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post Jul 19 2005, 06:42 PM
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I was going to update my other story, but I was like, to heck with that. I found the urge to continue the story of my RP character was much too strong to resist. So here is the first chapter.

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"No, I can't keep 'im, can't afford to pay for the amount of care he'd need." The man said, standing up and brushing a few crumbs off his shirt that had managed to survive the full utilization of his mouth. He placed his old leather hat back onto his head, forcing it to mix once again with his grimy, unkempt hair.

The lady, who was sitting almost directly across from him, was basically begging.

"Please, not another of my children!" She cried out desperately, tears running down her face. She had been hoping he might change his decision, make the first exception.

His features did not change nor soften at all, he stayed firm in his decision, and he was getting a little annoyed at her.

"I told ya, if you don't listen, you'll go as well." He said angrily, grabbing the child they were discussing and heading outside, at a fast stride.

15 Years - Chapter 1

Niran woke up, rubbing his eyes, and looking tiredly around. He rose from bed, bathed, then donned a clean pair of clothes. They weren't goning to stay clean for very long, he was going to see what he could find in the forest today.

He strode down the stairs and nearly stumbled when he came to the bottom, his mind tended to wander off from his boring life.

Sitting at the breakfast table, he noticed his sister and mother where already there. Where was his father? He normally did not leave till night, to avoid pirates and such traveling the ocean.

He decided to ask the question,

"Mother, where has father gone to this morning?" Niran used his normal, carefree tone. Making sure he didn't sound the least bit worried.

His mother turned to him,

"Well Niran, you know he's been very busy lately. Latest shipments are to Summerset Isle, far off place that is." She said knowingly, while signing some piece of paper hecouldn't manage to read.

Niran's mother spent most of her time studying and trying to learn enough to keep up with him, though it wasn't an easy task. She often spent nearly a whole week in her study, only coming down for meals, and the occasional walk.

"No school today, I suppose." She said, sipping a strong smelling drink. She put the cup down on the table and looked at him.

"No mother, today we have off." He said, his voice sounding a bit disapointed, though he did have much to do still. He shifted in his seat, and begin to eat.

After the meal had ended he excused himself from the table and told his mother that he'd be leaving later today, because staying in the house was much too boring.

"I suppose so," she said, warily granting him permission, "Be sure to stay in town, no wandering off." She knew that telling him would do no good, he was bound to run off somewhere.

His younger sister, Sidria, who had been silent all this time spoke up, giving her own theory as to where Niran was running off to.

"Going and seeing girls are we?" she said smirking, brushing her beautiful and lengthy hair back.

Niran blushed looking down before looking to his mother for help.

"Of course not, don't be silly." Was the only thing he said in response, it's what he normally said when she started picking on him.

"It's none of your business if he is," his mother added, though she couldn't supress a little smile as she headed up the stairs to the top floor. She really did wonder about that boy sometimes.

Niran rolled his eyes and headed outside, not watching what his sister chose to do next. What did this new day have in store for him . . .

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post Jul 22 2005, 04:40 AM
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The man stood on the side of the road, that turned into a dark and foul smelling alleyway, walking forward at a stride, he placed the toddler down on the cold brick pavement. It laughed as he placed it there, and he almost hesitated, how innocent it looked.

Stop it, you old fool. the last one was like this too.

Turning around he walked out, seeing the moon shining in front of him, very beautiful it looked as he gazed up at it.

He began to walk even farther, when he heard the toddler cry. Turning around he stared at it, "Quiet, don't wake everyone," he told it sternly, shaking his head at it.

It went silent, and he turned around once more, only to turn back again, sighing.

"Ah, I almost forgot this," and he pulled a piece of paper from his pocket. He then proceeded to place it onto the ground near the toddler, and it just stared up at him with those wide defenseless eyes.

Curious himself as to what the paper read, he picked it up and looked at it, having not written it himself.

It read:

Niran

15 Years - Chapter 2

Niran stood, gazing in awe at the brand new ebony longsword, it was reflecting the sun beautifully, having been placed by the window.

The owner of the armory turned staring greedily at Niran, he knew that the boys family was the wealthiest in town.

"So you like it, eh boy?" he asked, trying to hide the sound of greed that would normally have been very easy to pick up. The armorer was wiping down a shield with what looked like a small rag.

