 Meditations on War |
| Red |
 Jun 27 2005, 10:29 PM
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 Mouth  Joined: 29-May 05 From: If you're lucky, sometimes I'm here.  |
Okay, here are four poems (Haiku's) written for a possible book. They are all related to battle and is written as if an adventurer/soldier wrote his war experiences after battle. anyways, there she blows:
The pessimist Red, the rivers ran. For a great battle was won. Won, but also lost. Ode to the wind In, out, all around. The winds of Tava flowing. My sail will be short. The rush My sight fills with blood. Running on adrenaline, I kill my target. The coming horror The old birds scatter, They know the coming horrors, Killing will come soon. -------------------- //LEFT ARM PULLS TRIGGER, RIGHT ARM SHRUGS SHOULDER//TRANSMISSION ENDED
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| Fuzzy Knight |
Jun 28 2005, 09:57 AM
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Cool Red.. :goodjob:
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Red Meditations on War Jun 27 2005, 10:29 PM
Dantrag cool. Jun 28 2005, 02:07 AM Megil Tel-Zeke like em all Jun 28 2005, 02:18 AM Red Thank you. They took a while to perfect the words... Jun 28 2005, 02:43 AM Mazuk Cool. Jun 28 2005, 08:30 PM Harry Dresden Re: Meditations on War Jul 4 2005, 05:12 PM jonajosa Wars are won. But they come at a price. Jul 4 2005, 08:00 PM
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"War has no winners, only losers" can... Jul 17 2005, 01:09 PM Red Re: Meditations on War Jul 9 2005, 04:41 PM Blinx636 I liked the haikus a lot. They were very well thou... Jul 10 2005, 10:02 PM Red
Thanks for the praise. Jul 14 2005, 02:55 PM Red Make someone up, that's what they do on the TE... Jul 17 2005, 04:06 PM vaanic~one "Only the dead see the end of war"
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