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Wolfie The Tale of Jonacin Jun 22 2005, 05:24 PM gamer10 Nice, detailed childhood.
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But I ... Jun 22 2005, 05:29 PM Wolfie I'll be posting more every now and then Jun 22 2005, 05:29 PM Dantrag cool. was that just a breif history, or are you go... Jun 22 2005, 05:29 PM Wolfie I'm going to continue, hell i've only gotten to ag... Jun 22 2005, 05:31 PM minque Yay! Very good, Wolfie, I like it and I need updat... Jun 22 2005, 05:35 PM MerGirl Wow! I love Jonacin, because he's always been a si... Jun 22 2005, 07:43 PM Wolfie I'm gonna continue on with his life up til the tim... Jun 23 2005, 12:16 AM Fuzzy Knight Talk about talented young boy... Nice Wolfie.. :go... Jun 23 2005, 09:39 AM treydog Good background for the character- I will look for... Jun 23 2005, 04:08 PM Wolfie Cool, the great Treydog likes my story :D Jun 23 2005, 07:14 PM Fuzzy Knight Yeah... its nice seeing Treydog giving some feedba... Jun 23 2005, 07:15 PM Wolfie I'm gonna try and write some more later tonight, a... Jun 23 2005, 07:17 PM jonajosa Yup. I need more to read before I decide to give y... Jun 23 2005, 11:36 PM Wolfie ok, time for an update :D
Enjoy
Jonacin had ga... Jun 24 2005, 12:20 AM Mazuk Nice update. I likes and want more. Jun 24 2005, 12:35 AM MerGirl *claps* An update, yay! :D
Great writing, as... Jun 24 2005, 01:03 AM Wolfie a riposte is a counter-attack you make right after... Jun 24 2005, 01:05 AM MerGirl a riposte is a counter-attack you make right after... Jun 24 2005, 01:15 AM Wolfie i think it's when you parry (block) with a sword. ... Jun 24 2005, 01:20 AM MerGirl i think it's when you parry (block) with a sword. ... Jun 24 2005, 01:23 AM ShogunSniper very cool, simple, but cool, try adding some more ... Jun 24 2005, 01:23 AM jonajosa Ok... here you go. That was pretty good. Keep it u... Jun 24 2005, 04:00 AM Red i think it's when you parry (block) with a sword. ... Jun 24 2005, 04:23 AM Fuzzy Knight Great writing LoneWolf.. :goodjob: Think with your... Jun 24 2005, 09:49 AM treydog Most excellent fight scenes. Hope we begin to get... Jun 24 2005, 02:07 PM minque Most excellent fight scenes. Hope we begin to get... Jun 24 2005, 05:07 PM Wolfie Update time :D
Hope you like this one
Jonacin ... Jun 24 2005, 10:34 PM Chumbaniya The description of the fighting in your writing is... Jun 24 2005, 10:38 PM Fuzzy Knight Holy compassion LoneWolf...! Your fighting scenes ... Jun 24 2005, 10:43 PM Wolfie Cool, i got compared to a professional writer :D Jun 24 2005, 10:45 PM Dantrag Awesome battle scene, and truly does match Salvato... Jun 24 2005, 10:50 PM Wolfie I've never read any books by Salvatore....... Jun 24 2005, 10:51 PM gamer10 I haven't either but my brother goes crazy over hi... Jun 24 2005, 10:52 PM minque I agree with all posts above, now you are a very ... Jun 25 2005, 12:28 AM MerGirl Oh, so good! *claps* Oh, you really write good fig... Jun 25 2005, 05:04 PM Wolfie You know the way you spin around? span is the past... Jun 25 2005, 07:34 PM Dantrag that would be err....spun. Jun 25 2005, 07:36 PM Wolfie depends on the context you use it in. Span is righ... Jun 25 2005, 07:37 PM Rane that would be err....spun.
Span works as well.
... Jun 25 2005, 07:38 PM Wolfie Time for another update. This one is different tha... Jun 26 2005, 05:24 PM MerGirl Oh, poor baby! *pats Jonacin on the head* That's s... Jun 26 2005, 05:28 PM Wolfie The emotional type thing. I usually just write fig... Jun 26 2005, 05:28 PM Fuzzy Knight The emotional type thing. I usually just write fig... Jun 26 2005, 05:34 PM jonajosa Blood, guts and glory. The only ways to write a st... Jun 26 2005, 10:21 PM Wolfie eccentric? what's so eccentric about it? Jun 26 2005, 10:35 PM jonajosa The way the story flows. To me its (in simpler ter... Jun 26 2005, 10:42 PM Wolfie oh right. I thought you meant the weird kind of ec... Jun 26 2005, 10:44 PM minque Great Wolfie! So nice to see different styles from... Jun 27 2005, 08:03 AM treydog Two excellent additions. As always, the duel scen... Jun 27 2005, 04:08 PM Wolfie Here's an update at long last
It was a week sin... Jul 6 2005, 12:09 AM minque Nice Wolfie! A very good installment, well balance... Jul 6 2005, 12:29 AM Dantrag Short n' sweet!
:goodjob: Jul 6 2005, 12:32 AM Fuzzy Knight Short n' sweet!
:goodjob:
Can only agree..! :... Jul 6 2005, 10:19 AM treydog Good description of the limitations of heavier wea... Jul 6 2005, 03:15 PM Wolfie Update Time :D
Jonacin and his opponent now circl... Jul 15 2005, 11:00 AM minque Good Job Wolfie! Very vivid description of the... Jul 15 2005, 11:16 AM Dantrag Cool scene. :viking: Jul 15 2005, 02:24 PM Wolfie No one seems to have noticed i updated, so maybe n... Jul 21 2005, 02:36 AM Fuzzy Knight Nice written combat scene as always Wolf.. Also ni... Jul 21 2005, 12:20 PM Wolfie This isn't an update, i just want to inform an... Oct 22 2005, 07:31 PM Mazuk Well I had to read through a few pages but wow.. G... Oct 22 2005, 09:28 PM Fuzzy Knight Well well LoneWolf... I have also had this that I ... Oct 23 2005, 11:38 AM mplantinga Just managed to find this one (how could I have mi... Oct 23 2005, 07:13 PM Wolfie In case anyone is interested, the first part of ch... Feb 25 2006, 06:49 PM![]() minque
YAYYYYY Wolfie! I do look forward to read mor... Feb 25 2006, 06:59 PM mplantinga I will also be looking forward to the next chapter... Mar 1 2006, 10:28 PM Tellie Loved the first chapter...please keep it coming in... Mar 6 2006, 06:45 PM Taillus Woohoo I can't wait for chapter 2. I really en... Mar 7 2006, 02:32 PM Wolfie
You mean this one? Mar 7 2006, 05:15 PM
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