Liz: Red Jenny isn't the only OC I'm bringing into this. It's up to you if you think that that's a good or a bad thing
H.E.R.: It's going to be a little blurry over how much of the mask's effects are in Jenny's head and how much of it is from the Outsider's power. And it would be Glasgow you're thinking of; Edinburgh is the capital of Scotland and is/was the cultural and governmental centre of the country, while Glasgow had a lot more industry. As industry in the UK got viciously kneecapped by Thatcher, it now has a lot more poverty instead.
I can't say I was specifically angling for an H.G. Wells vibe with the story (I haven't read tons of his work), but thank you very much all the same!

Also, if you do see typos, feel free to point them out; I'm a grown-up enough boy to handle someone pointing out typos and it improves the story anyway, so go for it.
Jack Cloudy: Hehe, thanks very much. I'll admit that it can be a bit odd for Corvo to be this terrifying entity if you're trying to do things as cleanly as possible, though I'll admit that it was even worse for me when I was playing the Knife of Dunwall and Brigmore Witches DLCs, where Daud the Master Assassin instead became Daud the Clumsy Oaf who keeps Failing to Sneak Up on People.
Glad you liked Red Jenny, though she isn't exactly what I'd call a ninja; her style is a lot more blase than you'd expect from a ninja, and though that mask gives her some cool powers (as well as a distinctive costume) she's nowhere near as powerful as Corvo and Daud are.
Thanks for reading, everyone, and enjoy the next part!
Chapter 3 One Month Later The echo of the gunshot inside his skull was what woke Lucas Cornell from his sleep. He blinked a few times, disorientated and hyperventilating, struggling for his bearings. Finally, he found them; at home, in his bed, the first rays of sun creeping through the curtains.
He checked the clock on the cabinet opposite him, and nodded. There were still five minutes to go before the alarm bell chimed and he would have to rise, and he took a moment to lie back in his bed. That moment was slow, and it ached.
The clock chimed, the noise enough to drag him out of memory and into the day. Thanking the device for the distraction, Lucas slid out of bed, flicked the alarm off for the next morning, and drew back the curtains. Weak natural light filtered through the window, Lucas blinking before it. Night-time rain had left the street slick and damp, as if it had just crawled from the womb of some abominable urban goddess, but there were already people in the cobbled roadways.
He carried out his morning routine in silence, dressing, eating a light breakfast, brushing his teeth, moving through his small, empty apartment without saying a word. There was nobody to say anything to, after all.
Once the short period of preparation was done, he stepped outside onto the street. He wasn’t in his uniform at the moment, just some nobody in a long coat to ward off the chill and damp, hands tucked into his pockets. Nobody paid him any attention as he walked out of his small apartment building, locking the door behind him, making his way down the street.
He stopped by the mouth of an alleyway, a block away from his home, and reached into the inside of his pocket of his jacket. He pulled out a tin of brined hagfish, peeling the lid off, and placed it down by his feet.
“Jessie!” he called. “Here girl! C’mon!”
He whistled, and the call was answered by barking and the sound of hurrying paws. A dog hurried into the alleyway’s mouth, tongue lolling and tail wagging, and Lucas crouched down by her as she came close, looking up at him with mute adulation and worship.
“Go on, girl,” he said, ruffling the fur behind the dog’s ears. “Tuck in.”
Without further encouragement, the dog tucked in, wolfing down the contents of the tin and licking it clean in mere moments. Meal already finished, Jessie looked up at him, an expectant look in her eye, but Lucas just shook his head and smiled, petting her head.
“Hey now,” he said. “Don’t get greedy. I’ll be back from work later, and I’ll get some more food for you then.”
Jessie barked her enthusiasm and followed him down the street as he went. Lucas had no idea exactly who Jessie belonged to, and he had called her Jessie only because she looked like a girl, but she had obviously had an owner before Lucas had adopted her; she was too tame to be one of the semi-feral street dogs that roamed some of Dunwall’s backstreets, and she was, unless Lucas was very much mistaken, a purebred Tivean Sheephound. If it weren’t for the fact that his landlady put a ban on keeping pets of any kind, he would have put the girl up in his apartment. The company would be pleasant, but as it was their current arrangement was working well enough.
They parted ways outside the local City Watch station, Jessie heading back into the streets that were her home and Lucas stepping through the front doors of the imposing brick building. His face was well known and he was let past the front desk without a word of challenge beyond the man behind the desk wishing him a good morning.
Taking his uniform from his locker and changing quickly, Captain Lucas Cornell of the City Watch was finally fully ready to face his day. It decided that it would start busy and go from there.
“We’ve got another attack carried out by Red Jenny and her friends,” was Captain Urdan’s answer to Lucas’ enquiries about what had happened the previous night. The man was grimy from pulling a busy all-nighter, eyes bloodshot and shadowed from lack of sleep. A faint crop of stubble darkened his chin. “We had a cart full of weapons attacked; the two watchmen driving it were killed, and everything on board was taken. There was more than three thousand Coin’s worth of muskets, pistols, grenades and ammunition on board that cart, and they took it all.”
