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WellTemperedClavier
post Oct 5 2023, 04:47 PM
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Apologies. For personal reasons, I'm choosing to remove this story. I may repost it in the future. This is absolutely not the fault of anyone here; you've all been gracious readers, and I'm so honored that you gave me your time. I only ask that you accept this and respect my privacy.

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SubRosa
post Nov 14 2023, 02:29 AM
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Jeval and Treads may not have done anything illegal. But that does not mean the law won't come after them anyway. Treads clearly understand this.

Ah, and Helen does as well. Now Jeval is getting a good look at how bigotry is not simply one person calling another a bad word. It is entrenched within systems of power designed to protect those in the in-group, and oppress those in the out-group.

I recall a neo-Nazi fight club - I think it was RAM - that regularly assaulted people in public, often while the police stood by and watched. They would even post videos of it online to brag. When people fought back, they were the ones who got arrested. Not the Nazis. Eventually the FBI got involved and finally arrested a handful of them after Heather Heyer was murdered, but that was only after years.

The guards are lazy. No kidding, Kevin is one of them! laugh.gif

So Jeval is going on the lam. Poor kid. sad.gif But speaking as a writer, I recognize an inciting event when I see one. This just might be the call to action that sends Jeval down his path as the protagonist in a high fantasy tale of adventure! Or not. We will see. Granted, from the sneak peek we have seen of Jeval's future as a member of the Underground Railroad, something like that obviously does happen.

Uh oh, the city is on lockdown, because of the Nerevarine? Oh boy, this throws a wrench in the works.


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WellTemperedClavier   The Last Days of the Fashion Club   Oct 5 2023, 04:47 PM
SubRosa   Neat, a spinoff series where Jeval becomes a drug ...   Oct 5 2023, 06:02 PM
Acadian   Thanks for giving us your perspective on, and esti...   Oct 6 2023, 12:24 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Oct 8 2023, 04:21 PM
SubRosa   If you want to change the title it is not too late...   Oct 8 2023, 05:55 PM
Acadian   A dashing new look for Jeval! Bosmer-maids ca...   Oct 8 2023, 08:29 PM
SubRosa   Hey, its the Fashion Club! Jeval is right, in ...   Oct 10 2023, 03:29 AM
Renee   There definitely is a difference between a man and...   Oct 10 2023, 08:29 PM
SubRosa   And here's a thought. A male friend of mine w...   Oct 10 2023, 08:52 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Oct 12 2023, 03:51 PM
Acadian   It occurred to me during the break between your ep...   Oct 13 2023, 12:33 AM
SubRosa   Name changed. It is always nice to catch up with...   Oct 13 2023, 12:56 AM
Renee   [b]'Rosa: Yes, exactly! There's some b...   Oct 15 2023, 01:07 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Oct 15 2023, 05:34 PM
Acadian   ’Skinny stunted jungle-elves like him were the l...   Oct 15 2023, 08:29 PM
SubRosa   Treads' new friends seem a little sus. Has she...   Oct 15 2023, 09:33 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Oct 19 2023, 03:49 PM
Acadian   Satheri’s parents willfully joining in and lendi...   Oct 19 2023, 08:35 PM
SubRosa   Uh oh, it looks like one of the Sleepers has Awoke...   Oct 20 2023, 11:13 PM
Renee   Ha ha yeah, sometimes friends mess with each other...   Oct 21 2023, 06:01 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Oct 22 2023, 08:38 PM
SubRosa   Your description of the scene with the girls clust...   Oct 22 2023, 11:01 PM
Acadian   Wow, it looks like there was something to Jeval’...   Oct 23 2023, 12:04 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Oct 26 2023, 03:53 PM
Renee   Hey, quick question: what is your writing/editing ...   Oct 26 2023, 07:23 PM
SubRosa   who’s worse? The fool, or the fool who follows t...   Oct 26 2023, 07:39 PM
Acadian   Be careful, Jeval. Only Nords are allowed to pee ...   Oct 26 2023, 08:38 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Oct 29 2023, 08:40 PM
Acadian   Ahh, we get a good glimpse inside the retired Legi...   Oct 30 2023, 12:03 AM
SubRosa   I cannot help but compare Jeval here and his thoug...   Nov 1 2023, 03:05 AM
Renee   Sorry for questions, I just get curious. That is i...   Nov 1 2023, 06:03 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Nov 2 2023, 05:17 PM
SubRosa   Jeval is starting to sound like Anakin Skywalker. ...   Nov 2 2023, 11:06 PM
Acadian   Nothing like a hot bath to help one think and try ...   Nov 3 2023, 12:09 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Nov 5 2023, 05:28 PM
Acadian   We now have a pretty good idea where Treads is get...   Nov 5 2023, 09:39 PM
SubRosa   Your remark reminds me that the Tribunal is passin...   Nov 6 2023, 01:55 AM
Renee   Ah, hist sap, thought so. That's an interestin...   Nov 8 2023, 08:38 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Nov 9 2023, 04:54 PM
Acadian   Heh, after previously whining about the way Argoni...   Nov 9 2023, 09:15 PM
SubRosa   I like the little world-building nods here. Argoni...   Nov 10 2023, 01:59 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Nov 12 2023, 05:53 PM
Acadian   Caught up in the morass of local law - for doing t...   Nov 13 2023, 02:13 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Nov 16 2023, 04:43 PM
Renee   Hey, can you remind us what the date is in this s...   Nov 16 2023, 08:58 PM
Acadian   I’m not surprised that Jeval couldn’t sleep. ...   Nov 16 2023, 09:30 PM
SubRosa   It is like being at the dentist. The waiting is th...   Nov 17 2023, 02:51 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Nov 19 2023, 05:35 PM
Acadian   So Tip and Treads are off to see if the Rowenis wi...   Nov 19 2023, 09:34 PM
SubRosa   So Tre and Tip are off to the Rowenis to see if th...   Nov 20 2023, 02:32 AM
Renee   [i]This is 3E 427, so it's the same year as Mo...   Nov 22 2023, 06:11 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Nov 23 2023, 05:36 PM
SubRosa   The Dunmer are cruelest to those they love most. T...   Nov 24 2023, 05:50 AM
Acadian   It struck me as very wise of you to not have Sera ...   Nov 24 2023, 08:57 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Nov 26 2023, 05:49 PM
Acadian   This storyline has been rather a sad one overall b...   Nov 26 2023, 09:13 PM
SubRosa   Jeval made it! All the way to Hammerfell no le...   Nov 27 2023, 12:18 AM
Renee   Very true. Daria was in Sadirth Mora. Not sure how...   Nov 28 2023, 06:59 PM


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