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Neck' Thall Morrowind Aug 10 2005, 03:59 AM Channler heh, thats a unique idea.. Awsome, could be pretty... Aug 10 2005, 04:15 AM Neck' Thall Thank you. :D I got one persom who likes it!... Aug 10 2005, 04:18 AM Channler You might have to simplify the story for Dantrag :... Aug 10 2005, 04:20 AM![]() Dantrag
I'm just a punching bag for insults. :(
T... Aug 10 2005, 05:14 PM Neck' Thall Yeah, Ive been wondering about that..... :(
Edit:... Aug 10 2005, 04:21 AM Sir Radont I liked it, it was a quick read which is all I hav... Aug 10 2005, 10:44 AM minque Heey!! That´s a nice approach..very intere... Aug 10 2005, 11:15 AM Kiln This is truly an original way to start your story.... Aug 10 2005, 12:42 PM Neck' Thall Thx guys (and Girl) :cake: :cake: :cake:
----... Aug 10 2005, 04:47 PM Soulseeker3.0 not bad reminds me of something else i've seen... Aug 10 2005, 05:05 PM Kell-Reevor Cool. I thought about doing a story like this onc... Aug 10 2005, 05:42 PM Neck' Thall Thx for the compliments :D please tell me if there... Aug 10 2005, 08:43 PM![]() Dantrag
You misspelled "grammatical"
Sorry, ... Aug 10 2005, 10:05 PM MerGirl It's good. I do not see glaring grammar errors... Aug 10 2005, 09:42 PM Neck' Thall THx alot mergirl...i didn't know that about fa... Aug 10 2005, 09:56 PM![]() MerGirl
It depends... Do you feel more comfortable writi... Aug 10 2005, 10:09 PM![]() Dantrag
Not entirely true. First person is easier in tha... Aug 10 2005, 10:12 PM![]() MerGirl
Well, for me, 3rd person is easier in terms of, ... Aug 11 2005, 12:13 AM Neck' Thall Thx for pointing that out :whistle: THX Mergirl il... Aug 10 2005, 10:10 PM Soulseeker3.0 not bad Neck' Thall Aug 10 2005, 10:33 PM Dantrag
Yep - limited and omniscient.
limited is when ... Aug 11 2005, 12:22 AM Soulseeker3.0 I though i exaped this with english >:( >:... Aug 11 2005, 12:37 AM treydog Although the start might be considered "gener... Aug 11 2005, 05:51 PM Neck' Thall Treydog, thats exactly what my dad told me about t... Aug 11 2005, 06:17 PM Kiln You really should try and set your own goals rathe... Aug 11 2005, 07:13 PM Neck' Thall Thx everyone but I've decided to continue with... Aug 11 2005, 10:04 PM minque good.....Ryan has apparently accepted he´s in the ... Aug 11 2005, 10:15 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job and let me guess the other two people you... Aug 11 2005, 10:50 PM Neck' Thall Right on the dot... though i may have to mention l... Aug 11 2005, 10:54 PM minque Oops.....I was reading too fast..didn´t grasp the ... Aug 11 2005, 11:14 PM Wolfie Hehe Jonacin can't get mentions because his st... Aug 11 2005, 11:22 PM Neck' Thall Umm...I haven't read Jonacin's story can i... Aug 11 2005, 11:24 PM minque Here
jonacin´s story Aug 11 2005, 11:27 PM Neck' Thall THX minque Aug 11 2005, 11:28 PM treydog Hey- I think I know that "nice Breton." ... Aug 12 2005, 08:10 PM Konradude Ahem -Oblivion-Just a thought-Konradude's mult... Aug 12 2005, 08:44 PM Neck' Thall Here's and Update
Also Konraddude wha do you m... Aug 12 2005, 08:54 PM BobV Nioce.
