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A Short Story By Kiln The Wanderer, First Fan Fiction...be gentle... |
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Kiln |
Jul 10 2005, 09:29 PM
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Forum Bard

Joined: 22-June 05
From: Balmora, Eight Plates

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This is my first Fan fiction and if anyone likes it I will add to it as time passes.
In all my adventures around Morrowind I never felt so sad as when I found a body in an ancestral tomb journal in hand. As I look at the door upon entering it was obvious that this door could only be opened from the outside and this poor adventurer had been trapped inside. I picked up the journal and read the last entry to understand what exactly had happened to this adventurer.
"I write to you for possibly the final time as I carve my final Epitaph in this wall and write my final journal entry. To know me entirely would take a lifetime. I'm not well known even in my end and likely will never be recognized for all of the great deeds I have done the great island of Morrowind. Many have never heard my name or of my accomplishments and likely never will. My greed and lust for money has led me to my end and left my task unfulfilled. In this journal I have kept entries of my accomplishments in their entirity."
I sat down gently laying my sword beside me and flipped to the front of the journal to read how he had gotten here and what had happened to him and this is what it said,
"Today I awoke from my sleep to a strange dream. The dream was not bad but I have forgotten most of it but one thing I can remember was the soft voice of a woman. You have been chosen, fear not for I am watchful." Probably a side effect of the awful drink I had been given by the guards. Oh yes I've yet to explain that I am on an Imperial prison ship. The reason is unknown to me for I have suffered a loss of almost all of my memory previous to my time on the ship. I was not the only prisoner on the ship though, there was also a strange man with pale blue skin named Jiub. His voice was deep and piercing though he was always nice and friendly. I feel sick as the boat sways in the water, it is clear that we have run into a storm on our way to our destination."
As I read the first entry in the man's journal I felt sorry for him already. He had no clue about his past. That is a horrible way to live. I knew this wasn't a safe place to continue reading so I took the journal but left all of his personal belongings on his body. I wasn't one to rob from the dead...well I was robbing an ancestral tomb so I guess that's a lie, but I still don't want to rob this particular man. I had a recall spell set to the Eight Plates in Balmora so with a movement of my hands and whispering the correct words I was lifted into darkness and appeared in the Pub.
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He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche
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Kiln |
Jul 19 2005, 10:00 PM
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Forum Bard

Joined: 22-June 05
From: Balmora, Eight Plates

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I'd like to start this part of the story by thanking everyone who has read my story and especially those who have posted what they think of it, feedback is always welcomed. BTW does anyone know how to perfectly spell that fort guy, Larrius Varro's name? I can't remember and I want this to be accurate. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Kiln awoke easily the next morning to the roll call, he was getting the hang of the schedule and it came quite easily to him. Breakfast had been putrid the first day he had arrived but now it wasn't half bad to him.
After breakfast the guards opened his cell and led him downstairs into the living quarters of the fort to speak to the warden. When the warden saw him enter he extended his hand and shook with Kiln. The man was nice and polite, he introduced himself as Larrius Varro.
The man said he wanted to speak with him about doing a little deed for him and Kiln agreed to listen.
"In the fight yesterday I saw that you had a decent skill with the blade...I might could use your help. I'd like to make an agreement with you for our mutual benefit if you would be willing to listen." Larrius explained
"Alright, what did you have in mind?" Kiln asked
Larrius explained it as if it were a story it started with a noble lawman who wanted to stop a bad criminal ring but very powerful people protected their organization from the law.
This caused a problem for the lawman and it was not in his power to stop them so sometimes laws must be bent to keep the peace. With every detail it seemed as if Larrius grew more and more insane.
Kiln kept listening even though he was becoming more and more weary of the man. The man explained that the lawman in the story said a little prayer and wished a little bloodbath would happen to cleanse away the bad people. Then he added that the one to answer his prayers was Kiln.
Kiln was officially creeped out, but he continued to listen to the ramblings of the corrupt Imperial.
The Imperial wanted Kiln to help cleanse the bad people from balmora, these people were of the Commona Tong and were causing problems in town.
He informed Kiln that if something were to happen to the bad people in Balmora then he would see to it that Kiln made an unnoticed escape from the prison, Larrius also told him that he will inform the public that they were mistaken in arresting him so he could go about his life without any problems with the law.
Kiln was told to find out who the bad people were and kill them. Kiln told him he would need some time to think it over and he was returned to his cell.
He didn't like the idea of killing people just because an Imperial guard said so but he didn't know what might happen if he refused. Trying to take his mind off of the events he sat in the corner and opened the journal. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This post is huge so I'll add the journal entry and more on a different one.
