I was surprised to find that people other than me read my story...thanks for your thoughts everyone...

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It was quite apparent to the guards what he was doing there, one of them had seen him climbing the balcony and he warned the others. Kiln lept to the roof next to him and quickly dropped off the side of the building letting himself slide down the hillside onto the ground.
He landed on his stomach and struggled to get to his feet quickly. He ran down a nearby hill surpassing the stairway and continuing to run towards the river. The drop off that led into the river was ahead of him and without thinking he jumped in, landing in the shallowest part in town.
He hurt his leg when he landed and couldn't stand so he slid on top of a mound of mud sticking above the water. The guards finally reached the edge, realizing he had been hurt they took their time in getting down to him.
His weapon was taken and he was stripped of his chestplate. At least he had put up a fight before being captured, that's how he thought of it anyways but the guards felt differently about the matter and were enraged that he hadn't stopped when asked.
The guards bound his hands and forced him to walk to the imperial fort and jail just outside of town. He felt the reprocussions of running from them as they violently escorted him to their destination, if he didn't keep pace with the guards then they hit him in the back and side of the head. Every step felt horrible as he felt the bone shift in his leg, he was sure it was broken now.
He finally arrived at the jail and was locked away before a healer was sent to look at his leg. His belongings had been taken from him and only the clothes he had wanted so badly to rid himself of were with him.
He wasn't sure when he would be released and he had no regrets about running he wished only one thing, that the river had been deeper where he had jumped in.
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What do you guys think?
He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche