Thanks for the reviews, everyone!
Liz: Well, I hope it'll be a good introduction to the realm of Dishonored fanfic (if you want more, check out Diplomatic Gestures over on FF.net. Quality story).
Rohirrim: ALL THE THINGS ARE BEING WRITTEN RIGHT NAO!
Zalph: Thanks very much!
HER: Dishonored is a first-person supernatural/steampunk RPG vidja game which can basically be described as the result of Deus Ex and Thief having a baby and asking Bioshock and Half Life 2 to be the godparents. It's hella good.
Yay, you could follow it! I'm trying to write this to be accessible to both those who've played the game and those who haven't, so I'm pleased to hear you weren't lost.
Though I must ask: SGM?
M.C. Badgere: Dishonored is an awesome game, but it can be
pretty damn hard (unless you're me, as I am Steampunk Batman and an unstoppable, unseeable entity of great power and great mercy

). Thanks for the kind words, and I hope you enjoy the rest, though it's going to be diverging wildly from Dishonored's storyline.
KC: Aw, you missed it just as it started to get
really good

Thanks for reading, though!
Chapter 2 Two Months Later "You really are too kind, my dear," the old woman said as Jenny Aching handed her the basket, filled with enough food to last her the next few days. "Sometimes I simply don't know what I would do without you."
"That's me, Granny Rags," Jenny replied with a smile. "Looking out for people, that's all."
The old woman nodded, only half hearing what Jenny said. She clutched the basket in her hands like it was something sacred, a claw of brittle bone and pale skin closed around the handle.
"I have no idea how much it means to me, Delilah," she said. "You staying on with the household after all of the other servants left us, and all so suddenly. I must give you a raise some day; it's so hard to find servants as loyal and hardworking as yourself. I don't know how I'd manage in a house this size without your help."
Jenny looked up at the crumbling three-storey house that Granny Rags called home, a dying edifice of peeling plaster and rotting masonry. The third floor, she knew, was inaccessible since the staircase had collapsed under the weight of time, a combined effort of entropy and gravity bringing them down. Once again, she found she lacked the heart to correct the old woman.
"It's what I'm here for," Jenny said. "Do you need anything else, Granny Rags?"
"No, no, my dear, I'm quite alright," Granny rags shook her head. "Since you've been working so hard lately, why don't you have the night off? Here." She fished into her pocket and brought out a slightly bent bottlecap from a bottle of Thirsty Greg's beer. "Just a little tip for all of the hard work you've been doing."
"Thanks, Granny Rags," Jenny said, giving as gracious a smile as she could as she pocketed the small disc of metal. "Let me know if you need anything else."
"Of course, Delilah" Granny Rags said with a wrinkled, faded smile. Jenny had never worked out why the old woman called her that, but guessed that Delilah must have been a maidservant of hers from when she had once been rich. "Off you go now, and have a nice night."
Jenny gave the old woman a smile and a wave as she stepped away onto the street, heading away from the old distillery, towards Clavering Boulevard. She got one or two odd looks as parted from the old house, from locals who knew about the old woman and street kids who thought she was a witch. Most people knew her as the girl who lived nearby, who helped the sad, senile old lady who lived alone in that crumbling house, a respectable local girl, one of their own lot. Even the Bottle Street gangers who loitered around the area gave her a nod as she passed; the last one who had given her trouble had ended up with a knife at his throat and a threat that his balls would be cut off. That had earned her the sort of don't-[censored]-with-me reputation that violent men like them could respect.
Down the street went Jenny Aching, hard working girl and respected local lass. The sun was creeping towards the horizon and curfew approaching, but Jenny wasn't heading home. Chances were, she would be up all night.
She traversed a few more streets of the Distillery District, tall and thin houses of crumbling brick looming over her on one side, setting sun casting triangular rooftop patterns of grey and orange across the cobbles as if the shade had teeth. On the other side was the banks of the Wrenhaven, the breeze carrying the faint scent of sewage and whale blood.
