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| Red |
 Jun 7 2005, 12:40 AM
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 Mouth  Joined: 29-May 05 From: If you're lucky, sometimes I'm here.  |
[quote=KhabaLox]I'm the haiku ape
some here know me already bad poems stick out excel numbers man intellectua admin* all around nice guy *thanks Ang :eek:[/quote] My god, challenge my haiku skills? You shall rue this day! darkness is his friend, in your home unseen he lurks. Completely unseen. -------------------- //LEFT ARM PULLS TRIGGER, RIGHT ARM SHRUGS SHOULDER//TRANSMISSION ENDED
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| DoomedOne |
Jun 8 2005, 02:02 AM
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 Master  Joined: 13-April 05 From: Cocytus |
[quote=Dantrag][quote=Konradude]eg.
Doomed one spoils the fun i am quite annoyed with him, I shall ignore him! :<   [/quote]
:rofl: now that's funny. And doomedone, while you are correct, a haiku still has to have that many lines and syllables. So both parties are correct. (I may not be able to write them, but I know what they consist of.)[/quote] Red your signature was correct, and I understand the syllable rule. Note I did not mention it. Writing a haiku with no purpose is like throwing lines of water color paint on a canvas and calling it a water-color art piece. EDIT: I thought about editting my "your" but... yeah, ignored it. -------------------- A man once asked the Buddha, "How does one escape the heat of the summer sun?"
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Red Haiku Jun 7 2005, 12:40 AM
Red Thanks for moving this, this may turn out to be a ... Jun 7 2005, 01:12 PM Dantrag I get F's on haiku's at school.
I don't get 'e... Jun 7 2005, 05:28 PM KhabaLox public library
built by community hands
sharing ... Jun 7 2005, 06:56 PM Red Thanks Dantrag. Haiku's are strange, they sound ea... Jun 7 2005, 08:46 PM Red Large storms rolling in,
all of the crops will be... Jun 7 2005, 08:49 PM minque This is interesting..will someone tell me the rule... Jun 7 2005, 09:13 PM Ambberfox I don't even know what Haiku is... :incrediblysad... Jun 7 2005, 09:18 PM burntsierra This is interesting..will someone tell me the rule... Jun 7 2005, 09:19 PM
Sir Radont Jerk of a driver!
You'll see, pass you on ... Mar 4 2006, 08:32 AM Konradude If it was all wrong,
and in the end they are righ... Jun 7 2005, 09:43 PM Aki
Haiku is easy
simple poem and fun one
Don't di... Jun 7 2005, 09:46 PM minque oh thanks guys...now i understand....it´s a very n... Jun 7 2005, 09:49 PM DoomedOne Your all ignoring the point of a haiku. You think... Jun 7 2005, 10:09 PM Konradude eg.
Doomed one spoils the fun
i am quite anno... Jun 7 2005, 10:24 PM Dantrag eg.
Doomed one spoils the fun
i am quite anno... Jun 7 2005, 11:30 PM KhabaLox Your all ignoring the point of a haiku. You think... Jun 7 2005, 11:32 PM Red Which part of my signature? The first one? The pes... Jun 8 2005, 01:12 PM DoomedOne All three. Jun 8 2005, 10:58 PM KhabaLox Writing a haiku with no purpose is like throwing l... Jun 8 2005, 11:56 PM Red Perfection is key,
especially in haiku.
Remember... Jun 9 2005, 01:09 AM Dantrag lol. this thread is cool. I enjoy reaading poems. ... Jun 9 2005, 01:19 AM ThePerson98
http://www.finalemusic.com/notepad/
Finale notep... Mar 4 2006, 05:28 AM DoomedOne Writing a haiku with no purpose is like throwing l... Jun 9 2005, 01:53 AM Red Like I said before, there were Bhudist monks who w... Jun 9 2005, 12:31 PM Chumbaniya Haikus are too short
They contain only three line... Jun 9 2005, 04:43 PM KhabaLox Yeah you're right you don't get it. Poetry is an ... Jun 10 2005, 04:37 PM Chumbaniya I think your view of art and poetry is closeminded... Jun 11 2005, 02:12 AM ShogunSniper a dark past shrouded
eyes unclouded by hatred
ma... Jun 11 2005, 02:22 AM gamer10 a dark past shrouded
eyes unclouded by hatred
ma... Jun 11 2005, 02:33 AM Chumbaniya Here's a haiku some of the admins could use:
Te... Jun 11 2005, 12:00 PM Sinder Velvin Here's a haiku some of the admins could use:
Te... Jun 11 2005, 12:17 PM Andric Deodorant is
really really smelly and
it also sm... Jun 11 2005, 04:21 PM Konradude I like lammas so
they are funny and hairy
and th... Jun 11 2005, 04:36 PM Red Hey, I think I too shall make a random Haiku!
A... Jun 11 2005, 04:42 PM Konradude why are they slippy
the ultimate bananas
just b... Jun 11 2005, 04:45 PM Andric I like lammas so
they are funny and hairy
and th... Jun 11 2005, 11:33 PM FafsaTheElf This is extremely funny. Anyone here play KoL? wel... Mar 4 2006, 12:51 AM Pieinsky Haiku
Maple leaf falls, soft
Wind pushes’ leaf dr... Mar 14 2006, 07:33 PM |
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