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Elisabeth Hollow
post Mar 26 2013, 08:44 PM
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No Elves in Sovngarde Book One is here, and is currently being spiced and touched up, bit by bit.

For those who don't want to read the first book, or need a refresher on what has previously happened, I have included a brief summary of the first book, which will be written later, when I'm not freaking out about how to write a summary.

I really am terrible with summaries. To prove my point, here's my summary of Toy Story:

"After sitting here with my fingers frozen above the keyboard, all I can say about Toy Story is that it made me terrified of having toys as a kid, and gave me nightmares. The only thing I took away from that movie is that you shouldn't judge others by appearance. Except the bad kids. They wear skulls so you can identify them easily."

-shakes head in shame-

Anyways, I've got a prologue written up. The summary should be up, hopefully, within the next few days or so. Or when my computer's plate isn't so full, lol.

Enjoy!


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Elisabeth Hollow
post Jun 25 2013, 09:15 PM
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So my updates are becoming less and less far apart, but till not as regular as they used to be. That's due to the influx of my workload, then suddenly losing my job.

Tis good, though. I needed the break. And the sleep. I slept a LOT, hahahaha!

Anyways! Thank you for your comments, patience, and of course, continuing to read.

@Acadian: Yeah, I'm sort of playing catch-up with Kayla's side of the story. Erik and Mjoll are caught up, I'm just showing Kayla's journey on her wait to their "present."

@KC: I LOVE the Command spells. Just adore them. There are others I'd like to delve into, but can't with Kayla, since she isn't too much into magick. Maybe with another character...hmmmm... wink.gif

@Grits: Definitely struggling. Shes trying to hang onto what she views as a sliver of humanity while battling with her thirst. Part of her wants to accept what she is and embrace her new identity, but the other part, the Kayla part of her, isn't going to accept it and will continue to fight it.

@jack cloudy: There are some good and decent Legionnaire soldiers in Skyrim. They just didn't stop by Kayla and Emelia's cave, lol!

As for the passage of time, like I mentioned, I'm just playing catch-up with Kayla and Emelia. Soon they'll be on the same page as Erik and Mjoll.



What happened before: Mjoll saw the spirit of Onmund behind his and Kayla's old home.

Mjoll threw open the door to the Bannered Mare, breathing raggedly. Mst of the patrons jumped, startled, but turned back to their drink and conversations. Erik stood up and met her halfway across the room.

"Mjoll, what happened?" He asked.

"I saw a spirit," she said, gripping Erik's arm. Lydia came up beside him, trailed by Sorex.

"Thats Onmund."

Erik's brow furrowed. "Kayla's husband?"

"Yeah, as in, the one that her sister tore apart. He started showing up and doing that about a year ago. The priests are stumped by it. They say he's just an echo, not an actual ghost, so there's nothing that can be done."

"An echo?" Mjoll repeated. "That explains why he didn't attack when I came close. He just sort of...disappeared, and wafted away."

"He'll do that. Some of the local kids even have contests...well, they DID have contests...on who could get the closest before he disappeared. But with the curfew and the recent murders, no kids are allowed out after dusk."

"Who lives at that house?" Erik asked. 'An echo?'

"We do," Lydia said. "When I came back, I bought the house from the city. Apparently the person Kayla had sold it to didn't like an apparition flickering in and out of sight at night. So I bought it, really cheap, and ignore him." She grinned. "I'm not superstitious."

Lydia continued. "Anyways, you two should relax tonight. Have a few drinks, maybe rent the same room to avoid spending too much."

Erik shot her a sharp look, and she grinned. "Hey, just looking out for my second-favorite redhead." She pinched his cheeks and laughed when he swatted her away. Erik didn't miss the look of sadness that flitted across her expression momentarily.

"We should go. The smell of piss and vomit makes me nauseas. Bye, you two! Come see me before you leave." Mjoll waved goodbye as the couple sauntered out the door, their arms linked. She turned to Erik when the door closed.

"What are we going to do about a third member?" she asked as they slid into their seats at the table. Erik shook his head, his green eyes crinkled with worry.

"I don't know, Mjoll. I really don't know. If Uthgerd doesn't straighten up, then nothing."

Mjoll sat straight up. "Wait a moment. I think..." She grinned, her face illuminating beautifully.

'She's lovely.' Erik thought.

"There is a wizard in Riften. Marcurio. He has been hired by several adventurers who say he is wonderful when in battle. Maybe that's the edge we need, Erik. Fight magick with magick."

Erik pursed his lips, then shook his head. "I don't like magick."

