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Elisabeth Hollow
post Mar 26 2013, 08:44 PM
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No Elves in Sovngarde Book One is here, and is currently being spiced and touched up, bit by bit.

For those who don't want to read the first book, or need a refresher on what has previously happened, I have included a brief summary of the first book, which will be written later, when I'm not freaking out about how to write a summary.

I really am terrible with summaries. To prove my point, here's my summary of Toy Story:

"After sitting here with my fingers frozen above the keyboard, all I can say about Toy Story is that it made me terrified of having toys as a kid, and gave me nightmares. The only thing I took away from that movie is that you shouldn't judge others by appearance. Except the bad kids. They wear skulls so you can identify them easily."

-shakes head in shame-

Anyways, I've got a prologue written up. The summary should be up, hopefully, within the next few days or so. Or when my computer's plate isn't so full, lol.

Enjoy!


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Elisabeth Hollow
post Jul 27 2013, 11:07 PM
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Wow, been really busy! so sorry for the delay!!!!

Where we last left Kayla: The command spell had worn off and Tyroni and Victus attacked Kayla.



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I let out a pained cry as the cave wall bit into my face, pebbles and bits falling from where the Imperial man crushed my body. He yelled something in Cyrodiilic in my ear, but not to me. When I tried to wriggle free, desperately calling for Emelia, he pushed more of his body weight against me. I felt him poke just under my rear, his breathing ragged. He outweighed me by a lot, as I had been starving for almost a year now, only occasionally feeding. I was gaunt and weak. He wasn't.

My breath came in gasps as I felt him shift his weight to allow himself to pin my arms behind me. 'I can't do this, gods, please, don't let this happen!' I begged silently. He tried to spread my legs apart with his knee and slackened his grip, allowing me to slip one hand out. I desperately tried to elbow him in the nose, but he was too short for me to reach, and I was in no position to stretch.

The man yelled for help from his companion as my arm flailed about, trying desperately to injure him. He screamed in pain when I caught a handful of his hair and yanked. He instinctively pulled against the force of my yank, causing him to release the weight from my upper body. That was all I needed.

I twisted my body to face him and sank my fangs into his neck. I closed my eyes as the blood sprang into my mouth, then opened them again as I became suddenly aware the he was trying to reach his sword to my left. I kneed his groin after pulling away, then pinned him to the wall.

"You don't like it when others take advantage of you, do you? How do you like being pinned?"

The look on the man's face was sheer, uncomprehending terror as he struggled to understand my words. His breath came in short, ragged gasps and he began to grasp what was about to happen to him. I leaned in to drink the blood pulsating from his neck when I heard a firm, small voice.

"Kayla."

I looked over and saw Emelia standing beside the Imperial man who had chased her. He stood stock-still, is eyes glazed over with the effects of the command spell.

"He tried to rape me, Emelia."

"I know. But why not practice on an awful man like him, instead of the decent folk in a town?"

My throat tightened with the desire to quench my thirst.

"Just a little at a time, Kayla. Just enough to make you look normal."

I took a gulp of breath and healed the wound on the man's neck. I threw him onto the cave floor as the wolves came back into the cave.

"Mangy bastards! Why weren't you here ten minutes ago?!" I yelled. Sai cringed and slunk towards Emelia while Mirriam cocked her head at me. She ignored me when I bared my fangs at her when she nuzzled my hand. I reluctantly petted her.

"Fine. Sorry." I said, the irritation still evident in my voice. Emelia soothed Sai as the man tried to get up. I put a bare foot on his throat, causing a startled yelp from him.

"Stay." I hissed in Cyrodiliic. He nodded, his face pale with fear. I sneered at his lower lip trembling and walked to my bed.

"I'm taking a nap. Can you handle these two?"

"No problem."

I laid down, throwing myself down with more force than I intended and hitting my shoulders. I clenched my teeth and let out an angry grunt. Miriam wormed her way under my arms and let out a sigh, her warm breath puffing straight into my face. I sighed.

"I'm sorry." I murmured to her nose. The icy cold tip of her nose nuzzled the spot under my chin and I smiled, petting her head and rubbing her ears. "I know I'm cruel sometimes, but it's the thirst talking." I whispered to her. "You know I like you. Sometimes."

Mirriam sneezed in my face and I pushed her away, screeching.

"UGH!"

Emelia cracked up.







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Weeks went by with Emelia coaching me on controlling my thirst. Suddenly I was very aware of why vampires kept thralls in their presence. The two Imperial men's constant presence didn't dull the thirst, but allowed me to keep my desires in check when we scouted a nearby village for food for them. I passed up several dozens of opportunities to drain someone dry, but instead gritted my teeth and walked by with a clenched smile on my face.

The only time I lost my control was when someone tried to pickpocket me. Emelia didn't blame me for that one. Much.

We were able to get basic supplies as well, needed to grooming and dressing. My hair had grown to my waist, and I was able to cut it to its original length and shampoo it at an inn in the village. Emelia charmed her way into the home of a couple for a few days, much to the annoyance of Sai, and had them buy her new clothing and footwear. I used what I needed and left without harming anyone.

"I've been thinking," I said to Emelia on evening.

She looked up from her bed. "What?"

"I think we should head to Riften. I've got my thirst under control now, and we need news about Asta."

"We could go into any major city and do that."

"Yeah, but there's someone there I need to talk to."

Niruin.

The bastard that betrayed me at his advantage. My life, my mortality, cost him a few bags of gold and a broken nose. I'd been plotting on ways of getting him back, things I would ask him.

