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post Jul 19 2005, 06:42 PM
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I was going to update my other story, but I was like, to heck with that. I found the urge to continue the story of my RP character was much too strong to resist. So here is the first chapter.

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"No, I can't keep 'im, can't afford to pay for the amount of care he'd need." The man said, standing up and brushing a few crumbs off his shirt that had managed to survive the full utilization of his mouth. He placed his old leather hat back onto his head, forcing it to mix once again with his grimy, unkempt hair.

The lady, who was sitting almost directly across from him, was basically begging.

"Please, not another of my children!" She cried out desperately, tears running down her face. She had been hoping he might change his decision, make the first exception.

His features did not change nor soften at all, he stayed firm in his decision, and he was getting a little annoyed at her.

"I told ya, if you don't listen, you'll go as well." He said angrily, grabbing the child they were discussing and heading outside, at a fast stride.

15 Years - Chapter 1

Niran woke up, rubbing his eyes, and looking tiredly around. He rose from bed, bathed, then donned a clean pair of clothes. They weren't goning to stay clean for very long, he was going to see what he could find in the forest today.

He strode down the stairs and nearly stumbled when he came to the bottom, his mind tended to wander off from his boring life.

Sitting at the breakfast table, he noticed his sister and mother where already there. Where was his father? He normally did not leave till night, to avoid pirates and such traveling the ocean.

He decided to ask the question,

"Mother, where has father gone to this morning?" Niran used his normal, carefree tone. Making sure he didn't sound the least bit worried.

His mother turned to him,

"Well Niran, you know he's been very busy lately. Latest shipments are to Summerset Isle, far off place that is." She said knowingly, while signing some piece of paper hecouldn't manage to read.

Niran's mother spent most of her time studying and trying to learn enough to keep up with him, though it wasn't an easy task. She often spent nearly a whole week in her study, only coming down for meals, and the occasional walk.

"No school today, I suppose." She said, sipping a strong smelling drink. She put the cup down on the table and looked at him.

"No mother, today we have off." He said, his voice sounding a bit disapointed, though he did have much to do still. He shifted in his seat, and begin to eat.

After the meal had ended he excused himself from the table and told his mother that he'd be leaving later today, because staying in the house was much too boring.

"I suppose so," she said, warily granting him permission, "Be sure to stay in town, no wandering off." She knew that telling him would do no good, he was bound to run off somewhere.

His younger sister, Sidria, who had been silent all this time spoke up, giving her own theory as to where Niran was running off to.

"Going and seeing girls are we?" she said smirking, brushing her beautiful and lengthy hair back.

Niran blushed looking down before looking to his mother for help.

"Of course not, don't be silly." Was the only thing he said in response, it's what he normally said when she started picking on him.

"It's none of your business if he is," his mother added, though she couldn't supress a little smile as she headed up the stairs to the top floor. She really did wonder about that boy sometimes.

Niran rolled his eyes and headed outside, not watching what his sister chose to do next. What did this new day have in store for him . . .

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15 Years - Chapter 10

Niran kicked the door in frustration, no one was at home!

He moved down the side of the house to the window and peered in, it looked as if it had been deserted for several days.

Taking a step backwards and nearly slipping, Niran brought his boot up and gave the window a good kick. When it shattered he pushed the remaining pieces of glass down using his hand.

Which wasn't a good idea.

He winced as a small jagged piece cut through his palm but he didn't stop. When all the glass was off he climbed up on the sill and dove in through the window, landing on the floor. Right on top of the glass.

He let out a groan, and rolled over. The rain was now coming in through the window and onto him, washing some of the blood from his back down onto the floor.

He stood up and looked around the dim room, it was hard to see until the occasional lighting bolt struck.

Staggering over to a small chair, he slumped down. Leaning his head back, he fell asleep that way. Ignoring the pain in his hand and back.

Several hours passed . . . .

A hand took hold of Niran's shoulder, and shook him roughly.

Niran's eyes opened and darted from side to side, to see who was shaking him.

He looked up, and leaned back in fright, a large nord with an axe was standing directly in front of him.

The man, upon seeing Niran had awoken, pulled the young imperial from the chair. Forcing him to stand.

"What the hell are you doin, eh?" he asked with a glare.

Niran would have pointed out the obvious, however this Nord didn't look like he'd put up with sarcasm from a puny Imperial.

"Sir, well I was just sitting here-" Niran looked around at the damage he had caused, and was hesitant about finishing his statement and just making a run for it.

"I was just taking refuge from the storm sir?"

The Nord sneered, "Is that so, ya little vandal. Look at what you've done to my house."

Hut more like it, Niran thought suppressing a smirk.

He started to edge away, very slowly.

"Terribly sorry for that sir, however maybe you shouldn't leave your house during a storm. I daresay I wouldn't have broken the window with you present." he said, taking a glance at the door. It was now unlocked and he could make a run for it.