"Neither do I, but Erik, think about it. If we have a mage on our side, he can sense any magickal traps we come across. Remember that one trap? The shock one on the ground that none of us could sense because we don't use magick? The one that nearly killed me? We were stuck in that cave for days, waiting for me to recover. We can't do that again."

Erik thought for a moment, swishing his mead around in the silver tankard. "Let me think about it." He took a large gulp of his mead as Mjoll drank her wine down.

"I don't blame you." She said. "Wizards are unpredictable and difficult to deal with. But if we pay the man, he should comply."

"Payment only goes so far." Erik ordered another drink, and Mjoll did the same. "You can pay a man five hundred septims to accompany you, but can't force him to stay once things get out of hand."

"That is true." Mjoll admitted. "But from what I've heard, this man doesn't back down."

"Then why is he in some tavern in Riften, begging for mercenary work?" Erik asked before downing his beer. Mjoll sipped her wine thoughtfully.

"I've heard he's a bit over-zealous when it comes to his spells." she said. "And a bit of a know-it-all..."

Erik groaned. "I HATE know-it-alls. He's out, then."

"Erik, he might be just what we need. We need to be offensive...or...what's the word?"

"Mjoll..."

"No, no, I know what it is..."

Erik gulped the rest of his beer down and waited for Mjoll to remember the word. When he realized she couldn't, both of them already had several drinks on them. He decided to switch topics at that point.

"So, how's Aerin? Gotten any letters from him?"

"No, oddly enough. I think the courier is having difficulty finding me. No matter."

"What's wrong?"

"He...seems to have feelings for me that I do not return. I explained this to him in my last letter, and...I expect he stopped sending me letters. But like I said, it doesn't matter. He's in Riften, and I'm here."

Mjoll couldn't interpret the look Erik was giving her. It looked like a mixture of disappointment and relief to her, but she could be wrong. She hadn't told him he was the reason she resisted Aerin's advances this past year.

But that did not matter. Erik didn't return her feelings, like she didn't return Aerin's. Everything came full circle for her. She suddenly drank the rest of her wine and stood up, startling a drunken Erik.

"Whoa, you going somewhere?" He asked.

"I'm going to bed. You should too, we...probably shouldn't have gotten so drunk."

Erik grinned at her and she laughed and pulled him up. The Nords were sharing a room, but decided against sharing a bed. They each looked at the bed, then each other.

"You take the bed." Erik said. "I'll sleep on the chair."

"No, I took the bed the last inn. You take it."

Mjoll looked at Erik, a slight smile on her lips. Erik raised his brow.

"You have this weird loo-"

Mjoll shoved him onto the bed, causing him to yelp in surprise. She laughed and uncharacteristically pointed her finger at him, which he promptly growled and grabbed, pulling her down next to him. Erik could almost see Lydia's brow raising, with that grin of hers spreading as Mjoll erupted into yet another uncharacteristic peal of laughter as she grabbed his head in a headlock and gave him a noogie.

Erik flailed for a moment and pretended to pass out. Mjoll laughed and let go, then shrieked as Erik suddenly pushed her off the bed with his feet. Both of them held their stomachs as they laughed, letting out a year's worth of tension, with Erik on his back on the bed, and Mjoll on her side on the floor. Mjoll stood up and shakily went to the washroom, still laughing.

When she came back, Erik was out of his armor and under the bed covers, half asleep. She had taken off her own armor in the washroom and slipped in next to him without thinking. Their bodies molded to each other for warmth as they fell asleep.


