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post Jun 20 2005, 05:45 AM
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Well I bot bored and started a new FF (And will work on it if people like it), dont worry though I will still work on my other, I am just too lazy to get the info I need *Hint hint*. So on with what I have so far!

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My name is Clangor, I am a Bosmer. Though I am not your run of the mill Bosmer, no I am quite different. For one thing I am very adept with medium armors, and I love my Long Swords. Maybe you would like to here more about me. Well I have shocking white hair, which I hear matches my eyes, or so the girls say. Many women say I am handsome, I don’t know for sure, it could just be flattery.

I grew up in my native land of Valenwood; I spent all my free time outside, usually in the trees. Like most of my race I am shorter then most others, but I am actually tall for a Bosmer, just shorter then an Imperial. Unlike most of my race I am also more suited to fighting close up, then the other Bosmer. Don’t get me wrong, I am very good with a bow, in fact I won multiple Archery contests in my youth.

Another thing that sets me apart from the other Bosmer it that fact that I have absolutely no since of direction. I would get lost many times a day in my youth, until I memorized the woods. I as so have far greater hearing then normal, the gods way of balancing me out? Who knows.

I sit here at my desk in my manor, which is in Mournhold. I only use this manor as a resting place when on business trips at the city.
I prefer my small house in the woods of Cyrodill, though not as great as Valenwood, it is the best I can have. You might wonder why someone of my standards would want to live in a forest, well I never really got used to the exile. I still here that voice in my dreams…

“Clangor of Valenwood. You are hereby sentenced to one year of manual labor in the Ebony mines of Morrowind, with the charges of, the smuggling of illegal narcotics, assaulting an officer of the Imperial army, resisting arrest, and disturbing the peace.”

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Well if anyone likes it I will do more work on it, so please comment. (You can acually make this Bosmer with a few mods.)

P.S. If anyone has a good name then please tell me.


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post Jun 22 2005, 07:49 PM
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[quote=Dantrag][quote=treydog] we have all dealt with that chatty co-worker, salesperson, religious nut, etc. who just...won't....leave.[/quote]

Like those Jehovah's Witness that always come to your house when you're eating lunch...[/quote] Thats the idea. Anyway heres the next chapter.

The Journey of Clangor

Chapter Two: Reflection


As I walked down the road following the signs, I began to wonder where to go. I could just wander; let the wind take me to where ever it blows. Or I could find a place and settle down. The second choice sounded the worst to me; I am not one to stay still for long. I pondered my choices all day, until I came across a small pond just off the road.

I had stopped there to have a drink before continuing on, but something caught my eye as I drank. As I dropped my hand into the water I saw my reflection in the corner of my eye. I looked over and saw what appeared to be a hideous face in place of mine. I shifted my head ever so slightly and the face turned into the most beautiful person I ever laid my eyes on. I stayed at that pond for the rest of the day thinking about what I saw. I knew it was a sign of sorts, though I never knew what it went for years.

The next day I continued down that road, coming across a town. The town was very small, twelve maybe fourteen houses. Of course it stank to high heaven; you could almost see the birds falling from the sky. I wandered around the town, with my nose pinched shut, looking for anything of interest, well it stank did I mention that? Other then that it did not seem to have anything useful to me; that was before I found the port. I approached the man who seemed to be in charge of the largest ship, though it was still rather small, and tried to get a ride somewhere.

“Can you take me anywhere?” I asked the man, staying in this dump did not appeal to my tastes.

“For the right price.” He said looking me over with a smile. Oh great, now I get to go on a boat with some freaky guy, my life just gets better and better.

“How much of a price?” Please be low, please be low.

“Well how much do you have?” Well let’s see, carry the one, fifty six. Yeah I will definitely need more.

“Thirty two gold, is that enough?” Hey it might work.

“Lucky you, that’s just how much it costs!” Yeah right.

“Alright, where can you take me?” Let me guess, nowhere?

“Well I am only going to Vvardenfell right now, so you will have to wait if you want to go somewhere else.” Yeah I bet.

“That will work. When are you leaving?” In a year if you don’t shut up.

“Sunrise tomorrow.” Great now I have to rent a room.

“Okay, I will be back then.” If I come back.

I walked away to find a place to rent. Not much in this port “town”. At least not enough to warrant a tavern or the like. So I started wandering again, thankfully I found a family had an extra bed to spare, for travelers with gold. I slept outside of a jail cell for the first time in a year, and it felt great. I had a dream that night, it was the same dream I had every night for years. But right now is not the time, maybe when I am dead I will tell you the dreams I have, yeah that works.

The next day at sunrise I met the ship captain twelve gold lighter, I would have just swam to Vvardenfell, but I might get eaten by something. I don’t know about you, but being eaten by a sea monster is not that high on my “Things to do” list, in fact it was close to the bottom, right above “Die a slow painful death by suffocation” and right below “Fall off a cliff”. Thus I went to see the second most annoying person I ever met.

“Ah good you’re here, take her away!” Oh just shut up already.

I spent the next two days on that ship. I won’t describe them here; I don’t think I could even if I wanted to. It was just that horrible; and annoying. We reached Vvardenfell in the dead of night, in a place called Hla Od. It was a small dirty stinking hole in the ground, far worse then that last town. Here you could see the birds fall from the sky, I need to remember to ask the full destination next time.

