QUOTE(Kiln @ Jul 20 2005, 10:59 PM)
One of my biggest mistakes in my Fan Fiction was that I didn't really think about adding in a detailed description of my character...before I describe him, is background history allowed?
Yeah.. its a kind of discription so go ahead, I dont mind..

But what I try in my Fan Fictions, at least the one I'm working on now is shaping my character in the early pages of the story so you get to 'know him' better, and because he is in such a young age, it will be like the background before I start taking some long jumps over months and maybe years
