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ThatSkyrimGuy
post May 4 2013, 04:41 AM
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Brief Intro By The Author

A Question of Fate would be the title of my piece.

I have been back and forth about trying to start and post a fan fic piece. The idea has always intrigued me, but I never considered myself to be a writer, let alone a good writer. I have read a sampling of some of the works that are posted on this site, and quite frankly, it is intimidating. The material is amazing. I must say say that despite the intimidation, it is also inspiring. So I am willing to throw caution to the wind and go for it. There are a few provisos. I work for a living. Often times, the hours I work are long. There may be periods of dormancy in this thread. I will apologize in advance for that. Life outside the internet does have it's restrictions. Also, I am sure that there is an unspoken etiquette that states, "You read mine and comment, and I shall do the same". This is also where I could run into trouble, for the same reasons that there may be dormant periods in this thread. There are stories on this site that I could never hope to read all the way through, with triple digit page counts, while I try to keep posting my own story and work through everyday life. So, with all that being said, I will wait to start posting chapters until I get a sense of what the audience demands. Please let me know if I should start posting a fan fic piece, based on what you have just read.

Thanks.

EDIT - This was originally posted in "General Discussion"

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Fate has brought us together again, but first...

@ mALX - A heartfelt welcome back mALX! Hug_emoticon.gif I think I can speak for all when I say you were missed. I'm glad you enjoyed the Interlude as much as I enjoyed writing it. Thank you very much for your kind comments on it and the chapters that followed.

I remember that wolf attack, scared the crap out of me! -- Me too! ohmy.gif

@ Acadian - Val is indeed looking forward to that mead. smile.gif I chuckled a moment when "cuteness" was preceded with "dare I say". Thank you kind sir!

@ jack cloudy - Were you never a prankster as a kid? tongue.gif

Though I personally like Hadvar's version just a bit better. It must be because he's accused of being drunk. kinda ironic what with Hod hogging the mead and all. -- Oddly enough, I have never chosen the Hadvar side when I've played the game. I guess I'm too much of a rebel at heart. cool.gif

@ Grits - Welcome back! biggrin.gif

The wolf-gut treasure was another great touch. In our house we call that… well, it’s a rude name that includes the only place a wolf might carry a garnet. Yeah, “ear” garnets. -- "ear" garnets! rollinglaugh.gif

@ SubRosa - I got two words...Jarl Ballin'! OMG, I was dying when I watched that! rollinglaugh.gif And you are correct...nothing is going to happen until the mead starts flowing. wink.gif

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Thanks to all of you for your continued comments and compliments. As always, they mean a lot to me. smile.gif Let's drink some mead!

Previously - Valrimor and Ralof had finally made it to Riverwood, where they were extended the hospitality of Ralof’s sister, Gerdur…

Chapter 8 – Mead and Morning Muzziness


17th Last Seed, 4E201 - Continued

The house of Ralof’s brother-in-law was austere, giving no overt hint of either wealth or poverty. It was an L-shaped single story building with no interior walls at all. The space looked much larger than it really was due to the high steep rafters. A dining and cooking area occupied one end. There was a cook pot suspended from a spit that spanned a bed of glowing coals. Ralof went to it straight away and stirred its contents. At the other end of the house were beds and a sitting table. But what caught my attention immediately was a bar, just like one you might see in a tavern, near the back wall. Several bottles, of what I could only assume to be the mead that had been spoken of, beckoned to me from its surface.

“Where is Gerdur keeping the bowls these days, Hod?” Ralof asked.

“In the cupboard there, right side door,” he replied, and then said, “Get some of that rabbit stew. You look like you could use it.”

It took a moment of silence before I realized Hod was speaking to me. I tore my gaze from the bar and said that some stew sounded good. He was motioning for me to sit at the table, and joined me as I did so. Ralof brought over three steaming bowls, and then centered a plate of bread and cheese on the table. All of us began eating heartily. It was some of the best stew I had ever tasted. There were chunks of potato, carrots, leeks, and tomato suspended in thick gravy with large pieces of rabbit. Just the right amount of garlic gave it a little heat.

