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Konji
post Jun 21 2005, 08:46 PM
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I thought I would give it you in bitesize pieces...as I find them easier to read.


-----------------------Konrad’s Story-----------------------
Konrad woke up, slowly opening one of his eyes. He covered his face with his hand, the light of the midday sun burning his eyes. He pushed his bed covers down, his shiny leather tunic visible now. He never really changes his clothes, but has them washed immediately. He got up, sighing and brushing his coal black hair from his eyes.

“Where is father?” Konrad called down as he descended the antique wooden stairs.

“He is already at his school opening, but I didn’t want to wake you,” his mother replied, frowning as she looked up from her lunch. Picking up a slice of bread Konrad broke free of the confinement of his house, blinking ferociously at the revealed light. He looked around, still amazed at the artistry of the buildings surrounding him. He spent many an hour gazing out of the small opening in his room, just marvelling at the wonders of the architects and builders.

He glanced at the position of the sun to confirm his thoughts. “It is late in the day…I must get there if I am to pass the trials,” Konrad mumbled to himself. He raced through the backstreets of the city, passing the many landmarks on the way, and eventually reached his father’s dream…The Blade School.


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Konji
post Jun 24 2005, 11:18 PM
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Took me a while to do this one, but I am pleased with it.

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Konrad walked cautiously over to the Elf, bringing out his blade. Sticking it deeply into the ground beside him he bowed low, keeping his head up.

“Greetings, are you ready for the fight?” he asked as politely as possible. The Mer looked down at him with contempt, his nose held aloft as he sneered.

“I am ready to fight you, for I will brush you off me like a rat. You are a mere child, and I am simply stronger.” The Altmer spoke with an authority about him, obviously the son of a snobby guard or manor owning Lord. Konrad winced at the Elf’s declaration, for it was most likely true that his muscles were less developed than the Mer’s.

Konrad released his sword from the Earth and took a step back, swinging it freely to loosen his arms. The Altmer nodded his head and readied his steel staff, the length of it greater than the tall character. They waited in silence for the call of Leontus then, at command, began the fight.

A few swordsmen who had been knocked out watched impatiently, twiddling their thumbs and punching each other on the arm. They knew neither of the fighting pair, so did not know how good they were. Konrad’s father also watched, rubbing his chin and trying to find any errors.

The Altmer made the first move, spinning around with his staff low in an attempt to sweep Konrad’s legs. Konrad jumped instinctively, then rolled to the right of the Mer and slashed across his shoulder.

The Mer cried out in pain, recoiling from the attack. A trickle of blood ran the length of his arm and snaked its way around the staff. Konrad stepped backwards calmly, not trying to keep an advantage going on in a clean sweep. The yellow ‘bully’ looked at Konrad with a look of slight fear and confusion, his eyes wide while his hand shot up to try and stop the bleeding.

Konrad leapt at him again, slashing a quick ‘K’ across the chest of his opponent. It was quickly unrecognisable with the blood dripping down but it would leave a noteworthy scar. His enemy staggered slightly backwards, a look of horror erupting on his face.

Konrad pressed on, kicking his opponent’s left leg and smacking the bright purple helmet with the butt of the sword. The Elf fell downwards, the helmet bouncing on the tough dirt unthreateningly. Konrad brought up his sword to the Mer’s neck, then drew slight blood.

“Enough!” cried Leontus, running into the arena and helping the Mer up. “You went out of control Konrad, keep your cool.” He walked off, escorting the Elf back to the gates.


