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ED 209
post Jul 28 2005, 09:25 PM
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Author's note: This is a brand new story, I'm sorry, but it's set on Vvardenfell. Every character in this is actually in the game, as is the location of this chapter, top marks to anyone who finds out where the following events occur. Without further delay, enjoy!.

The Ordinator.

"We can have no opinion about truth"-The Book of Dawn and Dusk

Daldrur pondered his circumstances. The interested look in his eyes, the engrossed appearance of his posture betrayed the truth, he had long since stopped listening to Raril, the bartender. "...He's got his bandit hideaway right between Ald Sotha and Bal Fell.." he droned.Daldrur merely nodded at the knowledge Raril was imparting upon him, again feigning interest with ease. Despite his placid appearance and slightly bored demeanour, Daldrur's mind was in overdrive. He was scanning the Cornerclub, looking for exits and entrances, assessing his surroundings.

"..The appalling neighbours keep traffic down..." continued Raril, fully convinced that his audience was nothing less than totally under his spell. Daldrur lowered his eyes to the bottle of flin which lay before him on the table. He could make out the vague outline of a scruffy Dunmer heading towards the door on its tinted glass. "Goodnight Felvos!" called out the over friendly bartender, but the poorly dressed drunkard was too busy wrestling with the doorknob to reply. "I'll let you out there Felvos" mused Raril, half to himself as he made for the door to let out his best customer.

"Damn fine singer that guy, damn fine. Poor swit has a bit of a problem with the mazte though. The only thing holding him back from his fortune if you ask me." the bartender informed Daldrur without looking at him. "Like my mother always said..." Raril stopped mid-sentence. Daldrur was gone. He rushed downstairs to find his elusive customer, but instead of finding him, he found a dead body, but not Daldrur's. It was another of Raril's customers, a Nord called Hylf the Harrier. Raril rushed to the lifeless corpse to help him, but he knew in his heart of hearts that there was no hope for the Nord.

A knife had been driven clean through Hylf's ringmail cuirass, into his heart at close range. Deeply traumatised by events, Raril collapsed onto the blood-stained floor and buried his face in his hands. It was then that he noticed a piece of paper in Hylf's dead hands. The murderer had placed it in his prey's hands after depriving him of his life. Raril nervously read the note. It was an honorable writ of execution.

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post Jul 29 2005, 04:02 PM
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While it is good to see a new story up, it is sad that you would prematurely end your other one.

Anyways, excellent work. I see a lot of potential with it. Not very often you find a story AGAINST the Morag Tong... or so it seems so far.
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ED 209   The Ordinator   Jul 28 2005, 09:25 PM
Intestinal Chaos   Interesting, an Ordinator with a newly created hat...   Jul 28 2005, 09:42 PM
ED 209   A good guess but not quite right. Everything wil...   Jul 28 2005, 09:51 PM
Kiln   By after the events in morrowind you do mean afte...   Jul 29 2005, 12:44 AM
Kiln   Seems pretty good, too bad about the other story y...   Jul 28 2005, 09:45 PM
Konradude   One second...how do you stab someone with a dagger...   Jul 28 2005, 10:19 PM
Dantrag   Throw it like a javelin? Super story, please c...   Jul 28 2005, 10:50 PM
MerGirl   A little vague, but I'm sure the answers will ...   Jul 29 2005, 12:06 AM
Aki   Coolies, i like it thus far. B)   Jul 29 2005, 03:41 AM
vaanic~one   Very nice, I am looking forward to the next instal...   Jul 29 2005, 11:54 AM
ED 209   He ran downstars and stabbed him. Yes. The c...   Jul 29 2005, 11:14 PM
Kiln   Strangely, when I read a Fan Fic. based in Morrowi...   Jul 31 2005, 04:42 AM
ED 209   Part Two "Hylf is dead." "Very goo...   Aug 3 2005, 07:43 PM
Florodine of Hlaalu   It was good i like the new installmeant, your writ...   Aug 3 2005, 08:08 PM
Kell-Reevor   Nice update, a bit short but thats not too bad.   Aug 3 2005, 08:41 PM
treydog   As with Prisoner 54, you let us inside the charact...   Aug 4 2005, 04:16 PM
Miazma   Very nicely written. Good grammer and spelling and...   Aug 4 2005, 07:05 PM
ED 209   Part Three Daldrur's left eye flickered, then...   Aug 4 2005, 11:35 PM


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