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Konji
post Jun 21 2005, 08:46 PM
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I thought I would give it you in bitesize pieces...as I find them easier to read.


-----------------------Konrad’s Story-----------------------
Konrad woke up, slowly opening one of his eyes. He covered his face with his hand, the light of the midday sun burning his eyes. He pushed his bed covers down, his shiny leather tunic visible now. He never really changes his clothes, but has them washed immediately. He got up, sighing and brushing his coal black hair from his eyes.

“Where is father?” Konrad called down as he descended the antique wooden stairs.

“He is already at his school opening, but I didn’t want to wake you,” his mother replied, frowning as she looked up from her lunch. Picking up a slice of bread Konrad broke free of the confinement of his house, blinking ferociously at the revealed light. He looked around, still amazed at the artistry of the buildings surrounding him. He spent many an hour gazing out of the small opening in his room, just marvelling at the wonders of the architects and builders.

He glanced at the position of the sun to confirm his thoughts. “It is late in the day…I must get there if I am to pass the trials,” Konrad mumbled to himself. He raced through the backstreets of the city, passing the many landmarks on the way, and eventually reached his father’s dream…The Blade School.


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Konji
post Aug 15 2005, 05:54 PM
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Heh, very long awaited update.

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Konrad watched the man and his daughter leave the room, sighing to himself. He surveyed the area, escape in mind. A solitary guard was standing where the fake wall was, his imposing figure silhouetted with the lack of light in the small room. Konrad decided there were two ways out. One way was through the small gap in the ceiling, which would mean he was free instantly and could scarper. The other way was past the guard and through the fortress. Even if he did manage to get past the guard, he didn’t know how many more were there.

He walked around the room casually, checking every detail and mapping the route of his escape in his mind. He had opted for the former choice, and was finding out all the cracks in the ancient wall that he could manipulate to make a ladder and get out of there. The shadowed Nord followed Konrad’s movements with his beady eyes, shining through the darkness and locking onto him. The Nord seemed to growl at him for a moment, then Konrad realised he was being spoken to.

“…ance of getting out of here,” the man told him, nodding upwards to the ceiling. “There are traps laid over the hole in the ceiling so that vermin like you can be killed easily. Besides don't think I wouldn’t notice you, you Imperial scumbag, taking away...” the Nord carried on for some time about Imperial rule.

Konrad mumbled something about Nordic bathing principles and ended his circling of his cell. He had decided to face the guard and get a weapon first, seeing as he needed one. He walked up to him and stared for a second, before bringing his leg up straight between the Nord’s legs.

He heard a thump and the Nord keeled over, seemingly in a lot of pain.

‘He must have liked me after all…’ Konrad thought as he stripped the guard of his sword and armour. He strapped it all on then slammed the hilt of sword into the Nord’s head, knocking him unconscious. He picked up the body with a heave, dragging him to the other side of the room.

He stole out of the room carefully, keeping his sword up in case of any more frisky Nords. He turned left down a high but narrow tunnel, seeing a light source at the end of the corridor. He crept up to it and tried to look underneath the door, a bright light radiating from the crack. Failing, but now unexplainably excited, he burst through the door.

