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post Nov 22 2020, 04:41 PM
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When the dream began, she found herself lying in a cart, lying in hay, lying still, half-hiding from the others. Part of her wanted to be out there with them, while another part felt quietly content to stay right there. Right in that haypile. Staying still, and keeping quiet. It's this latter, secondary part which attained.

The scene was heavily pastoral. Lots of trees, green with foliage. Sunlight and blue skies. A few puffy clouds, a perfect sort of day. The sounds of others around her. The cart she was in had been drawn off to the side, placed in shadow. The horse which had brought it here must have been tethered somewhere else. As she lay in the cart, she began to feel rather lonely. Sad, and lonely, despite the others cavorting nearby.

They were there for her. All of them, gaily awaiting her presence. Dressed in finery. The women wearing whites, pinks, and light blues. Maids and maidens. The men, dressed more somberly, but the sounds from their revelries were no less delighted and cheerful.

Where is she? Where is Laprima?

Someone was calling. A man, sounding a bit tipsy with wine, perhaps. Yet his voice contained an edge of concern. And then, the voice of one of the ladies...

We should go find her! She's probably near! She's going to miss out!

She sank lower, hiding within hay. She could hear them coming, getting nearer, occasionally calling out to her. She cowered. Not with fear, but with some sort of distress. Lonely she was, and part of her did want to join the others.

She scrunched within the hay as footsteps approached and circled the cart. She held her breath. Eventually, the footsteps moved on. Small relief; she exhaled. They hadn't discovered her. So she took a chance. Got situated upon her arms, and raised her head about a foot, attempting to peer over the cart's side. As she did so, she noticed there was a knot in its wooden planking. For no reason at all (other than, this is a dream, and in dreams we sometimes do strange things) she pushed upon this knot, and the knot fell out, leaving a hole. She squinted her left eye, viewing outside of the cart, only to see vague shapes of the departing couple, heading off into a cabin. Still calling out, still calling her name.

...And that's when she noticed the man with the dog.
...He stood off to the side of the meadow, nearer to the woods.
...He stood in shadow. He wore a jerkin of white and black. He beckoned to her.

You there! I can see you, he said quietly. Despite using a soft tone, she could hear his voice clearly, in the surreal way which dreams can magnify. I can see you, and I mean no harm. Why do not you approach me?

She felt a stab of fear. How can he view me, hiding within this cart? But then, she relaxed. For the man was merely a boy. A boy she recognized from her youth. And this boy was her brother.

Laprima! he called. Come hither, posthaste!

And so she did.

She rose from the cart, took a moment to brush stray strands of hay from her clothings, and then ran swiftly toward her brother, skirts ruffling below. She noticed that the dog which had been there a moment ago had vacated, or vanished. She looked to her brother as she drew nearer. And her brother smiled up at her in his typically mischievous way. A smile she hadn't seen since they were, in fact, both children. Her previous feelings of loneliness were gone.

You should depart! her brother said to her, dancing around her with gaited elan. Head on! Depart hence toward Solitude! And do as they say! ... These folks you see in their fabled costumes, all of them here, are of nothing to you! ... To us! .. They mean nothing! ... A wretched lot! ... So onwards must you go! ... Your man, he awaits your presence! And you shall be in high company! Just dandy! Just peachy!

She felt elation at his words. Her brother, right there before her. 'Whatever is to come, would be fine,' he was telling her, seemingly tapping within her thoughts, her hopes, her fears.

Elija, she said to him.

Yes, sister!

She was weeping by now.

Her hands raised to embrace him. But just then, a flash of emotion overcame her. A mixture of revolting sickness, and sweet delight. She recoiled, stumbled backwards in disgust...

Laprima Donnaugh awoke, bolt upright, her eyes teary. Her bed quarters around her, her 8 year-old feline dozing by her side. She'd just had a dream. Her thoughts were racing, so she consciously made an effort to remember all she could. ... Her brother .... A cart ... Some people walking by in gay costume ... A dog by the side of the forest ... Slowly, she pieced it all together. After a minute or so, she sat up in bed, inked her quill and began to scribble words quickly in her journal.

After she had recalled all she could, she realized she was in agreement with her brother. She would head to Solitude.

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post Apr 17 2022, 12:20 PM
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Spring has sprung in Maryland. cool.gif wub.gif The weather is really nice lately. This means two things: 1). I'm going to be outside more often and 2). this might be the last Laprima of Spring 2022. I stop playing Skyrim when it starts getting warm. So maybe this'll be the last one, or maybe there will be one more, we'll see.

