[quote=Zelda_Zealot][quote=LoneWolf]Great story, but it's carved, not craved lol

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Eh? What does that mean? MerGirl, do you think I would just end it there?
Nah I am going to go a few more chapters. I might not have one to night though, I was busy all day and night. If you do see one then thank God, not me.

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What LoneWolfie was talking about:
"Umbra was
craved into its handle;" and "I even
craved his name into the handle." It's supposed to be
'carved', not 'craved'.
Anyway, thank goodness you're not ending the story! I felt sorry for mister Vampy (and Mister Sad Orc, too!)...

I don't like sad/bitter endings...