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An Ashlanders Tale Chapter 3 |
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jonajosa |
May 4 2005, 02:41 AM
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Some of you may have read my first two chapter in this little adventure and enjoyed it. Well i've got alittle twist for yall. Let me introduce to you another charcter that is very important to this story. Her name is Johannes.
Chapter 3
[size=18]Johannes's Story
Here we come to a part in this adventure when another character’s plot begins to unfold. This character’s name is Johannes. She is a young female nord who grew up in the new settlement of Dagon Fel. So far her life has been completely unscathed by the war that was going on right outside her small village. However, as we all know nobody can escape war when it is already at your own doorstep. Let us begin Johannes’s story.
“Father.” Johannes asked when she saw her family rushing past them in the streets of Dagon Fel.
“Father!” He turned to look to see who was calling. When he saw Johannes his face lit up and he hurried towards her.
“Hurry daughter. A army is marching this way and I fear they have death and destruction on their minds.”
“What army? Who would want to attack our village?”
All I know is I saw a large group of soldiers coming this way and that I need to get my family out of here before the reach us.” He said in a very urgent tone.
I stared at him in disbelief but his face should too much worry and strain for him to be lying. “Ok. I must get home to gather my stuff.” I started to walk off but he grabbed my arm.
“No there isn’t enough time for that. They will be upon us at any moment we must hurry.”
I nodded and began to follow him through the village. Several people stopped to watch us in our hurry to leave but nobody looked too suspicious of us. I wondered why my father was not telling the others about this approaching army. Thy must know about them. My father would not condemn them all… would he?
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jonajosa |
Jun 28 2005, 12:15 AM
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This was supposed to go in the last post but I missed it when I was pasting it here.
For what seemed like days Johannes popped up and down behind the tower walls trying to shoot nord soldiers. She would load an arrow, jump up aim into the masses of nords, fire and sit back down to reload not even trying to see if her arrow hit anybody. She reached back behind her to grab an arrow and felt only two shafts in her pouch. Johannes froze trying to think of what she would do when she ran out of arrows. There was no possibility of anybody having any more arrows she could use. She grabbed one of her two arrows and stood up and this time she aimed and made sure she had a clear target before firing. The arrow struck the nord just below the right shoulder and sent him spinning to the ground. “One left.” Johannes said when she had sat back down below the wall again. “Lets make this one count.”
Before she could stand up again a load horn blow sounded through the small valley she was in. It echoed across the land and sent a shock wave of silence through the valley for a whole 10 seconds. The nords stood about wondering what the horn blow could have meant and that cost them dearly. For at that moment a black cloud appeared over the ridge and sailed down upon the valley. Commander screamed for their men to take cover but it was too late. The hail of arrows that made up the cloud landed amidst the scrambling nords and the few hundred unlucky nords who couldn’t find cover fast enough soon found themselves with a few arrows stuck in them. The street was littered with the dead and wounded and it seemed that we had killed most of them. But then some of the nords started to rise from the ground and grab up their weapons. I stood shocked at the determination of these men. The sound of hundreds of angered voices filled the valley and countless numbers of more nords started to run up the road towards the ruined village. I started to step backwards away from the wall and was about to start running when a woman came up behind me.
“Come on! We have to get out of here!” With that she ran down the steps and out the door. I looked over the wall again and saw that the entire force I was in was running. I didn’t want them to wait for me so I ran off after the woman. I ran out the door and almost tripped over a dead chimer archer. I paused for a moment and grabbed her remaining 6 arrows. Not much but it would do if I had to survive on my own out in the wilderness. I looked behind me and saw that the nords were drawing closer. From where I stood I could clearly see the bloodlust in their eyes. If I stayed there any longer I was going to be hacked to pieces. So I took off down the road as fast I could not stopping to look back.
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jonajosa An Ashlanders Tale Chapter 3 May 4 2005, 02:41 AM Soulseeker3.0 hmmm interesting good job with keeping it alive. :... May 4 2005, 02:48 AM jonajosa Tears began to form in the corners of my eyes as I... May 4 2005, 03:01 AM Soulseeker3.0 crud that sucks... good job Jonajosa May 4 2005, 03:07 AM Fuzzy Knight Yupp! Good job JonaJosa keep it up.. :goodjob: May 4 2005, 03:06 PM minque
Johannes is a male name.......but if you remov... May 4 2005, 06:40 PM jonajosa Yes johannes is a male name but i like to prnouce ... May 4 2005, 08:40 PM minque ok....then it´s even more interesting.....so keep ... May 4 2005, 09:13 PM Dantrag I love this story. Glad you didn;t give it up. May 5 2005, 10:30 PM jonajosa I got a long one this time.
