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Adella
post Jul 2 2021, 03:42 PM
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This thread is for short pieces or tales which are not necessarily part of anything larger, but standalone as is. I invite any participation and comment upon content is welcome. I would make a plea for sincere works please and not jokey one liners hmmm.

Please also just include ‘End’ at the…end of the piece. So that others may know it is safe to start adding comments without unintentionally interrupting your creative flow.

Adella smile.gif



Let me include an example of the kind of intended content. I wrote this following a battle in Falskaar. There is no more, no lead in, no continuation. You enjoy what it is (or not) as it stands.

“Hmmm, I just had a thrilling fight. I had returned to a camp where some bandits had respawned. The fights were so so with largely straight kills.

Most were already dispatched when this enraged regular Thug caught up with me in the courtyard. We engaged with the usual swipes, power attacks and blocks suddenly he made an over arm power attack which I dodged by moving left, and before he could complete his swing, I brought my sword across in a waist high flat arc from right to left
My razor sharp Dragonbone blade slashed a line right across his bare gut. The rent flesh opened like a vomiting mouth, spilling his intestine at his feet.

The vile pile of green and red bile sat there steaming in the chill crisp morning air.
His trembling fingers released his redundant sword and his confused questioning eyes locked with mine for a second before he dropped to his knees.

In slow motion it seemed, he looked down at the mess of guts and in his delirium he vainly tried to scoop them back into his gaping belly. I twisted my boot into his oozing entrails ending the fruitless attempt. He looked up at me with water filled eyes, the anger replaced with a deep sadness. Perhaps he was thinking of some loved one he knew he would never see again, I can’t know. He seemed to be trying to say something, but the shock reduced it to a stammering “I..I..I” and he began to wobble.

I took a brief pity upon him. “Shsh baby” I cooed to him, bending down and smoothing his greasy hair back from his dirt and blood smeared face. In a moment we both reached an unspoken understanding. A courtesy between combatants.
“Th..th..thank y..you” he managed with a grunted whisper.
I stood. My sword sank into his pain and it was over.

It was one of those special moments we occasionally face in the heat of battle. A few seconds which extend out of time and remain with us always.””
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Renee
post Jul 4 2021, 01:17 PM
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Aw. I remember clubs. wub.gif That brought back a lot of fond feelings & memories. Being smashed. Wandering around in half-dark, dancing with friends or strangers. Getting flirted with (back when I was actually flirtable, ha).

There was a disco night in Baltimore way back in the '90s. Remember how each new decade would start to look back 20 years in the past? Like, during the '70s, there was Happy Days and Grease? Media and trends had this habit of going back 20 years. Maybe not. But the idea in the '90s was this resurgence of disco at this one club. I had two sets of friends back in those days: one set were more like rockers & hippy-types who would DIE if they had to go out on a disco floor. The other set were a few who loved going dancing, just wanted to have fun. cool.gif

Anyway, brought back memories.

A million ways to spend our time...
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I'll drop a line


Where is Aprés Noir?



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Pseron Wyrd
post Aug 20 2021, 08:59 PM
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QUOTE(Renee @ Jul 4 2021, 08:17 AM) *

A million ways to spend our time...
When we get back
I'll drop a line


The Doors! I had the privilege of seeing the Doors once. They were my favorite band when I was a teen.

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