Master
Joined: 3-July 08
From: The darkest pit of your soul. Hi there!
This was a good read so far. The elf makes a nice framing device for the story and the idea of the prisoner being a Blades agent who stuck himself in the cell to make sure he could be with the Emperor, and the idea of the Knights of the True Horn (snort!) is a cool one.
Don't really have any nits to point out (Subrosa and Acadian got them all already), so all I'll say is that I enjoyed this and I'm looking forward to more.