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The Tale of Jonacin |
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Wolfie |
Jun 22 2005, 05:24 PM
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Joined: 14-March 05
From: Dublin, Ireland

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Ok, so this is the story of my RP character, Jonacin
The Tale of Jonacin
Jonacin was born in Sentinel, Hammerfell. His father was a Sword Singer of above average power, and his mother was the daughter of a wealthy merchant. He was born after they had been married for several years, and was their first son. Even when in the cradle, his parents knew he would grow to be a powerful Ansei, for he would frequently form a Shehai as he played. The sword was always the same, a long katana with stylized wreaths of flame curling up the blade. He was always a very serious child, even as a baby he rarely laughed or cried. At the age of three, instead of playing with other children, he spent a lot of his time reading The Book of Circles, encouraged by his parents to learn all he could from it. As time passed, his skills became more pronounced, and he frequently formed a true Shehai. He entered the local Hall of the Virtues of War at the early age of 7, and quickly rose to the top of his class, even though all of his fellow students were several years older than him.
At the age of 12, he first formed a true Shehai in battle conditions. He was in a sparring contest with one of his classmates, and his blade snapped. Rather than stop the fight to get a new one, he instinctively concentrated and formed the Shehai. Within seconds after doing so, the fight was over, his opponents blade cut in half and the tip of the Shehai resting against his jugular. The instructors were all amazed at this feat, as were his fellow students. He was judged worthy to claim the rank of Master Ansei, a Sword Saint, despite his young age.
An Ansei is a person who can call up a Shehai in any form
A Shehai is an indestructable spirit sword that can cut through pretty much anything
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 D�anaim smaoineamh, d� bhr� sin, t�im ann - Descartes Only the dead have seen the end of war ~ Plato Fairy tales do not tell children the dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children the dragons can be killed. - G.K. Chesterton EnsamVarg
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Wolfie |
Jun 24 2005, 12:20 AM
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Joined: 14-March 05
From: Dublin, Ireland

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ok, time for an update
Enjoy
Jonacin had gained the rank of Master Ansei, but he stayed in The Hall of the Virtues of War to continue his training and improve his technique. Two years after he was elevated to Master Ansei, he was in another sparring contest. His opponent was very skilled, and the contest was close, a constant exchange of thrusts, slashes, parries and ripostes. Jonacin’s blade lanced towards his opponents chest, only to have it parried by his opponent, who sent a riposte ripping towards his throat. Jonacin leapt back, spinning as he did so, sweeping his sword round in a wide arc. He was rewarded for this dangerous maneuver by his blade thudding home against his opponent’s side, the unexpected move breaking through his guard. Sweating heavily, both combatants raised their blades in salute and they retired to other activities.
This was Jonacin’s third bout of the day, and he was beginning to tire, He had defeated all his opponents, but the last bout had been very close, and he had nearly lost several times. An instructor crossed the floor, coming to a stop in front of where Jonacin sat. He told him to prepare himself, as his next bout was to be a duel to the death. A foolish young Master Ansei had challenged Jonacin, determined to crush the young upstart before he got any further. Enraged, Jonacin stood and strode swiftly to the specially prepared dueling arena. He reached for a sword on a nearby rack, but the instructor grabbed his wrist, telling him that this duel was to be fought with Shehai only.
Jonacin stepped into the circle of sand that denoted the arena. He called up his sword and ran through a few of the forms, loosening his muscles and calming his mind. He looked across to the other side of the ring and saw his opponent, a man called Davik. Jonacin had never liked the young man, who was several years older than himself. Davik was constantly putting others down, scorning those that could not form the true Shehai. He was arrogant, but he remained in the Hall because his prowess was undeniable.
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 D�anaim smaoineamh, d� bhr� sin, t�im ann - Descartes Only the dead have seen the end of war ~ Plato Fairy tales do not tell children the dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children the dragons can be killed. - G.K. Chesterton EnsamVarg
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Wolfie The Tale of Jonacin Jun 22 2005, 05:24 PM gamer10 Nice, detailed childhood.