After disembarking I searched for another place to stay, this time unsuccessfully. I am used to sleeping on the ground now, but that first time in Vvardenfell was a nightmare. I wandered out of the town looking for a place both comfortable and out of site of the guards, if they caught me sleeping in town I would have to pay a fine, which I could not do so back to the mines with me. Needless to say I did not want to go back to mining.

I woke the next day and decided it would be best to follow the signs again, that always leads to fame and riches for me. By the way, I was being sarcastic. Following the signs almost worked that time, well, I came to a place slightly better then Hla Od. I had found a town called Seyda Neen, though it was not much of an improvement even in name.

Seyda Neen was the kind of town people only stayed in if they have no choice; thankfully I was able to move on soon after finding it.

I could do more but I think this is enough, and I am to lazy.


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Zelda_Zealot   No name FF   Jun 20 2005, 05:45 AM
Zelda_Zealot   Well I got a name... not to great though. Oh and h...   Jun 20 2005, 08:26 AM
minque   I like it, I like your slightly humouristic writin...   Jun 20 2005, 09:09 AM
Dantrag   Minor grammatical errors, but other than that, gre...   Jun 20 2005, 02:42 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Well spell check cant pick op everything, and some...   Jun 20 2005, 04:05 PM
Dantrag   Well spell check cant pick op everything, and some...   Jun 20 2005, 04:11 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Dont worry, I understand. Thanks for the CC though...   Jun 20 2005, 04:33 PM
gamer10   Yay, someone else who writes first person. :go...   Jun 20 2005, 04:34 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Yum. You could call my other FF first person, in s...   Jun 20 2005, 04:35 PM
Konradude   http://www-users.cs.york.ac.uk/~susan/sf/tv/clange...   Jun 20 2005, 06:13 PM
Zelda_Zealot   :shocked: What is that from!?   Jun 20 2005, 06:14 PM
gamer10   OULSHGDIFL Well, as long as were being silly. ...   Jun 21 2005, 06:01 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Who said anything about being silly?   Jun 21 2005, 06:05 PM
gamer10   http://www-users.cs.york.ac.uk/~susan/sf/tv/clange...   Jun 21 2005, 06:06 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Wonder what? FYI I did not get the name from that.   Jun 21 2005, 06:07 PM
gamer10   Wonder what? FYI I did not get the name from that....   Jun 21 2005, 06:08 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Oh. Will I guess it is, I cant really see it that ...   Jun 21 2005, 06:09 PM
Mazuk   Nice story. Please continue.   Jun 21 2005, 09:27 PM
treydog   First person is my favorite style- it just seems m...   Jun 22 2005, 03:42 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Yeah! My life is complete. :) I am working on th...   Jun 22 2005, 06:49 PM
Dantrag   we have all dealt with that chatty co-worker, sal...   Jun 22 2005, 07:06 PM
MerGirl   *giggles* I like this Bosmer very much! :D He's ...   Jun 22 2005, 07:25 PM
Konradude   Mergirl, please give meee some costructive critis...   Jun 22 2005, 07:26 PM
Konradude   Why is it 'of course' that it stank?   Jun 22 2005, 07:59 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Huh? It says "Of course it stank to high heaven", ...   Jun 22 2005, 08:42 PM
Konradude   Why is it an obviouse fact that it stunk? Is it in...   Jun 22 2005, 08:46 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Hla Od is in the bitter coast, so it must stink. I...   Jun 22 2005, 08:52 PM
treydog   A good addition. We get to see more of Clangor's ...   Jun 23 2005, 04:02 PM
Zelda_Zealot   That sounds good, though if anything is in a swamp...   Jun 23 2005, 06:57 PM
Zelda_Zealot   After god knows how long I finally got the next ch...   Jul 10 2005, 05:10 AM
treydog   Clangor continues to grow on me. Rather like a sk...   Jul 11 2005, 01:27 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Yey! You just compleat my life treydog! Th...   Jul 11 2005, 03:49 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Sorry for the double post but this is better then ...   Jul 15 2005, 10:26 PM
minque   Congrats then Zelda! And we are here waiting ...   Jul 16 2005, 04:32 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Well I am back, thanks to minque for the whachamac...   Jul 24 2005, 09:21 PM
gamer10   Yay, more stories. :D   Jul 24 2005, 09:28 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Nice Zelda.. your story is very nice, at least to ...   Jul 24 2005, 09:41 PM
MerGirl   Oh, my goodness! :blink: How did I miss this...   Jul 24 2005, 11:01 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Wow... erm... like my character a little? Or are...   Jul 25 2005, 07:05 AM
Zelda_Zealot   Sorry for being gone so long, my internet desided ...   Aug 2 2005, 05:27 AM
Zelda_Zealot   Wow, I am really lazy... Well here is a new chapte...   Aug 28 2005, 05:31 AM
Lucidarius   Wonderful story. I smiled and laughed several time...   Aug 28 2005, 10:51 PM
treydog   So happy to see this updated. I really enjoy Clan...   Aug 29 2005, 02:09 PM
Zelda_Zealot   Sorry about leaving this ff here, I kinda got into...   Oct 24 2005, 06:04 AM


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