"Why" was out of the question. I knew why. Money. That was the language of thieves, and all they ever knew. No morals, no goals or aspirations to make the world a better place, just money. They didn't care whose money, where it came from, as long as it wasn't taken from them.

Emelia had brought me close to Ivarstead. She confessed she was trrying to take me to The Pale, but my random bouts of thirst-induced insanity made me a difficult traveling companion. Once we agreed to head to Rifte, we were produced with a dillema.

"What are we going to do with the men?" I asked.

Emelia shrugged. "Keep them?"

I laughed. "What? And do what with them?"

"Well, they're thralls. They obey only us. They won't betray us, or talk or act unless we tell them to."

"That's the problem. Don't you think people will think it's weird when we're whispering commands at them?"

Emelia thought for a moment. "Yeah. Should we make them stay here?"

"No. I've seen thralls act out normal lives during the day. Let's have them do that. Act normal, I mean."

Emelia turned to the men. "Act normal!" she said in Cyrodiliic.

"No, Emelia, you can't just say that."

The men groaned and stretched, then blinked at us, their eyes still holding the glazed look. One sat on the ground after grabbing one of my books, and the other began scratching Sai's ears. I gawked, my mouth agape and eyes wide.

"I guess you can just say that." I walked over to the taller one. "You jump." I said in Cyrodiliic. He jumped once, a confused look on his face.

"Now, jump again, and use the book as a hat." I said in Nordic. He obliged. I let out a squeal of surprise.

"Oh my gods! Emelia, I don't have to speak the language of the victim! This is great! Stop jumping."

The man stopped jumping, and I took the book off of his head and handed it to him. He took it and stared up at me, an unreadable look in his eyes. I blew out a puff of breath and bit my lower lip.

"We should head to Ivarstead and gather supplies tonight. Enough food for them, and some septims for when we get to Riften. I don't know about you, but I can't charm a thief into giving their gold over."

"Are we staying inside the city walls?"

"Yeah. I don't know about you, but I'm sick of caves."

"Me too." The man next to me said. I shrieked, jumping into the air. Emelia laughed, doubling over.

"Your face-"

"Come here!" Emelia giggled as we bolted through the cave. She shrieked when I caught her, and flailed when I tickled her. The men watch with disinterested faces as I merciliessly tickled Emelia, the wolves bouncing playfully around us before turning on each other and play fighting.


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Elisabeth Hollow   No Elves in Sovngarde Book Two   Mar 26 2013, 08:44 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   [size=2]Prologue [i] In the event of a life-chan...   Mar 26 2013, 08:46 PM
Colonel Mustard   YEEEEEE!!! *Jumps up and down in exci...   Mar 26 2013, 08:53 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   Edit: Actually, wait, that's not quite all. D...   Mar 26 2013, 08:57 PM
King Of Beasts   Edit: Actually, wait, that's not quite all. ...   Mar 26 2013, 08:58 PM
Colonel Mustard   Edit: Actually, wait, that's not quite all. ...   Mar 26 2013, 08:59 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   Oh, OK. So Meridia was all like "YOUR SWORD ...   Mar 26 2013, 09:03 PM
King Of Beasts   Oh, OK. So Meridia was all like "YOUR SWORD...   Mar 26 2013, 09:22 PM
King Of Beasts   -In arena announcer voice- This should be interest...   Mar 26 2013, 08:56 PM
jack cloudy   As far as prologue's go, it is nice and short....   Mar 26 2013, 10:05 PM
Grits   Love the news of the vampire-slaying trio. :) ...   Mar 27 2013, 03:24 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   Love the news of the vampire-slaying trio. :) ...   Mar 27 2013, 03:25 PM
Acadian   Congrats on starting Kayla's second book, ...   Mar 27 2013, 07:05 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   Congrats on starting Kayla's second book, ...   Mar 27 2013, 07:09 PM
mALX   WOO HOO !!! This promises to be as e...   Mar 28 2013, 03:52 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   Chapter one One of the first things Emelia taught...   Mar 30 2013, 04:02 PM
King Of Beasts   :rofl: NOOO! :panic: Something tells me...   Mar 30 2013, 05:52 PM
Acadian   How funny that fangs would make you thound funny w...   Mar 30 2013, 10:19 PM
mALX   The part where Kayla was trying to talk with fangs...   Mar 31 2013, 01:43 AM
McBadgere   First, sorry it took so long to get here... Secon...   Mar 31 2013, 09:56 AM
Elisabeth Hollow   Guys... You're a day "late," calm do...   Mar 31 2013, 02:00 PM
King Coin   … to become the most humane vampire there was. Nev...   Mar 31 2013, 04:05 PM
Grits   The whole part with the Breton was great. She lik...   Apr 1 2013, 12:40 AM
treydog   Still working toward being caught up- but then- I ...   Apr 1 2013, 12:46 AM
jack cloudy   Some lovely humour here and that Breton sure thoug...   Apr 1 2013, 07:48 PM
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Darkness Eternal   The adventures of Kayla the vampire slayer continu...   Apr 1 2013, 11:49 PM
Colonel Mustard   The entire exchange involving the lisping fangs an...   Apr 2 2013, 04:00 PM
Elisabeth Hollow   The entire exchange involving the lisping fangs a...   Apr 2 2013, 04:15 PM
Colonel Mustard   The entire exchange involving the lisping fangs ...   Apr 2 2013, 04:26 PM
Darkness Eternal   I think most authors were more focussed on how mu...   Apr 6 2013, 02:22 PM
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