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jonajosa
post May 4 2005, 02:41 AM
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Some of you may have read my first two chapter in this little adventure and enjoyed it. Well i've got alittle twist for yall. Let me introduce to you another charcter that is very important to this story. Her name is Johannes.


Chapter 3

[size=18]Johannes's Story

Here we come to a part in this adventure when another character’s plot begins to unfold. This character’s name is Johannes. She is a young female nord who grew up in the new settlement of Dagon Fel. So far her life has been completely unscathed by the war that was going on right outside her small village. However, as we all know nobody can escape war when it is already at your own doorstep. Let us begin Johannes’s story.


“Father.” Johannes asked when she saw her family rushing past them in the streets of Dagon Fel.

“Father!” He turned to look to see who was calling. When he saw Johannes his face lit up and he hurried towards her.

“Hurry daughter. A army is marching this way and I fear they have death and destruction on their minds.”

“What army? Who would want to attack our village?”

All I know is I saw a large group of soldiers coming this way and that I need to get my family out of here before the reach us.” He said in a very urgent tone.

I stared at him in disbelief but his face should too much worry and strain for him to be lying. “Ok. I must get home to gather my stuff.” I started to walk off but he grabbed my arm.

“No there isn’t enough time for that. They will be upon us at any moment we must hurry.”

I nodded and began to follow him through the village. Several people stopped to watch us in our hurry to leave but nobody looked too suspicious of us. I wondered why my father was not telling the others about this approaching army. Thy must know about them. My father would not condemn them all… would he?
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post Jun 18 2005, 09:09 PM
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Beautifully written, touching, oh and i liked the scene when Johannis had to choose armor for herself, just like a woman trying on different robes....it mede me really smile, I sort of saw myself in the situation


Really great Jona......


