Memoirs of a Morag Tong Asassin - Solstheim, Volume Three; Chapter Four: The Deciding Factor. Options

[Black Hand]

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This post has been edited by Black Hand: Sep 21 2013, 12:06 AM

[Captain Hammer]

Nice to finally get caught up on Sethyas, his trials and tribulations in Solthseim...Wait, Is That A Giant Frakking Howling Wolf Head Helmet!

That's the kind of stuff that gives rise to the mythic stuff involving Fenris. Seriously, cut that cacat out.

On an actually serious nature, I love how you've managed to tie everything together so nicely. Sethyas needs to find somebody to forge the Magical Mine-Ice, gets caught in a blizzard, is rescued by an immortal Nord looking for somewhere. Sethyas acquires Wolf Armor, obtains Magical Mine-Ice dagger, proceeds to screw over Factor, is forced by colony's growth to find a priestess, and follows path of priestess to Mead Hall. At Mead Hall of Awesome Fun Times, Sethyas goes Incredible-Hulk on the Unworthy D-Bag, rescues priestess, gets shrine arranged, and learns about location that is actually an afterlife. Gets clued into the Snow-Critters of Insta-Death while he's at it.

These last two installments were particularly well done. Ulfgar's simple reasoning, his desire, all of that plays nicely.

Then you go ahead and give him a wicked dose of culture. Dolled up ladies get dressed for dinner. Ulfgar dresses himself properly for his Death. It shows the importance that he attaches to the fight, that spending the extra time to give Seth a worthy opponent is a mark of his respect.

Also, he then looks that much more bloodied when stomping up to Tsun and saying "Let me in, Gas-for-Breath." Really, it's the subtle payoffs that matter.

And oh, what's this, Four Stones-a-Standing?