This post has been edited by Kiln: Jul 21 2005, 12:56 AM
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He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche
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Kiln A Short Story By Kiln The Wanderer Jul 10 2005, 09:29 PM minque Very good! I like it....you have a nice almost... Jul 10 2005, 09:38 PM Soulseeker3.0 wow nice start Kiln. Good to see another view, ple... Jul 10 2005, 09:58 PM Dantrag I like it. Jul 10 2005, 10:17 PM Kiln Upon my appearance at the pub the patrons were sta... Jul 10 2005, 10:50 PM Kiln Sorry for the double post but it felt weird puttin... Jul 10 2005, 10:54 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job.
funny, you know, how all sorts of story... Jul 10 2005, 10:55 PM minque Wooah....So Tiren was one of the unknown guys at E... Jul 10 2005, 10:56 PM Soulseeker3.0 Minque: well those were the two I was refering to,... Jul 10 2005, 11:00 PM Kiln To Minque: Well I wanted to have a reference to yo... Jul 10 2005, 11:03 PM minque
Well as I said Iīm honoured......feel free to re... Jul 10 2005, 11:11 PM gamer10 Here you go
<:) <--- Unless they get a jo... Jul 10 2005, 11:20 PM Soulseeker3.0 alll you got to do is fund his avatar and right-cl... Jul 10 2005, 11:22 PM Kiln The night passed and he woke up to the loud swordp... Jul 10 2005, 11:35 PM minque nice nice nice.......canīt wait for the next updat... Jul 10 2005, 11:43 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job and hope the whole company thing goes wel... Jul 11 2005, 12:01 AM Kiln The boat had gone but the small dock was still som... Jul 11 2005, 02:34 AM Soulseeker3.0 good job Kiln! a mystery is at hand Jul 11 2005, 02:46 AM Kiln I really wanted people to feel like Kiln felt some... Jul 11 2005, 02:59 AM minque I think you make us feel what he feels....actually... Jul 11 2005, 03:19 AM Kiln This is a fairly long on but I hope you all like i... Jul 11 2005, 03:58 AM Kiln He sat at the table listening to the two men fight... Jul 11 2005, 09:39 AM minque I like the content really! But I have one impo... Jul 11 2005, 10:20 AM treydog Quite an interesting story- I like the vehicle of ... Jul 11 2005, 01:48 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job Kiln.
one peice of advice, it's not ... Jul 11 2005, 02:01 PM Kiln I'm glad the journal thing works out with peop... Jul 11 2005, 08:08 PM minque
Hey! I can help with that! paragraphing ... Jul 11 2005, 08:28 PM Kiln I don't actually have an e-mail address per sa... Jul 11 2005, 08:35 PM minque ok..then i might edit one of your posts.....paragr... Jul 11 2005, 08:38 PM Kiln That's cool with me completely fine. B)
Edit... Jul 11 2005, 08:39 PM minque Soo...I paragraphed all your parts.....looking a b... Jul 11 2005, 09:35 PM Soulseeker3.0 I was going to say when I opered up the topic I th... Jul 11 2005, 09:38 PM Kiln Kiln looked around and his vision was terribly blu... Jul 11 2005, 09:44 PM Soulseeker3.0 well from my little (i think) knowledge, I think y... Jul 11 2005, 09:48 PM Kiln To try and take his mind off of the events that ha... Jul 12 2005, 01:09 AM Soulseeker3.0 good job Kiln! Jul 12 2005, 01:45 AM minque Youīre doing just fine! paragraphing and all..... Jul 12 2005, 07:15 AM treydog Still doing a fine job keeping the story moving ah... Jul 12 2005, 01:34 PM Kiln Thanks everyone. :) I wanted everyone to feel con... Jul 12 2005, 06:59 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job, and I think that everyone hate cliff rac... Jul 12 2005, 09:16 PM Kell-Reevor Very good for a first fic, you have a knack for de... Jul 12 2005, 09:42 PM Kiln Hunger had descended upon him incredibly quickly a... Jul 13 2005, 12:30 AM Soulseeker3.0 good job Kiln
