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Acadian |
Oct 17 2019, 08:55 PM
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Aww, another reminder that her plans for goblins and the IC didn't go so well. You can lead a goblin to Mehrunes Dagon but you can't make it attack the correct target. 'She had a seat upon the comfortable bed, her newest friend in all the world of Tamriel.' - - Love this line! Yes, I'm not sure I trust Ignito either. . . . We shall see. SubRosa is right about writing how and what feels right. You'll find your readers can be pretty intuitive about picking up on what YOUR objectives for writing are and then supporting your goals. One nice thing about fan fic for fun is the freedom and flexibility it provides. Most of us here like it when a writer here 'lingers' and spends as much time as the story calls for in whatever areas the writer feels the story calls for. One example I like to use is a full episode of 1200-1500 or so words where Buffy was making camp for the night and spent 80% of the episode talking about how she made her toothcleaning powder and how she and Daenlin 'fletched' her toothbrush with bamboo and boar bristles. And casting all modesty aside, Buffy did a pretty good job of making it a fun and interesting episode. Renee, I know you've been nervous about writing and calling it fan fiction. But fan fiction is exactly what you're writing - and doing a fine job of it if I may say so. I hope you can now realize that we are not hypercritical ogres but, rather, quite supportive of the efforts of our writers here. What I'm getting at is that if you would like this thread moved from here in the Ob cheats section over the fan fiction section of the forum, just let SubRosa or I know. Totally your call though. 
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ghastley |
Oct 17 2019, 09:06 PM
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QUOTE(Acadian @ Oct 17 2019, 03:55 PM)  ... What I'm getting at is that if you would like this thread moved from here in the Ob cheats section over the fan fiction section of the forum, just let SubRosa or I know. Totally your call though.  We hypercritical ogres are waiting over there for the fresh meat!  Also "A supercritical fluid is any substance at a temperature and pressure above its critical point, where distinct liquid and gas phases do not exist." Or in other words, it can't boil because the pressure is too high. Hypercritical is an order of magnitude beyond that. Ogres don't like being under that kind of pressure and it makes them grumpy. This post has been edited by ghastley: Oct 17 2019, 09:16 PM
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Renee The Goblin Lady Jul 7 2019, 12:43 AM Renee Like a whirling dervish
Spitting out the salty she... Jul 14 2019, 02:51 AM Lopov Nice introduction.
Final sentences wrap up the st... Jul 14 2019, 08:14 AM Acadian Very nice how we started in the middle of a scene ... Jul 14 2019, 01:26 PM treydog Very nice! Well- not so much for Angrus... but... Jul 14 2019, 05:03 PM SubRosa Six Fishes is a great name for a dockside tavern.
... Jul 15 2019, 01:53 PM Renee Wow, I got comments. Now I gotta finish this! ... Jul 21 2019, 11:12 AM treydog An excellent addition to what we have seen already... Jul 21 2019, 03:05 PM SubRosa So the Goblin Lady was an unwilling participant in... Jul 21 2019, 04:10 PM Lopov Nice, I didn't expect her to be enslaved by th... Jul 21 2019, 06:51 PM Acadian Ahah, I see how this ties right into the beginning... Jul 21 2019, 07:59 PM Grits Whoop, Renee stories! *happy dance*
I love th... Jul 23 2019, 05:19 PM Renee Saturday night is usually the only time I have eno... Jul 28 2019, 01:40 AM Renee After that there were no more incidents of hostil... Aug 4 2019, 03:40 AM SubRosa Neat link to that article about Sacred Rite of the... Aug 4 2019, 05:44 PM Acadian I quite like the premise you seem to have going on... Aug 4 2019, 07:53 PM Lopov An interesting continuation, you used quite a diff... Aug 5 2019, 06:13 PM treydog Somehow missed this when you first updated- but ha... Aug 10 2019, 02:57 PM Renee Comments and questions in this post, and I'll ... Aug 11 2019, 04:11 PM Renee [center][font=Times New Roman]Chapter IV: The Gobl... Aug 11 2019, 05:25 PM Acadian Well, done, Renee!
Thank Azura for those h... Aug 11 2019, 06:54 PM SubRosa I too, loved the inclusion of Cropsford and the 3r... Aug 11 2019, 08:56 PM Lopov Quite a cliff hanger, Renee Gade. Who allowed you ... Aug 12 2019, 01:19 PM treydog Interesting continuation. Our first encounter wit... Aug 16 2019, 05:15 PM Renee Acadian: Aw thanks! Yes, I left that sort of v... Aug 18 2019, 06:46 AM Renee This chapter is longer. :cake: I thought of choppi... Aug 18 2019, 05:44 PM SubRosa Great to see how Jayne is reaching out to communic... Aug 18 2019, 05:57 PM Acadian Fun vid as Jayne gathers her tribe!
