There's even more! I'm actually writing at a consistent and steady pace! Wow!
King Coin: I always find it's nice to come back to a fic and discover there's been more than one chapter arrived.
On your question about the mask, it gives extra strength and dexterity, but aside from the night vision power Jenny doesn't have anywhere near as extensive a supernatural arsenal as Corvo and Daud have. It's powerful in it's own, more obtuse way, however, but saying more would be spoilers.
Thin Lizzie: Yeah, Tallboys are toughies. Nasty pieces of work, definitely.
The Whale Oil was definitely one of the most interesting parts of Dishonored, and I liked how well Arkane wove it into the world; it made it much more interesting, especially with the game's implied links between whales and the Outsider.
Jack Cloudy: Yep, Red Jenny is walking a thin, dangerous line at points. She knows (or rather, she thinks she knows) what side she's on, but it's certainly something ambiguous, and she's a High Chaos type, make no bones about that.
Dunwall and Dishonored do have a very creepy vibe to them, yeah, a very gothic one; one of the reasons why I like the game so much, I think.
McB: Thanks very much!

On the whole perspective jump thing, I considered having an actual delineation between the scenes, but the issue with those is that it generally implies that the scene after the break is set either a significant time later than or a significant distance away from the scene before, whereas in this case Jenny and Lucas were both in the same place at the same time; I figured that making it clear where the perspective had changed to would be clearer for the reader than an actual break.
Chapter 5 This is the story of three people, two masks, and one city. At this moment in time, you might be forgiven for thinking that is only a story of two people. It is true that the lives of Jenny Aching and Lucas Cornell become linked together far earlier than whey they are conjoined with that of Corvo Attano, but rest assured that he shall enter our narrative very soon. For now, the man who is thought by the world as the killer of an empress is in Coldridge Prison, tortured and unyielding. The man who really killed Jessamine Kaldwin dreams uneasy, fitful dreams of what he did. Right now, he is bloodying his blade for me one last time, but that is a story for another day. For now, we must focus once more on Jenny Aching. This scene is set just under six months after the death of Empress Kaldwin, and at this moment in time Red Jenny and her fellow anarchists are about to meet. This is a time of many clandestine meetings in shadowy places, but this one is important, so important that it cannot go without mentioning. If it had never taken place then, I suspect, things would have gone far, far differently for Dunwall. Jenny Aching’s eyes flickered open, and she pushed herself up into a sitting position in the bed. Beside her, still asleep, Delman muttered something indecipherable at the disturbance and shifted, tugging at the sheet.
On the cabinet by the bed the two lovers shared, in one of the side rooms of their publishing house-come-headquarters, the hands of the clock atop it showed it was half past six. It was time to get up, greet the day and work out where and what to strike next.
She let Delman sleep a while longer, pulling on clothes; a shirt, a long skirt, a waistcoat of cheap brown cloth and a strip of material to pull her hair back, completely unremarkable garb that left her looking like nobody at all.
Someone had put an audiograph on, a pianist’s take on a lilting tavern song echoing through the main warehouse instead of usual thumping beat of the press. Right now, the printing device was inert, and Jenny fancied it as a huge sleeping beast, curled up on itself, soon to wake once more and roar forth a cry of ink and paper and rebellion.
“Anyone around?” Jenny called.
“Over here,” came a reply. The speaker was obscured by the bulk of the press, but Jenny recognised it as Taldin’s. The former watchman was on the other side, loading a small tank of whale-oil gas into a portable stove at the warehouse’s small communal area, and Kannis was at the table, reading one of the books she read near constantly.
Kannis and Taldin had been with Jenny from the beginning, when she had been nothing more than a malcontent with a mask. Taldin had deserted the watch after one too many shifts keeping Weepers from breaking out of the Flooded District, enraged and disillusioned by the massacre of sick people and the Lord Regent’s apathy towards them. His knowledge of the Watch had proved essential, key to evading and outwitting patrols, and it had been him who trained Jenny’s small squad of revolutionary fighters in how to use weapons effectively.
Kannis was a different matter. She claimed to be a witch, a disgraced member of a coven, banished for an indiscretion that she would not disclose. Her magic lay in street spells, the woman working as an urban mystic who found hidden byways and nooks in alleyways and buildings, traversing Dunwall swiftly and silently; her claims of magical ability had been mocked at first by other members of the group, but such derision had ended on the day when she had killed three Watchmen through arcane butchery, the strange rose-and-thorn tattoos covering her arms whipping out with barbed vines to lacerate and strangle the lawmen. The question of how she had found Jenny’s band and why she had run to her had been answered cryptically; ‘
Aside from you, there is only one other in this city who has the power to protect me from the woman in charge of my coven, and I know that he will not help me.’ She was fascinated by the mask Jenny wore.
“You want some eggs?” Taldin asked. “I was just going to fry some up for breakfast.”
“If you’re cooking some, then yes please,” Jenny said, taking a seat near the small whale oil generator that powered everything in the base but the press; the condemned neighbour of the Distillery District they were set up in had had yletric power cut off from it long ago when the plague had moved in, and instead the warehouse was lit and heated by a portable generator and pilfered tanks of whale oil. The press, appetite for energy too huge to be sated by the small generator, was fuelled with oil casks that were plugged directly into the machine.
“Are we having a distribution run today?” Taldin asked.
“We always have a distribution run on Songdays,” Kannis said, not looking up from her book. “Why would today be any different?”
“I was just asking,” Taldin said. “If we’re doing this then we should probably get going soon; we’ll want to get the
Voice out before
Outcry hits the streets.”
“For the last time, Taldin,” Jenny said. “
Outcry aren’t our rivals. We’re both on the same side.”
“Yeah, but we were here first,” Taldin protested. “They’re just copying us.”
“Considering our circulation is easily ten times larger than theirs, I don’t think that that’s a big problem,” Kannis said. “Besides,
Outcry are good for getting the middle classes more stirred up over things; they’re more moderate, after all.”
“Lacking commitment, more like,” Jenny said.
Outcry was one of half a dozen pamphlets that had begun circulation in Dunwall over the past few months. The
Voice was, far and away, the most popular one in the city, distributed for free through clandestine means of dead-drops, code words and a network of suppliers to whom information was fed carefully and with immense scrutiny. With rising discontent of the Lord Regent’s increasingly tyrannical rule and the conversion of newspapers into nothing more than propaganda for his regime, an underground publishing ring of renegade journals and anti-authoritarian pamphlets had been born. There were others; the union-focussed
Unity,
Sanctifier, which believed that Hiram Burrows’ reign was in breach of the Seven Strictures and was printed by dissidents of the Abbey of the Everyman and
Sledgehammer, a ganger and street ruffian piece that advocated violent rebellion straight away. Of all the non-
Voice pamphlets, Jenny liked that one the best; their Ten Ways to Gut a Watch Pig article had been an entertaining read.
“You two sleep alright?” Jenny said, noting the dark circles under Kannis’ eyes.
“Like a log,” Taldin said.
“I didn’t,” Kannis answered. “Strange dreams, bad ones. Something happened at my old coven, or is about to happen, and the Outsider is laughing at them all.”
Taldin shot her a strange look, but Kannis didn’t seem to notice.
“Anything that might affect us?” Jenny asked.
“I don’t know,” Kannis said. “Perhaps, perhaps not; it’s beyond my ability to tell.”
“Just keep me informed,” Jenny said. “I mean, hopefully it won’t be a problem for us, but if it is then-”
“Hey, Jenny!”
The shout came from the upstairs balcony, from the warehouse’s street entrance, and Jenny stood to see Stanner up there. Next to him was a dark-skinned woman in a deep crimson rain-slick, a sword at her belt and some kind of strange device on her left wrist.
