@Acadian: Thank you for affirming my "evocative descriptions!" Both you and trey continue to encourage me to seek different ways to describe the same old experiences. Doing this from the viewpoint of one who has never before seen snow is so much fun. And yes, dance card's getting full! Just how Lili likes it!
@Grits: We'll see the day after next why no one wants to go to Cronvangr Cave!

Fun times! But I promise Forsaken Cave will be just as fun in its own way . . . And I'm glad Star continues to entertain! He is the comic relief of this story, though he does have his more serious moments, as we will see.
@SubRosa:I had to pause and laugh a few times over your comments on this segment. Michigan guys are just like MN guys, barbecuing in February with the snow piled four feet deep and temps in the teens. "But it's balmy!"
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"But no one wants to go to Cronvangr Cave and recover it from its resting place"
No one wants to be eaten by giant spiders! Even January agrees with that!
I wrote the Cronvangr Cave section a few months ago, but just read your section with the giant Abyssal Spider only last week. I had to chuckle at our similar approaches to gigantic spiders . . . I hope you will enjoy my take coming up in more than a few weeks from now. I did mean trousers, but shortened to trous because, sorry, "trousers" just makes me think of Mad Men, and I wanted to convey an image of something more like the worn, casually cut leather pants worn by our medieval heroes. So I deliberately went with trous (never liked "pants", either, come to think of it, and "breeches" just makes me think of powdered wigs, brocaded coats and buckled shoes, soooo). As for the posts from earlier, when I made edits, every quotation mark got replaced with those odd symbols. So weird. I could go back and fix them. As Sten says, Later.
@treydog: Thank you! After seeing (and responding to) Sage Rose's post about "trous", I see you have provided me with the exact word I was trying to remember! TREWS!! So from this point forward Sten will be wearing leather TREWS! For the same reason mentioned in my response to Sage Rose, I won't go back and "fix" his bottom wear in the previous post. I'm sure Sten is fine either way. And yes, Hermir is not the only one who notices Sten's wool shirt and TREWS . . .
********************Tirdas 19 Last Seed - Tour of WindhelmMa,
Started a new letter now that I’ve sent off some coin and my last letter to you. Had to get more parchment - I have quite a bit to write about.
I now have a job that will last at least a month, and I got paid in advance too! I’m also promised half of any profits above my pay as well - it sounds almost like a partnership, except I’m not being asked to put up a stake. Still, it sounds good - The boss likes to keep busy.
My armor and blade are getting repaired now, and Lilisfina has picked up a couple more jobs for us to do once I get my gear back. Both are caves, though who knows what we’ll find in there! Wild animals, like bear and cats, most likely.
I’ll add more later, when I have more to tell.
Oengul called Sten and Lilisfina over when they left
The White Phial. He held up the zwei-hander and shook his head. “Stenvar, your blade has been damaged and repaired so often, I’m starting to see signs of failure. Next fight you get into, it might shatter on you.”
Not my da’s blade! It’s not that old. “How do you know?” Sten frowned at the iron sword. In response, Oengul tapped the blade lightly on the anvil, causing it to ring. Sten heard Lilisfina gasp and saw her cover her ears. Star whined and lowered his own pointed ears.
“See, even she hears it,” Oengul nodded at the Wood Elf. “It doesn’t make a clear ring anymore.”
Hear what? I didn’t hear anything unusual. Sten glanced at Lilisfina, who nodded confirmation. “It’s still subtle,” she said, “but I have very good hearing. And I suspect Oengul’s trained to listen for it.”
“Aye, the lass is right,” Oengul drew Sten’s attention back to himself. He nodded at Hermir, who headed within the blacksmith quarters. She returned a few moments later with a sheathed weapon in her hands. “I do have a decent replacement all ready to go, if you’re interested.” Hermir extended the long hilt of the zwei-hander to Sten.
A new blade? And me with a full purse! I was hoping to save up for a new set of armor! After a moment’s hesitation, Sten accepted the offered hilt and drew the blade from the sheath.
Steel. Polished, keen edge. Good weight and balance. He stepped back from the others to give himself room for a few test swings.
Recovery’s easy with this - better than with Da’s old blade. “It’s a very good blade,” he admitted. “Did you forge this, Oengul?”