“How do you know that it was Red Jenny’s work?” Lucas asked. In response, Urdan slid a wicker picnic basket across to him. Frowning, Lucas pulled the lid up to reveal loaves of bread, and on top of them, a note.
‘Your weapons have been requisitioned for a just cause. Give these to the people instead of your bullets. Kindest regards, Red Jenny.’
“Outsider damn the crazy bitch,” Lucas cursed. “Any witnesses?”
“None, or at least there aren’t any who’ll say anything against her,” Urdan said. “Lord Commander’s gonna have my head for this.”
He shook his head.
“Remember when this job used to be easy?”
“Hah,” Lucas snorted. “I’m still longing for the days when the worst we had to deal with was ganger trouble. No weepers, no rioters, no revolutionaries.”
“Well, I’ve got some good news, at least,” Urdan said. “The first shipment of Sokolov’s new toys came in. They’re trying them out in the yard. C’mon, let me show you.”
The sight that greeted Lucas in the yard was nothing short of awe-inspiring. Standing fifteen feet in height atop two spindly legs, an armoured nest protecting the single pilot, a group of machines walked the Watch Station’s yard. The men atop the platforms had bows in their hands and the weapons would have been anachronistically archaic in comparison to their mounts if it weren’t for the fact that Lucas could see they were tipped with cartridges of explosive whale oil.
“Tallboys, they call ‘em,” Urdan said. “This was the ‘riot suppression measure’ we were all promised.”
“How many do we have?” Lucas asked, watching one of the machines step over a pair of spectating watchmen in a single immense stride.
“Half a dozen, with more to come.”
“That’s a measure that’ll suppress riots, alright,” Lucas said. “They’ll be enough to stop them before they start.”
“Exactly the point. The intimidation factor on those things is through the roof, and even if it doesn’t scare people off then it can rip through a crowd in no time.”
“Y-yes,” Lucas managed to nod. “That would be a good thing too, I suppose. Who’s piloting those? Are we going to need to rework shifts if we’ve got men on Tallboy duty?”
“The pilots came in from outside the station,” Urdan replied. “They’ve been having special training in these for the last couple of months, top secret stuff that they’ve been doing in Dunwall Tower.”
Lucas gave a grimace of disapproval.
“Everything alright?” Urdan asked.
“Rather have men who know the area piloting those things, that’s all,” Lucas said.
“Not as if we’re going to be sending those things out on patrol,” Urdan pointed out. “Exceptional circumstances only, that sort of thing.”
He blinked, as if remembering something.
“Thinking of special circumstances, Commander Tellerson said he wanted to see you,” he added. “Said that there was an assignment he had for you, to see him as soon as you could.”
Lucas nodded.
“I’ll see him right away,” he said. “Talk to you later, Urdan.”
“Hah, fat chance,” Urdan retorted. “My shift’s over, I’m heading home.”
“Alright then, tomorrow,” Lucas said. He headed into the interior of the station, the bustling mix of whitewashed corridors, cells, offices, Watchmen and prisoners. There was the sound of bellowed threats from one cell, of a man yelling in pain and pleading for mercy, and Lucas shook his head. The Watch had changed since he had first joined, and he was beginning to feel more and more that it hadn’t changed for the better.
He came to a halt before the door of Commander Tellerson’s office, and rapped his knuckles on the oak.
“Come in,” the Commander’s voice rasped from the other side. Door creaking as he pushed it open, Lucas entered. “Ah, Captain Cornell, I was expecting you.”
The body of Commander Tellerson was that of a man who had, in his prime, been the height of strength and athleticism; tall, broad-shouldered, muscular. Now, with the advance of age, those muscles had turned to fat, his hair had greyed and the pipe he had favoured for decades had left his voice as a deep rasp.
Standing behind the Commander to his left was another figure, wearing the indigo uniform and sneering golden mask of an Overseer.
“Sir,” Lucas saluted. “Who’s this?”
“Patrir Balkin,” the Overseer said, stepping forwards with a hand extended. Lucas shook it. “A pleasure to meet you, Captain Cornell.”
“And you too,” Lucas replied. “What’s this about, Commander? I take it Overseer Balkin’s here for more than just a social visit.”
“You’re quite correct, Captain,” Tellerson said, moustache wobbling as he spoke. “I’m assigning you new duties; the apprehension of the anarchist known as Red Jenny.”
“The Abbey of the Everyman has reason to suspect that she traffics with the Outsider,” Balkin answered before Lucas could ask the inevitable question. “Naturally, we wish to have her detained and executed for heresy, and I was assigned the task of hunting her down by the Abbey. I knew the City Watch also wished to have her taken in, so it made sense to me that we should pool our resources instead of conducting separate investigations; the Watch may know things the Abbey may not, and vice versa, and it reduces the risk of us accidentally treading on each other’s toes.”