“Who’s that?” Jenny asked, as Stanner and his companion made their way down the stairs. “Why in the void are you bringing some stranger here?!”
“Jenny, Jenny, calm down,” Stanner said, raising his hands. “Listen, this is an old friend of mine, I can vouch for her. Just listen to her, trust me on this.”
“Explain yourself,” Jenny demanded of the newcomer.
“My name is Billie Lurk,” the woman said. “And I’ve got some information you might want to hear.”
They met in what had been dubbed ‘The War Room’. In reality, it was nothing more than an old storage room, but the small group under the command of Red Jenny had converted it into a meeting space and planning area. Maps of Dunwall and plans for attacking and undermining the Lord Regent were dominant here, pinned to the walls or to wheeled chalkboards. Mounted on the wall above the head of the table, in pride of place above where Jenny’s space, was a compound bow taken from a felled Tallboy.
Including Jenny and the newcomer, there were a dozen of them around the table; Delman, Stanner, Kannis and Taldin, with them others. Hollison, a former ganger with enough fight for three men in him, eternally loyal to Jenny after she had broken him out of a Watch station. There was Mercin, a skinny academic from the Academy of Natural Philosophy who had studied under Anton Sokolov, but had turned his mechanical expertise to undermining the Lord Regent instead of supporting him as his tutor had. There was Kroma, a Morleyan who fought for Red Jenny less because she cared for Dunwall but more because of her hatred of Gristol’s government and her desire to refight the battles of the Morley Insurrection. Palna and Rolda, siblings who had found the group while seeking revenge for their sister being disappeared by the Watch and Trevali, a Serkonan-descended man who may have been a pirate or may have been a Naval Marine and who was a marksman without peer, with a great disinclination towards speech.
They were the core of the movement, a squad that had half-jokingly dubbed themselves ‘The Jennies’ and wore crimson masks. There were others, of course, but the people gathered here were the most trusted, the only ones who knew about the warehouse. It was they who, under Jenny’s leadership, had orchestrated a dozen acts of sabotage against the Lord Regent. The Fenside Raid, where the distraction of three simultaneous riots across the Wrenhaven’s north shore had given the Jennies cover to raid and loot a Watch armoury and come away with a veritable arsenal of stolen weapons, including muskets, explosives, mortars and even an Arc Gun; a bullet from Trevali’s rifle had taken out a Watch Commander when the rest of the Jennies had fallen on his railcar and bodyguard and forced him into the sniper’s sights; the Dimcreek Strikes, where strikers had been protected by Watch brutality by the intervention of Red Jenny and her crew. More than once, Dunwall had been rocked by the blasts of their hand-made bombs.
With the one exception of Delman, the propagandist who was held back by his malformed foot, every one of the Jennies knew how to kill, were deadly and determined. They were an intimidating audience, especially with Jenny Aching herself at their head, but the newcomer, Lurk, was unbowed.
“So this is the newcomer, then?” Hollison asked, the ganger’s arms folded in an expression of how unimpressed he was. “The one Stanner thought would be a good idea to bring?”
“Yes, she is,” Jenny said. “Alright, Lurk, you’ve got one chance to convince that shooting you for knowing too much is a bad idea. One chance, so make the most of it.”
Surprisingly, that got her a derisive snort.
“Alright then,” Lurk said. “If you want to have a good reason as to why I won’t go running to tell the Lord Regent about you, then let me give you one; I’m a Whaler, and he’d have me killed.”
“A whaler?” Mercin asked. “One of the assassins? Those are just a myth.”
“They’re not,” Kannis said. “My old coven has clashed with them before, more than once.” She saw the look Lurk gave her. “I’m not with them anymore. And I’m guessing from the fact that you’re here, you’re not with the Whalers either.”