“Hermir did,” the older smith nodded at his apprentice, who lifted her chin and squared her muscular shoulders proudly.
“You have done your master proud, Hermir,” Sten approved, returning the blade to its sheath in Hermir’s hands. “You learned well.”
The apprentice’s brows shot up in surprise, then she took a quick breath. “Th- thank you, sir,” she stammered. “I still have much more to learn.”
Sten took the sheathed blade from Hermir and studied the finely worked wood scabbard, its steel fittings gleaming in the overcast light. “How much?” He caught the glance she slid to Oengul, who nodded.
“One hundred drakes,” her voice held none of the uncertainty he had noticed in her glance.
That much? She must be good for the old man to approve such a high price.“Stennvar,” Lilisfina’s quiet voice broke into his thoughts. “What are your thoughts about this blade? Is it good, or perhaps better than your iron zwei-hander?”
“Very much so,” Sten admitted. “Steel is much more durable, and keeps its edge better than iron.”
“Then I’ll pay for it, if you like it that much.” She smiled at his startled glance. “I consider it a wise investment into your well-being.” She turned to Oengul. “And what of the armor? Do you know when it will be ready?”
“We’re starting on it right now,” Oengul responded. He met Sten’s wary gaze. “Might be a day or two, I’ll let you know when it’s ready.”
“Very well,” Lilisfina reached into her coin bag and counted out the drakes. “How much of this one hundred is actually going to Hermir for the work she’s done?”
“Seventy five,” Oengul responded. Sten shot him a glance.
Seventy five! Typically it’s more like fifty fifty! “I keep twenty five for teaching her,” Oengul continued, his gaze turning proud as he watched his apprentice hand over the baldric that would allow Sten to wear the zwei-hander at his back when sheathed. “If I had forged this blade myself, it would have been closer to one fifty.” He shrugged. “Though I doubt it would be much better than her work. She’s good with the steel - it’s the other metals she still has to master.”
“You’re generous with your apprentice,” Lilisfina remarked as Hermir moved to the forge to work the bellows.
“The girl works hard, and learns fast,” Oengul snorted. “Soon I won’t be taking commission on her steel work - they’ll be paying her smith prices soon. It’s only fair.”
“And the sooner she masters her trade,” Sten remarked, “the sooner Hermir moves on, yes?”
“Actually, I’m thinking of retiring when she gets to that point,” Oengul grinned at Hermir, “and turning this forge over to her.” He laughed at her startled glance. “What’re you looking at, girl? You’re always talking about making weapons and armor for the Stormcloaks, and right here is the place for that!” He shook his finger at her. “But you still got lots to learn, so better get back to work!”
Sten chuckled as he led Lilisfina north to the graveyard outside the Halls of the Dead. Lilisfina paused beside one of the gravestones, her gaze on the carving. “Do you think Helgird has the reavers in her care now?”
“I imagine so,” Sten responded. “What’s on your mind?”
“What will she do with their gear?”
“She’ll set it aside for us to claim, by right of combat,” he answered. “Then you can sell them to Oengul for scrap.”
“Do we need to discuss that with her?” Lilisfina glanced up at the grey sky. Star wandered among the stones, his nose moving along the ground on his own canine quest.
“Let’s stop by this afternoon, after the noon meal,” Sten suggested. “She should have the bodies ready for the fire by then.”
“Fire?” Lilisfina repeated. “Not burial?”
Sten shook his head. “Criminals don’t get buried -“ he gestured around the graveyard for emphasis. “Sacred ground is too limited. Unless they have family to pay for burial, they’re cremated and their ashes fed to the fishes.”
“Is that just Windhelm, or true of all of Skyrim?”
“Other towns and cities may do things differently,” Sten tapped the gravestone beside him, “but that’s the way it’s done in Windhelm.”
“I see, thank you,” Lilisfina’s gaze turned thoughtful, then curious. “Where to next?”
Where to, indeed? Sten spotted the archway leading north from the western end of the graveyard. “Would you like to see where the rich folks live?” He led Lilisfina to the northwestern quadrant of the walled city, tucked beneath towering mountain cliffs. “This is the Stone Quarter,” he indicated the manor homes built from hewn stone, embellished with carvings over doors and windows. He caught her shiver, and a slight frown crossed her face as she lifted her eyes to the houses ahead of them. She looked from left to right.
