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Kiln
post Jul 10 2005, 09:29 PM
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This is my first Fan fiction and if anyone likes it I will add to it as time passes.


In all my adventures around Morrowind I never felt so sad as when I found a body in an ancestral tomb journal in hand. As I look at the door upon entering it was obvious that this door could only be opened from the outside and this poor adventurer had been trapped inside. I picked up the journal and read the last entry to understand what exactly had happened to this adventurer.

"I write to you for possibly the final time as I carve my final Epitaph in this wall and write my final journal entry. To know me entirely would take a lifetime. I'm not well known even in my end and likely will never be recognized for all of the great deeds I have done the great island of Morrowind. Many have never heard my name or of my accomplishments and likely never will. My greed and lust for money has led me to my end and left my task unfulfilled. In this journal I have kept entries of my accomplishments in their entirity."

I sat down gently laying my sword beside me and flipped to the front of the journal to read how he had gotten here and what had happened to him and this is what it said,

"Today I awoke from my sleep to a strange dream. The dream was not bad but I have forgotten most of it but one thing I can remember was the soft voice of a woman. You have been chosen, fear not for I am watchful." Probably a side effect of the awful drink I had been given by the guards. Oh yes I've yet to explain that I am on an Imperial prison ship. The reason is unknown to me for I have suffered a loss of almost all of my memory previous to my time on the ship. I was not the only prisoner on the ship though, there was also a strange man with pale blue skin named Jiub. His voice was deep and piercing though he was always nice and friendly. I feel sick as the boat sways in the water, it is clear that we have run into a storm on our way to our destination."

As I read the first entry in the man's journal I felt sorry for him already. He had no clue about his past. That is a horrible way to live. I knew this wasn't a safe place to continue reading so I took the journal but left all of his personal belongings on his body. I wasn't one to rob from the dead...well I was robbing an ancestral tomb so I guess that's a lie, but I still don't want to rob this particular man. I had a recall spell set to the Eight Plates in Balmora so with a movement of my hands and whispering the correct words I was lifted into darkness and appeared in the Pub.






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post Jul 10 2005, 11:03 PM
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To Minque: Well I wanted to have a reference to your story somewhere within mine because yours is really what inspired me to write this and an actual book I've started writing with my own ideas not based off of morrowind and such. I thought of the journal thing and went with it and it will be mentioned often in my story as you can see.

