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WellTemperedClavier
post Oct 5 2023, 04:47 PM
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Apologies. For personal reasons, I'm choosing to remove this story. I may repost it in the future. This is absolutely not the fault of anyone here; you've all been gracious readers, and I'm so honored that you gave me your time. I only ask that you accept this and respect my privacy.

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Renee
post Nov 16 2023, 08:58 PM
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Hey, can you remind us what the date is in this story? I assume it's not Third Era.... maybe I'm wrong though.

Ha har I love that. "Hey, it's raining hard outside, let's not waste a good storm!" That sounds like me in a way. And Shirley Manson, as 'Rosa points out. We both are happy when it rains.

Yeah, I'd imagine Jeval wants to sit the storm out! Even the hardiest of adventurer might only want to go out into rain to clean his/her armor off. Not much more. But Jeval prob'ly don't want to get his hair messed up.

"drinking alcohol before dusk is only for losers and nobles!"

Indeed. The background of Vvardenfell does include slavery. Which doesn't get portrayed so well in the base game, but it is something which is certainly there. Interesting how somebody like Jeval could grow up in the province, have friends who are beastfolk, and yet such thoughts are just occurring to the fair-weather chap. These are the sort of thoughts a more aware individual such as Daria has already considered, even if this consideration is not written up in Outlanders.

He still wants Quinn! wub.gif Or at least, somebody like Quinn!

Whoa, uh oh. A freaking slaver. Holy Crap. What is Jeval supposed to do? DAmn. Didn't see any of this coming. Okay, good job with the tail, lizard. Holy crap. Where is Dimartini when we need him?

Good thing it's still raining. That should wash some of the blood away, I presume. Another thing: he's all covered in mud. Maybe the witness-woman won't recognize him but he has to get OUT of here, NOW! panic.gif

Hmm. Well just because it's not technically illegal doesn't mean there won't be consequences, or somebody looking for a short wood elf hanging around a female lizard. Plenty of Dunmer in town, but how many Bosmer/Argonian combinations of friends could there be? - But here's something new: for perhaps the only time, Quinn is nearby yet Jeval isn't so obsessed with her presence.

I love the lawyer-speak!

Hmm, another thing. Isn't it technically still legal to capture and own slaves? Or has that Renrija Krin/Haus Dres (spelling, I know) stuff not made a difference yet? ... The Empire is against slavery, but it's still okay here in MW, unless things have changed. Okay, "slavers aren't supposed to operate" anymore, in so many words. Still, I'd be worried.

PHew. Well if I were Jeval, I don't think I'd even try to approach this from a legal standpoint. Maybe he can avoid going to court. Only that one woman saw him, for instance.

Whoa, they shut down the city. Uh oh. Okay, but it's not because of somebody dying in the street. That is good, I'll asssume. Maybe there'll be so much going on with these latest developments that the dead slaver will just get passed over as offcials are too preoccupied with other things.

Ah crap. Young Bosmer, yellow hair, short in stature. Jeval is done. One thing for sure: you're really doing a good job adding that paranoid feeling to the story, Clav.


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Sure, about bathhouses. There's this image that everyone was stinky (same as how it was once assumed 4,000 years ago everyone was a stoneage ape). But us humans didn't just become smart; more and more often we're learning how ancients had technology, some of which rivaled our own.

Mm hmm, about hygiene. I also remember reading somewhere how perfumes and colognes became much more popular amongst those who could afford such concoctions, during the Renaissance. ohmy.gif Yich.

WHOA! blink.gif Morrowind's name is from some other storyline, except with the change of one letter???!!! -- Now that, I did not know! I wonder if anyone tried to sue Beth because of that!