Whew... Aug 18 2019, 06:50 PM Lopov Very clever to include some actual goblin language... Aug 19 2019, 01:44 PM treydog As far as the foreign language, I am a typography ... Aug 19 2019, 01:52 PM Renee SubRosa: Yes. Her reputation. :) She certainly has... Sep 1 2019, 06:32 PM Renee [font=Times New Roman][center]Chapter VI: The Yell... Sep 1 2019, 07:32 PM Lopov Looks like Jayne has some great plans in mind. I w... Sep 2 2019, 08:35 AM Acadian I'm still getting a kick out of Jayne's pa... Sep 2 2019, 06:16 PM SubRosa Yaaagh!
Jayne has her temporary goblin tats o... Sep 2 2019, 07:13 PM Renee Lopov: funny you just mentioned Kahreem. ;)
Acad... Sep 8 2019, 03:39 AM Lopov A very detailed and intriguing insight into Jayne... Sep 8 2019, 03:27 PM treydog I love the life you bring to the interactions- wit... Sep 8 2019, 06:07 PM Acadian Good that all of Jayne’s worries turned out for ... Sep 8 2019, 07:02 PM SubRosa You are bringing back so many Oblivion memories wi... Sep 8 2019, 08:11 PM Renee Aw, you folks make me smile. :) I am glad this is ... Sep 22 2019, 02:40 AM Renee [size=4][font=Times New Roman]Chapter VIII: The Im... Sep 22 2019, 03:32 AM Lopov Is that Lady Saga you're writing about in the ... Sep 22 2019, 06:16 PM Acadian Yes, who is the mysterious mushroom-eating elf in ... Sep 22 2019, 06:39 PM SubRosa Is that blond elf with the summer bolette Lady Sag... Sep 23 2019, 07:16 PM Renee Yes Lopov, Acadian, and SubRosa, that is Lady Sag... Sep 29 2019, 03:02 AM Lopov Neat story. I like it how you still continue to un... Sep 29 2019, 06:52 PM SubRosa Ignite It is in charge? That does not sound good a... Sep 29 2019, 07:06 PM Acadian Like Lopov, I'm enjoying watching this story u... Sep 29 2019, 07:18 PM treydog Mysterious late-sleeping elves.... Alarm bells are... Sep 30 2019, 11:46 AM Renee
I like it how you still continue to unfold event... Oct 6 2019, 04:21 PM Renee Where we left off: Jayne spoke to Simplicia the Sl... Oct 6 2019, 05:02 PM Acadian I love how Vinicia has modernized her bookkeeping.... Oct 6 2019, 10:15 PM Renee Meh... so many mistakes! I was hungover though... Oct 7 2019, 03:27 PM SubRosa It sounds like Vinicia Melissaeia works the servic... Oct 7 2019, 04:32 PM Lopov Jayne can now sleep in peace, knowing that she won... Oct 7 2019, 10:20 PM Renee Acadian -- I've been watching too much Black M... Oct 13 2019, 01:13 AM Renee Hello. So, I keep thinking of more stuff I want to... Oct 13 2019, 08:04 PM Lopov I love the dream sequence, very-well written. I wo... Oct 14 2019, 11:55 AM SubRosa Sketchy is a trendy term these days, meaning anyth... Oct 14 2019, 01:07 PM Renee Lopov, my friend. Now why would you suppose Ignyti... Oct 20 2019, 02:31 AM Renee [size=4][center]Chapter XII: White Gold Tower
htt... Oct 20 2019, 02:57 AM Acadian A pleasant day of bathing and beer. Wise of Jayne... Oct 20 2019, 07:32 PM SubRosa Jayne has that guard's ear? Ewwww! :lol: ... Oct 21 2019, 07:13 PM Lopov That's very friendly, Renee, you let us hangin... Oct 21 2019, 07:30 PM Renee Acadian: YES, the part when you said you "pon... Oct 26 2019, 10:36 PM SubRosa An academic's office being a broom closet is n... Oct 27 2019, 01:12 AM Lopov Fvck, that's great! I mean the story, not ... Oct 27 2019, 10:11 AM Acadian Oh, my heart breaks for poor Jayne! Betrayed ... Oct 27 2019, 07:55 PM Renee Hey everyone, I appreciate your attentions. :cake:... Nov 3 2019, 04:00 AM Renee One come a day the water will run,
No man will sta... Nov 3 2019, 04:20 AM Acadian That fetcher, Iggy! :-/
Poor Jayne, as she... Nov 3 2019, 08:49 PM Lopov Fokke! That must be our Of Weet friend, that h... Nov 4 2019, 01:57 PM SubRosa Oh no, the locals are out with their torches and p... Nov 4 2019, 04:01 PM Renee Oh yes, that's that I was going for, 'Rosa... Nov 9 2019, 04:36 PM Renee My sweet revenge
Will be yours
For the taking
It... Nov 9 2019, 09:52 PM Lopov A fitting end for the fetcher.
Faced with the wra... Nov 9 2019, 10:34 PM SubRosa It sounds like Ignitit's hundred septim shoes ... Nov 9 2019, 11:47 PM Acadian ... I love the juxtaposition of how they either do... Nov 10 2019, 09:18 PM
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