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post Jul 4 2020, 07:42 PM
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Chapter One: Miss Vicious Delicious


Date: August 19, 2277, 11:06 AM

Location: VAPL-66 Power Station


They called them raiders, Takana and Neeptu. Social and demographic miscreants who nobody would touch. Nobody would accept. Not the Enclave. Not even Talon Company. Collectively, they were groups of young adults who lived each day as though it'd be their very last. Because often it was their very last.

As the Psycho they'd squeezed into their arms took brilliant effect, both of them were sizzling.

The common misfit known as Neeptu Daalu steadied himself, and squinted his eyes. "See? See her now?" he asked his partner. "Told ya there's a wastelander out there! The little b----. Look how she's dressed. In a freeking Parkstroller! Prob'ly good for a few caps." He was speaking loudly, his booming voice being echoed by a nearby overpass.

"Haah? I don't see a thing," said Takana Topov, Neeptu's partner. Takana had done well as a dancer, far away at Dukov's place. But she'd done even better as a thief.

Together, Takana and Neeptu had plotted to steal hundreds of caps from her former employer. And they had been successful at this. In fact, the job had been easy. Neeptu pretended to be a john while Takana depleted some of Dukov's stash of cash. It was over in less than a minute, their getaway boat floating just meters away. Then the good life had begun. They'd finally been able to afford Psycho, Jet, and all sorts of other goodies, which had been clouding their judgment for days.

"Ya need some glasses!" Neeptu announced. "C'mon, just follow me!"

The pair scrambled off. They readied their pieces: Takana's pistol went *clink!*, and Neeptu's went *shink!* ... but neither of them could possibly know their prey was not some gentle lamb who'd cry and run.

"Oh hell no!" The lady in the Parkstroller brandished her only weapon, a rusted old iron tool.

She went to work. Jumping, hopping, and skipping around the raiders and their clumsy efforts at gun play. ...Bam! ... Crash!... At close quarters, their Chinese pistols were next to useless. The lady in the Parkstroller might never be as good with a hand weapon as the cannibalistic fiend known as Rattler, but as a member of the 'raider' demographic herself, neither was she somebody to try messing with.

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Takana Topov

Neeptu Daalu takes a beating

"Oh hell no!"

Unexpected help

Goo' boy!!!

Miss Vicious Delicious throws away her Parkstroller for something new

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post Aug 23 2020, 03:42 PM
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Yeah, a cliffie. Sorry! biggrin.gif Last week's chapter was half-baked. I know you'll never get info Fallout, Acadian. I'd be curious to see how you'd approach it. Since you have a military past, is it partially the fact that guns are part of the game?

Vicious was a raider but her past is complicated, SubRosa and Lopov. smile.gif Although I don't know all of it right now, I can tell you that she was raised somewhat religiously. Maybe I am drawing from my own teenage years, there. A lot of us were confused back then, doing some right and some wrong.

I haven't seen The Warriors. Wonder if it's on Netflix or Hulu? Not on Netflix. Nothing s on Netflix nowadays, except their own Netflix Exclusives. Hulu has WARRIOR and WARRIOR (TV show and movie), but not The Warriors. panic.gif I also see Desert Warrior.

I found it on You Tube. 1979. There's some gangs called The Furies, The Boppers, and The High Hats. Does any of this sound like the movie you're speaking of?

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"It's go time!" yelled the raider sentry, readying his weapon, a worn-out combat knife.

Vicious was startled. "Yo, I am one of you guys! Can't you see this *crap* I'm wearing? Come on now!"

But it was no use arguing against ignorance. As the sentry readied and steadied, aiming to hit, Miss Vicious Delicious planned her next move. "Dammit!" Which was to simply double back. Turn and high-tail it, back to Fort Independence.

"What are ya *flippin'* scared!?" he called after her, falling behind.

But Vicious was not scared. Only startled, and not very well armed. She knew how it would proceed from here. There would be no convincing going on, no dialog or debate. Despite the fact that she was dressed as one of them, it was obvious her pursuer did not care. A raider on the outskirts would kill for a pack of smokes, if he were desperate enough.

She was running hard now, headed back the way she'd come. "HELP!" Vicious called to the Fort Independence Defender she'd passed a half-hour before. "Help, I'm being attacked!"

"Come back here, you *birch*!" the raider with the worn-out knife called. "You know we're all lookin' for you now!"

Their footfalls echoing. A mutant cicada buzzed somewhere unseen.

