardian Stone. Either way, my aim was steady and true. I released the bowstring, nocked another arrow, and had sent it on its way to the second wolf by the time the first one was falling. Both wolves were quickly down and motionless.

“Impressive bow work!” said Ralof.

“Thanks. Let’s get them cleaned.”

The Nord protested, saying we were so close to town now that it would be a shame to stop.

“When a hunter kills, the quarry must be properly cleaned and the carcass disposed of, at least whenever it is practical to do so. It is the Huntsman’s Creed. Right now, it is practical. You can help, or watch, or continue on your way, but these wolves are getting cleaned,” I stated in a tone that would brook no argument.

The Nord did indeed help. Some unfortunate woman must have met up with one of the wolves. There were no human remains in its belly, but there was a silver ring with a garnet stone. Ralof wondered why I would even bother opening the stomach. There was a simple explanation, which I conveyed to him.

“I once witnessed a wolf attack. A whole pack descended on a couple having a romantic walk in the woods. Due to some…uh…local circumstances…I wasn’t able to help them. And there were lots of wolves!” I explained, on my knees as I skinned a wolf, “But I digress. The woman had been wearing some stunning jewelry. When I examined the corpses, it was obvious that her finery had become part of the wolf’s main course. Ever since then, when I kill a wolf, I check for jewelry. You would be surprised how many rooms and ales I have found in wolf guts.”

The Nord just looked at me for a moment, then shook his head and went back to work. When we finished cleaning the animals, I asked Ralof where the river led and he told me northward to a series of falls. That was perfect. I tossed the carcasses and entrails into the river, knowing that if they weren’t devoured by mudcrabs first, the falls would reduce them to fish food. After rinsing the wolf blood from my hands, the task was completed and we set of again for Riverwood.