“Not anymore,” Lurk shook her head. “I had a...disagreement with the man who is in charge of them and I was exiled. I needed one of two things, a way out of the city or some coin, so I contacted some people. Stanner hinted that he might be able to get me in touch with someone who could help me, and eventually he led me here.”
“How do you two know each other then?” Jenny asked, nodding at Lurk and Stanner.
“We knew each other when we was kids,” Stanner answered. “Kept in touch; I gave Billie information when she needed it, that sort of thing.”
“Stanner was the best ear I had on the streets,” Lurk added.
“He still is,” Jenny said. “That’s why we keep him around. So, what do you want from us?”
“Coin, and a place to lay low,” Lurk said. “In return, I can give you the skills I learnt as a Whaler.”
“Useful,” Jenny nodded. “But to be honest, that doesn’t make you invaluable.”
“Anyway,” Delman said. “If it’s true about you being an outcast of this order of elite killers, why would you stay in the city? If I were in your position, I’d be getting out of the city.”
“Don’t want to leave,” Lurk replied. “Dunwall is my home; I grew up here, and right now I’m seeing it die around me. Feels wrong to abandon it now. Besides, the Whalers are running out of time, have been ever since we took out the Empress; that moment changed everything, my old master especially.”
“Your people killed the Empress?” Taldin demanded, the former Watchman grabbing the sword at his belt. The burly man stepped forwards before the others could react, weapon raised. “You [censored] bitch! So it’s your damn fault the entire city’s gone to-”
Lurk moved. Exactly what she did was hard to tell, but one moment she standing before the table, and the next she was standing by Taldin, the revolutionary on his knees. His sword clattered from nerveless fingers from where Lurk held him in an arm lock of some kind, Taldin cursing in pain and impotent fury. The barrels of half a dozen pistols were aimed at her, and she felt the pressure of a barrel pressing into the back of her head from the weapon Jenny had pulled from its holster.
“Ah,” Lurk said.
“Lower your weapons, everyone,” Jenny ordered. There was a moment’s hesitation. “Lower them.”
The barrels of the pistols crept down, slow and cautious.
“Now, Billie, I’m going to ask you to let Taldin go in a moment,” Jenny said. “And when that happen, Taldin, step away from her, and leave your sword where it is.”
“But she...she killed the Empress!” Taldin managed to protest, voice halfway to a pained, unintelligible grunt.
“Taldin, do as I say,” Jenny said.
“And if I don’t let him go?” Lurk asked.
“Then I shoot you in the head,” Jenny replied. Her voice was flat and smooth as a puddle of spilled whale oil. “This is something I don’t particularly want to do, because Stanner brought you here and while he can sometimes be thicker than an inbred hagfish, I still trust his judgement. He thinks you’re valuable and can be useful, and I want to see if he’s right. So let Taldin go, and Taldin, please don’t do anything stupid.”
Lurk’s grip was released, and Taldin half-stumbled, half-crawled back, cursing quietly and rubbing his injured hand, helped up by Rolda and Mercin. Jenny’s pistol lowered.
“You’ve got a good ‘holding people at gunpoint’ voice, you know,” Lurk remarked, taking a step away from Jenny and turning to face her. “I like that.”
“I’ve had practise,” Jenny shrugged, holstering the weapon. “Now, you mentioned information. What is this?”
Stanner grinned and rubbed his hands together in glee.
“Tell ‘er, Billie,” he said.
“Yes, please do,” Jenny added.
“As well as killing the Empress-” Lurk began. Taldin spat at her feet, an action which earned him a glare. “As well as killing the Empress, the Whalers also abducted Emily Kaldwin. We handed her over Morgan and Custis Pendleton, who took her to a location that they decided not to disclose to us. Of course, the Whalers knew that she was a potential bargaining chip, so my master had me follow them as they went on their way.”
She smiled at them all.
“Ladies and gentlemen, I know where Emily Kaldwin is, and I am willing to help you take her from the Lord Regent.”