“Oh my Gods,” Hod said suddenly, and stood up. He went to the cupboard and grabbed three flagons. A small thirsty grin crept to my face, and then vanished just as quickly when he picked up a water pitcher and returned. He filled all of our mugs, apologizing for not remembering drinks as he sat back down. I thanked him and took a sip of water with feigned enjoyment. We ate the rest of our meal in silence. Gerdur entered just as we were finishing up with cleaning the dishes.

“It’s good to see that you men knew where to find the wash pot,” she jibed. Ralof looked at me and winked as she continued, “Now get out of my kitchen and let me finish. Hod, get some mead for my brother and his friend.”

“That sounds wonderful!” I said with a touch too much exuberance, and then finished with a toned down, “Thank you.”

The three of us went over to the bar. Hod stood behind it while Ralof and I pulled up stools and sat. Our bartender set out three ornate steins and dutifully filled each with mead. He handed me an empty bottle and said, “I bet you’ve never had mead like this before.”

I held the bottle in one hand and raised my stein with the other for a taste. It was small, compared to a wine bottle, and it barely filled my stein. The label proclaimed it to be “Honningbrew Mead” in Nordic style script, with a stylized beehive pictured below the writing. The mead rolled over my tongue and I closed my eyes. It was sweeter than what I was used to, but it was damn tasty! By the time I opened my eyes, the stein was half empty. I stopped abruptly when I noticed Hod and Ralof staring at me.

“Did you not get enough water?” Hod asked, and started moving as if he were going for the pitcher.

“Plenty,” I said, reaching out to stop him, “I was just caught off guard by the quality of this mead. It goes down so easy.”

“Aye,” Ralof chimed in, giving me a knowing glance that undoubtedly had to do with wine consumption in the caves beneath Helgen.

The mead went down smoothly indeed. Gerdur had long since retired for the night when Hod stood staring at the bar, dumbfounded. A little over a dozen empty mead bottles littered its surface. I was responsible for at least half of them.

“Wass da matter, broder-in-law?” Ralof asked with slurred curiosity.

“Dares no more mead,” he replied matter-of-factly. Then he shrugged and turned to me as he raised his stein to quaff the last of his mead, “So tree-hugger, what brings you to-”

I reached out and grabbed the arm that was raising his stein, squeezing his wrist hard while I hissed through clenched teeth, “Bosmer. It’s Bosmer, if you please. I’ll thank you to remember that from now on.”

I could feel an inner heat beginning to build along my forearms. Panic replaced my anger, and I quickly released my grip. When I did, I shoved Hod’s arm hard enough to cause him to drop his stein. It crashed to the floor, spilling the last of its contents. The two men were staring at me. Hod looked offended, angrily frowning and clenching his fists. Ralof stood and turned to Hod, swaying slightly as he did so, and put a hand on his shoulder. I didn’t know if it was to calm his brother-in-law or to keep from falling over.

“Don’t mind Varlimor…Vemralor…damn…Val, Hod. He’s,” -hic- “had a rufffff day,” my friend stuttered and slurred in my defense.

“Yeah…what he said,” I added, then stood up and walked toward a bed.

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18th Last Seed, 4E 201

My ears started working before my eyes did. I could hear faint sounds grow louder, ever so slowly, when suddenly an excruciating crash jangled every nerve in my body. My eyes snapped open and I sat up. My sight found Hod picking up a broken plate on the other side of the room, at the same time a rush of pain clawed into my head.

“Ugh,” I moaned as I grabbed my head and glanced around.

Someone must have put me in bed. They could have at least taken my boots off…

“Hey Ralof, look who joined the living,” Hod said, giving me a stern scowl.

Ralof poked his head around the corner and said, “Good afternoon, Val.”

Afternoon?