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ThatSkyrimGuy   A Question of Fate   May 4 2013, 04:41 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   EDIT - This was the original response (and only re...   May 4 2013, 04:45 AM
McBadgere   Wise words...You listen to him... :D ... *Applaud...   May 4 2013, 04:47 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Wise words...You listen to him... :D ... *Applau...   May 4 2013, 04:52 AM
mALX   Very excited to read what you have. Almost eve...   May 4 2013, 04:57 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Thanks for the replies Malx and McB. I reckon I...   May 4 2013, 05:39 AM
mALX   This is a very good beginning! You have reall...   May 4 2013, 06:32 AM
Grits   Welcome, SkyrimGuy! I’m so glad you decided to...   May 4 2013, 12:24 PM
treydog   First and foremost- WELCOME! We are glad to h...   May 4 2013, 12:40 PM
McBadgere   Excellent stuff!!... Brief run through hi...   May 4 2013, 01:03 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   First, I want to thank mALX, grits, treydog, and M...   May 5 2013, 06:46 AM
Acadian   A warm welcome to the Arena of Fan Fiction here at...   May 5 2013, 11:10 PM
mALX   This is probably one of the best renditions I...   May 6 2013, 12:33 AM
McBadgere   Very accepting of the return of the Dragons isn...   May 6 2013, 03:36 AM
SubRosa   Hi SkyGuy. Try not to be too intimidated by the gr...   May 8 2013, 12:10 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Thanks to Acadian, mALX, McBadgere, and SubRosa fo...   May 8 2013, 06:16 AM
SubRosa   Nice to see some more meat put on this scene that ...   May 9 2013, 12:08 AM
Acadian   A terrifyingly harrowing escape for Valrimor! ...   May 9 2013, 12:23 AM
McBadgere   Loving the extra parts you're adding into this...   May 11 2013, 10:38 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Once again, thanks for the kind comments from Subr...   May 11 2013, 01:52 PM
mALX   Uh oh, I got a chapter behind! I am sorry I m...   May 11 2013, 06:56 PM
SubRosa   I feel your pain about lightning and shock, I try ...   May 11 2013, 07:08 PM
Acadian   Shock magic. When pondering descriptions, it can ...   May 11 2013, 11:40 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Excellent suggestions and thanks to you two for op...   May 12 2013, 04:59 AM
McBadgere   D'you know...While I admit that I'm easily...   May 12 2013, 06:50 PM
Darkness Eternal   Hello! Welcome to the forums! Quite the ta...   May 13 2013, 01:51 AM
mALX   Oh yeah Ralof, don’t take the second to ensure I...   May 13 2013, 04:17 PM
jack cloudy   I like how the story mixes serious with a downrigh...   May 13 2013, 09:30 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Wow. We have new readers! Thanks to you all fo...   May 14 2013, 03:11 PM
mALX   Your main character keeps me in stitches with hi...   May 16 2013, 01:38 AM
SubRosa   Into the bowels we go. Does that make Val and Ralo...   May 16 2013, 07:40 PM
McBadgere   :lol: ... I liked that... :D ... Brilliant ep...   May 18 2013, 06:11 AM
Grits   I’m really enjoying Valrimor’s sarcastic humor as ...   May 18 2013, 01:26 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Thanks to mALX, SubRosa, McBadgere and Grits for y...   May 18 2013, 01:39 PM
Grits   It will be difficult, but resist the temptation t...   May 18 2013, 01:55 PM
Acadian   I follow numerous stories and quite appreciate a t...   May 19 2013, 04:20 PM
mALX   This last chapter has to be my favorite so far, I ...   May 19 2013, 07:02 PM
SubRosa   “If you had anything worth stealing, you would.” ...   May 19 2013, 07:21 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Thanks for following the story and for the great c...   May 22 2013, 02:01 AM
McBadgere   Oh aye, I try to catch up and ye post another bit...   May 22 2013, 03:24 AM
Acadian   What a wonderful scene-setting opening paragraph. ...   May 22 2013, 03:10 PM
SubRosa   On the old news of using Command Animal, cannot yo...   May 22 2013, 06:56 PM
McBadgere   Aw, that's a sad tale right there... :( ... E...   May 24 2013, 04:27 AM
Acadian   Old news: Oh, sorry, I didn’t mean to confuse reg...   May 25 2013, 07:45 PM
SubRosa   You are right that there is no "The" on ...   May 28 2013, 06:47 PM
jack cloudy   I liked the part where the Stormcloak died. Ralof ...   May 30 2013, 07:08 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   It's that time again campers, but first... @ ...   May 31 2013, 02:59 AM
mALX   Interlude 1: I did a double take when I saw the ...   May 31 2013, 08:01 PM
mALX   GAAAAA! This was how Valrimor came to be...   May 31 2013, 08:03 PM