I will trust your judgement, Taki... Jul 13 2005, 03:28 AM Kiln :O I just realized that I failed to mention what r... Jul 13 2005, 07:31 AM Soulseeker3.0 good job, please keep updating Jul 13 2005, 04:00 PM minque Very good story here, interesting approach really.... Jul 13 2005, 10:36 PM Kiln I'm preoccupied at the moment with a few more ... Jul 14 2005, 01:13 AM Soulseeker3.0 ok, thats fine Jul 14 2005, 03:23 AM Kiln I have had more time than I had anticipated becaus... Jul 14 2005, 05:32 AM Soulseeker3.0 nice and the end!?!? what, you just starte... Jul 14 2005, 03:12 PM Kiln Kiln walked to the Silt Strider port but along the... Jul 14 2005, 06:55 PM Soulseeker3.0 creepy. keep up the good work. Jul 14 2005, 08:57 PM Kiln --------------------------------------------------... Jul 15 2005, 01:13 AM Soulseeker3.0 good job and now I will never drink to much Mazte ... Jul 15 2005, 04:14 AM minque Very good! I can well imagine Kilnīs feelings ... Jul 15 2005, 11:15 AM Kiln He sat up and looked around. The two men were sta... Jul 15 2005, 10:39 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job and Kiln leaned the lesson the hard way? ... Jul 15 2005, 11:02 PM Kiln
The lesson is, it's just never a good idea to... Jul 15 2005, 11:26 PM Soulseeker3.0 lol Jul 15 2005, 11:37 PM Kiln After finishing his drink, Kiln left the building ... Jul 16 2005, 12:59 AM Soulseeker3.0 wow keep up the good work Jul 16 2005, 01:02 AM Kiln I guess this isn't going to be such a short st... Jul 16 2005, 06:02 AM Soulseeker3.0
lol Jul 16 2005, 05:45 PM minque YaYYY! Serene is appearing again! How flat... Jul 16 2005, 04:31 PM Megil Tel-Zeke Just read you FF. it was wonderful i couldn't ... Jul 16 2005, 06:29 PM Kiln I was surprised to find that people other than me ... Jul 17 2005, 11:21 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job Kiln I like it. Jul 18 2005, 12:24 AM Megil Tel-Zeke Slightly humorous, but at the same time quite sad.... Jul 18 2005, 12:56 AM Kiln Some time had passed with Kiln moaning and moving ... Jul 18 2005, 01:29 AM Soulseeker3.0 wow another interesting character joins the plot Jul 18 2005, 01:37 AM Kiln Well since Kiln is dirt poor and he has no friends... Jul 18 2005, 03:04 AM Soulseeker3.0 treu Jul 18 2005, 03:11 AM Kiln Just got done browsing over the Mystery unleashed ... Jul 18 2005, 04:00 AM Soulseeker3.0 It seems ok kind-of strange though but it is still... Jul 18 2005, 04:13 AM Kiln Yeah, uhhhh you read it before I scrapped the whol... Jul 18 2005, 04:37 AM Soulseeker3.0
Ok Kiln thats better. :) Jul 18 2005, 02:49 PM minque Heey! You pdate faster than I read.....nice wo... Jul 18 2005, 09:57 AM gamer10 Yes, a very nice story.
It earned you a whole :) Jul 18 2005, 04:41 PM Kiln After a nights sleep he woke to morning roll call ... Jul 18 2005, 06:24 PM Soulseeker3.0 not at all this is interesting Jul 18 2005, 06:26 PM Kiln Momentarily Kiln talked to the guard about living ... Jul 18 2005, 08:10 PM Soulseeker3.0 I like it too you get some back round and all that... Jul 18 2005, 08:31 PM Kiln Kiln wondered how a simple blow to the head would... Jul 18 2005, 10:22 PM Soulseeker3.0 'k Jul 18 2005, 10:37 PM minque my my....updates! nice really nice, lots of (n... Jul 18 2005, 10:49 PM Kiln The courtyard was filled with men just talking and... Jul 19 2005, 04:57 AM Kell-Reevor I also like your easy to read writing style. Very... Jul 19 2005, 12:13 PM Soulseeker3.0 very interesting Kiln Jul 19 2005, 02:45 PM Kiln Yup the short story is pretty much out the window.... Jul 19 2005, 05:06 PM Soulseeker3.0 LOL good luck to Kiln Jul 19 2005, 05:32 PM Kiln Warning: This one is long...
---------------------... Jul 19 2005, 08:07 PM minque Ahhh you are good at fight scenes as well as the o... Jul 19 2005, 08:42 PM Soulseeker3.0 good very good, at first I was afrad you would mak... Jul 19 2005, 08:46 PM Kell-Reevor Good as usual.
Very descriptive fight scene.
Sor... Jul 20 2005, 03:42 PM Fuzzy Knight Good.. good written fighting scenes too, at least ... Jul 20 2005, 04:09 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job don't know how to spell the guy's... Jul 20 2005, 05:13 PM Kiln Kiln sat opening the journal to the last page he h... Jul 21 2005, 01:32 AM Soulseeker3.0 good job Kiln Jul 21 2005, 03:07 AM Fuzzy Knight Great Kiln.. Keep it up! ;) Jul 21 2005, 12:23 PM
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