I looked up at the high windows. The light was coming in at a very steep angle, so if it was afternoon, it was not much past midday. The smell of bacon and eggs still hung in the air from breakfast, causing my stomach to roll over. I swung my feet to the floor and grabbed my head again to crush another flare of pain. I picked up the backpack and checked its contents. My wealth was not impressive. There was some rabbit that needed cooking soon, some bread and apples. A couple healing potions, two wine bottles, one of which was not for consumption. Lastly, a leather pouch with a little more than sixty Septims. I rose and shuffled to the dining area. A large plate that was still about half full with cold food sat in the center of the table. I sat down and placed my head in the palms of my hand, fighting off another thudding wave of headache.

“Good stuff, that Honningbrew, eh?” Ralof said with a grin.

“Why is Hod looking at me like I killed his dog?” I asked.

“We’ll worry about that later. Have a bite, then go over to the inn and order an herbal tea. Best cure for muzziness.”

I did as he suggested, eating cold bacon and eggs as my gurgling stomach protested. When I had downed as much as I dared, I rose and headed out, squinting hard as the daylight assaulted my eyes. It took a second for my eyesight to adjust, and for me to get my bearings.

Side road to main road. Inn. That way.

The entrance to the inn was raised above the road level, probably to accommodate a basement for storage. A wooden porch lined the front of the building. There was a bench on it and steps beckoning to the road. I walked up and sat down heavily on the bench. I had some thinking to do.

Okay Val, let’s take stock. You have a little food, and even less money. Gerdur wants you to go to see a Jarl. Ralof wants you to join a rebellion. A dragon wants to incinerate you for no good reason at all! And for toppers, you may have made an enemy of your hostess’s husband. All in all, it’s not one of your better days. Oh yes, and this wonderful headache. You need a plan. You know what happens when you have none.

I needed to clear my head before I could make a plan. I got up and entered The Sleeping Giant Inn.