Unlike Vicious, the Fort Independence Defender guy was well-armed, also ready for spontaneous combat. It seemed as though he spotted her, then spotted them both. Would he simply shoot them both?

The Defender strolled sideways from behind his short bunker of sandbags, and powered on his weapon, a bona-fide Tesla Rifle. Unlike Vicious and her pursuer, the defender's rifle would be well-maintained. Cared for and oiled, every single day. But the uncertainty! The moment! Who would he go for?

The Defender fired. Pink blasts of energy zapped the air, Vicious could feel the gun's electricity, charging unseen ions everywhere! Fortunately for her, the raider chasing her suddenly lost his arm. Miss Vicious crabbed and rolled onto the ground! ... Making sure she'd not get hit by that Tesla rifle, making sure the defender guy was definitely NOT following her with his aim. Phew! .... The Defender fired again, and just a couple meters away from Vicious herself. She scrambled and got to her feet. Did a backwards spin. By now, she was standing next to the defender. If he was planning to shoot her, she'd at least have some sandbags to hide behind!

But, there was no worry. Within the next second, her pursuer exploded. Fell to the ground! Once somebody's son and perhaps lovingly so, now nothing but a pile of ashes.

Vicious stumbled, and caught her breath.
...Right then and there, she got it.
...Somehow knew it.
...It was as obvious as the sun in the sky.

What had the raider from Fairfax Ruins said just before having his measly life ended? Her thoughts raced. Then she remembered. "Something about 'we're all," she said aloud. Finally, the thought struck. We're all lookin' for you! he had said. WE are all looking for you.

"They," she started, unbelieving. "They all lookin' for me." She felt plainly dumbstruck. "But ... how?" She did not expect this. As the full implication of the Fairfax raider's words sunk in, she righted herself. Squared her shoulders. Looked to the mutt of a pistol she was carrying. And realized. Heading back to the Megaton area would not be as easy as she formerly had assumed.

"But how?" she repeated. "How they all know I'm out here?"

"Hey you," interrupted a voice. A calm and muffled female voice.

Vicious turned, startled for the second time this morning. "Dag. You just saved my life." She smiled at the defender, the defender who was powering down her weapon. Vicious had assumed her savior was a man, not a woman. But to her credit, due to the suit the defender was wearing, it was impossible to tell male from female. All genders looked the same under the bulk of power armor, and this set was definitely not looking made for womanly forms.

"If you're trying to get yourself killed out here," continued the defender, "you mind doing it further away from our bunker?"

"Well, I ain't out here trying to get killed. It's just that--" Vicious left the sentence unfinished. It's just that I thought I was one of them? she'd been about to say. But how would that play now, before this well-armed and well-armored sentinel, who had no qualms about shooting actual raiders on sight?

"I'm Defender Anne Marie Morgan with the Outcasts," the voice under bulks of power armor replied. "Steer clear of here, and you should be able to continue with that whole 'not dying' plan, okay?"

"Okay," Vicious nodded. "But how am I supposed to...."

Again, she left the sentence unfinished. Thought for a moment.

"Uh, nice meeting you, Defender Anne. Again, I must thank you for so kindly saving my life."

The day moved from morning to noon just then. The mutant cicada, which had ceased its annoying song as the firefight commenced, began to buzz again. And suddenly, Miss Vicious had a plan...

"So...that Tesla rifle you got there..."

"Tesla cannon," corrected the defender with a bit of edge in her voice. "Huge difference."

"Uh huh. How many rounds you got in that thing anyway?"

...and this plan would involve a good many of those rounds. The defender's boring stint at guard duty could potentially be not so boring for the rest of the afternoon. In fact, the former raider hoped Defender Marie Anne Morgan would have enough to take down the rest of Fairfax Ruins, as Miss Vicious lured them out of their sorry-ass hidey-holes. One, by one.

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Fairfax Ruins -- (Fort Independence is the building in the far left-upper corner)

Defender Morgan

"We're all lookin' for you!

Defender Morgan assists

"Hey, whoa, I'm gettin' outta here!"

Wednesday night is Family Night!

These guys just don't learn, do they?