The man noticed Niran's feeble attempt at escape and grabbed him by the shoulder again, pulling him back and throwing him against the wall.

Niran's face Would have rammed into the wall, however he brought his hands up toguard himself. The Nord spotted Niran's quick defensive move, and ran at the Imperial giving his axe a good swing.

"Where I was raised there was a terrible punishment for those who had no respect for others property." The Nord spat angrily.

Niran dropped to the ground as the axe slammed into the wall, breaking a chunk of wood from it.

"Oh, I know the place you're speaking of. The mental ward, is it?" Niran asked in mock curiosity before rolling away from the Nord and jumping to his feet.

He quickly unsheathed his sword, and backed away towards the door.

"Oh no ya don't." The Nord said as he charged him again, but Niran just sidestepped it and held out a foot to trip the man.

"I must say that was rather easy," Niran said with a devious grin as the clumsy man fell over.

The Nord grunted angrily, and when he looked up Niran noticed he had a spooky smile on his face.

Niran raised an eyebrow, as he put his sword to the Nord's neck.

"You've lost, go on and admit it so I can get home."

At that moment Niran felt the presence of a sword at the back of his neck.

Wiping blood from his nose, the Nord sneered again.

"Okay I've lost, but he hasn't."



Niran dropped his sword to the ground and raised his hands, looking out of the corner of his eye to attempt a glimpse at his other attacker.

"That's right, now walk towards the door." The man said, giving Niran a push and keeping his sword at the Imperial's neck.

Niran stepped over the Nord lying on the floor, and slowly walked to the door.

When he got close, the second man pushed him out and closed the door.

Niran turned around.

"Huh," he said stretching his arms "I thought he was going to kill me or something."

Wait a minute, my silver longsword!

Niran dared himself to force his way back in and retrieve it, but thought better. The Nords would kill him, and besides they probably wouldn't come after him to pay damages for the house if they had a sword to sell and collect the money on.

He turned around, and walked slowly home.

When he opened the door, he noticed his own house to be empty. With a note on the table.

He picked it up, and scanned it through.

"Oh this is nice, you'll be back tomorrow will you?" Niran said with an exasperated sigh, setting the note back down on the table.

He was wet, and tired. Going upstairs he changed into a clean set of clothes and lay down on his bed.

His mother would definitely notice his missing sword, seeing as how it was passed down from his father.

Unable to sleep, he stood up and went outside.

The ground was still muddy from the rain, and his boots made strange sloshing noises as he took steps.

He glanced from side to side as he walked.



