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Red
post Jun 7 2005, 12:40 AM
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[quote=KhabaLox]I'm the haiku ape
some here know me already
bad poems stick out

excel numbers man
intellectua admin*
all around nice guy

*thanks Ang :eek:[/quote]

My god, challenge my haiku skills? You shall rue this day!

darkness is his friend,
in your home unseen he lurks.
Completely unseen.


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Chumbaniya
post Jun 11 2005, 02:12 AM
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[quote=KhabaLox]I think your view of art and poetry is closeminded. Randomness, lack of premeditation, and absense of meaning all have their place in art. Even haiku. It may not be your daddy's haiku, but it's still a piece of art.[/quote]

Randomness and lack of premeditation? Alright!

Enchanted woodlouse
Swims in vat of cheap syrup
He is quite content

I become enraged
By talk of tresspassing bears
That steal my best shoes


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Red   Haiku   Jun 7 2005, 12:40 AM
Red   Thanks for moving this, this may turn out to be a ...   Jun 7 2005, 01:12 PM
Dantrag   I get F's on haiku's at school. I don't get 'e...   Jun 7 2005, 05:28 PM
KhabaLox   public library built by community hands sharing ...   Jun 7 2005, 06:56 PM
Red   Thanks Dantrag. Haiku's are strange, they sound ea...   Jun 7 2005, 08:46 PM
Red   Large storms rolling in, all of the crops will be...   Jun 7 2005, 08:49 PM
minque   This is interesting..will someone tell me the rule...   Jun 7 2005, 09:13 PM
Ambberfox   I don't even know what Haiku is... :incrediblysad...   Jun 7 2005, 09:18 PM
burntsierra   This is interesting..will someone tell me the rule...   Jun 7 2005, 09:19 PM
Sir Radont   Jerk of a driver! You'll see, pass you on ...   Mar 4 2006, 08:32 AM
Konradude   If it was all wrong, and in the end they are righ...   Jun 7 2005, 09:43 PM
Aki   Haiku is easy simple poem and fun one Don't di...   Jun 7 2005, 09:46 PM
minque   oh thanks guys...now i understand....it´s a very n...   Jun 7 2005, 09:49 PM
DoomedOne   Your all ignoring the point of a haiku. You think...   Jun 7 2005, 10:09 PM
Konradude   eg. Doomed one spoils the fun i am quite anno...   Jun 7 2005, 10:24 PM
Dantrag   eg. Doomed one spoils the fun i am quite anno...   Jun 7 2005, 11:30 PM
KhabaLox   Your all ignoring the point of a haiku. You think...   Jun 7 2005, 11:32 PM
DoomedOne   Red your signature was correct, and I understa...   Jun 8 2005, 02:02 AM
Red   Which part of my signature? The first one? The pes...   Jun 8 2005, 01:12 PM
DoomedOne   All three.   Jun 8 2005, 10:58 PM
KhabaLox   Writing a haiku with no purpose is like throwing l...   Jun 8 2005, 11:56 PM
Red   Perfection is key, especially in haiku. Remember...   Jun 9 2005, 01:09 AM
Dantrag   lol. this thread is cool. I enjoy reaading poems. ...   Jun 9 2005, 01:19 AM
ThePerson98   http://www.finalemusic.com/notepad/ Finale notep...   Mar 4 2006, 05:28 AM
DoomedOne   Writing a haiku with no purpose is like throwing l...   Jun 9 2005, 01:53 AM
Red   Like I said before, there were Bhudist monks who w...   Jun 9 2005, 12:31 PM
Chumbaniya   Haikus are too short They contain only three line...   Jun 9 2005, 04:43 PM
KhabaLox   Yeah you're right you don't get it. Poetry is an ...   Jun 10 2005, 04:37 PM
ShogunSniper   a dark past shrouded eyes unclouded by hatred ma...   Jun 11 2005, 02:22 AM
gamer10   a dark past shrouded eyes unclouded by hatred ma...   Jun 11 2005, 02:33 AM
Chumbaniya   Here's a haiku some of the admins could use: Te...   Jun 11 2005, 12:00 PM
Sinder Velvin   Here's a haiku some of the admins could use: Te...   Jun 11 2005, 12:17 PM
Andric   Deodorant is really really smelly and it also sm...   Jun 11 2005, 04:21 PM
Konradude   I like lammas so they are funny and hairy and th...   Jun 11 2005, 04:36 PM
Red   Hey, I think I too shall make a random Haiku! A...   Jun 11 2005, 04:42 PM
Konradude   why are they slippy the ultimate bananas just b...   Jun 11 2005, 04:45 PM
Andric   I like lammas so they are funny and hairy and th...   Jun 11 2005, 11:33 PM
FafsaTheElf   This is extremely funny. Anyone here play KoL? wel...   Mar 4 2006, 12:51 AM
Pieinsky   Haiku Maple leaf falls, soft Wind pushes’ leaf dr...   Mar 14 2006, 07:33 PM


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