Ragdoll'd

Vicious got this one (Gore Warning.... eww)

At the end of the day, Vicious will Survive

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Renee   Miss Vicious   Jul 4 2020, 07:42 PM
SubRosa   Nice all outs to Dukov and the Rattler *shudder* ...   Jul 4 2020, 09:07 PM
Lopov   Wow, Vicious Delicious gets her own thread even...   Jul 5 2020, 09:26 AM
Acadian   Very fun reading this from the ambushers' pers...   Jul 5 2020, 02:20 PM
Renee   SubRoea: Fortunately, Rattler will be spoken of in...   Jul 18 2020, 06:38 PM
Lopov   Now I finally know, how many floors there are in T...   Jul 18 2020, 07:06 PM
SubRosa   Unlucky 13 Tenpenny Tower! I wonder if the add...   Jul 18 2020, 09:30 PM
Acadian   'As she neared the place, she began counting i...   Jul 18 2020, 09:37 PM
Renee   Acadian: Yes exactly, on the snooty behavior of Te...   Aug 9 2020, 04:35 PM
Lopov   LoL @ the world game! Farriers even! Anth...   Aug 9 2020, 08:04 PM
SubRosa   So after living the flipping high life for a while...   Aug 9 2020, 08:17 PM
Acadian   What a hoot! The end result for Janet's s...   Aug 9 2020, 09:52 PM
Renee   I appreciate everyone's attentions. :cake: Tha...   Aug 16 2020, 06:34 PM
Acadian   Oh noes, a cliff hanger! Darn radio waves tr...   Aug 16 2020, 08:58 PM
SubRosa   So now we learn more of Miss VD's history, and...   Aug 16 2020, 10:04 PM
Lopov   "Once a raider, always a raider" - the r...   Aug 17 2020, 12:30 PM
Lopov   Wow, a truly beautiful shot of Fairfax ruins. Lur...   Aug 23 2020, 07:49 PM
Acadian   I'm sure I could make FO work okay but my genr...   Aug 23 2020, 11:59 PM
macole   Ah, such a good feeling to know that somebody want...   Aug 24 2020, 02:31 AM
SubRosa   That 1979 movie is what I meant. With a very young...   Aug 24 2020, 07:55 AM
Renee   Lopov: Fairfax is a rather upscale place in Virgin...   Aug 30 2020, 04:24 PM
Renee   The day's late summer warmth was coming to an ...   Aug 30 2020, 05:17 PM
Lopov   Uh oh those guys are after Vicious! I really ...   Aug 30 2020, 07:28 PM
Acadian   ’A wasteland crow cawed, and Vicious thought she...   Aug 30 2020, 09:54 PM
SubRosa   A storm is coming. Or perhaps, a Stormcrow? Evildo...   Aug 31 2020, 02:09 AM
TheCheshireKhajiit   Lol, VD. Dopey and Cheesehead better hope they don...   Aug 31 2020, 03:18 AM
Renee   I'd say ditch the Chinese gun and keep either...   Sep 4 2020, 04:09 PM
Renee   Last week's chapter: Miss Vicious spends the n...   Sep 6 2020, 08:05 PM
TheCheshireKhajiit   It’s a good thing Ms. Vicky D. had that psycho...   Sep 6 2020, 10:20 PM
SubRosa   Joe Mahma! Awesome. A close, psycho-fueled e...   Sep 7 2020, 04:25 AM
Acadian   Glad Vicious got away from that next batch of raid...   Sep 7 2020, 08:24 PM
Lopov   Jacked was a good teacher when it comes to applyin...   Sep 8 2020, 10:12 AM
Renee   It is supposed to be overcast all weekend, so I do...   Sep 12 2020, 11:06 PM
Lopov   I've only used pose mods that require a consol...   Sep 13 2020, 05:27 PM
SubRosa   All the pose mods for the Fallout games that I hav...   Sep 13 2020, 09:20 PM
Renee   Cool, thanks a lot for your help on pose mods. Tha...   Sep 14 2020, 06:24 PM
Renee   Date: 12:37 AM 08.25.77, Thursday, August 23, 2277...   Sep 20 2020, 08:37 PM
SubRosa   A Baltimore mailbox! I kind of doubt that Mis...   Sep 20 2020, 09:43 PM
TheCheshireKhajiit   A Baltimore mailbox! I kind of doubt that Mi...   Sep 21 2020, 12:32 AM
Acadian   VD's musing conversation with the mailbox duri...   Sep 20 2020, 10:21 PM
Lopov   Neat story! I like her thoughts while "h...   Sep 22 2020, 06:29 PM
Renee   Hey, SubRosa, happy Sunday! Yes, that is somet...   Oct 4 2020, 02:47 PM
Renee   "Megaton is obsolete. The last vestige of a c...   Oct 4 2020, 04:40 PM
Acadian   Cool little story! A couple beers, free exc...   Oct 4 2020, 09:19 PM