She stopped at where a barrier of indigo steel was raised, cutting across the street like a cleaver. The houses on its side of the street had doors and windows blocked by the same metal, and the barrier extended out a little to the river, making sure that none could climb across. On the wall, someone had posted a notice; "
Danger. Plague zone. No trespassing. By order of the City Watch, those seen entering or leaving this area will be shot."
Jenny simply checked that there was nobody about, but aside from a vagrant huddled sleeping in a bundle of rags in a nearby doorway there was nobody. No one wanted to live on the border of a condemned zone.
With a slight thump, she slid onto the rocks below, careful to keep her footing on the algae-slicked stone. She had done this a hundred times now, reaching for a chain that dangled on the far end of the wall with a strategically hooked stick. She hooked it on her first attempt, pulling it close to her, and hoisted herself up. Kicking off the wall, she swung around its far edge, swooping over the water where patches of rubbish floated like scabs,
Her boots scudded against the bank, onto cobbles much like the ones on the other side, these ones slick with algae. Once she was sure she was steady, she released the chain, pushing it to give it a little help in swinging back around to its original resting place. Reaching into her satchel, Jenny drew forth her pistol. Carrying it in her day to day life was risky, and if a Watchman found it on her such a thing would get her imprisoned, but out here in a condemned zone, where weepers and feral hounds prowled, going unarmed was even riskier.
Dunwall had always been a grubby city since the days of industrialisation, dirt and soot becoming ingrained into people and buildings alike, never washed out by the dampness of Gristol's clime. Three month of abandonment had done nothing to help this area, dereliction and rot gutting the district with the same brutal efficiency a butcher's cleaver. Smashed windows stared out onto the street, boarded up doorways screaming mouths that had been stitched shut by wooden thread. Weeds poked up between cobbles and paving stones, and rubbish and litter skittered about, man-made leaves in the breeze. The silence was oppressive and frightening.
Her progress was slow, creeping towards the centre of the district, ducking low and out of sight whenever she saw shambling figures congregating in the streets. The weepers were like protestors gathered in a pathetic rally against their affliction, stumbling and milling about in one spot, uncertain and helpless. More than anything else, Jenny pitied them.
As she drew closer and closer to the centre of the district, a faint thumping began to become audible, as if some great heart were still beating in this condemned, forgotten place. She followed the noise, tracked the beat as it crept up in volume, until she finally came across a warehouse, a brick building with a slanting roof of corrugated iron.
Making sure no weepers were in sight, she darted across the street, boots scuffing the weeds that poked through the cobbles. She reached a wheel in the wall, below a balcony, and span it once, a ladder clattering down to meet her. Quickly, before the noise could attract any attention, Jenny clambered up, and once she was atop the balcony span the accompanying wheel, drawing the latter back up. It was not a particularly subtle disguise for the warehouse's entrance, but it was enough to stop the blunted intellect of a curious weeper.
Pushing open the door on the far end of the balcony, Jenny stepped inside the warehouse. Once, it had been a storage place for canisters of whale oil. After the plague had moved in, condemning the area to abandonment, the warehouse had been taken over by new tenants and repurposed. Hunched over like a mechanical worshipper to some obscure god of words, sheets of paper rolling over, under and through it, thumping a drumbeat of upheaval and protest, the printing press of
Dunwall's Voice worked away.
Jenny's boots clanged against the staircase that lead down into the main floor of the building as she descended. Stopping by a box already filled with pamphlets, Jenny read the headline emblazoned across the rough paper in cheap ink; "
OUR BELLIES EMPTY AS THEIR PURSES FILL!" Beneath, an angry article talking of a rise in the price of bread, the third in as many weeks.
"So, what do you think?"
Jenny started, casting around her until she saw the young man with a crutch standing nearby her. He grinned at her, nodding at the headline and then poking his glasses back into place as the movement dislodged them.
