Elestar Options

[Eldar]

Under the dark skies Elestar held his sword against his chest, his thoughts whiting his blade, he saw them all standing there, like the shadow of a star on a demons heart, with their twisted minds and broken souls. The black armours with red eyes coming toward him, he did not tremble for he was a man with nothing left.



** My english is not very good so perhaps this will make no sense.

[Eldar]

First Part:

Elestar was very young that day, the clouded sky and heavy rain was the perfect painting for what was next to come, he was leaving the mages guild tower very late as usual, after hours of reading and writing he was exhausted, he had never wanted to became a wizard, he preferred a sword an a shield instead, but his fathers will was greater than his, the imperial city streets were desolated, the rain and wind must have scared the nobles he thought, he has never liked them even as he was one himself, covering his head with the hood of his robe Elestar ran toward his manor in the richest district of the imperial city.


Midway to the manor the rain got stronger; the sky became a battle of grey spells, Elestar´s robe winged violently in the wind, as a demon flying towards its prey, the clouds seemed to enrage as he approached to his house, a deafening sound made him stop, looking up to one of the manors balconies he saw a dark figure fall in a flaming death, he ran fast towards the scorched corpse, he had never saw one before but he learned in the guild about the denizens of oblivion, he was before a clannfear, he had no idea of what was happening running to the entrance he took a dagger from his belt, before him was a incredible sight, two dremora lords fighting against a Breton.


The Breton screamed as a ball of fire appeared in his hand, he pronounced some words and bolts of lighting surrounded the ball, he then sent the ball flying towards one of the dremoras hitting it on the chest making him to fall on his knees, as Elestar was closing to help the Breton the remaining dremora cut the mans arm with his sword, the Breton brought to his knees by the pain tried to scream but was silenced by the dremora with one final slash to his neck.

Elestar became blind in anger and charged towards the dremora, using the telekinesis he learned at the guild he pulled the sword from the dead dremoras hand and grabbed it, he swing the sword against the dremora but it was repelled by the demons blade, coating his blade in fire elestar made another attack, this time he broke trough the dremoras defence piercing his chest, Elestar could sense his anger fuelling him, driving him mad, he stabbed the dark corpse several times before running toward the Bretons body, the head an arms were severed, he was obviously death, across the hall in the library another body was laying in the floor, it was an altmer women, a beautiful one, his body was intact, but still lifeless………

Elestar lost both his father and mother that day, he knew that the dremoras were sent by a rival of his father but he had no idea of who nor why, but he knew that only revenge will appease his soul.

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So what do you think ? is it a good start ? any suggestions ?
this is supposed to happen before the gates of oblivion have opened, so the dremoras were summoned by someone, and thats why they were only two. what i wrote earlier is supposed to happen after the gates open, and has little to do with the death of elestars parents.