SubRosa   I loved your description of Gob's voice. Ham...   Oct 4 2020, 11:11 PM
Lopov   Same here! This story is the best in MVD...   Oct 5 2020, 11:54 AM
TheCheshireKhajiit   Hmmm I wonder what that guy really wanted? Why not...   Oct 5 2020, 03:34 PM
Renee   Rush.. rush... Rush... rush. Everyone's gonna ...   Oct 5 2020, 06:07 PM
TheCheshireKhajiit   Rush.. rush... Rush... rush. Everyone's gonna...   Oct 5 2020, 08:14 PM
macole   Who cares about Megaton. Playing baseball with Bur...   Oct 6 2020, 06:39 AM
Renee   Hello, happy Sundas. :cake: A lot of the pauses ...   Oct 18 2020, 04:21 PM
macole   Lopov's hospital is dealing with a slew of ne...   Oct 18 2020, 09:50 PM
SubRosa   January did not deal with Mr. Burke at all. She ne...   Oct 18 2020, 09:34 PM
Renee   Don't waste your time fighting blind-minded th...   Oct 18 2020, 09:45 PM
Renee   He is okay. We've been messaging today and oth...   Oct 19 2020, 07:36 PM
Acadian   Hot mac & cheese sounds much better for breakf...   Oct 19 2020, 10:00 PM
SubRosa   Is Miss V's pasta moving too? I think I reco...   Oct 19 2020, 11:12 PM
TheCheshireKhajiit   Uh woo woo! Somebody’s in trouble! Good ...   Oct 20 2020, 01:38 AM
Renee   Yes Acadian, Sugar Bombs sound disgusting! And...   Oct 25 2020, 04:27 AM
SubRosa   I do not think I have ever had a character sleep i...   Oct 25 2020, 05:17 AM
TheCheshireKhajiit   I do not think I have ever had a character sleep ...   Oct 25 2020, 04:02 PM
Acadian   Nice to hear some details of her daily routine as ...   Oct 25 2020, 06:49 PM
Renee   SubRosa -- Yes beds are sleepable in Common House,...   Nov 4 2020, 06:09 PM
Acadian   You did a great job of making Miss VD’s stay in ...   Nov 4 2020, 10:01 PM
SubRosa   Interesting little bit of Wasteland Criminal Justi...   Nov 6 2020, 07:56 AM
Renee   Thanks so much. You folks are encouraging. :)   Nov 10 2020, 02:35 AM
Renee   In the last episode: Taneesha Jones got out of jai...   Nov 14 2020, 09:39 PM
Acadian   I like the little reminder of what happened 'i...   Nov 15 2020, 07:29 PM
SubRosa   Q Tip, I love your names! The Chainsaw Prince ...   Nov 16 2020, 02:44 AM
Renee   Miss Florens: Ha ha ha ha that is true! Those ...   Nov 28 2020, 05:33 PM
Renee   I am returning to MVD today. :cake: The first port...   Feb 21 2021, 06:23 PM
macole   As the feeling “do I really want to do this” s...   Feb 22 2021, 12:18 AM
Acadian   Thanks again for the 'In our previous episode...   Feb 22 2021, 06:13 PM
SubRosa   Oh noes Tan, don't go down that road! The ...   Feb 25 2021, 07:46 AM
Renee   Yes, macole, that bell is about to toll. :cake: Is...   Mar 7 2021, 05:39 PM
Acadian   Nice job of continuing to reference what Sunnyvale...   Mar 7 2021, 09:30 PM
SubRosa   Vicious D is back! VD is back in her old gang...   Mar 8 2021, 01:22 AM
Lopov   :lol: I wouldn't trust Slick Rick either....   Mar 23 2021, 08:15 PM
Renee   Acadian: Yes, well... I hope she isn't about t...   Apr 4 2021, 02:51 PM
Renee   .., [size=3]Chapter 16 -- Reinstated with the Ra...   Apr 4 2021, 06:21 PM
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Acadian   New gun, new doo and new friend! Miss VD...   Apr 5 2021, 01:02 AM
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Renee   Yes Lopov, I'd imagine since she's already...   May 1 2021, 02:37 PM
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Lopov   Taneesha's going to the police station! Qu...   May 9 2021, 09:31 PM
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Renee   Chorrol's quite busy today. :) The new Stormcr...   May 15 2021, 04:36 PM
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Acadian   Lol, I think I liked Starsky better when he kept h...   May 24 2021, 08:25 PM
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