:goodjob:
But I ... Jun 22 2005, 05:29 PM Wolfie I'll be posting more every now and then Jun 22 2005, 05:29 PM Dantrag cool. was that just a breif history, or are you go... Jun 22 2005, 05:29 PM Wolfie I'm going to continue, hell i've only gotten to ag... Jun 22 2005, 05:31 PM minque Yay! Very good, Wolfie, I like it and I need updat... Jun 22 2005, 05:35 PM MerGirl Wow! I love Jonacin, because he's always been a si... Jun 22 2005, 07:43 PM Wolfie I'm gonna continue on with his life up til the tim... Jun 23 2005, 12:16 AM Fuzzy Knight Talk about talented young boy... Nice Wolfie.. :go... Jun 23 2005, 09:39 AM treydog Good background for the character- I will look for... Jun 23 2005, 04:08 PM Wolfie Cool, the great Treydog likes my story :D Jun 23 2005, 07:14 PM Fuzzy Knight Yeah... its nice seeing Treydog giving some feedba... Jun 23 2005, 07:15 PM Wolfie I'm gonna try and write some more later tonight, a... Jun 23 2005, 07:17 PM jonajosa Yup. I need more to read before I decide to give y... Jun 23 2005, 11:36 PM Mazuk Nice update. I likes and want more. Jun 24 2005, 12:35 AM MerGirl *claps* An update, yay! :D
Great writing, as... Jun 24 2005, 01:03 AM Wolfie a riposte is a counter-attack you make right after... Jun 24 2005, 01:05 AM MerGirl a riposte is a counter-attack you make right after... Jun 24 2005, 01:15 AM Wolfie i think it's when you parry (block) with a sword. ... Jun 24 2005, 01:20 AM MerGirl i think it's when you parry (block) with a sword. ... Jun 24 2005, 01:23 AM ShogunSniper very cool, simple, but cool, try adding some more ... Jun 24 2005, 01:23 AM jonajosa Ok... here you go. That was pretty good. Keep it u... Jun 24 2005, 04:00 AM Red i think it's when you parry (block) with a sword. ... Jun 24 2005, 04:23 AM Fuzzy Knight Great writing LoneWolf.. :goodjob: Think with your... Jun 24 2005, 09:49 AM treydog Most excellent fight scenes. Hope we begin to get... Jun 24 2005, 02:07 PM minque Most excellent fight scenes. Hope we begin to get... Jun 24 2005, 05:07 PM Wolfie Cool, the two best writers on the forums like my w... Jun 24 2005, 07:16 PM Wolfie Update time :D
Hope you like this one
Jonacin ... Jun 24 2005, 10:34 PM Chumbaniya The description of the fighting in your writing is... Jun 24 2005, 10:38 PM Fuzzy Knight Holy compassion LoneWolf...! Your fighting scenes ... Jun 24 2005, 10:43 PM Wolfie Cool, i got compared to a professional writer :D Jun 24 2005, 10:45 PM Dantrag Awesome battle scene, and truly does match Salvato... Jun 24 2005, 10:50 PM Wolfie I've never read any books by Salvatore....... Jun 24 2005, 10:51 PM gamer10 I haven't either but my brother goes crazy over hi... Jun 24 2005, 10:52 PM minque I agree with all posts above, now you are a very ... Jun 25 2005, 12:28 AM MerGirl Oh, so good! *claps* Oh, you really write good fig... Jun 25 2005, 05:04 PM Wolfie You know the way you spin around? span is the past... Jun 25 2005, 07:34 PM Dantrag that would be err....spun. Jun 25 2005, 07:36 PM Wolfie depends on the context you use it in. Span is righ... Jun 25 2005, 07:37 PM Rane that would be err....spun.
Span works as well.
... Jun 25 2005, 07:38 PM Wolfie Time for another update. This one is different tha... Jun 26 2005, 05:24 PM MerGirl Oh, poor baby! *pats Jonacin on the head* That's s... Jun 26 2005, 05:28 PM Wolfie The emotional type thing. I usually just write fig... Jun 26 2005, 05:28 PM Fuzzy Knight The emotional type thing. I usually just write fig... Jun 26 2005, 05:34 PM jonajosa Blood, guts and glory. The only ways to write a st... Jun 26 2005, 10:21 PM Wolfie eccentric? what's so eccentric about it? Jun 26 2005, 10:35 PM jonajosa The way the story flows. To me its (in simpler ter... Jun 26 2005, 10:42 PM Wolfie oh right. I thought you meant the weird kind of ec... Jun 26 2005, 10:44 PM minque Great Wolfie! So nice to see different styles from... Jun 27 2005, 08:03 AM treydog Two excellent additions. As always, the duel scen... Jun 27 2005, 04:08 PM Wolfie Here's an update at long last
It was a week sin... Jul 6 2005, 12:09 AM minque Nice Wolfie! A very good installment, well balance... Jul 6 2005, 12:29 AM Dantrag Short n' sweet!
:goodjob: Jul 6 2005, 12:32 AM Fuzzy Knight Short n' sweet!
:goodjob:
Can only agree..! :... Jul 6 2005, 10:19 AM treydog Good description of the limitations of heavier wea... Jul 6 2005, 03:15 PM Wolfie Update Time :D
Jonacin and his opponent now circl... Jul 15 2005, 11:00 AM minque Good Job Wolfie! Very vivid description of the... Jul 15 2005, 11:16 AM Dantrag Cool scene. :viking: Jul 15 2005, 02:24 PM Wolfie No one seems to have noticed i updated, so maybe n... Jul 21 2005, 02:36 AM Fuzzy Knight Nice written combat scene as always Wolf.. Also ni... Jul 21 2005, 12:20 PM Wolfie This isn't an update, i just want to inform an... Oct 22 2005, 07:31 PM Mazuk Well I had to read through a few pages but wow.. G... Oct 22 2005, 09:28 PM Fuzzy Knight Well well LoneWolf... I have also had this that I ... Oct 23 2005, 11:38 AM mplantinga Just managed to find this one (how could I have mi... Oct 23 2005, 07:13 PM Wolfie In case anyone is interested, the first part of ch... Feb 25 2006, 06:49 PM minque
YAYYYYY Wolfie! I do look forward to read mor... Feb 25 2006, 06:59 PM mplantinga I will also be looking forward to the next chapter... Mar 1 2006, 10:28 PM Tellie Loved the first chapter...please keep it coming in... Mar 6 2006, 06:45 PM Taillus Woohoo I can't wait for chapter 2. I really en... Mar 7 2006, 02:32 PM Wolfie
You mean this one? Mar 7 2006, 05:15 PM
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