Sten indicated the modest manor on their right. “That’s Viola Giordano’s house.” He regarded the stone facade a moment. “She’s lived here so long, folks have forgotten where she came from, or how she comes by her income.”
“Giordano?” Lilisfina repeated. “Sounds more Nibenean than Nord.”
“You’re right,” Sten nodded agreement. “She is Imperial, but much more than that we really don’t know much beyond rumors.”
Except for one thing. “We do know that she has her sights set on Captain Lonely Gale.”
“Yes, Susanna did mention that the first night I was here,” Sten caught the amusement in her tone. “Something about how her relentless pursuit is not exactly welcomed.”
Sten laughed. “That about sizes it up.” He indicted the larger manor opposite Giordano’s home. “That one belongs to Clan Shatter-Shield,” he continued. “Torbjorn runs the trade office in the port.”
“Does he?” Lilisfina mused. “He’s the one that pays those Argonians in the port?”
“To load and unload his ships, yes.” Sten recalled the angry comments and Lilisfina’s interest in them. “I wouldn’t think it wise to bring up the question of their pay with him right now.”
Lilisfina turned to face him. He could still see the slight discomfort in her expression as she regarded him.
It’s almost as if something smells bad around here. “Come with me,” he led her to the far end of the street and stopped in front of the smallest manor house.
“Something’s not right about that house, Stennvar,” Lilisfina murmured. Now he could see the revulsion clear on her face. Star whined from his place next to her side.
“That’s Friga and Nilsine Shatter-Shield’s home,” he explained.
Just how much to tell her? “A few months ago, Friga was found brutally murdered in that house. Nilsine was so upset she moved back in with her parents in the Clan house, and this manor has been abandoned ever since.”
Lilisfina took a deep breath and let it out fiercely. “Is her body still in there?”
What? What is she talking about? “Her body was so badly mutilated, they never found all the pieces. They buried what they could find.”
Lilisfina swallowed in visible horror. “That’s dreadful. Poor Nilsine,” her voice was as soft as the misting breath from her lips. “Was she home when it happened?”
“No, she was visiting a friend in Kynesgrove,” Sten led her back south. “She was the one who found her sister’s body. They were twins, so it’s been especially difficult for her.”
Lilisfina paused and regarded Sten. “You’ll point the family out to me, won’t you?” she asked. “I’d like to know so I don’t mistakenly disrespect them.”
That’s considerate of you. “Of course,” Sten responded. He stopped by a narrow street that ran east from the Stone Quarter. “Let’s go this way.”
The path cut through the older inner city walls. Sten pointed out the huge slabs of stone that contrasted with the more modern blocks that made up the outer walls. “It is said these walls were erected by Ysgramor in the Merethic Era,” he told Lilisfina. “The outer walls were built in the First Era, and rebuilt after the Akaviri invasion in the Second.”
They came out onto the Palace Plaza, marked by three huge braziers marching down its center from the Palace to the north to the archway in the inner wall to the south. “This is the Jarl’s Palace,” Sten indicated the huge stone structure that towered at the far end. “Not sure if you want to go in there, considering the Jarl’s supposedly not fond of Elves.”
“Hmm,” Lilisfina nodded her agreement and pointed at the southern archway with a question in her eyes.
“Below the Palace Quarter you’ll return to the center of the city.” Sten led her past the guards and through the archway. He pointed out the stone structure to the right. “There’s the Temple of Talos - currently the only one in all of Skyrim.”
“And that’s Candlehearth Hall, right?” Lilisfina indicated the stone and wood hulk in front of them, rising from the lower ground. “The back side of it, anyway.” She glanced at Sten. “Where do you live, by the way?”
“I rent bedroll and storage space there,” Sten nodded at the inn. “It’s where I keep my trunk and personal belongings when I’m on a job.”
“Good,” Lilisfina nodded emphatically. She looked up at the sky. Sten followed her gaze to see the obscured glow of the sun almost directly overhead. “Time for the noon meal, yes?”
“Yes,” Sten’s stomach grumbled. “We can explore more of the city after lunch.”