“I see,” Lucas said. “What does this have to do with me?”
“All to do with our break-in last month when she sprang her friend,” Tellerson said. “You’re the only member of the Watch to have encountered her face-to-face and lived.”
“Indeed,” Balkin added. “I requested that you might help me in this assignment. That, and your prior history with dealing with riots and strikers means that you may well have an insight on the revolutionary mindset that I lack.”
“I’ve given you access to all of the reports we have on Red Jenny to help you both,” Tellerson said. “May be that you find something useful.”
“Thank you, Commander,” Balkin said. “Unless there is something the captain wishes to speak to you about, then I do not see any reason to use up any more of your time.”
Tellerson glanced to Lucas.
“Nothing else to add, sir,” the Captain said. “We’ll get to work.”
“So,” Lucas said to Balken as they stepped into the corridor. “How are we doing this?”
“The investigation?” Balken asked, looking at him with Lucas guessed was a curious expression beneath the sneering countenance of his mask. “The usual manner, I had thought; conducting interviews, reviewing evidence, attempting to work out where she would appear next, that sort of thing.”
“No, no, not that,” Lucas shook his head. “I meant us two. Is this something you’re determined to take charge of?”
“On the contrary, I would much rather we worked together as partners and equals,” Balken said. “You are experienced in hunting criminals, and I am experiences in hunting occultists. Seeing as we are hunting a criminal occultist, neither of us really has any precedent for taking charge over the other.”
“Works for me,” Lucas nodded. At least the Balken was fairly intelligent, it seemed; he had worked with Overseers before, when the Watch had had to collaborate with them on some matters, and those men had been blinkered, frothing-at-the-mouth lunatics. It was still possible that Balken was as zealous as the others and had merely tempered that zeal with a little humility, but whales might have just grown wings and flown and he could have found himself partnered with a reasonable Overseer. “Do you have an office or anything here, Overseer?”
“I’m afraid I don’t,” Balken said. “And please, just call me Patrir.”
“Well, we might as well use mine for this, then,” Lucas said. “We’ll get everything relevant from the archives and bring it up here, see what we can find out. And call me Lucas, by the way.”
Their visit to the station’s archives and evidence room was not a long one, the pair picking up the files that had been compiled on Red Jenny as well as the latest few editions of
Dunwall’s Voice that had been confiscated.
“Any reason why you’re picking up that seditionist little rag, Lucas?” Balken asked.
“It’s only ever been a hunch, but I’m pretty sure the
Voice and Red Jenny are linked,” Lucas explained as he led the way to his office. “She’s always seen at the rallies or strikes that the
Voice incites, and they portray her as some kind of hero for the people. Might just be that they have a mutual interest, but it could be a chance to work out where she’s going to appear next.”
“Good thinking,” Balken nodded.
They reached Lucas’ office, and the captain pushed the door open. It was a carefully kept, neat room, uncluttered and clean, with a few mementos on his desk but little else.
“Tell me, captain, when you faced down Red Jenny, did you see anything to suggest any Outsider affiliation?” Balken asked. “Anything uncanny or not right about her?”
“She was a lot stronger and a lot quicker than I expected,” Lucas said. “We went sword-to-sword when I ran into her, and she took me by surprise with that.”
“Unnaturally so?”
“Maybe unnatural wouldn’t be quite the right word to describe it, but she was an amateur. She lacked technique. A master swordsman would have had her level of speed and strength, but I’m talking about someone who’s trained from when they were young and she definitely hasn’t. Technique was the reason that I survived, and if she hadn’t shot me I might have actually beaten her.”
He rubbed his right shoulder at that, at the deep furrow that the bullet had dug along it. It wasn’t a debilitating injury, but it had been enough for him to drop his weapon and stun him; Red Jenny had taken the opportunity to flee with her rescued comrade.
“I see,” Balken said. “And do you think you saw anything that might have given her such abilities?”
“I can’t say for certain, but you know that mask she wears? I got a funny feeling whenever I looked at it. It could have been that which was giving her that advantage.”
“Her mask,” Balken nodded. “I see. It would make sense; the Outsider and its followers are known to have a fondness for such things.”
“If that is the case, do you have to counter that?” Lucas asked. “You Overseers are the ones who are specialised in dealing with magic, after all.”
“There is something we have,” Balken nodded, drawing what looked like a small music box from his pocket. He pulled open the lit and his thumb flicked a lever, and a discordant chime echoed from it. “It has only just recently been developed, but this little device can temporarily disable Outsider magic; if we use it on Red Jenny it should be enough to put her at a disadvantage and make it possible to apprehend her.”
“Yeah, I can see how that would be useful,” Lucas nodded. He tapped the files and the small box of
Dunwall’s Voice copies on his desk. “Now let’s see if we can track her down.”