mALX   Chapter 6: I liked this line, it tells a lot ab...   May 31 2013, 08:04 PM
mALX   Chapter 7 – Riverwood This detail was another p...   May 31 2013, 08:20 PM
Acadian   Finally, a moment’s rest as Val and Ralof reach Ri...   Jun 1 2013, 03:25 PM
jack cloudy   Oh Frodnar, you're so cute when you want to mu...   Jun 2 2013, 09:20 PM
Grits   Interlude: I really like the way you’ve provided s...   Jun 3 2013, 03:09 PM
SubRosa   Finally Val is going to have a chance to drink all...   Jun 3 2013, 07:32 PM
mALX   Finally Val is going to have a chance to drink al...   Jun 7 2013, 02:27 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Fate has brought us together again, but first... ...   Jun 4 2013, 12:36 PM
Grits   I tore my gaze from the bar :lol: Val really pic...   Jun 4 2013, 04:17 PM
Acadian   Let me open by again thanking you for following th...   Jun 5 2013, 02:34 PM
mALX   * I also loved that Val "tore his gaze from ...   Jun 5 2013, 07:58 PM
SubRosa   I cannot imagine Jarl Ballin' any other way af...   Jun 7 2013, 01:56 AM
McBadgere   Excellent stuff!!!... All caught up a...   Jun 7 2013, 04:32 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Well, it only took 8 chapters, but the calendar fi...   Jun 7 2013, 01:32 PM
SubRosa   He seemed to be a less than happy fellow If you ha...   Jun 7 2013, 05:39 PM
Grits   Ale is going bad? How does someone let that happe...   Jun 8 2013, 01:21 PM
Acadian   No worries on your level of detail. I think my re...   Jun 8 2013, 02:45 PM
mALX   On how long it takes in chapters to cover one day ...   Jun 9 2013, 05:38 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Let me start by apologizing for not getting to pos...   Jun 12 2013, 04:08 AM
Acadian   My knowledge of ales, beers and meads is embarrass...   Jun 12 2013, 03:54 PM
mALX   I've been unable to get over here to read till...   Jun 14 2013, 11:03 PM
jack cloudy   Hohoho, looks like Hod didn't need to help wit...   Jun 16 2013, 08:03 PM
SubRosa   here are lagers and pilsners in the cities to the ...   Jun 16 2013, 08:44 PM
Grits   I enjoyed Orgnar’s brewing discussion. I’m not suc...   Jun 17 2013, 03:09 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   First things first...Thanks to everyone for commen...   Jun 17 2013, 03:18 AM
mALX   Chapter 10 - Val has a lot of skills to tap for ...   Jun 17 2013, 06:58 AM
Acadian   Another wonderfully captivating opening paragraph ...   Jun 17 2013, 08:49 PM
SubRosa   Arrowheads actually tend to be pretty simple. They...   Jun 17 2013, 09:36 PM
Darkness Eternal   Right. I have some catching up to do! Shame on...   Jun 19 2013, 12:26 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   First things first... @ mALX - You needn't ap...   Jun 21 2013, 02:25 AM
SubRosa   I love the idea of using an old Black Horse Courie...   Jun 21 2013, 10:02 PM
jack cloudy   More flashbacky goodness! It's a shame Val...   Jun 22 2013, 08:30 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   There is now an author's note at the beginning...   Jun 23 2013, 03:49 AM
Grits   Embershard: The door antics had me laughing. If t...   Jun 23 2013, 02:42 PM
mALX   Val making the squirrels do tricks - absolutely ha...   Jun 23 2013, 02:59 PM
Darkness Eternal   Time to officially catch up. Chapter 6: Out in t...   Jun 24 2013, 01:29 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   First things first... @ SubRosa - I love the idea...   Jun 25 2013, 04:11 AM
Captain Hammer   I have added this to my reading list, making it my...   Jun 25 2013, 05:06 AM
mALX   Your descriptions in this chapter (and in particul...   Jun 25 2013, 12:13 PM
Acadian   An interesting interlude with fun and squirrel gam...   Jun 25 2013, 03:36 PM
jack cloudy   Overconfidence comes before the fall. And the slap...   Jun 29 2013, 08:55 PM
SubRosa   Selling off loot, a new bow, and then a nice strol...   Jun 29 2013, 09:51 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   First things first... @ Captain Hammer - Thanks f...   Jul 1 2013, 02:57 AM
Acadian   Frying his foe certainly did seem to come out of t...   Jul 1 2013, 02:50 PM
mALX   ROFL! I’ll bet the bandit/guard was thinkin...   Jul 1 2013, 08:14 PM
Darkness Eternal   Chapter 10: "Yarh Ha! Yarh ha! The No...   Jul 1 2013, 10:24 PM
SubRosa   Uh oh, Val was almost caught napping in the snowst...   Jul 1 2013, 11:33 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   First things first...A Happy Independence Day to a...   Jul 4 2013, 09:39 PM
Darkness Eternal   Happy Muricah day to you, too! So Val awakens...   Jul 4 2013, 11:45 PM
Acadian   Once again, thanks for the invaluable little ‘Prev...   Jul 5 2013, 02:40 PM
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