"Pretty good headline, isn't it?" he said. "Came up with it all by myself."
"It's a good one," Jenny nodded. "Memorable."
"Thought so too," Delman Capson said, sole writer and editor of
Dunwall's Voice. "Figured we could use something nice and rabble-rousing after a piece of news like this."
"It'll piss all the right people off, that's for certain," Jenny said.
"Who're the right people in this case? The toffs or the common people?"
Jenny snorted at that comment, shaking her head.
"Both, hopefully," she said. "Are the others ready to deliver it?"
"They're coming soon," Delman said. "Via the sewer route."
There was an uncomfortable look to him, Jenny realised, something nagging at him.
"What's wrong?" she asked.
"I..." Delman sighed. "Can we sit down first, please?"
"Of course," Jenny said. With the aid of his crutch, Delman limped away from the press on his clubbed foot, to the small lamp-lit room that served as the main office of
Dunwall's Voice. It was scattered with pens, papers, daguerreotypes and the other detritus of journalism, and at the centre of its main desk was a typewriter, a half-written article for the next edition already in place halfway through its rollers. Delman took a seat with a grunt, resting his crutch against the desk.
"it's Hollison," he said. "They got him. Just today, I heard about."
Jenny was silent. She closed her eyes, took a deep breath, and the slowly, carefully exhaled.
"[censored]," she said eventually. "How?"
"Georgina saw a couple of Watchmen stop him," Delman said. "He still had a whole load of copies of the
Voice on him. It'll be charges of distributing seditious material, no doubt."
"Do you think they'll link him to the rest of us?" Jenny asked.
"No way of knowing," Delman said. "But Hollison's a stubborn son of a bitch; chances are he won't say anything."
"We can't take that risk," Jenny said. "Delman, can you take charge of the meeting tonight? I don't have anything I need to put out on the agenda, and you know the drill well enough by now."
"I...no," Delman said. He scrambled for his crutch and pushed himself to his feet as Jenny swept out of the room, limping in her wake. "No, no, no! Jenny, come back here, for the Outsider's sake!"
Jenny ignored him as she swept through the main hall of the warehouse, past the press, to a small, ignored cupboard on the far side of the room. She slid back the bolt and pulled the door back, and admired at its contents.
"Jenny, please," Delman begged from behind her. "You can't go out again. You're taking an insane risk doing this."
"Where did they take him?" Jenny asked.
"The Watch Station on the west bank of Kaldwin's Bridge," Delman said, then shook his head as he realised his mistake. "And I can't let you go there!"
"Delman," Jenny said, turning on her co-conspirator. "Which one of us is in charge of this operation?"
"You are," Delman mumbled, cowed by the sudden anger in her voice.
"I am," Jenny said. She took the contents of the draw and tucked them under one arm. "Now if you'll excuse me, I'll be taking the meeting room for a few moments. A lady needs her privacy."
Sweeping from the room, Jenny closed the door of the warehouse's improvised meeting room behind her. As he heard cloth rustling on the other side, Delman shook his head in despair. He shouldn't have aid anything, but then again, Jenny would have heard from the others in their small band of malcontents. They might have been enough to talk her out of doing anything reckless, though.
Inside, Jenny rolled her eyes in exasperation at Delman's timidness as she changed. He was a good writer, and she couldn't hope for a better person to pen the articles in
Dunwall's Voice, but he was over-cautious in her eyes. Nobody was going to overthrow the increasingly tyrannical regime of the Lord Regent without steel in their spine and a willingness to die for the cause.
She strapped on the moth-eaten bodice of blood crimson that had become part of her signature attire, pulled on the deep red boots and trousers that made up the lower half of her costume. She slung the bandolier for a pistol and ammunition across her shoulder and strapped a belt around her waist, a sword strapped to it. A grappling hook and rope were wrapped crosswise to the bandolier, carefully placed so as not to slow her access to her weapon, and a lockpicking kit was placed in a satchel on her belt. For remaining incognito, a cloak was slung over her shoulders, covering the costume while she made her way through Dunwall's streets; when she arrived at her destination she would remove it and let the city know that Red Jenny had the guts to go after a Watch Station, but until then it was wisest to minimise the risk of being caught.