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ThatSkyrimGuy   A Question of Fate   May 4 2013, 04:41 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   EDIT - This was the original response (and only re...   May 4 2013, 04:45 AM
McBadgere   Wise words...You listen to him... :D ... *Applaud...   May 4 2013, 04:47 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Wise words...You listen to him... :D ... *Applau...   May 4 2013, 04:52 AM
mALX   Very excited to read what you have. Almost eve...   May 4 2013, 04:57 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Thanks for the replies Malx and McB. I reckon I...   May 4 2013, 05:39 AM
mALX   This is a very good beginning! You have reall...   May 4 2013, 06:32 AM
Grits   Welcome, SkyrimGuy! I’m so glad you decided to...   May 4 2013, 12:24 PM
treydog   First and foremost- WELCOME! We are glad to h...   May 4 2013, 12:40 PM
McBadgere   Excellent stuff!!... Brief run through hi...   May 4 2013, 01:03 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   First, I want to thank mALX, grits, treydog, and M...   May 5 2013, 06:46 AM
Acadian   A warm welcome to the Arena of Fan Fiction here at...   May 5 2013, 11:10 PM
mALX   This is probably one of the best renditions I...   May 6 2013, 12:33 AM
McBadgere   Very accepting of the return of the Dragons isn...   May 6 2013, 03:36 AM
SubRosa   Hi SkyGuy. Try not to be too intimidated by the gr...   May 8 2013, 12:10 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Thanks to Acadian, mALX, McBadgere, and SubRosa fo...   May 8 2013, 06:16 AM
SubRosa   Nice to see some more meat put on this scene that ...   May 9 2013, 12:08 AM
Acadian   A terrifyingly harrowing escape for Valrimor! ...   May 9 2013, 12:23 AM
McBadgere   Loving the extra parts you're adding into this...   May 11 2013, 10:38 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Once again, thanks for the kind comments from Subr...   May 11 2013, 01:52 PM
mALX   Uh oh, I got a chapter behind! I am sorry I m...   May 11 2013, 06:56 PM
SubRosa   I feel your pain about lightning and shock, I try ...   May 11 2013, 07:08 PM
Acadian   Shock magic. When pondering descriptions, it can ...   May 11 2013, 11:40 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Excellent suggestions and thanks to you two for op...   May 12 2013, 04:59 AM
McBadgere   D'you know...While I admit that I'm easily...   May 12 2013, 06:50 PM
Darkness Eternal   Hello! Welcome to the forums! Quite the ta...   May 13 2013, 01:51 AM
mALX   Oh yeah Ralof, don’t take the second to ensure I...   May 13 2013, 04:17 PM
jack cloudy   I like how the story mixes serious with a downrigh...   May 13 2013, 09:30 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Wow. We have new readers! Thanks to you all fo...   May 14 2013, 03:11 PM
mALX   Your main character keeps me in stitches with hi...   May 16 2013, 01:38 AM
SubRosa   Into the bowels we go. Does that make Val and Ralo...   May 16 2013, 07:40 PM
McBadgere   :lol: ... I liked that... :D ... Brilliant ep...   May 18 2013, 06:11 AM
Grits   I’m really enjoying Valrimor’s sarcastic humor as ...   May 18 2013, 01:26 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Thanks to mALX, SubRosa, McBadgere and Grits for y...   May 18 2013, 01:39 PM
Grits   It will be difficult, but resist the temptation t...   May 18 2013, 01:55 PM
Acadian   I follow numerous stories and quite appreciate a t...   May 19 2013, 04:20 PM
mALX   This last chapter has to be my favorite so far, I ...   May 19 2013, 07:02 PM
SubRosa   “If you had anything worth stealing, you would.” ...   May 19 2013, 07:21 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Thanks for following the story and for the great c...   May 22 2013, 02:01 AM
McBadgere   Oh aye, I try to catch up and ye post another bit...   May 22 2013, 03:24 AM
Acadian   What a wonderful scene-setting opening paragraph. ...   May 22 2013, 03:10 PM
SubRosa   On the old news of using Command Animal, cannot yo...   May 22 2013, 06:56 PM
McBadgere   Aw, that's a sad tale right there... :( ... E...   May 24 2013, 04:27 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   It's time for the weekend installment, but fir...   May 25 2013, 04:34 PM
Acadian   Old news: Oh, sorry, I didn’t mean to confuse reg...   May 25 2013, 07:45 PM
SubRosa   You are right that there is no "The" on ...   May 28 2013, 06:47 PM
jack cloudy   I liked the part where the Stormcloak died. Ralof ...   May 30 2013, 07:08 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   It's that time again campers, but first... @ ...   May 31 2013, 02:59 AM