“There is no tim... May 6 2005, 02:39 AM minque Holy crap Jona!......What an awful fate for the fo... May 6 2005, 02:03 PM Soulseeker3.0 dang that must suck like Minque said May 6 2005, 09:29 PM jonajosa I started to move towards the cave but the sight o... May 7 2005, 12:11 AM Fuzzy Knight Nice! Great work JonaJosa :goodjob: Now who can th... May 7 2005, 08:42 AM minque Thank you JJ for posting that soon again.....Hmm i... May 7 2005, 11:15 AM Soulseeker3.0 yes good and whos Nords are they, hmmm. May 7 2005, 04:04 PM jonajosa Small part to finish this scene. Then we can get o... May 13 2005, 11:09 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job Jona. i wonder what will happen to Johann... May 13 2005, 11:29 PM minque Great! An addition about Joannes, I like that you ... May 14 2005, 03:30 PM jonajosa It was sometime before I had the blindfold taken o... May 15 2005, 04:51 AM jonajosa Intermission May 15 2005, 06:50 AM minque Ah great....more about Johannes the sweetheart, an... May 15 2005, 02:30 PM Soulseeker3.0 great job Jona! May 15 2005, 05:14 PM minque Ok so I post in your story again...you know why? w... May 18 2005, 09:28 PM jonajosa I was not going to be sad. I was joking. DO not po... May 18 2005, 09:45 PM burntsierra Pity? No, not pity. I admire the story, your willi... May 21 2005, 11:10 AM Ryden294 Great story here jona. Easy to read, of course, an... May 21 2005, 11:58 PM minque Great story here jona. Easy to read, of course, an... May 22 2005, 12:05 AM jonajosa What do i do to show that i havn't been listening?... May 22 2005, 02:41 AM jonajosa “Take to the lines! Bowmen, at ready! Pikemen, for... May 29 2005, 08:34 PM minque Thank you for updating this.....i was very happy t... May 29 2005, 08:45 PM jonajosa “Run my lady!” My new escort shouted as we ran thr... May 30 2005, 07:58 AM minque whew.....that was a close one.....Imagine the Nord... May 30 2005, 08:40 AM burntsierra I'm going to say it here as well. Brilliant. You'v... May 30 2005, 11:09 AM burntsierra Aargh, how on earth did I double post? sorry. Oh, ... May 30 2005, 11:09 AM Dantrag I catch up on this soon, even though I haven't rea... May 30 2005, 04:09 PM jonajosa “We must evacuate the city general! The nord army ... May 31 2005, 06:54 AM treydog An excellent action/adventure story. Good fight s... May 31 2005, 01:33 PM Soulseeker3.0 yay finnaly read those last parts, great job Jona!... May 31 2005, 10:45 PM minque I usually agree with treydog in writing-matters...... May 31 2005, 11:29 PM jonajosa She has never been fond of the nords since the tim... Jun 1 2005, 04:29 AM minque Ok..then I missed something here, i just read the ... Jun 1 2005, 01:37 PM jonajosa Re: An Ashlanders Tale Chapter 3 Jun 1 2005, 09:37 PM minque But Jona!!! I did.....I said she was a nord then s... Jun 1 2005, 09:42 PM MerGirl So, wait, she is a Nord, right? Just not raised wi... Jun 1 2005, 09:44 PM jonajosa There are people you hate the way their own race a... Jun 1 2005, 09:46 PM minque Woaahhh.....erhhmm..sorry usually don´t scream...e... Jun 1 2005, 09:52 PM MerGirl Oh, okay. Kind of like a Dunmer raised in Cyrodiil... Jun 1 2005, 09:54 PM jonajosa I was not screaming Minque. I was imatateing the p... Jun 1 2005, 09:59 PM minque Jona! I screamed..not you.... ;) i was just hopin... Jun 1 2005, 10:01 PM jonajosa Wells its only been two days since my last update.... Jun 1 2005, 10:06 PM minque oh don´t get me wrong....i don´t force you i just ... Jun 1 2005, 10:15 PM jonajosa I looked at Galos and saw his hand caressing the h... Jun 3 2005, 05:13 PM jonajosa “Faster! Faster!” A young sub commander shouted at... Jun 6 2005, 06:08 AM minque Magnificent battle-scenes! And the multiple approa... Jun 6 2005, 08:41 PM treydog An exciting battle taking place, with tactical sur... Jun 7 2005, 04:05 PM Fuzzy Knight Nice Jona... Like the battle-scene, very very good... Jun 7 2005, 04:37 PM burntsierra Nice Jona... Like the battle-scene, very very good... Jun 7 2005, 09:17 PM jonajosa “Sire, all forces are advancing upon the city. The... Jun 18 2005, 08:13 PM minque Beautifully written, touching, oh and i liked the ... Jun 18 2005, 09:09 PM Dantrag no update :( I did catch up though... :) Jun 25 2005, 10:30 PM jonajosa Let me do this then so people can see that my last... Jun 26 2005, 10:24 PM Dantrag I give you a.....you.
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great as e... Jun 27 2005, 12:49 AM minque There can be nothing but very good writing coming ... Jun 27 2005, 08:07 AM Fuzzy Knight Nice update Jona... Keep it coming! :goodjob: Jun 27 2005, 10:09 AM treydog Beautiful! And now Johannes has joined the battle... Jun 27 2005, 02:20 PM Dantrag thanks for remembering :goodjob:
edit: now tha... Jun 28 2005, 12:16 AM jonajosa Marit stood the ridge that overlooked the valley t... Jun 30 2005, 10:55 PM Fuzzy Knight Oooh... More more!!! :goodjob: Jul 1 2005, 09:43 AM jonajosa “Sir! The nords have broken through the valley def... Jul 2 2005, 04:15 AM Fuzzy Knight ... :drool: Jul 2 2005, 11:01 AM minque I just got this update from jonajosa so enjoy... Sep 19 2005, 10:46 PM Dantrag Jona! Sweet update. I'll give you a...umm.... Sep 19 2005, 10:55 PM Soulseeker3.0 I'm sure its great but havn't the time to ... Sep 20 2005, 12:00 AM
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