The final part of her attire was the most important. It was a ceramic mask, red like the rest of her costume, a sardonic, confident smile adorning its features and a strange symbol of a stylised circle with a diagonal line bisecting it resting on its forehead. There was nothing to cover the rest of her head, and instead Jenny kept her brown tied back in a ponytail so it wouldn't get in the way, but nobody noticed the hair. All people saw was the mask.
It was a special thing. One day, when she had been doing her best to keep the crumbling ruin of Granny Rags' house clean, she had found it in a cupboard, atop a moth-eaten crimson bodice, evidently the surviving remnants of a once fine ball gown. There was something about the mask that attracted her, something that whispered and promised with words she couldn't quite hear or understand. She had taken them down to Granny Rags, too overcome with curiosity to not ask.
"Oh, those old things?" the old woman had said. "Why, they were for the masquerade my husband and I threw for the Fugue Feast. I was the envy of every woman there that night. Why don't you take them, dear; I don't think I'm young enough to get away with wearing their like any more, but it would be something nice for you to have, wouldn't it?"
So perhaps Granny Rags was a sad, senile old lady who had a powerful artefact associated with the Outsider. So what? Everyone in Gristol carried charms of carven whalebone with them, for luck or protection or some more obtuse blessing.
Later that night, too curious to resist the temptation any longer, she had put on the mask, and for Jenny Aching, everything changed. Her steps were swifter and quieter, her leaps carried her farther, her eyes could cut through the darkness as if it were daylight. A costume had been assembled, a persona that took to Dunwall's streets at night, an anarchist imbued with the power of the occult. The first time she had been out, when she had killed a watchman who was marching a man to the local station for interrogation, nothing more than pretence for a beating and a robbing, she realised that this was what she truly was, that this was where she truly belonged.
The news she heard the next morning, of the Empress' assassination by the traitor Corvo Attano and Hiram Burrows assuming power 'for an indefinite period, until stability had returned to Dunwall', had seemed almost irrelevant at the time. In the face of what Jenny had discovered, such things were the embodiment of pettiness and unimportance.
"That thing creeps me out," Delman said as Jenny emerged in full attire apart from her mask, the piece of costume in her hand.
"I know," Jenny said. "You've said plenty of times, trust me."
"Look," Delman said, hobbling after her as Jenny mounted the stairs. "I doubt he'll talk. I know that it's harsh to leave him hanging out to dry, but it's like you said; we've got to make sacrifices. Not everyone's going to live through Burrows being overthrown."
"And if he does talk that'll spell disaster," Jenny retorted.
"What if they catch
you?" Delman said. "We're [censored] then, aren't we?"
Jenny paused from where she was about to open the door to the balcony.
"They won't catch me," she said, opening the door. "Trust me on that."
"And what'll you say when you get shot and killed, or clubbed unconscious and wake up in a torturer's chair?" Delman pressed. "Jenny, for the Void's sake, you can't go around risking your life like this all the time. It's one thing to appear at strikes and cause a stir, or maybe rough up some Watchmen who've overstepped their authority and are asking for it, but it's another thing to try and break someone out of a damn Watch station."
"If I don't do it, Delman, nobody will," Jenny said. "Now organise everyone for me while I'm gone. I'll be back by morning."
She closed the door and slipped on the mask. For a moment, she revelled in the exhilaration of her eyes sharpening, of strength flooding her limbs, her heart being filled with a new resolve and font of will. Donning the mask, she felt godlike, invulnerable. Nothing could stop her this night.
Red Jenny spun the wheel, slid down the ladder, and disappeared into the evening, ready to cause chaos.
This post has been edited by Colonel Mustard: Sep 22 2013, 04:34 PM