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Kiln   A Short Story By Kiln The Wanderer   Jul 10 2005, 09:29 PM
minque   Very good! I like it....you have a nice almost...   Jul 10 2005, 09:38 PM
Soulseeker3.0   wow nice start Kiln. Good to see another view, ple...   Jul 10 2005, 09:58 PM
Dantrag   I like it.   Jul 10 2005, 10:17 PM
Kiln   Upon my appearance at the pub the patrons were sta...   Jul 10 2005, 10:50 PM
Kiln   Sorry for the double post but it felt weird puttin...   Jul 10 2005, 10:54 PM
Soulseeker3.0   good job. funny, you know, how all sorts of story...   Jul 10 2005, 10:55 PM
minque   Wooah....So Tiren was one of the unknown guys at E...   Jul 10 2005, 10:56 PM
Soulseeker3.0   Minque: well those were the two I was refering to,...   Jul 10 2005, 11:00 PM
minque   Well as I said Iīm honoured......feel free to re...   Jul 10 2005, 11:11 PM
gamer10   Here you go <:) <--- Unless they get a jo...   Jul 10 2005, 11:20 PM
Soulseeker3.0   alll you got to do is fund his avatar and right-cl...   Jul 10 2005, 11:22 PM
Kiln   The night passed and he woke up to the loud swordp...   Jul 10 2005, 11:35 PM
minque   nice nice nice.......canīt wait for the next updat...   Jul 10 2005, 11:43 PM
Soulseeker3.0   good job and hope the whole company thing goes wel...   Jul 11 2005, 12:01 AM
Kiln   The boat had gone but the small dock was still som...   Jul 11 2005, 02:34 AM
Soulseeker3.0   good job Kiln! a mystery is at hand   Jul 11 2005, 02:46 AM
Kiln   I really wanted people to feel like Kiln felt some...   Jul 11 2005, 02:59 AM
minque   I think you make us feel what he feels....actually...   Jul 11 2005, 03:19 AM
Kiln   This is a fairly long on but I hope you all like i...   Jul 11 2005, 03:58 AM
Kiln   He sat at the table listening to the two men fight...   Jul 11 2005, 09:39 AM
minque   I like the content really! But I have one impo...   Jul 11 2005, 10:20 AM
treydog   Quite an interesting story- I like the vehicle of ...   Jul 11 2005, 01:48 PM
Soulseeker3.0   good job Kiln. one peice of advice, it's not ...   Jul 11 2005, 02:01 PM
Kiln   I'm glad the journal thing works out with peop...   Jul 11 2005, 08:08 PM
minque   Hey! I can help with that! paragraphing ...   Jul 11 2005, 08:28 PM
Kiln   I don't actually have an e-mail address per sa...   Jul 11 2005, 08:35 PM
minque   ok..then i might edit one of your posts.....paragr...   Jul 11 2005, 08:38 PM
Kiln   That's cool with me completely fine. B) Edit...   Jul 11 2005, 08:39 PM
minque   Soo...I paragraphed all your parts.....looking a b...   Jul 11 2005, 09:35 PM
Soulseeker3.0   I was going to say when I opered up the topic I th...   Jul 11 2005, 09:38 PM
Kiln   Kiln looked around and his vision was terribly blu...   Jul 11 2005, 09:44 PM
Soulseeker3.0   well from my little (i think) knowledge, I think y...   Jul 11 2005, 09:48 PM
Kiln   To try and take his mind off of the events that ha...   Jul 12 2005, 01:09 AM
Soulseeker3.0   good job Kiln!   Jul 12 2005, 01:45 AM
minque   Youīre doing just fine! paragraphing and all.....   Jul 12 2005, 07:15 AM
treydog   Still doing a fine job keeping the story moving ah...   Jul 12 2005, 01:34 PM
Kiln   Thanks everyone. :) I wanted everyone to feel con...   Jul 12 2005, 06:59 PM
Soulseeker3.0   good job, and I think that everyone hate cliff rac...   Jul 12 2005, 09:16 PM
Kell-Reevor   Very good for a first fic, you have a knack for de...   Jul 12 2005, 09:42 PM
Kiln   Hunger had descended upon him incredibly quickly a...   Jul 13 2005, 12:30 AM
Soulseeker3.0   good job Kiln I will trust your judgement, Taki...   Jul 13 2005, 03:28 AM
Kiln   :O I just realized that I failed to mention what r...   Jul 13 2005, 07:31 AM
Soulseeker3.0   good job, please keep updating   Jul 13 2005, 04:00 PM
minque   Very good story here, interesting approach really....   Jul 13 2005, 10:36 PM
Kiln   I'm preoccupied at the moment with a few more ...   Jul 14 2005, 01:13 AM
Soulseeker3.0   ok, thats fine   Jul 14 2005, 03:23 AM
Kiln   I have had more time than I had anticipated becaus...   Jul 14 2005, 05:32 AM
Soulseeker3.0   nice and the end!?!? what, you just starte...   Jul 14 2005, 03:12 PM
