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Gaenor: Reloaded |
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ShraX |
Jul 5 2005, 01:39 PM
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I posted this on the official TES forums, and although it's not finished, I'll continue updating both here and there.
If you haven't read the other two stories I've written, one of them is in the Fan Fiction section of this site, and you can PM me for the other. There really is not much needed to know when reading this one, except who the already well-known characters such as Gaenor and Almalexia are.
Enjoy--
The Nerevarine lay a lifeless corpse upon the Mournhold Temple steps. His blood trickled out of the slashed openings in his neck, limbs and torso, and down each stair, leaving its stains as it went before collecting into a shapeless pool on the tiled courtyard floor. The High Ordinators were still, their armored masks hiding the looks of terror on their faces as they stared at their defeated savior. The Temple doors were now wide open, and Almalexia hovered at the entrance. Her Hands were nowhere in sight.
"My champion," she said softly in disbelief, her golden face emotionless. "Who is responsible for this?" She spoke quietly but the entire city heard her. A Hand emerged from the darkness of the Temple and removed his helmet., engraved with the Daedric runes for S and V. "Our guards watched the battle," he explained in his low, rumbling voice. "They dared not aid your Nerevar for fear of death by his murderer - the Bosmer, Gaenor." The Demigoddess floated down the stairs, over the the corpse of the Nerevarine and turned back to the Temple. "Salas, this wood elf has gotten his revenge, but Terenius' life is nowhere close to Nerevar's in worth. Remain here and clean this mess. I will find young Gaenor and speak with him." Her Hand bowed and ordered the two Ordinators, still in a stupor, to dispose of the Nerevarine's body, as well as those of the four slain Hands within the Temple. Almalexia's wrath was unbridalled, and vengeance consumed her. Her fury at the news of Nerevar's death manifested physically, killing all but her favored Hand, Salas Volar, in an explosion of goldy flames.
She flew from her place in the Temple courtyard high above the city and into the clouds which concealed the late afternoon sun's light. The moons were now more than halfway over the mountainous horizon and brought their stars with them. With a gesture of her wrist the dense clouds parted in two and the light of the lowering sun lit the city aglow. She closed her eyes and began searching for her prey. However, this was unnecessary. Almalexia expected this mortal to flee into hiding from her might, but he welcomed it. He was sitting on a bench in the Bazaar, doodling shapes in the dirt with his sword.
His armor was sundered, dented and sliced through. One pauldron was missing as well as both gauntlets and parts of his greaves. It wasn't clear to tell from his ebony armor, but he was covered in blood from head to toe. He leaned his blade on the bench and removed his helmet, then placed it over the hilt. It was hot and sweat was dripping from his forehead to his beard. He put both hands to his face and wiped it, and ran his fingers through his stiff hair. He sighed heavily and closed his eyes, waiting with open arms for death's embrace.
Almalexia dove towards him like a starving hawk upon a field mouse, disintegrating the clouds with the aura of flame around her. This mortal wood elf defeated her martyr in combat and had the audacity to sit on a park bench in plain sight! Masser and Secunda were rising in unnatural quickness and the sun was already out of sight. The furious demigoddess did not realize in her blind rage, but Gaenor tore away from his hands and looked up past her to see it: both moons took position directly above him, Secunda in front. As they slowed to a stop everything around him turned pitch black, aside from the raging Almalexia, now halted in mid-air, as well as both moons.
The elf slowly stood and faced his enemy in partial confusion. After his ordeal he truly cared not what his fate was. 'An eye for an eye,' was his logic. 'She took Terenius and I take the Nerevarine.. but this is very strange. perhaps this witch's debt is still not repaid.' He walked past her toward the moons, which were glowing and pulsating with light, as if to communicate.
"Much has happened this day. We must speak."
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ShraX |
Aug 5 2005, 02:30 AM
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"I don't know what makes you believe I need assistance in breaching these city walls, but whatever it is is likely laying eggs in your brain as we speak." Gaenor was stern and direct to Naztheril, who had now stepped back and left himself ample space for shifting to his original shape. He looked up at the elf from below the dark rim of his hat with a smile. "Let me tell you something, Gaenor my friend." He lifted his arms up with widely-spread fingers. "You have ascended to a new form of life: the Bearer of Fire and Light. This figure's destiny is scrawled upon the eternally-binding surface of the Elder Scrolls. I have seen this, and I know it dictates that I will aid him in gaining access to the Emperor's City at this point in time. Therefore, turn your arrogance to those to whom deserve to be spoken down. I am here to help, so accept it or fail in your quest." Gaenor grunted in annoyance and stood back as Naztheril looked to the ground once again.