@ Acadian-- YES!!! Yes, exactly. Drug dealers never seem to use their product. The ones that do screw things up. I'm not saying this will happen to him, but yes... astute observation, there. Chamany also misled his girlfriend, and got her involved in something she'd normally not consider. Tsk, tsk.

@SubRosa -- Beverly Hills Cop. cool.gif Axel Foley discovered the cocaine was packed in coffee! Which he'd seen before in his home turf of Detroit. (Pretty sure he was in Detroit.)

The skooma scene is a combination of speed and acid. We had pink hearts in high school in the '80s, really bad stuff for a teenager to be dealing with. They'd pick you up, and you'd be UP, but then they'd also let you down just as fast. That crash was horrible! .. Laprima just dealt with a crash. sad.gif And yes, the visuals were LSD or shroom-inspired.

@Lopov -- From her perspective, Laprima is torn about her money. She's delighted, because she's going to realize she doesn't need to mooch off her relatives anymore. But the money is also "dirty". So she doesn't know what to do about it, yet. But I think she'll keep it.

Because from my perspective, it'll be fun to have a rich character!

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But what if Sybille overheard Laprimma's and Chamany's conversation?


Whoa.


@macole-- Sky Pilot! wacko.gif Just you wait and see, sir.


@WellTemperedClavier -- Ah thanks. And glad you have joined us in Fan Fiction, and can't wait to read your story as well. smile.gif Daria's a doll.

I rolled Laprima in 2017, and over the years came up with a bunch of ideas for her story. But the problem was, I couldn't get to her because I hadn't finished Skyrim's main quest yet! I really wanted to get the MQ done first. laugh.gif But I'm a slow gamer. So this didn't happen until last year, January 2021, by then I had dozens of Laprima ideas written on a Notepad page.

So yeah, some of the ideas come from all that time, but others (like her interest in architecture) show as I'm writing.

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The grand buildings and lofty perch sell the idea that this is an important place with a lot of authority--exactly how the Empire's showcase Hold should look.


I know, right? cake.gif Have some cake, Clavier.

Next story should be up in a few...



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post Apr 19 2022, 10:35 AM
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QUOTE(Renee @ Apr 17 2022, 12:20 PM) *

The skooma scene is a combination of speed and acid. [...] And yes, the visuals were LSD or shroom-inspired.

I got surprised by that scene, I must say. Going by the effects assigned to skooma in vanilla Oblivion, it is more like Speed or Cocaine or a similar stimulant, not a hallucination-inducing substance. But of course you are free to imagine whatever you like there! biggrin.gif So then skooma from Black Marsh makes you see things... wacko.gif

I'm enjoying your story, even if I don't comment every time. Others beat me to it, and I don't feel like repeating things... blink.gif