The fat king’s 23 Argonian guards all looked from Konrad, to his sword, then back to Konrad before screaming an undecipherable war cry and charging at him. Konrad swore and turned back again, slamming the door behind him as he charged down the way he had come.
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Konradude   Konrad's story   Jun 21 2005, 08:46 PM
gamer10   Wow . .short. But very well detailed :goodjob:...   Jun 21 2005, 08:48 PM
minque   good Konrad! nice so more please. I´ll give ...   Jun 21 2005, 08:52 PM
Red   Why do we call them Jonajosas?   Jun 21 2005, 08:53 PM
Konradude   The building was obviously new, the stone it was m...   Jun 21 2005, 09:09 PM
Dantrag   Why do we call them Jonajosas? because they are...   Jun 21 2005, 09:27 PM
Konradude   Thanks y'all..note the wood elf is mostly fargoth ...   Jun 21 2005, 09:31 PM
treydog   Vivid descriptions, very nice. Some confusion t...   Jun 22 2005, 03:23 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Nice Konrad...! :goodjob:   Jun 22 2005, 03:25 PM
Konradude   the Wood Elf did that as a kind of joke to Konrad,...   Jun 22 2005, 05:51 PM
Konradude   Konrad stepped out onto the oval training grounds,...   Jun 22 2005, 07:12 PM
MerGirl   Very good! *claps* :) Very detailed. I would lik...   Jun 22 2005, 08:02 PM
gamer10   Add about a thousand periods and Mergirl will be h...   Jun 22 2005, 08:03 PM
Konradude   Took me a while to do this one, but I am pleased w...   Jun 24 2005, 11:18 PM
Channler   Nice, I liked that part.. for that part alone I gi...   Jun 25 2005, 12:06 AM
minque   Very good you know! Be proud of your work.....I´ll...   Jun 25 2005, 12:36 AM
Mazuk   Yeah that was pretty sweet. Good writing and keep...   Jun 25 2005, 12:46 AM
MerGirl   Good job. :goodjob: You added good details of th...   Jun 25 2005, 05:00 PM
Konradude   Finally an update. Haven't written for ages, b...   Jul 19 2005, 07:26 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Well... well.. its hard to say anything bad about ...   Jul 19 2005, 07:37 PM
MerGirl   Like Fuzzy said, it's very good! Lots of d...   Jul 19 2005, 07:43 PM
Konradude   I felt that as well. I as going to add more to tha...   Jul 19 2005, 07:45 PM
MerGirl   You tell the exact height? Not to mention, isn...   Jul 19 2005, 07:56 PM
Konradude   Ha, i totally understand you if that helps. I will...   Jul 19 2005, 08:01 PM
Kiln   I liked most of it but whoever said the fight scen...   Jul 19 2005, 08:24 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Jepp.. Agree with Kiln, your story is very good a...   Jul 19 2005, 08:26 PM
Konradude   Another update for you....shock horror in this one...   Jul 19 2005, 09:12 PM
minque   ah..finally caught up on this story....very good K...   Jul 20 2005, 08:47 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Agree with Minque.. :D Very good written indeed..   Jul 20 2005, 10:06 AM
Kell-Reevor   I just read your story, very nice :D Hehe, its b...   Jul 20 2005, 03:14 PM
Konradude   A bit of comic relief before my next update. ---...   Jul 31 2005, 02:58 PM
gamer10   Nice. Poor Konrad, but he deserves it. :P :lol:...   Jul 31 2005, 03:01 PM
Konradude   Ok, another update. Seems I'm starting to writ...   Aug 16 2005, 10:32 AM
Konradude   I've left my uh....0 readers on a cliff hanger...   Aug 16 2005, 04:53 PM
minque   yeah! woah.....several additions to catch up w...   Aug 16 2005, 06:54 PM
Konradude   Another update. ---------------------------------...   Aug 16 2005, 06:54 PM
Konradude   Here ends chapter 1 of Konrad's story. -----...   Aug 16 2005, 07:24 PM
BobV   Niiiicesss...   Aug 16 2005, 07:26 PM
Konradude   How constructive. ;D   Aug 16 2005, 07:27 PM
BobV   Conssstructive? Konradsess, issss good story...   Aug 16 2005, 07:29 PM
Konradude   :) It just looks like you've got a lisp. And y...   Aug 16 2005, 07:32 PM
BobV   What?! They givesss ussss cheap imitationssses...   Aug 16 2005, 07:33 PM
Konradude   Be politically correct, they are called Dwarfs. :)   Aug 16 2005, 07:37 PM
BobV   Halflingses, not Dwarfses.   Aug 16 2005, 07:43 PM
Neck' Thall   Nice...Hey what does drizzt do when he is pleased/...   Aug 17 2005, 12:29 AM
Konradude   I would answer you if I knew who the hell these pe...   Aug 17 2005, 12:54 AM
Konradude   Ok, the next update. ---------------------------...   Aug 18 2005, 04:19 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Finally caught up with your story Konrad, your wri...   Aug 18 2005, 05:27 PM
minque   Yes...what he just said...very good! :cake: ...   Aug 18 2005, 08:19 PM
Lucidarius   Interesting story. I like how Konrad is discoverin...   Aug 22 2005, 12:22 PM


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