Kiln   Kiln walked to the Silt Strider port but along the...   Jul 14 2005, 06:55 PM
Soulseeker3.0   creepy. keep up the good work.   Jul 14 2005, 08:57 PM
Kiln   --------------------------------------------------...   Jul 15 2005, 01:13 AM
Soulseeker3.0   good job and now I will never drink to much Mazte ...   Jul 15 2005, 04:14 AM
minque   Very good! I can well imagine Kilnīs feelings ...   Jul 15 2005, 11:15 AM
Kiln   He sat up and looked around. The two men were sta...   Jul 15 2005, 10:39 PM
Soulseeker3.0   good job and Kiln leaned the lesson the hard way? ...   Jul 15 2005, 11:02 PM
Kiln   The lesson is, it's just never a good idea to...   Jul 15 2005, 11:26 PM
Soulseeker3.0   lol   Jul 15 2005, 11:37 PM
Kiln   After finishing his drink, Kiln left the building ...   Jul 16 2005, 12:59 AM
Soulseeker3.0   wow keep up the good work   Jul 16 2005, 01:02 AM
Kiln   I guess this isn't going to be such a short st...   Jul 16 2005, 06:02 AM
Soulseeker3.0   lol   Jul 16 2005, 05:45 PM
minque   YaYYY! Serene is appearing again! How flat...   Jul 16 2005, 04:31 PM
Megil Tel-Zeke   Just read you FF. it was wonderful i couldn't ...   Jul 16 2005, 06:29 PM
Kiln   I was surprised to find that people other than me ...   Jul 17 2005, 11:21 PM
Soulseeker3.0   good job Kiln I like it.   Jul 18 2005, 12:24 AM
Megil Tel-Zeke   Slightly humorous, but at the same time quite sad....   Jul 18 2005, 12:56 AM
Kiln   Some time had passed with Kiln moaning and moving ...   Jul 18 2005, 01:29 AM
Soulseeker3.0   wow another interesting character joins the plot   Jul 18 2005, 01:37 AM
Kiln   Well since Kiln is dirt poor and he has no friends...   Jul 18 2005, 03:04 AM
Soulseeker3.0   treu   Jul 18 2005, 03:11 AM
Kiln   Just got done browsing over the Mystery unleashed ...   Jul 18 2005, 04:00 AM
Soulseeker3.0   It seems ok kind-of strange though but it is still...   Jul 18 2005, 04:13 AM
Kiln   Yeah, uhhhh you read it before I scrapped the whol...   Jul 18 2005, 04:37 AM
Soulseeker3.0   Ok Kiln thats better. :)   Jul 18 2005, 02:49 PM
minque   Heey! You pdate faster than I read.....nice wo...   Jul 18 2005, 09:57 AM
gamer10   Yes, a very nice story. It earned you a whole :)   Jul 18 2005, 04:41 PM
Kiln   After a nights sleep he woke to morning roll call ...   Jul 18 2005, 06:24 PM
Soulseeker3.0   not at all this is interesting   Jul 18 2005, 06:26 PM
Kiln   Momentarily Kiln talked to the guard about living ...   Jul 18 2005, 08:10 PM
Soulseeker3.0   I like it too you get some back round and all that...   Jul 18 2005, 08:31 PM
Kiln   Kiln wondered how a simple blow to the head would...   Jul 18 2005, 10:22 PM
Soulseeker3.0   'k   Jul 18 2005, 10:37 PM
minque   my my....updates! nice really nice, lots of (n...   Jul 18 2005, 10:49 PM
Kiln   The courtyard was filled with men just talking and...   Jul 19 2005, 04:57 AM
Kell-Reevor   I also like your easy to read writing style. Very...   Jul 19 2005, 12:13 PM
Soulseeker3.0   very interesting Kiln   Jul 19 2005, 02:45 PM
Kiln   Yup the short story is pretty much out the window....   Jul 19 2005, 05:06 PM
Soulseeker3.0   LOL good luck to Kiln   Jul 19 2005, 05:32 PM
Kiln   Warning: This one is long... ---------------------...   Jul 19 2005, 08:07 PM
minque   Ahhh you are good at fight scenes as well as the o...   Jul 19 2005, 08:42 PM
Soulseeker3.0   good very good, at first I was afrad you would mak...   Jul 19 2005, 08:46 PM
Kiln   I'd like to start this part of the story by th...   Jul 19 2005, 10:00 PM
Kell-Reevor   Good as usual. Very descriptive fight scene. Sor...   Jul 20 2005, 03:42 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Good.. good written fighting scenes too, at least ...   Jul 20 2005, 04:09 PM
Soulseeker3.0   good job don't know how to spell the guy's...   Jul 20 2005, 05:13 PM
Kiln   Kiln sat opening the journal to the last page he h...   Jul 21 2005, 01:32 AM
Soulseeker3.0   good job Kiln   Jul 21 2005, 03:07 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Great Kiln.. Keep it up! ;)   Jul 21 2005, 12:23 PM
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