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Renee   The Saga of Laprima Donnaugh   Nov 22 2020, 04:41 PM
treydog   It is wonderful to have new Renee writing! An...   Nov 22 2020, 08:43 PM
SubRosa   This felt like a dream from the start, which is ne...   Nov 23 2020, 07:05 AM
Acadian   I'm so pleased to see you finally posting some...   Nov 23 2020, 02:26 PM
macole   A good beginning left me looking forward to readin...   Nov 23 2020, 05:35 PM
Renee   Hey, thanks you all. :) :Hug: :cake: Sorry I'v...   Dec 7 2020, 04:25 PM
macole   Laprimma Donna was an independent beauty parlor l...   Dec 10 2020, 06:56 AM
Renee   Hey look at that, There's some Dion. Haven...   Dec 11 2020, 03:55 PM
Renee   I don't remember what race Laprima is, pretty...   Jan 22 2022, 02:34 AM
Renee   . [font=Palatino Linotype]They weren't suppos...   Jan 23 2022, 06:16 PM
SubRosa   I love the remark that Elisef never slouched on he...   Jan 23 2022, 07:53 PM
Lopov   Nice touch about mentioning ringing bells in the b...   Jan 23 2022, 08:02 PM
Acadian   A tantalizing arrival in Solitude that raises as m...   Jan 23 2022, 09:31 PM
Renee   @Rosa-- Yes, Elisif the Fair never slouches upon h...   Jan 29 2022, 03:54 PM
Renee   . ________ [font=Franklin Gothic Medium]Arrival ...   Jan 30 2022, 03:43 PM
SubRosa   This mysterious skull man is certainly mysterious,...   Jan 30 2022, 07:46 PM
macole   Did the guards get the message of Laprima's ex...   Jan 30 2022, 08:45 PM
Acadian   This is fun, as you gradually reveal tidbits of in...   Jan 30 2022, 09:15 PM
Lopov   Nice, each story is more interesting than the one ...   Jan 31 2022, 07:21 PM
Renee   Hello, I'm finally back. New computer's on...   Feb 19 2022, 04:46 PM
Renee   . ___________ [font=Franklin Gothic Medium]Aunt E...   Feb 19 2022, 05:39 PM
Lopov   Great portrayal of the conversations taking place ...   Feb 19 2022, 07:20 PM
SubRosa   Gosh, poor Laprima sure is anxious about meeting h...   Feb 19 2022, 08:05 PM
Acadian   Finally we get to hear some of the inner thoughts ...   Feb 19 2022, 09:34 PM
Renee   Great portrayal of the conversations taking place...   Mar 1 2022, 04:52 PM
Renee   . _______________ [font=Franklin Gothic Medium]Re...   Mar 5 2022, 11:58 AM
SubRosa   I love the mention of the variegated surfaces and ...   Mar 5 2022, 07:34 PM
Acadian   Neat episode! We continue to learn more about...   Mar 5 2022, 09:26 PM
Lopov   Each story that you post, is a cliff hanger of sor...   Mar 9 2022, 01:15 PM
Renee   Thanks you all. Sorry if this story is lacking the...   Mar 12 2022, 06:52 PM
Renee   . __________________________ [font=Franklin Gothi...   Mar 12 2022, 08:50 PM
Lopov   An enjoyable and very interesting peek into Laprim...   Mar 12 2022, 09:10 PM
Acadian   Ahah, so SubRosa was spot on labeling Laprima...   Mar 13 2022, 01:18 AM
SubRosa   I love their game of dare, that is not just hiding...   Mar 13 2022, 02:03 AM
macole   The trouble with hoping for the turning of old pag...   Mar 13 2022, 06:30 AM
Renee   @ macole-- that's thoughtful and sweet of you ...   Mar 27 2022, 02:31 PM
Renee   . ________________________________ [font=Franklin...   Mar 27 2022, 09:04 PM
Acadian   An enlightening walk through Solitude, as Laprima ...   Mar 28 2022, 08:38 PM
SubRosa   "Lucky for you, I possess a forgiving nature....   Mar 28 2022, 09:19 PM
Lopov   An interesting depiction of the walk through the t...   Mar 31 2022, 06:44 PM
Renee   Hello. It is Sunday and cloudy outside. Still pret...   Apr 3 2022, 01:22 PM
Renee   . ___________________ [font=Franklin Gothic Med...   Apr 3 2022, 05:04 PM
Acadian   A delightful delve into what Laprima knows of Cham...   Apr 3 2022, 08:50 PM
Lopov   And there he arrives...the mysterious man of Lapri...   Apr 5 2022, 07:58 PM
SubRosa   Chamany has an ominous last name. I wonder if a ce...   Apr 5 2022, 08:35 PM
Renee   Thanks [color=#336666]Acadian, you are so kind. An...   Apr 10 2022, 01:37 PM
Renee   . _____________ [font=Franklin Gothic Medium]Reve...   Apr 10 2022, 02:58 PM
Acadian   Oh, this is likely to not turn out well. A deale...   Apr 10 2022, 08:25 PM
SubRosa   I love how you are using the old trick of packing ...   Apr 10 2022, 09:09 PM
Lopov   Uh oh, Laprimma may be rich, but I'm not sure ...   Apr 10 2022, 09:55 PM