"Yes sir, and the name is Niran." Niran turned and held out his hand to shake the armorers.

"Teach you manners, they have haven't they. Very well too." The man however did not shake Niran's hand and went on busily polishing the shield "Can I get you anything, a new sword perhaps?" He said putting down the shield and turning his own gaze towards several on the wall, "We have some brand new ones made of silver, hanging on the wall too your left. You always liked silver, however you seemed rather interested today-" The armorer stopped, noticing Niran wasn't paying him much attention, he frowned.

Niran pulled his own silver longsword half way out of it's sheath and stared at it, inspecting it as carefully as he could.

"No sir, my own sword is fine for the time being." Niran said sighing inwardly, he fully sheathed it and said "Now if you'll excuse me, I must be going." With that, he turned around and headed out the door rather hastily.

It was raining, having just started the streets were only lightly muddy.

When outside, Niran looked both ways to see what might interest him. He spotted it, well her that is.

Actually, it was more like a coincidence, they happened to be leaving different buildings at the same time, they happened to turn and face eachother at the same time, and they happened to walk in eachothers direction.

Niran looked straight forwards as she passed, having to restrain himself from staring at her again. He was nearly four feet away when she turned and asked

"You're Niran aren't you?"

Shocked, Niran turned around, only to be shocked again by the beauty of this girl, she definitely wasn't from around these parts. She looked like a dunmer.