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Elisabeth Hollow   No Elves in Sovngarde Book Two   Mar 26 2013, 08:44 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   [size=2]Prologue [i] In the event of a life-chan...   Mar 26 2013, 08:46 PM
Colonel Mustard   YEEEEEE!!! *Jumps up and down in exci...   Mar 26 2013, 08:53 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   Edit: Actually, wait, that's not quite all. D...   Mar 26 2013, 08:57 PM
King Of Beasts   Edit: Actually, wait, that's not quite all. ...   Mar 26 2013, 08:58 PM
Colonel Mustard   Edit: Actually, wait, that's not quite all. ...   Mar 26 2013, 08:59 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   Oh, OK. So Meridia was all like "YOUR SWORD ...   Mar 26 2013, 09:03 PM
King Of Beasts   Oh, OK. So Meridia was all like "YOUR SWORD...   Mar 26 2013, 09:22 PM
King Of Beasts   -In arena announcer voice- This should be interest...   Mar 26 2013, 08:56 PM
jack cloudy   As far as prologue's go, it is nice and short....   Mar 26 2013, 10:05 PM
Grits   Love the news of the vampire-slaying trio. :) ...   Mar 27 2013, 03:24 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   Love the news of the vampire-slaying trio. :) ...   Mar 27 2013, 03:25 PM
Acadian   Congrats on starting Kayla's second book, ...   Mar 27 2013, 07:05 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   Congrats on starting Kayla's second book, ...   Mar 27 2013, 07:09 PM
mALX   WOO HOO !!! This promises to be as e...   Mar 28 2013, 03:52 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   Chapter one One of the first things Emelia taught...   Mar 30 2013, 04:02 PM
King Of Beasts   :rofl: NOOO! :panic: Something tells me...   Mar 30 2013, 05:52 PM
Acadian   How funny that fangs would make you thound funny w...   Mar 30 2013, 10:19 PM
mALX   The part where Kayla was trying to talk with fangs...   Mar 31 2013, 01:43 AM
McBadgere   First, sorry it took so long to get here... Secon...   Mar 31 2013, 09:56 AM
Elisabeth Hollow   Guys... You're a day "late," calm do...   Mar 31 2013, 02:00 PM
King Coin   … to become the most humane vampire there was. Nev...   Mar 31 2013, 04:05 PM
Grits   The whole part with the Breton was great. She lik...   Apr 1 2013, 12:40 AM
treydog   Still working toward being caught up- but then- I ...   Apr 1 2013, 12:46 AM
jack cloudy   Some lovely humour here and that Breton sure thoug...   Apr 1 2013, 07:48 PM
treydog   Hmmm. Wonder if this is going to be the truth- ...   Apr 1 2013, 09:46 PM
Darkness Eternal   The adventures of Kayla the vampire slayer continu...   Apr 1 2013, 11:49 PM
Colonel Mustard   The entire exchange involving the lisping fangs an...   Apr 2 2013, 04:00 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   The entire exchange involving the lisping fangs a...   Apr 2 2013, 04:15 PM
Colonel Mustard   The entire exchange involving the lisping fangs ...   Apr 2 2013, 04:26 PM
Darkness Eternal   I think most authors were more focussed on how mu...   Apr 6 2013, 02:22 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   I'm so glad everyone enjoyed the fangs thing...   Apr 2 2013, 06:02 PM
treydog   Yeah yeah. You just like that funny "sproi...   Apr 2 2013, 07:30 PM
King Of Beasts   So Erik, Mjoll, and Uthgred have been vampire hunt...   Apr 2 2013, 10:29 PM
mALX   First off, WOOOOOOOOOT !!! Mjoll an...   Apr 3 2013, 09:22 AM
Acadian   A neat glimpse at the vampire hunting trio! A...   Apr 3 2013, 01:34 PM
McBadgere   Not a great shock when I say that that was amazing...   Apr 6 2013, 09:40 AM
treydog   And we are finished with book one. Will need to h...   Apr 6 2013, 07:24 PM
Grits   :lol: And she kept her sense of humor throughout....   Apr 7 2013, 05:09 PM
King Coin   Quite the team of vampire hunters. Despite that, E...   Apr 8 2013, 02:57 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   I'm so sorry for not updating on Thursday. No,...   Apr 9 2013, 06:29 AM
King Of Beasts   I knew it wouldn't go well for the bandits. Ne...   Apr 9 2013, 06:40 AM
Colonel Mustard   The bit with the wolves kind of sweet, and I liked...   Apr 9 2013, 07:20 PM
mALX   I am loving the patience of little Emelia! Ev...   Apr 10 2013, 07:58 AM
Darkness Eternal   What a violent little thing, Emelia. Breaking peop...   Apr 10 2013, 06:13 PM
Acadian   You’re doing a great job with these two (now four ...   Apr 10 2013, 07:40 PM
Grits   Puppies!! ^_^ And Emelia has already mas...   Apr 10 2013, 07:57 PM
Darkness Eternal   Puppies!! ^_^ And Emelia has already ma...   Apr 12 2013, 11:16 PM