It was difficult to tell from behind his shaded spectacles, but his eyes were now completely white. There was sweat dripping from beneath his hat and down the tip where it slanted on his head. His hands shook violently and he braced himself with stiffened, muscular legs that showed through his pants. The Bosmer wondered silently what he was doing to himself, and thought it best not to ask. "Are you watching?" Naztheril managed asking through his gritting teeth. "Behold that which in nightmares are banished!" At once his skin exploded with blood and muscle tissue revealing a hulking, pulsing mass in the form of a human, but without any discernable features. His shape transformed irradically until it established itself on ten enormous, jointed legs. A tail erupted from his back, elongating from his spine and constantly generating new bone structures and segments. He sprouted scales along his torso, sleak feathers on his head and beaked face, and a thick carapace on his limbs. At last the transformation ended, and there he stood high above the elf who hadn't moved an inch from his place; he had the head of a gryphon, the body of a reptile, and the legs of a spider. All of his eyes looked to Gaenor to see what he thought. "Your opponent was forty miles tall, yet you are less than half his size." he said. Naztheril, Beast of the Night Sky, threw his tail into the air, crouched on all legs and let out an earth-shattering roar directly at his elven friend, implying that size matters not when inner power is concerned, since he had no speech in his present form. The Bosmer was unharmed.
He leaped onto one of his legs and climbed up onto the back of his neck, clinging to his feathers for support. "Let us continue, then." said Gaenor, and Naztheril gave a short screech in acknowledgement. The Beast stormed down the grassy bank of the moat and into the water, and walked slowly through without much trouble. It spanned three miles in length and was so deep it was nearly black in color, but Naztheril stood in even its darkest depths with room enough for his body to remain dry. The massive creature trudged on toward the Imperial City unhindered, and kept sharp eyes on his surroundings.
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"What in Mara's name is that?!" cried a guard in the main eastern watch tower of Cyrodiil. He could barely see it in the distance, but he told his superior officers what he thought it could be; Henar. Reports of the undead menace had been coming in constantly throughout the past weeks from Morrowind and Skyrim claiming that a skeletal fiend had ravaged Mournhold and various Nordic settlements. "If what you say is in fact true," replied General Marcus Ginius of the Imperial Army, "then this 'Knight Henar' has under his command this.. giant monster who is currently swimming through our moat? Am I understanding this correctly Private?" The guard who had reported what he saw nodded nervously. "I must see this myself."
He and five other infantrymen, including the witness, proceeded quickly to the main east watch tower and all watched intently from between the large stone blocks which lined the top. "I see nothing but a noonday's sun and the shining water," declared the General in his commanding voice. "Keep this up and I'll see this tower dry as a Crendian weed field. I won't have my men drunk on duty!" However, he continued looking out across the moat, just in case of anything suspicious at the last moment.
"Greetings, fellows! I would shake thine hands but, alas, I am all wet from swimming.. did you catch a glimpse of the monster? You Imperials certainly guard your cities well..."
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ShraX Gaenor: Reloaded Jul 5 2005, 01:39 PM ShraX Gaenor was hardly surprised. "Talking moons, eh?" ... Jul 5 2005, 02:40 PM ShraX The Legend of Knight Henar
[i]as told by Thelan, ... Jul 5 2005, 02:41 PM ShraX I understand that most forum-goers have not read m... Jul 5 2005, 02:45 PM minque Ahhh great to see the story of Gaenor here as well... Jul 5 2005, 03:04 PM Dantrag Cool. I was disappointed when trials of the mad go... Jul 5 2005, 03:19 PM ShraX Despite his seriousness, his plan was simple, real... Jul 5 2005, 08:50 PM ShraX This is the last entry which was already written. ... Jul 5 2005, 11:59 PM ShraX Gaenor held his sword with both palms forward at b... Jul 6 2005, 10:01 PM treydog Cool! More Gaenor. I enjoyed the previous one ver... Jul 7 2005, 12:40 AM ShraX Several hours passed and Gaenor rested well. Excep... Jul 9 2005, 01:29 AM gamer10 Nice,
In fact you get a well deserved Jonajosa... Jul 9 2005, 02:47 AM ShraX They both entered through the wooden doorway, firs... Jul 10 2005, 01:49 PM ShraX He tore open the paper wrapping to find a large, h... Jul 12 2005, 11:15 PM ShraX Gaenor had been slashed along his back, from rib t... Jul 15 2005, 12:23 AM ShraX The flames of the Blade ceased as Gaenor sheathed ... Jul 17 2005, 10:26 PM ShraX Gaenor awoke hours later at the spot he collapsed ... Jul 19 2005, 04:07 PM ShraX By morning of the next day Mournhold was completel... Jul 23 2005, 02:25 PM ShraX Gaenor gazed into his eyes with a blank glare, as ... Jul 26 2005, 09:02 PM ShraX The citizens of Eredjan were in mixed feelings abo... Jul 29 2005, 12:58 PM ShraX Sorry I've been a bit slow with updates.. ther... Aug 2 2005, 04:35 AM ShraX One guard who came with the General was standing a... Aug 7 2005, 03:39 PM ShraX Naztheril was scaling the plateau on which the cit... Aug 11 2005, 02:25 PM ShraX Gaenor had nearly fainted from blood loss by the t... Aug 15 2005, 09:13 PM minque H-h-holy crap.......soo many additions here.....ve... Aug 16 2005, 06:57 PM treydog This is beyond epic fiction- your vision of the st... Aug 18 2005, 02:22 PM ShraX
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Gaenor's will gre... Aug 19 2005, 02:52 PM treydog Excellent update. The plot thickens as Iranon and... Aug 22 2005, 02:55 PM ShraX By morning of the next day they'd reached the ... Aug 23 2005, 01:33 PM treydog Woo-Hoo! Great writing here. Again, the imag... Aug 23 2005, 05:46 PM ShraX *shamelessly continues his story after an unexplai... Mar 15 2006, 08:48 PM treydog :ninja: :bigsmile: ShraX is back! And still ... Mar 15 2006, 11:19 PM ShraX "In your what?"