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jonajosa   An Ashlanders Tale Chapter 3   May 4 2005, 02:41 AM
Soulseeker3.0   hmmm interesting good job with keeping it alive. :...   May 4 2005, 02:48 AM
jonajosa   Tears began to form in the corners of my eyes as I...   May 4 2005, 03:01 AM
Soulseeker3.0   crud that sucks... good job Jonajosa   May 4 2005, 03:07 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Yupp! Good job JonaJosa keep it up.. :goodjob:   May 4 2005, 03:06 PM
minque   Johannes is a male name.......but if you remov...   May 4 2005, 06:40 PM
jonajosa   Yes johannes is a male name but i like to prnouce ...   May 4 2005, 08:40 PM
minque   ok....then it´s even more interesting.....so keep ...   May 4 2005, 09:13 PM
Dantrag   I love this story. Glad you didn;t give it up.   May 5 2005, 10:30 PM
jonajosa   I got a long one this time. “There is no tim...   May 6 2005, 02:39 AM
minque   Holy crap Jona!......What an awful fate for the fo...   May 6 2005, 02:03 PM
Soulseeker3.0   dang that must suck like Minque said   May 6 2005, 09:29 PM
jonajosa   I started to move towards the cave but the sight o...   May 7 2005, 12:11 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Nice! Great work JonaJosa :goodjob: Now who can th...   May 7 2005, 08:42 AM
minque   Thank you JJ for posting that soon again.....Hmm i...   May 7 2005, 11:15 AM
Soulseeker3.0   yes good and whos Nords are they, hmmm.   May 7 2005, 04:04 PM
jonajosa   Small part to finish this scene. Then we can get o...   May 13 2005, 11:09 PM
Soulseeker3.0   good job Jona. i wonder what will happen to Johann...   May 13 2005, 11:29 PM
minque   Great! An addition about Joannes, I like that you ...   May 14 2005, 03:30 PM
jonajosa   It was sometime before I had the blindfold taken o...   May 15 2005, 04:51 AM
jonajosa   Intermission   May 15 2005, 06:50 AM
minque   Ah great....more about Johannes the sweetheart, an...   May 15 2005, 02:30 PM
Soulseeker3.0   great job Jona!   May 15 2005, 05:14 PM
minque   Ok so I post in your story again...you know why? w...   May 18 2005, 09:28 PM
jonajosa   I was not going to be sad. I was joking. DO not po...   May 18 2005, 09:45 PM
burntsierra   Pity? No, not pity. I admire the story, your willi...   May 21 2005, 11:10 AM
Ryden294   Great story here jona. Easy to read, of course, an...   May 21 2005, 11:58 PM
minque   Great story here jona. Easy to read, of course, an...   May 22 2005, 12:05 AM
jonajosa   What do i do to show that i havn't been listening?...   May 22 2005, 02:41 AM
jonajosa   “Take to the lines! Bowmen, at ready! Pikemen, for...   May 29 2005, 08:34 PM
minque   Thank you for updating this.....i was very happy t...   May 29 2005, 08:45 PM
jonajosa   “Run my lady!” My new escort shouted as we ran thr...   May 30 2005, 07:58 AM
minque   whew.....that was a close one.....Imagine the Nord...   May 30 2005, 08:40 AM
burntsierra   I'm going to say it here as well. Brilliant. You'v...   May 30 2005, 11:09 AM
burntsierra   Aargh, how on earth did I double post? sorry. Oh, ...   May 30 2005, 11:09 AM
Dantrag   I catch up on this soon, even though I haven't rea...   May 30 2005, 04:09 PM
jonajosa   “We must evacuate the city general! The nord army ...   May 31 2005, 06:54 AM
treydog   An excellent action/adventure story. Good fight s...   May 31 2005, 01:33 PM
Soulseeker3.0   yay finnaly read those last parts, great job Jona!...   May 31 2005, 10:45 PM
minque   I usually agree with treydog in writing-matters......   May 31 2005, 11:29 PM
jonajosa   She has never been fond of the nords since the tim...   Jun 1 2005, 04:29 AM
minque   Ok..then I missed something here, i just read the ...   Jun 1 2005, 01:37 PM
jonajosa   Re: An Ashlanders Tale Chapter 3   Jun 1 2005, 09:37 PM
minque   But Jona!!! I did.....I said she was a nord then s...   Jun 1 2005, 09:42 PM
MerGirl   So, wait, she is a Nord, right? Just not raised wi...   Jun 1 2005, 09:44 PM
jonajosa   There are people you hate the way their own race a...   Jun 1 2005, 09:46 PM
minque   Woaahhh.....erhhmm..sorry usually don´t scream...e...   Jun 1 2005, 09:52 PM
MerGirl   Oh, okay. Kind of like a Dunmer raised in Cyrodiil...   Jun 1 2005, 09:54 PM
jonajosa   I was not screaming Minque. I was imatateing the p...   Jun 1 2005, 09:59 PM
minque   Jona! I screamed..not you.... ;) i was just hopin...   Jun 1 2005, 10:01 PM
jonajosa   Wells its only been two days since my last update....   Jun 1 2005, 10:06 PM
minque   oh don´t get me wrong....i don´t force you i just ...   Jun 1 2005, 10:15 PM
jonajosa   I looked at Galos and saw his hand caressing the h...   Jun 3 2005, 05:13 PM
jonajosa   “Faster! Faster!” A young sub commander shouted at...   Jun 6 2005, 06:08 AM
minque   Magnificent battle-scenes! And the multiple approa...   Jun 6 2005, 08:41 PM
treydog   An exciting battle taking place, with tactical sur...   Jun 7 2005, 04:05 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Nice Jona... Like the battle-scene, very very good...   Jun 7 2005, 04:37 PM
burntsierra   Nice Jona... Like the battle-scene, very very good...   Jun 7 2005, 09:17 PM
jonajosa   “Sire, all forces are advancing upon the city. The...   Jun 18 2005, 08:13 PM
Dantrag   no update :( I did catch up though... :)   Jun 25 2005, 10:30 PM
jonajosa   Let me do this then so people can see that my last...   Jun 26 2005, 10:24 PM
Dantrag   I give you a.....you. :goodjob: great as e...   Jun 27 2005, 12:49 AM
minque   There can be nothing but very good writing coming ...   Jun 27 2005, 08:07 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Nice update Jona... Keep it coming! :goodjob:   Jun 27 2005, 10:09 AM
treydog   Beautiful! And now Johannes has joined the battle...   Jun 27 2005, 02:20 PM
jonajosa   This was supposed to go in the last post but I mis...   Jun 28 2005, 12:15 AM
Dantrag   thanks for remembering :goodjob: edit: now tha...   Jun 28 2005, 12:16 AM
jonajosa   Marit stood the ridge that overlooked the valley t...   Jun 30 2005, 10:55 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Oooh... More more!!! :goodjob:   Jul 1 2005, 09:43 AM
jonajosa   “Sir! The nords have broken through the valley def...   Jul 2 2005, 04:15 AM
Fuzzy Knight   ... :drool:   Jul 2 2005, 11:01 AM
minque   I just got this update from jonajosa so enjoy...   Sep 19 2005, 10:46 PM
Dantrag   Jona! Sweet update. I'll give you a...umm....   Sep 19 2005, 10:55 PM
Soulseeker3.0   I'm sure its great but havn't the time to ...   Sep 20 2005, 12:00 AM


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