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gamer10   Niran - The Years Before   Jul 19 2005, 06:42 PM
Kiln   Neat...so this is to be the story of your RP guy t...   Jul 19 2005, 06:46 PM
MerGirl   Well, it's a good start. :) The only thing ...   Jul 19 2005, 07:27 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Agree with MerGirl, its not to much talking... be...   Jul 19 2005, 07:33 PM
Konradude   It is very good, but it is lacking in detail. Mayb...   Jul 19 2005, 07:31 PM
gamer10   That prologue was written yesterday, I guess the q...   Jul 20 2005, 12:07 AM
minque   Ahh nice to hear more about Niran....he seems very...   Jul 20 2005, 08:49 AM
Kell-Reevor   Good story. I'm not too concerned with the la...   Jul 20 2005, 05:04 PM
gamer10   The man stood on the side of the road, that turned...   Jul 22 2005, 04:40 AM
Kiln   Nice picture on the first post, it looks so peacef...   Jul 22 2005, 09:12 AM
gamer10   "He had been spotted by an Imperial Legion Of...   Jul 22 2005, 03:43 PM
gamer10   15 Years - Chapter 4 Niran kneeled down and took ...   Jul 24 2005, 09:09 PM
minque   Very nice Gamer!!! and a great picture...   Jul 24 2005, 10:14 PM
gamer10   Thanks, I was nearly half way through chapter 5, t...   Jul 24 2005, 10:30 PM
MerGirl   Very good! :goodjob: Hope to see more of this...   Jul 24 2005, 10:47 PM
Kiln   Very good...I gotta read the next part, I'm dr...   Jul 25 2005, 12:03 AM
gamer10   15 Years - Chapter 5 Niran opened his eyes, and s...   Jul 25 2005, 12:30 AM
Kiln   :lol: Haha! Man, Niran is no good with women ...   Jul 25 2005, 12:38 AM
gamer10   Really, damn they're supposed to be martians...   Jul 25 2005, 12:44 AM
Kiln   I'm sure you got what I meant...well maybe no...   Jul 25 2005, 12:51 AM
gamer10   Actually, that immaturity in the RP is only tempor...   Jul 25 2005, 12:59 AM
Mazuk   Wow awesome job gamer. Seems I have been out to l...   Jul 25 2005, 01:37 AM
gamer10   15 Years - Chapter 6 Niran tore throught the fore...   Jul 25 2005, 05:12 AM
Kiln   Good update, I like how you progress so quickly fr...   Jul 25 2005, 05:34 AM
gamer10   Here's a good picture of Faili. http://i17.pho...   Jul 25 2005, 05:36 AM
Kiln   Thats a nice pic gamer. :) I just read more of th...   Jul 25 2005, 05:39 AM
gamer10   15 Years - Chapter 7 Niran stood outside, looking...   Jul 25 2005, 08:41 PM
Dantrag   Cool. Niran is going to be killed. by a theif. i...   Jul 25 2005, 09:22 PM
gamer10   Or so we think *eyes dart around* Obviously not, ...   Jul 25 2005, 09:23 PM
MerGirl   Very good that you updated it! :goodjob: A ...   Jul 25 2005, 09:25 PM
Dantrag   A fellow fan of the almighty band named The Mars V...   Jul 25 2005, 09:25 PM
gamer10   Yes master Yoda. :P :D   Jul 25 2005, 09:33 PM
Kiln   Nice, a little vague on details but still good. :)   Jul 25 2005, 09:34 PM
Dantrag   To add to mergirl's post... there are a lot o...   Jul 25 2005, 09:36 PM
gamer10   Guess what, I think my next chapter will have 400 ...   Jul 25 2005, 09:44 PM
Kiln   If you really want to annoy people then you shoul...   Jul 26 2005, 12:28 AM
gamer10   15 Years - Chapter 8 Niran's breathing was so...   Jul 26 2005, 06:44 PM
Dantrag   This is an...erm....interesting relationship. So...   Jul 26 2005, 06:50 PM
gamer10   BD Niran will be Niran. :lol:   Jul 26 2005, 06:51 PM
Kiln   I think she's got multiple personalities.hehe ...   Jul 26 2005, 06:56 PM
gamer10   15 Years - Chapter 9 Niran sulked forwards, walki...   Jul 27 2005, 05:56 PM
Dantrag   What a clumsy dude. :lol: still good, keep it ...   Jul 27 2005, 06:16 PM
Channler   Nce gamer, keep it up.. lol cause its helluva bett...   Jul 27 2005, 07:45 PM
MerGirl   Very quick update, and good job! :goodjob: I...   Jul 27 2005, 08:05 PM
Kiln   I just caught the update, nice job...violent storm...   Jul 27 2005, 08:20 PM
gamer10   Look out! A TORNADO IS RIGHT BEHIND YOU...   Jul 27 2005, 08:22 PM
Kiln   Niran is sarcastic even when he thinks he could di...   Aug 1 2005, 04:27 PM
Dantrag   Cool update, though it should have been longer. :...   Aug 1 2005, 04:51 PM
Mazuk   Nice Update Gamer. Keep up the good work.   Aug 1 2005, 09:07 PM
Dantrag   :lol: When I said "it should have been longe...   Aug 2 2005, 04:11 AM
gamer10   :P Well, another update probably won't co...   Aug 2 2005, 04:06 PM
Kiln   Oh you updated...Niran changed...and then went bac...   Aug 3 2005, 05:49 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Oooh.. this is good with another update, very well...   Aug 3 2005, 09:51 AM
treydog   Some good writing here- wonder if we might find ou...   Aug 4 2005, 04:09 PM
minque   Hey....nice update, itīs always nice to learn more...   Aug 7 2005, 08:40 AM
gamer10   This update came after a longer break than usual. ...   Aug 21 2005, 01:53 AM
Kiln   That chapter was really good, lots of emotion...I ...   Aug 21 2005, 02:28 AM
Red   Nice Gamer. Awesome emotion.   Aug 21 2005, 03:02 AM
treydog   Niran certainly seems to have a great deal of ange...   Aug 22 2005, 03:10 PM
gamer10   16 Years - Chapter 2 Niran couldn't move, a r...   Aug 27 2005, 10:22 PM
Kiln   Very nice gamer, unfortunately the way you write i...   Aug 27 2005, 11:55 PM
treydog   Nice update- gives some insight into Niran's t...   Aug 29 2005, 02:05 PM
gamer10   16 Years - Chapter 3 Niran looked up from his boo...   Sep 10 2005, 01:52 AM
Dantrag   Gah! the mushiness! Still good though. g...   Sep 10 2005, 01:57 AM
Kiln   I loved this part, lots of emotion, and his surrou...   Sep 26 2005, 12:14 AM
gamer10   Well, after more than a month of break in my writi...   Oct 24 2005, 10:26 PM
Mazuk   Nice update gamer. Keep up the great work.   Oct 25 2005, 01:03 AM
minque   Ahh gamer! Nice update, glad you continue this...   Oct 25 2005, 05:44 PM
gamer10   16 Years, Chapter 5 A moment later and it surely...   Dec 27 2005, 02:32 AM


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