McBadgere   Awwww...Wolfie Puppies(tm)!!!...Sooo c...   Apr 11 2013, 08:18 AM
Burnt Sierra   What I am really enjoying about this (and book one...   Apr 14 2013, 10:47 AM
jack cloudy   Daawww, puppies! :Hug: *Acchooo!* Darn al...   Apr 14 2013, 09:08 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   Sorry for the late update, y'all...it's be...   Apr 17 2013, 06:15 AM
King Of Beasts   Mjoll isn't taking the child-vampire parent ...   Apr 17 2013, 06:26 AM
mALX   Oh Crap, Lydia! Erik is liable to get an earf...   Apr 17 2013, 01:30 PM
Acadian   An effective dream, and you gave us just the right...   Apr 17 2013, 09:18 PM
Darkness Eternal   Woah! This was a great chapter!! B)   Apr 17 2013, 10:18 PM
Grits   Yikes, what a dream! That moment when the soun...   Apr 17 2013, 11:29 PM
McBadgere   Ooooh, trouble at t'mill!!... Sorry.....   Apr 19 2013, 04:38 AM
Colonel Mustard   Nope, can't see anything about those dreams Er...   Apr 19 2013, 09:40 AM
King Coin   I liked the past couple of chapters that I missed ...   May 12 2013, 09:27 PM
jack cloudy   Wouldn't Lydia be Peck? A girlman in ever town...   May 12 2013, 09:30 PM
Darkness Eternal   I just had to ask. When are you getting back to th...   May 13 2013, 01:52 AM
Elisabeth Hollow   I'm writing it bit by bit. I know I'm alwa...   May 13 2013, 02:21 AM
Elisabeth Hollow   Thanks for your patience, y'all. Real life has...   May 18 2013, 03:59 PM
Grits   Lydia's face was suddenly joyful. "Erik,...   May 18 2013, 04:13 PM
Darkness Eternal   :O :D Congrats to the couple! Funny to ima...   May 19 2013, 02:52 AM
King Of Beasts   Yay! New chapter! :D It's gotta b...   May 18 2013, 04:03 PM
mALX   GAAAAH! I'll bet the little girl is Asta...   May 19 2013, 06:34 PM
Acadian   Thanks for your little ‘In our last episode. . . ‘...   May 19 2013, 06:39 PM
McBadgere   *Taps foot*...Where've you been missy?...Hmmmm...   May 22 2013, 03:57 AM
jack cloudy   Lydia got married? But she was such a....charismat...   May 23 2013, 09:31 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   You know, that ending seems like I stopped abruptl...   Jun 1 2013, 06:00 AM
Elisabeth Hollow   Where we were before: Kayla and Emelia had picked ...   Jun 6 2013, 04:06 PM
King Of Beasts   I can't help but feel bad or Kayla. She doesn...   Jun 6 2013, 05:17 PM
Grits   Kayla asks herself an excellent question. She’s ce...   Jun 7 2013, 02:44 AM
McBadgere   Ooooh, fair dues...Nicely done that... While I go...   Jun 7 2013, 04:04 AM
Acadian   Emelia is an adorable little predator who can be d...   Jun 7 2013, 02:22 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   You mean Kayla, Acadian? XD   Jun 7 2013, 04:33 PM
Darkness Eternal   You mean Kayla, Acadian? XD :rofl: Oh and my ...   Jun 8 2013, 05:30 AM
Elisabeth Hollow   I don't remember posting this yesterday...OR r...   Jun 8 2013, 05:39 AM
mALX   I read that about Jarl Balgruuf and had to race to...   Jun 9 2013, 05:38 AM
King Coin   Yeah, I didn’t envy Erik when he had to tell Lydia...   Jun 10 2013, 04:59 AM
Elisabeth Hollow   So sorry for any lack of acknowledgement for my re...   Jun 13 2013, 08:34 PM
King Of Beasts   :rofl: And Kayla's reaction Lol. I lov...   Jun 13 2013, 08:41 PM
Acadian   Dinner gone awry! This was effective in that ...   Jun 15 2013, 12:21 PM
mALX   What a scene! This was riveting from beginnin...   Jun 17 2013, 06:57 AM
King Coin   Interesting use of the Command spell. Overlooked, ...   Jun 19 2013, 04:45 AM
Grits   Interesting to get the prey’s view of Kayla’s den....   Jun 23 2013, 04:14 PM
jack cloudy   Time sure flies. It makes me wonder if the problem...   Jun 23 2013, 09:35 PM
King Of Beasts   So Onmund's "ghost" is pretty much j...   Jun 25 2013, 09:23 PM
mALX   I'll bet Mjoll wakes Erik up with a surprise, ...   Jun 25 2013, 11:04 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   I did skip you, didn't I?!! MALX YOU...   Jun 25 2013, 11:14 PM
mALX   I did skip you, didn't I?!! MALX YOU...   Jun 25 2013, 11:27 PM
King Coin   Hey if you are bringing a wizard into this, you sh...   Jun 26 2013, 12:41 AM
Acadian   Ah, so the ghost is/was Onmund. Like mALX, I like...   Jun 27 2013, 06:57 PM
McBadgere   Brilliant stuff...Loved the scene with the Imperia...   Jun 28 2013, 04:30 AM
jack cloudy   Oh dear, will Erik ever join the bed with a woman ...   Jun 30 2013, 07:15 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   Wow, been really busy! so sorry for the delay...   Jul 27 2013, 11:07 PM
King Of Beasts   I see Kayla and Emelia are having fun with thier n...   Jul 27 2013, 11:16 PM
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