Grits: One thing I love about writing a prequel is showing these little tidbits of how the characters developed the skills and abilities that we are so used to seeing them possess. Like Aela's use of spirits to help her sailing. I watched the Indiana Jones movies over the week, and one thing I loved about the third movie was how we saw young Indy get his hat, whip, the scar on his chin, and his fear of snakes. I just loved all of that.
King Coin: You are right, tt is basically a powered barge. It struck me as the perfect thing for river travel.
It is actually a RL boat found on Lake Champlain.
I guess Talun-Lei is just going to have to sink or swim on his first contract! Thankfully as an Argonian, he can breathe water...
haute ecole rider: I never really thought of the spirits as being anything more than something to give a ship an extra boost, sort of like putting a turbocharger in an engine, but not completely replacing it. Maybe I am not taking the idea far enough? I sort of envisioned a spirit as being able to completely propel a small boat like Aela's dory in the TF. But perhaps a larger vessel the size and mass of
The Niben Queen is too much for a spirit to push? Or it might take a much more powerful spirit, that the captain may not be able to summon? (one thing I would like to see is the same type of spirit with varying levels of power. In the game Shadowrun the spirits you summoned could be of any level of power, but the stronger spirits were more difficult to summon).
I know what you mean about Alga and Honmund, that is a bit of dialogue that has always stuck with me too. It made me think that Nords did not marry at all, but just lived together as long as they wanted to. Then Skyrim came along and threw all that by the wayside by having Nords all marry in a ceremony of Mara's in a chapel. Sounds pretty much like the Chapel Way to me!
Acadian: I always found the plethora of Khajiit sub-races to be rather confusing. I might change it to Cathay-Rats, but then again, I would still be changing something if I did that. So maybe I will just leave it as Pahmer after all.
We are going to have several more episodes just on the journey itself. This is one way that I am deviating from the movies. In those the seven heroes leave the town they are recruited in, have a few minutes of traveling scenes, and then the stories pick up again in the village. I am going to spend a little more time getting there, and use it to show us more of the characters.
McBadgere: I never heard of the horse-powered boats until I was looking up boats for the TF. It was just pure chance that I stumbled across this one from Lake Champlain. But I did love the idea the moment I saw the article on it.
You did get Aela's intentions correct on both counts. On one hand she is playing the welcome wagon. On the other she is making sure he can heal himself, taking her own words to heart about teaching him things.
ghastley: I think it is just going to be that the undine is cancelling out the drag on the hull as you mentioned, but that the boat still has to generate some of its own power as well. I don't want magic to be too overpowering. Plus I never put that much thought into it!
It is true that at least Talun-Lei does not need his hair to be done!

We will see some training scenes in the future, as he learns what it takes to be a member of the Magnificent Seven.
Previously on Seven: In our last episode the seven's ship docked at Telamon, the settlement at the mouth of the Panther River. There they boarded a riverboat that will take them up the river. The seven finally noticed that Talun-Lei had followed them, apparently dead-set upon taking part in the quest to protect Agrigento. After a short discussion, Aela pointed out that if he was truly determined, they could not stop him. She suggested that someone teach him to fight, and took her own words to heart by going to him and teaching him a healing spell.
Chapter 1.9Aela leaned back against the wooden awning that covered one of the waterwheels. She watched the brown water of the Panther River slide by as it fell behind the boat. The turning wheel churned up the otherwise peaceful water, and left a foaming wake behind the boat, marking a trail where it had passed.
She could still feel the undine down there, reversing the flow of the river so that the wheels - and the horses turning them - would not have to struggle against the current. She closed her eyes, and let her thoughts drift down into the water with the spirit. The undine was a joyful creature, and saw the exercise not as an onerous task, but rather as an amusing game. Aela danced and splashed alongside her - if only metaphorically - and whiled away the afternoon with the Nirn Spirit.
Hard footsteps clanked across the wooden planks of the deck nearby. They stopped as a dark shadow fell across Aela's body, blocking out the warm rays of Magnus. The cool light of a star washed over her instead, and the scent of roses wafted across her nostrils. Wood creaked loudly in her ears, and Aela felt the planks of the deck shift under her as a heavy weight lowered itself down upon them nearby.
The Breton opened her eyes to find Valens squatting beside her. The Nibenean wore his black armor, even in the summer heat, and stared out at the waves beyond. Then his dark eyes turned to meet her own.
"So just what in Oblivion are you anyway?" he asked bluntly.
"I'm Aela," the Witch replied. Her heart doubled its pace at the loaded question, but she did her best to keep her voice neutral. "That is all you need to know."
"So what do I call you," the Imperial went on, "'he' or 'she'?"
"Do I look like want to be called 'he'?" Aela still fought to keep the anger from her voice. "I'm not wearing a bodice and a chemise because I want to trumpet my masculinity, and I'm not wearing makeup to impress everyone with my manhood."
"Fair enough," Valens nodded. He looked from her to the water, and stared into its depths for a long time before he went on. "You know, Seridwe thinks you're some kind of prophet or saint."
"The elves aren't ruled by petty bigotries, as humans are," Aela replied.
"Well, not the same ones at least," Valens almost smiled.
Aela did not reply, and Valens did not speak again for long moments. "They say people like you have special powers," he finally said. "That you can do things no one else can."
"I put my pants on one leg at a time, the same as everyone else," Aela declared. "But it is true that someone who lives between worlds as I do has some advantages when it comes to magic. That is what magicka does after all - travel between worlds - shining down from Aetherius to Mundus. So people like me can manipulate it better than most."
"It must be hard living in the Imperial Province, with everyone who knows what you are treating you like an aberration," Valens observed. "Why do you stay here? You could go to Valenwood or Elsweyr, they love your kind there."
"Because I have just as much right to be here as anyone else," Aela insisted. "I won't be run out by a bunch of narrow-minded provincials. I would think that an Azura worshipper like yourself would be a little more enlightened. She is the goddess of transitions after all, of traveling from one state to another. That is what dusk and dawn symbolize: endings and beginnings."
"I'm no Azura worshipper," Valens stiffened, as she had accused him of a crime. "I've got no use for the Nine - or the Daedra - and they've none for me."
"Really?" Aela pressed on, "is that why you carry the very essence of the goddess of twilight and magic given physical form? Why do you worship her every morning and evening?"
"I don't worship her," Valens grumbled. "I'm just… thinking."
"What is the difference?" Aela asked.
"Plenty," the Nibenean insisted. "I serve myself. No one else. This world - and the gods - have never done me any favors."
"What, you think you're special because you've suffered?" Aela said. "Because your past has been taken away from you? Well join the rest of us."
"What would you know about it?" Valens shot back.
"What would
I know about it?" Aela replied hotly. She noticed that several of the others were now staring from their positions around the boat. But she could not contain herself. "My whole life was taken away from me when I changed. My family, my home, my future, the people I thought were my friends, everything. I lost it all."
"But you know what? It wasn't the end of the world. I have a new family." Her eyes glanced to Ungarion. The Altmer mage stood by with his arms crossed, and nodded back to her. "I make my own future now. One day I'll make a new home as well. The gods didn't create the world we live in, or our fates.
We are the gods, and we make them all ourselves, every single day. What world are you going to make?"
"I don't know," Valens sighed. With that simple honest admission, Aela felt her anger ebb away like the evening tide.
"Well that is a good place to start," Aela said.
Valens stood, and looked about at the others, who were all staring back at them now.
"So what do I call
you Valens?" Aela asked, still sitting against the wheel house. "My friend, or something else?"
"I am your friend Aela," the Nibenean rumbled. "Of that let there be no doubt."
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