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WellTemperedClavier   The Last Days of the Fashion Club   Oct 5 2023, 04:47 PM
SubRosa   Neat, a spinoff series where Jeval becomes a drug ...   Oct 5 2023, 06:02 PM
Acadian   Thanks for giving us your perspective on, and esti...   Oct 6 2023, 12:24 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Oct 8 2023, 04:21 PM
SubRosa   If you want to change the title it is not too late...   Oct 8 2023, 05:55 PM
Acadian   A dashing new look for Jeval! Bosmer-maids ca...   Oct 8 2023, 08:29 PM
SubRosa   Hey, its the Fashion Club! Jeval is right, in ...   Oct 10 2023, 03:29 AM
Renee   There definitely is a difference between a man and...   Oct 10 2023, 08:29 PM
SubRosa   And here's a thought. A male friend of mine w...   Oct 10 2023, 08:52 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Oct 12 2023, 03:51 PM
Acadian   It occurred to me during the break between your ep...   Oct 13 2023, 12:33 AM
SubRosa   Name changed. It is always nice to catch up with...   Oct 13 2023, 12:56 AM
Renee   [b]'Rosa: Yes, exactly! There's some b...   Oct 15 2023, 01:07 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Oct 15 2023, 05:34 PM
Acadian   ’Skinny stunted jungle-elves like him were the l...   Oct 15 2023, 08:29 PM
SubRosa   Treads' new friends seem a little sus. Has she...   Oct 15 2023, 09:33 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Oct 19 2023, 03:49 PM
Acadian   Satheri’s parents willfully joining in and lendi...   Oct 19 2023, 08:35 PM
SubRosa   Uh oh, it looks like one of the Sleepers has Awoke...   Oct 20 2023, 11:13 PM
Renee   Ha ha yeah, sometimes friends mess with each other...   Oct 21 2023, 06:01 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Oct 22 2023, 08:38 PM
SubRosa   Your description of the scene with the girls clust...   Oct 22 2023, 11:01 PM
Acadian   Wow, it looks like there was something to Jeval’...   Oct 23 2023, 12:04 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Oct 26 2023, 03:53 PM
Renee   Hey, quick question: what is your writing/editing ...   Oct 26 2023, 07:23 PM
SubRosa   who’s worse? The fool, or the fool who follows t...   Oct 26 2023, 07:39 PM
Acadian   Be careful, Jeval. Only Nords are allowed to pee ...   Oct 26 2023, 08:38 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Oct 29 2023, 08:40 PM
Acadian   Ahh, we get a good glimpse inside the retired Legi...   Oct 30 2023, 12:03 AM
SubRosa   I cannot help but compare Jeval here and his thoug...   Nov 1 2023, 03:05 AM
Renee   Sorry for questions, I just get curious. That is i...   Nov 1 2023, 06:03 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Nov 2 2023, 05:17 PM
SubRosa   Jeval is starting to sound like Anakin Skywalker. ...   Nov 2 2023, 11:06 PM
Acadian   Nothing like a hot bath to help one think and try ...   Nov 3 2023, 12:09 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Nov 5 2023, 05:28 PM
Acadian   We now have a pretty good idea where Treads is get...   Nov 5 2023, 09:39 PM
SubRosa   Your remark reminds me that the Tribunal is passin...   Nov 6 2023, 01:55 AM
Renee   Ah, hist sap, thought so. That's an interestin...   Nov 8 2023, 08:38 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Nov 9 2023, 04:54 PM
Acadian   Heh, after previously whining about the way Argoni...   Nov 9 2023, 09:15 PM
SubRosa   I like the little world-building nods here. Argoni...   Nov 10 2023, 01:59 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Nov 12 2023, 05:53 PM
Acadian   Caught up in the morass of local law - for doing t...   Nov 13 2023, 02:13 PM
SubRosa   Jeval and Treads may not have done anything illega...   Nov 14 2023, 02:29 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Nov 16 2023, 04:43 PM
Acadian   I’m not surprised that Jeval couldn’t sleep. ...   Nov 16 2023, 09:30 PM
SubRosa   It is like being at the dentist. The waiting is th...   Nov 17 2023, 02:51 AM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Nov 19 2023, 05:35 PM
Acadian   So Tip and Treads are off to see if the Rowenis wi...   Nov 19 2023, 09:34 PM
SubRosa   So Tre and Tip are off to the Rowenis to see if th...   Nov 20 2023, 02:32 AM
Renee   [i]This is 3E 427, so it's the same year as Mo...   Nov 22 2023, 06:11 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Nov 23 2023, 05:36 PM
SubRosa   The Dunmer are cruelest to those they love most. T...   Nov 24 2023, 05:50 AM
Acadian   It struck me as very wise of you to not have Sera ...   Nov 24 2023, 08:57 PM
WellTemperedClavier   Removed   Nov 26 2023, 05:49 PM
Acadian   This storyline has been rather a sad one overall b...   Nov 26 2023, 09:13 PM
SubRosa   Jeval made it! All the way to Hammerfell no le...   Nov 27 2023, 12:18 AM
Renee   Very true. Daria was in Sadirth Mora. Not sure how...   Nov 28 2023, 06:59 PM


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