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Konradude   Konrad's story   Jun 21 2005, 08:46 PM
gamer10   Wow . .short. But very well detailed :goodjob:...   Jun 21 2005, 08:48 PM
minque   good Konrad! nice so more please. I´ll give ...   Jun 21 2005, 08:52 PM
Red   Why do we call them Jonajosas?   Jun 21 2005, 08:53 PM
Konradude   The building was obviously new, the stone it was m...   Jun 21 2005, 09:09 PM
Dantrag   Why do we call them Jonajosas? because they are...   Jun 21 2005, 09:27 PM
Konradude   Thanks y'all..note the wood elf is mostly fargoth ...   Jun 21 2005, 09:31 PM
treydog   Vivid descriptions, very nice. Some confusion t...   Jun 22 2005, 03:23 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Nice Konrad...! :goodjob:   Jun 22 2005, 03:25 PM
Konradude   the Wood Elf did that as a kind of joke to Konrad,...   Jun 22 2005, 05:51 PM
Konradude   Konrad stepped out onto the oval training grounds,...   Jun 22 2005, 07:12 PM
MerGirl   Very good! *claps* :) Very detailed. I would lik...   Jun 22 2005, 08:02 PM
gamer10   Add about a thousand periods and Mergirl will be h...   Jun 22 2005, 08:03 PM
Channler   Nice, I liked that part.. for that part alone I gi...   Jun 25 2005, 12:06 AM
minque   Very good you know! Be proud of your work.....I´ll...   Jun 25 2005, 12:36 AM
Mazuk   Yeah that was pretty sweet. Good writing and keep...   Jun 25 2005, 12:46 AM
MerGirl   Good job. :goodjob: You added good details of th...   Jun 25 2005, 05:00 PM
Konradude   Finally an update. Haven't written for ages, b...   Jul 19 2005, 07:26 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Well... well.. its hard to say anything bad about ...   Jul 19 2005, 07:37 PM
MerGirl   Like Fuzzy said, it's very good! Lots of d...   Jul 19 2005, 07:43 PM
Konradude   I felt that as well. I as going to add more to tha...   Jul 19 2005, 07:45 PM
MerGirl   You tell the exact height? Not to mention, isn...   Jul 19 2005, 07:56 PM
Konradude   Ha, i totally understand you if that helps. I will...   Jul 19 2005, 08:01 PM
Kiln   I liked most of it but whoever said the fight scen...   Jul 19 2005, 08:24 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Jepp.. Agree with Kiln, your story is very good a...   Jul 19 2005, 08:26 PM
Konradude   Another update for you....shock horror in this one...   Jul 19 2005, 09:12 PM
minque   ah..finally caught up on this story....very good K...   Jul 20 2005, 08:47 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Agree with Minque.. :D Very good written indeed..   Jul 20 2005, 10:06 AM
Kell-Reevor   I just read your story, very nice :D Hehe, its b...   Jul 20 2005, 03:14 PM
Konradude   A bit of comic relief before my next update. ---...   Jul 31 2005, 02:58 PM
gamer10   Nice. Poor Konrad, but he deserves it. :P :lol:...   Jul 31 2005, 03:01 PM
Konradude   Heh, very long awaited update. -----------------...   Aug 15 2005, 05:54 PM
Konradude   Ok, another update. Seems I'm starting to writ...   Aug 16 2005, 10:32 AM
Konradude   I've left my uh....0 readers on a cliff hanger...   Aug 16 2005, 04:53 PM
minque   yeah! woah.....several additions to catch up w...   Aug 16 2005, 06:54 PM
Konradude   Another update. ---------------------------------...   Aug 16 2005, 06:54 PM
Konradude   Here ends chapter 1 of Konrad's story. -----...   Aug 16 2005, 07:24 PM
BobV   Niiiicesss...   Aug 16 2005, 07:26 PM
Konradude   How constructive. ;D   Aug 16 2005, 07:27 PM
BobV   Conssstructive? Konradsess, issss good story...   Aug 16 2005, 07:29 PM
Konradude   :) It just looks like you've got a lisp. And y...   Aug 16 2005, 07:32 PM
BobV   What?! They givesss ussss cheap imitationssses...   Aug 16 2005, 07:33 PM
Konradude   Be politically correct, they are called Dwarfs. :)   Aug 16 2005, 07:37 PM
BobV   Halflingses, not Dwarfses.   Aug 16 2005, 07:43 PM
Neck' Thall   Nice...Hey what does drizzt do when he is pleased/...   Aug 17 2005, 12:29 AM
Konradude   I would answer you if I knew who the hell these pe...   Aug 17 2005, 12:54 AM
Konradude   Ok, the next update. ---------------------------...   Aug 18 2005, 04:19 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Finally caught up with your story Konrad, your wri...   Aug 18 2005, 05:27 PM
minque   Yes...what he just said...very good! :cake: ...   Aug 18 2005, 08:19 PM
Lucidarius   Interesting story. I like how Konrad is discoverin...   Aug 22 2005, 12:22 PM


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