macole   Dear Laprima, be sure to travel with a competent S...   Apr 11 2022, 06:27 AM
WellTemperedClavier   This certainly took an unexpected turn. I started...   Apr 15 2022, 08:48 PM
Renee   . _______________ [font=Franklin Gothic Medium]Vi...   Apr 17 2022, 01:32 PM
Acadian   A wonderfully done game of cat and mouse between t...   Apr 17 2022, 04:17 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Huh, so I somehow never found out that Sybille was...   Apr 17 2022, 05:12 PM
Lopov   What a thrilling and wonderful conversation at the...   Apr 17 2022, 07:47 PM
SubRosa   Well now, we are all getting to know one another, ...   Apr 19 2022, 12:48 AM
macole   Now that's the Sybille I know and love; dedica...   Apr 19 2022, 04:35 PM
Renee   Hey. So this is going to be the final chapter of S...   Apr 25 2022, 10:14 AM
Lena Wolf   [quote name='Lena Wolf' post='343678' date='Apr 1...   Apr 25 2022, 11:59 AM
Renee   . _______________________ [font=Franklin Gothic M...   Apr 25 2022, 11:27 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Sad to see that Laprima's adventures seem to b...   Apr 29 2022, 08:27 PM
Acadian   I like that Laprima has decided to deal with her s...   Apr 29 2022, 08:51 PM
SubRosa   So first level Laprimma is off to explore on her o...   Apr 29 2022, 09:57 PM
Lopov   It's been three days in the life of Laprima on...   May 1 2022, 09:30 PM
Renee   Thanks you all. Today is Laprima's real-life b...   Oct 29 2022, 10:22 AM
Renee   . ___________________________ [font=Franklin Goth...   Oct 29 2022, 11:25 AM
Lopov   What an ominous dream! I had a feeling already...   Oct 29 2022, 09:09 PM
Acadian   Thanks for the nice recap of where we are now in L...   Oct 29 2022, 11:59 PM
SubRosa   That was a creepy dream, that seemed to combine La...   Oct 30 2022, 01:22 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Good to hear from Laprima again! Dreams usual...   Nov 2 2022, 01:09 AM
Renee   January 21, 2023, here we are, folks. :santa: Tha...   Jan 21 2023, 06:34 PM
Renee   . ________________________ [font=Franklin Gothic...   Jan 21 2023, 08:17 PM
Acadian   A touching moment with Chamany as LPD enjoys that ...   Jan 21 2023, 09:29 PM
SubRosa   The Prima Donna is back! Elisef seems like qu...   Jan 21 2023, 09:45 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Boy, having a drug dealer husband does complicate ...   Jan 22 2023, 05:28 AM
macole   From pictures I've seen, fengite or alabaster ...   Jan 23 2023, 12:07 AM
Renee   Hey amigos, I am posting this week's story a c...   Jan 26 2023, 11:41 PM
Renee   . ___________________ [font=Franklin Gothic Mediu...   Jan 27 2023, 01:24 AM
macole   Viarmo, how did he ever get to such a position as ...   Jan 27 2023, 06:48 AM
SubRosa   Laprima is trying to avoid her aunt, without looki...   Jan 27 2023, 06:44 PM
Lena Wolf   The Winking Skeever? Is she going to become a wai...   Jan 27 2023, 08:02 PM
Acadian   Well, the good news is that fair Elisef didn't...   Jan 28 2023, 12:38 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Laprima's almost in an enviable position. Ever...   Feb 3 2023, 03:37 AM
Renee   So I know this tale seems a little stale, it seems...   Feb 4 2023, 02:55 AM
Renee   . ___________________ [font=Franklin Gothic Mediu...   Feb 4 2023, 04:56 AM
SubRosa   I am sure Laprima has been in plenty of taverns be...   Feb 4 2023, 07:08 AM
Acadian   Well good on LPD! She opted for getting a job...   Feb 5 2023, 09:17 PM
Renee   Oops, meant for this to say "dusk", no...   Feb 6 2023, 09:06 PM
Acadian   Ahh, thanks for the correction. I noticed that he...   Feb 6 2023, 10:46 PM
Renee   @SubRosa--She definitely has been in a few bars an...   Feb 11 2023, 02:20 AM
Renee   . __________________ [font=Franklin Gothic Medium...   Feb 11 2023, 04:49 AM
Acadian   Well, that could have gone better. . . or worse fo...   Feb 11 2023, 05:56 PM
SubRosa   I buy discounted clothing all the time. And discou...   Feb 11 2023, 08:22 PM
WellTemperedClavier   All right, let's see how Laprima's venture...   Feb 14 2023, 01:45 AM
Lena Wolf   Oof, now that can't be fun to hear from a p...   Feb 14 2023, 05:28 PM
Lopov   I fell behind but I'm catching up! Today ...   Feb 14 2023, 01:00 PM
Renee   Phew, here we go. I apologize that these last few ...   Feb 18 2023, 03:03 AM
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