"Face. In the face... Mar 16 2006, 07:52 PM minque Woah!! Gaenor is back!!! great... Mar 17 2006, 09:04 PM Dantrag What? There's a Gaenor reloaded? :O
I have... Mar 18 2006, 12:59 AM jack cloudy Whoo, this is nice. Makes me wish I had Tribunal, ... Mar 18 2006, 08:51 PM ShraX Two days passed since Gaenor and Naztheril made th... Mar 18 2006, 11:53 PM ShraX The star-filled sky choked on the burning smoke ri... Mar 21 2006, 09:51 PM treydog Still going strong. I really enjoy your work here... Mar 21 2006, 11:19 PM ShraX My sorry attempt at Khajiiti :-/o
--------------... Mar 24 2006, 06:26 PM ShraX "What language is this?" asked the elf f... Mar 26 2006, 05:03 PM ShraX The Origin of Iranon
as told by an anonymous lorek... Mar 28 2006, 08:14 PM jack cloudy Nice bit of history, you've got there. I like ... Mar 28 2006, 08:50 PM minque Ahhh enjoyable reading.....as always...
Very good... Mar 29 2006, 08:24 PM ShraX It was Garonar's voice which transformed Irano... Apr 2 2006, 04:21 PM treydog Glad to see more additions to this engaging story.... Apr 3 2006, 02:59 PM minque
Agree with treydog here.....itīs fascinating, an... Apr 3 2006, 09:11 PM ShraX Gaenor knew he would be killed if he opened his mo... Apr 4 2006, 06:27 PM jack cloudy He he. This is wonderfull. That Khajitt is so goin... Apr 4 2006, 07:57 PM ShraX Iranon was raised as a warrior of Argonia. From ch... Apr 9 2006, 02:44 AM ShraX The shocked Khajiit shuffled backwards and made wa... Apr 11 2006, 06:44 PM ShraX It was in Naztheril's god-given nature to foll... Apr 16 2006, 06:45 PM ShraX Sometimes, shorter entries are appropriate :D
... Apr 23 2006, 01:54 AM minque Very nice and interesting as usual....really good ... Apr 23 2006, 02:35 PM treydog More fine work from ShraX! Still an epic stor... Apr 25 2006, 04:51 PM ShraX The skeletal warrior burst straight through the ba... Apr 28 2006, 07:40 PM ShraX The Prince brought with him approximately 200 sold... Apr 29 2006, 10:45 PM minque Oh aye...impressive as always....itīs amazing how ... Apr 29 2006, 11:10 PM Taillus Like Minque said. Quite impressive as always. Now ... Apr 30 2006, 04:11 PM jack cloudy He's totally nuts. :wacko:
Nice updates. I c... Apr 30 2006, 08:58 PM mplantinga I've been following this story for a long time... May 1 2006, 06:47 PM ShraX It was night and the week-long smoldering left the... May 3 2006, 02:13 AM ShraX Scaling the wide stump was more difficult for the ... May 3 2006, 05:47 PM ShraX "And there it is.. I've not seen it in qu... May 4 2006, 09:53 PM ShraX Iranon's corpse turned loose and broke apart w... May 5 2006, 05:44 AM mplantinga I will admit to mixed feelings at the end of this ... May 8 2006, 08:34 PM treydog What a magnificent ending to a magnificent story. ... May 8 2006, 11:22 PM minque Me too will express my gratitude to having had the... May 9 2006, 07:02 PM Kiln Great end to it mate, I too have followed this for... May 9 2006, 07:25 PM
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