mALX   Interlude 1: I did a double take when I saw the ...   May 31 2013, 08:01 PM
mALX   GAAAAA! This was how Valrimor came to be...   May 31 2013, 08:03 PM
mALX   Chapter 6: I liked this line, it tells a lot ab...   May 31 2013, 08:04 PM
mALX   Chapter 7 – Riverwood This detail was another p...   May 31 2013, 08:20 PM
Acadian   Finally, a moment’s rest as Val and Ralof reach Ri...   Jun 1 2013, 03:25 PM
jack cloudy   Oh Frodnar, you're so cute when you want to mu...   Jun 2 2013, 09:20 PM
Grits   Interlude: I really like the way you’ve provided s...   Jun 3 2013, 03:09 PM
SubRosa   Finally Val is going to have a chance to drink all...   Jun 3 2013, 07:32 PM
mALX   Finally Val is going to have a chance to drink al...   Jun 7 2013, 02:27 AM
Grits   I tore my gaze from the bar :lol: Val really pic...   Jun 4 2013, 04:17 PM
Acadian   Let me open by again thanking you for following th...   Jun 5 2013, 02:34 PM
mALX   * I also loved that Val "tore his gaze from ...   Jun 5 2013, 07:58 PM
SubRosa   I cannot imagine Jarl Ballin' any other way af...   Jun 7 2013, 01:56 AM
McBadgere   Excellent stuff!!!... All caught up a...   Jun 7 2013, 04:32 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Well, it only took 8 chapters, but the calendar fi...   Jun 7 2013, 01:32 PM
SubRosa   He seemed to be a less than happy fellow If you ha...   Jun 7 2013, 05:39 PM
Grits   Ale is going bad? How does someone let that happe...   Jun 8 2013, 01:21 PM
Acadian   No worries on your level of detail. I think my re...   Jun 8 2013, 02:45 PM
mALX   On how long it takes in chapters to cover one day ...   Jun 9 2013, 05:38 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   Let me start by apologizing for not getting to pos...   Jun 12 2013, 04:08 AM
Acadian   My knowledge of ales, beers and meads is embarrass...   Jun 12 2013, 03:54 PM
mALX   I've been unable to get over here to read till...   Jun 14 2013, 11:03 PM
jack cloudy   Hohoho, looks like Hod didn't need to help wit...   Jun 16 2013, 08:03 PM
SubRosa   here are lagers and pilsners in the cities to the ...   Jun 16 2013, 08:44 PM
Grits   I enjoyed Orgnar’s brewing discussion. I’m not suc...   Jun 17 2013, 03:09 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   First things first...Thanks to everyone for commen...   Jun 17 2013, 03:18 AM
mALX   Chapter 10 - Val has a lot of skills to tap for ...   Jun 17 2013, 06:58 AM
Acadian   Another wonderfully captivating opening paragraph ...   Jun 17 2013, 08:49 PM
SubRosa   Arrowheads actually tend to be pretty simple. They...   Jun 17 2013, 09:36 PM
Darkness Eternal   Right. I have some catching up to do! Shame on...   Jun 19 2013, 12:26 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   First things first... @ mALX - You needn't ap...   Jun 21 2013, 02:25 AM
SubRosa   I love the idea of using an old Black Horse Courie...   Jun 21 2013, 10:02 PM
jack cloudy   More flashbacky goodness! It's a shame Val...   Jun 22 2013, 08:30 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   There is now an author's note at the beginning...   Jun 23 2013, 03:49 AM
Grits   Embershard: The door antics had me laughing. If t...   Jun 23 2013, 02:42 PM
mALX   Val making the squirrels do tricks - absolutely ha...   Jun 23 2013, 02:59 PM
Darkness Eternal   Time to officially catch up. Chapter 6: Out in t...   Jun 24 2013, 01:29 AM
ThatSkyrimGuy   First things first... @ SubRosa - I love the idea...   Jun 25 2013, 04:11 AM
Captain Hammer   I have added this to my reading list, making it my...   Jun 25 2013, 05:06 AM
mALX   Your descriptions in this chapter (and in particul...   Jun 25 2013, 12:13 PM
Acadian   An interesting interlude with fun and squirrel gam...   Jun 25 2013, 03:36 PM
jack cloudy   Overconfidence comes before the fall. And the slap...   Jun 29 2013, 08:55 PM
SubRosa   Selling off loot, a new bow, and then a nice strol...   Jun 29 2013, 09:51 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   First things first... @ Captain Hammer - Thanks f...   Jul 1 2013, 02:57 AM
Acadian   Frying his foe certainly did seem to come out of t...   Jul 1 2013, 02:50 PM
mALX   ROFL! I’ll bet the bandit/guard was thinkin...   Jul 1 2013, 08:14 PM
Darkness Eternal   Chapter 10: "Yarh Ha! Yarh ha! The No...   Jul 1 2013, 10:24 PM
SubRosa   Uh oh, Val was almost caught napping in the snowst...   Jul 1 2013, 11:33 PM
ThatSkyrimGuy   First things first...A Happy Independence Day to a...   Jul 4 2013, 09:39 PM
Darkness Eternal   Happy Muricah day to you, too! So Val awakens...   Jul 4 2013, 11:45 PM
Acadian   Once again, thanks for the invaluable little ‘Prev...   Jul 5 2013, 02:40 PM
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