Gosh, I'm learning a lot about Michigan and Detroit from this story!
Predictable that Jan would, after her mission, head straight for the Gadget Cave to update Avery.
"It took a few minutes for me to get into some security cameras to see the rest of it." - - Here you ‘show’ us how brilliantly creative Gadget is. Quick thinking on his part, upon losing comm, to tap into the building security cameras.
Well, that was an argument at home she didn’t need to hear. . . .
Some powerfully effective writing there, my friend. Her father’s a real butthead. If there is a silver lining though, her mother quite shined here in Jan’s defense.
Magnificent how Jan literally ‘stormed’ off into that downpour of her own creating.