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The Call of the Wind, Children of Kyne, Volume I |
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Kane |
Dec 10 2024, 03:06 PM
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Master

Joined: 26-September 16
From: Hammerfell

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I just finished up the long volume II of this series, so I thought I'd start posting them both here. This entry is one of my first real stabs at writing out a tale and one of only a couple I ever finished. The dialogue is a little stilted and the chapters are short (needed more practice) so it isn't a long read. If you are interested in reading it, I hope you enjoy! (PS, I'm too lazy to proofread this one and I wrote in 2018, so if there are any spelling or grammar errors, I apologize in advance!)
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Prologue
The morning dew lay gleaming on the lush, green undergrowth of Cyrodiil’s Great Forest as the morning sun shined through the branches of its lofty trees. Deep in the heart of the woodlands, sat a small clearing and at its center lie a large rock, covered in silky green moss. Here upon this stone, sat an impressively large brown hawk - it looked far out of place among the other birds of the province, but it was not without purpose. Sitting as still as the unmoving stone beneath it, a wanderer could have mistaken it for a small statue to some long forgotten god. Nestling its head into her wing feathers, she waited impassively for her prey. Soon thereafter, a crashing could be heard in the forests nearby. Quite suddenly, a pale, sickly looking Colovian emerged from the dense brush and scampered right through the clearing without so much as a glance at the large hawk. Craning her neck, she listened for the pursuer she was expecting.
And sure enough, the gentle footsteps of a practiced stalker could be heard approaching the clearing, following the rampant destruction of the woodland left in the wake of the panicked, clumsy runner. The hawk lifted her head and waited for this new, but nonetheless expected visitor.
Ah, I see this predator is much too clever to wander into a forest clearing. The professional that he is knows to avoid such a thing, as it is ripe for ambush. Perhaps a little encouragement is needed…
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The mercenary did not like what he saw ahead. Peering through the bramble, he intensely surveyed the clearing, looking for any sign of an ambush. The vampire he pursued had thus far been crashing through the forest like an ogre, but that may have been a ruse. Vampires, he had always thought, were usually much cleverer than this oaf was.
Hesitating outside the clearing was wasting time, but his instincts were kicked into overdrive as he approached it. Long ago he learned to trust those instincts, and many times they had been the difference between life and death. So there he sat, eyes darting around the forest opening, searching intently for signs of danger.
Quite suddenly, the once calm morning changed as a brisk northern wind began to flow through the woods, rustling the treetops and bringing a slight chill to the air. Our mercenary barely noticed the change in clime, until he heard the whispers on the wind. Startled, he relaxed his eyes, and instead strained his ears to the wind, where he swore a voice had whispered to him. The breeze fluttered once more, and this time he was positive…his name was carried gently on the wind.
Kirin...approach my child. Follow your instincts…and my voice…
Standing up nervously, he shouldered his composite bow, and walked boldly into the clearing. To his utter surprise, the hawk he’d mistaken for a statue hewn above the boulder stretched its impressive wings, and spoke to him with an undoubtedly feminine voice.
“It is time for you to return home, my child. Skyrim awaits you, and your destiny has come. Left behind will be your days of mercenary work and feeble pleasures. They matter not now, and only what you accomplish next will be of any consequence.”
This was unexpected, and temporarily froze Kirin, as a million thoughts raced through his mind. He settled on only one, though.
“And if I refuse?”
“It will matter not. The aspect of destiny is inescapable, and utterly final. Try as you might, it will simply catch up to you later, at a time when you may have less choice in its subtleties. Heed my words, and I promise you will not regret the choice to follow them.”
Kirin pondered on her words once more, and quickly realized what he was dealing with. One should not refuse the finality of the divines… He removed his helmet, and knelt on the grass before the large northern hawk.
“Lady Kyne, I see the wisdom in your words, and I pledge myself and my service to you.”
“Very well, young Kirin. Your time in Cyrodiil is at an end. Return to your fellow brothers and sisters of Skyrim, and your true journey shall begin in earnest.”
She then spread her wings once more, and took to the skies above Tamriel, flying ever northwards.skies above Tamriel, flying ever northwards.
This post has been edited by Kane: Dec 10 2024, 03:08 PM
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Renee |
Mar 1 2025, 07:33 PM
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Councilor

Joined: 19-March 13
From: Ellicott City, Maryland

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Okay, thanks for explaining. So with the third book your imagination took over more strongly, so to say. Kirin is handsome. Ha! My paladin was just at that very spot! Let me see, hold on. Yep, there he is! That's Lord Haaf-Mersey, one of my Xbox characters. Anyway, Kirin's quite a looker. He's reminiscing some better days of Helgen. Good thing that 'immense being' didn't notice your guy standing on the road. He's going into Bleak Flats Barrow, yikes. Has he ever dealt with draugr before? Here is my bookmark. http://chorrol.com/forums/index.php?s=&...st&p=359075
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Kane |
Mar 5 2025, 02:44 PM
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Master

Joined: 26-September 16
From: Hammerfell

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QUOTE(Renee @ Mar 1 2025, 01:33 PM)  Okay, thanks for explaining. So with the third book your imagination took over more strongly, so to say. Almost entirely, to the point I was nervous more than once because I had no story framework to follow. It's a leap for me. QUOTE(Renee @ Mar 1 2025, 01:33 PM)  Kirin is handsome. Ha! My paladin was just at that very spot! Let me see, hold on. Yep, there he is! That's Lord Haaf-Mersey, one of my Xbox characters. Anyway, Kirin's quite a looker. Boy, I forgot how different the game looks on Xbox. I played exclusively on my 360 from 2011 until I built my first PC in 2015. I've been running graphic mods and LODs for so long that I'd forgotten how low the draw distance was pre-SE. QUOTE(Renee @ Mar 1 2025, 01:33 PM)  He's going into Bleak Flats Barrow, yikes. Has he ever dealt with draugr before? He may not have by that point, it's been too long for me to remember. I usually explore and get up to other hi-jinks that aren't written about if they don't fit the story, so it's possible he'd been in other dungeons just to help with leveling up.
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