Would the third arrival happen to be a dun... Aug 12 2005, 08:57 PM Neck' Thall Mabey... what is house Dren Btw i know what Indori... Aug 12 2005, 08:59 PM BobV Dres are even more criminal than Locke. They'r... Aug 12 2005, 09:00 PM Neck' Thall Ohhh...Then he won't be Dren cuz he hates slav... Aug 12 2005, 09:03 PM minque Heey Neck! He didn´t learn from Serene´s encou... Aug 12 2005, 09:07 PM Neck' Thall Thx Minque i fixed them but what was the fourth mu... Aug 12 2005, 09:14 PM![]() BobV
Hypha Facia Aug 12 2005, 09:17 PM Neck' Thall Ohh...Unfourtunatly those where the ones i have... Aug 12 2005, 09:16 PM Neck' Thall Thx BobV Now That iv'e fixed it i'll just ... Aug 12 2005, 09:25 PM Neck' Thall Here's another Update!
-------------------... Aug 14 2005, 12:28 AM Kiln Very nice...I'd tell you what I liked best but... Aug 14 2005, 02:01 AM Neck' Thall Thx Kiln, Though i must say you may need to change... Aug 14 2005, 02:25 AM minque Niiice Neckie!.....you got the hang of it real... Aug 14 2005, 11:41 AM Soulseeker3.0 good job neck Aug 14 2005, 06:48 PM Dantrag cool story.
I like the way stuff comes naturally... Aug 15 2005, 05:40 AM MerGirl *claps* Good job, me likey! :) I really like... Aug 15 2005, 11:27 PM Neck' Thall Update!!
--------------------------------... Aug 16 2005, 01:47 AM Kiln Nice update, I like the human feel you give to the... Aug 16 2005, 02:43 AM Soulseeker3.0 YAY! good job Neck. Aug 16 2005, 04:34 PM minque Very well written and lots of details......great w... Aug 16 2005, 06:58 PM Wolfie An interesting read, nice to see the story from a ... Aug 16 2005, 06:59 PM Lucidarius Your take on things are quite different, Neck... Aug 16 2005, 09:50 PM treydog Good updates. It is interesting to watch Ryan lea... Aug 18 2005, 02:28 PM Neck' Thall Update!
--------------------------------------... Aug 19 2005, 05:09 AM Konradude Very very good! I like how you include simple ... Aug 19 2005, 10:41 AM treydog Good addition- the reflection on his "real... Aug 19 2005, 01:28 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job Neck' Thall Aug 19 2005, 02:23 PM minque Niiice Neckie...really nice...I almost felt sorry ... Aug 19 2005, 07:45 PM Lucidarius Good update where we follow his reasoning and trai... Aug 20 2005, 03:46 PM Neck' Thall Sry guys for being so long with this update. I wa... Sep 4 2005, 08:49 PM Soulseeker3.0 ??? what will happen next!? great update Neck. Sep 4 2005, 09:14 PM Neck' Thall Dude its called a cliffhanger... Sep 4 2005, 09:21 PM Soulseeker3.0 yah I know but I couldn't help it :P Sep 4 2005, 09:25 PM Neck' Thall Update!! and yeah i know its short.
-----... Sep 6 2005, 03:09 AM Soulseeker3.0 nice one NEcky Sep 6 2005, 03:11 AM OverrideB1 I just caught up with this story ~ there are so ma... Sep 8 2005, 07:26 PM Neck' Thall I'm sry if this part is bad but im not very go... Sep 11 2005, 06:43 PM Soulseeker3.0 not bad, continue please Sep 11 2005, 08:26 PM Kell-Reevor Very good so far, I just caught up. I like how yo... Sep 12 2005, 08:08 PM minque Very nice Neckie! keep it coming and you are g... Sep 19 2005, 05:25 PM Neck' Thall Hope you guys like this update!
--------------... Sep 24 2005, 10:14 PM Soulseeker3.0 not bad, make it a good fight with the leader :) Sep 25 2005, 07:20 PM Kiln Very interesting, waiting for the next part. Sep 25 2005, 11:54 PM Neck' Thall With a deafening roar, the massively armored body ... Oct 9 2005, 03:58 AM minque ahh Neckie! just found out you updated! th... Oct 13 2005, 11:34 PM Kiln Great addition to your story, I'd been waiting... Oct 22 2005, 04:06 PM
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