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gamer10   Niran - The Years Before   Jul 19 2005, 06:42 PM
Kiln   Neat...so this is to be the story of your RP guy t...   Jul 19 2005, 06:46 PM
MerGirl   Well, it's a good start. :) The only thing ...   Jul 19 2005, 07:27 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Agree with MerGirl, its not to much talking... be...   Jul 19 2005, 07:33 PM
Konradude   It is very good, but it is lacking in detail. Mayb...   Jul 19 2005, 07:31 PM
gamer10   That prologue was written yesterday, I guess the q...   Jul 20 2005, 12:07 AM
minque   Ahh nice to hear more about Niran....he seems very...   Jul 20 2005, 08:49 AM
Kell-Reevor   Good story. I'm not too concerned with the la...   Jul 20 2005, 05:04 PM
Kiln   Nice picture on the first post, it looks so peacef...   Jul 22 2005, 09:12 AM
gamer10   "He had been spotted by an Imperial Legion Of...   Jul 22 2005, 03:43 PM
gamer10   15 Years - Chapter 4 Niran kneeled down and took ...   Jul 24 2005, 09:09 PM
minque   Very nice Gamer!!! and a great picture...   Jul 24 2005, 10:14 PM
gamer10   Thanks, I was nearly half way through chapter 5, t...   Jul 24 2005, 10:30 PM
MerGirl   Very good! :goodjob: Hope to see more of this...   Jul 24 2005, 10:47 PM
Kiln   Very good...I gotta read the next part, I'm dr...   Jul 25 2005, 12:03 AM
gamer10   15 Years - Chapter 5 Niran opened his eyes, and s...   Jul 25 2005, 12:30 AM
Kiln   :lol: Haha! Man, Niran is no good with women ...   Jul 25 2005, 12:38 AM
gamer10   Really, damn they're supposed to be martians...   Jul 25 2005, 12:44 AM
Kiln   I'm sure you got what I meant...well maybe no...   Jul 25 2005, 12:51 AM
gamer10   Actually, that immaturity in the RP is only tempor...   Jul 25 2005, 12:59 AM
Mazuk   Wow awesome job gamer. Seems I have been out to l...   Jul 25 2005, 01:37 AM
gamer10   15 Years - Chapter 6 Niran tore throught the fore...   Jul 25 2005, 05:12 AM
Kiln   Good update, I like how you progress so quickly fr...   Jul 25 2005, 05:34 AM
gamer10   Here's a good picture of Faili. http://i17.pho...   Jul 25 2005, 05:36 AM
Kiln   Thats a nice pic gamer. :) I just read more of th...   Jul 25 2005, 05:39 AM
gamer10   15 Years - Chapter 7 Niran stood outside, looking...   Jul 25 2005, 08:41 PM
Dantrag   Cool. Niran is going to be killed. by a theif. i...   Jul 25 2005, 09:22 PM
gamer10   Or so we think *eyes dart around* Obviously not, ...   Jul 25 2005, 09:23 PM
MerGirl   Very good that you updated it! :goodjob: A ...   Jul 25 2005, 09:25 PM
Dantrag   A fellow fan of the almighty band named The Mars V...   Jul 25 2005, 09:25 PM
gamer10   Yes master Yoda. :P :D   Jul 25 2005, 09:33 PM
Kiln   Nice, a little vague on details but still good. :)   Jul 25 2005, 09:34 PM
Dantrag   To add to mergirl's post... there are a lot o...   Jul 25 2005, 09:36 PM
gamer10   Guess what, I think my next chapter will have 400 ...   Jul 25 2005, 09:44 PM
Kiln   If you really want to annoy people then you shoul...   Jul 26 2005, 12:28 AM
gamer10   15 Years - Chapter 8 Niran's breathing was so...   Jul 26 2005, 06:44 PM
Dantrag   This is an...erm....interesting relationship. So...   Jul 26 2005, 06:50 PM
gamer10   BD Niran will be Niran. :lol:   Jul 26 2005, 06:51 PM
Kiln   I think she's got multiple personalities.hehe ...   Jul 26 2005, 06:56 PM
gamer10   15 Years - Chapter 9 Niran sulked forwards, walki...   Jul 27 2005, 05:56 PM
Dantrag   What a clumsy dude. :lol: still good, keep it ...   Jul 27 2005, 06:16 PM
Channler   Nce gamer, keep it up.. lol cause its helluva bett...   Jul 27 2005, 07:45 PM
MerGirl   Very quick update, and good job! :goodjob: I...   Jul 27 2005, 08:05 PM
Kiln   I just caught the update, nice job...violent storm...   Jul 27 2005, 08:20 PM
gamer10   Look out! A TORNADO IS RIGHT BEHIND YOU...   Jul 27 2005, 08:22 PM
gamer10   15 Years - Chapter 10 Niran kicked the door in fr...   Aug 1 2005, 04:05 PM
Kiln   Niran is sarcastic even when he thinks he could di...   Aug 1 2005, 04:27 PM
Dantrag   Cool update, though it should have been longer. :...   Aug 1 2005, 04:51 PM
Mazuk   Nice Update Gamer. Keep up the good work.   Aug 1 2005, 09:07 PM
Dantrag   :lol: When I said "it should have been longe...   Aug 2 2005, 04:11 AM
gamer10   :P Well, another update probably won't co...   Aug 2 2005, 04:06 PM
Kiln   Oh you updated...Niran changed...and then went bac...   Aug 3 2005, 05:49 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Oooh.. this is good with another update, very well...   Aug 3 2005, 09:51 AM
treydog   Some good writing here- wonder if we might find ou...   Aug 4 2005, 04:09 PM
minque   Hey....nice update, itīs always nice to learn more...   Aug 7 2005, 08:40 AM
gamer10   This update came after a longer break than usual. ...   Aug 21 2005, 01:53 AM
Kiln   That chapter was really good, lots of emotion...I ...   Aug 21 2005, 02:28 AM
Red   Nice Gamer. Awesome emotion.   Aug 21 2005, 03:02 AM
treydog   Niran certainly seems to have a great deal of ange...   Aug 22 2005, 03:10 PM
gamer10   16 Years - Chapter 2 Niran couldn't move, a r...   Aug 27 2005, 10:22 PM
Kiln   Very nice gamer, unfortunately the way you write i...   Aug 27 2005, 11:55 PM
treydog   Nice update- gives some insight into Niran's t...   Aug 29 2005, 02:05 PM
gamer10   16 Years - Chapter 3 Niran looked up from his boo...   Sep 10 2005, 01:52 AM
Dantrag   Gah! the mushiness! Still good though. g...   Sep 10 2005, 01:57 AM
Kiln   I loved this part, lots of emotion, and his surrou...   Sep 26 2005, 12:14 AM
gamer10   Well, after more than a month of break in my writi...   Oct 24 2005, 10:26 PM
Mazuk   Nice update gamer. Keep up the great work.   Oct 25 2005, 01:03 AM
minque   Ahh gamer! Nice update, glad you continue this...   Oct 25 2005, 05:44 PM
gamer10   16 Years, Chapter 5 A moment later and it surely...   Dec 27 2005, 02:32 AM


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