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Konji
post Jun 21 2005, 08:46 PM
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I thought I would give it you in bitesize pieces...as I find them easier to read.


-----------------------Konrad’s Story-----------------------
Konrad woke up, slowly opening one of his eyes. He covered his face with his hand, the light of the midday sun burning his eyes. He pushed his bed covers down, his shiny leather tunic visible now. He never really changes his clothes, but has them washed immediately. He got up, sighing and brushing his coal black hair from his eyes.

“Where is father?” Konrad called down as he descended the antique wooden stairs.

“He is already at his school opening, but I didn’t want to wake you,” his mother replied, frowning as she looked up from her lunch. Picking up a slice of bread Konrad broke free of the confinement of his house, blinking ferociously at the revealed light. He looked around, still amazed at the artistry of the buildings surrounding him. He spent many an hour gazing out of the small opening in his room, just marvelling at the wonders of the architects and builders.

He glanced at the position of the sun to confirm his thoughts. “It is late in the day…I must get there if I am to pass the trials,” Konrad mumbled to himself. He raced through the backstreets of the city, passing the many landmarks on the way, and eventually reached his father’s dream…The Blade School.


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Konji
post Aug 16 2005, 10:32 AM
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Ok, another update. Seems I'm starting to write again.


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As Konrad flew past the magical door he had came from he glanced through it and saw the Nord just waking up, burbling slightly. He grinned and continued on, the frenzied cries of the Argonians behind him.

He eventually made it to a fork, the two rock corridors branching out either deeper into the mountain or to freedom. Konrad took the left fork to keep in sync with his step. Just as he passed the chance of going down the other fork seven more Argonians came wandering around the corner, apparently slightly tipsy. Konrad skidded to a halt. He turned back to go the other way, and came face to face with the fastest of the Argonians in the group that was following.

Konrad felt a slash across his stomach and looked down. The Argonian had slit his finger across Konrad’s abdomen, leaving a thin line of trickling blood. Konrad grunted slightly, then kicked the beast in the legs, trying to trip him up.

The warrior lifted his left leg quickly, easily dodging the attempt. Konrad growled then just elbowed the Argonian in the face, sending it reeling back. He took advantage of this and kicked at the beast again. It fell to the floor, disorientated.

Konrad stepped on him and leapt into another Argonian, sending him tumbling to the floor. He scrambled up then ran down the other tunnel. He continued on, 30 enemies now chasing. He again reached another fork and again tried to go left, this time his path granted. He started to tire, the endless running too much.

Ahead of him he could finally see the opening, with a guard standing in front of it. The Orc covered the whole gap with his massive form, helped by a large shield and a double headed axe. Konrad had not seen one of these before…but he didn’t want a closer look.

He charged at the Orc, raising his hand and roaring at him. To Konrad’s surprise the Orc flew backwards, grunting confusion as he seemingly levitated into a sharp jutting out rock. The rock pierced the back of the Orc, emerging through its stomach.

Konrad quirked a brow but ignored it for the time being, going around the rock and out to freedom. He came up to a steep slope and looked back, the Argonians coming up quickly behind. He jumped.

The slope went quickly, a succession of shouts and screams accompanying around 57 rolls and 3 broken bones. Konrad spat out some blood and got up when he had hit the bottom, limping away. The Argonians hissed and laughed at him from the top of the cliff, not bothering to follow.
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Konradude   Konrad's story   Jun 21 2005, 08:46 PM
gamer10   Wow . .short. But very well detailed :goodjob:...   Jun 21 2005, 08:48 PM
minque   good Konrad! nice so more please. I´ll give ...   Jun 21 2005, 08:52 PM
Red   Why do we call them Jonajosas?   Jun 21 2005, 08:53 PM
Konradude   The building was obviously new, the stone it was m...   Jun 21 2005, 09:09 PM
Dantrag   Why do we call them Jonajosas? because they are...   Jun 21 2005, 09:27 PM
Konradude   Thanks y'all..note the wood elf is mostly fargoth ...   Jun 21 2005, 09:31 PM
treydog   Vivid descriptions, very nice. Some confusion t...   Jun 22 2005, 03:23 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Nice Konrad...! :goodjob:   Jun 22 2005, 03:25 PM
Konradude   the Wood Elf did that as a kind of joke to Konrad,...   Jun 22 2005, 05:51 PM
Konradude   Konrad stepped out onto the oval training grounds,...   Jun 22 2005, 07:12 PM
MerGirl   Very good! *claps* :) Very detailed. I would lik...   Jun 22 2005, 08:02 PM
gamer10   Add about a thousand periods and Mergirl will be h...   Jun 22 2005, 08:03 PM
Konradude   Took me a while to do this one, but I am pleased w...   Jun 24 2005, 11:18 PM
Channler   Nice, I liked that part.. for that part alone I gi...   Jun 25 2005, 12:06 AM
minque   Very good you know! Be proud of your work.....I´ll...   Jun 25 2005, 12:36 AM
Mazuk   Yeah that was pretty sweet. Good writing and keep...   Jun 25 2005, 12:46 AM
MerGirl   Good job. :goodjob: You added good details of th...   Jun 25 2005, 05:00 PM
Konradude   Finally an update. Haven't written for ages, b...   Jul 19 2005, 07:26 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Well... well.. its hard to say anything bad about ...   Jul 19 2005, 07:37 PM
MerGirl   Like Fuzzy said, it's very good! Lots of d...   Jul 19 2005, 07:43 PM
Konradude   I felt that as well. I as going to add more to tha...   Jul 19 2005, 07:45 PM
MerGirl   You tell the exact height? Not to mention, isn...   Jul 19 2005, 07:56 PM
Konradude   Ha, i totally understand you if that helps. I will...   Jul 19 2005, 08:01 PM
Kiln   I liked most of it but whoever said the fight scen...   Jul 19 2005, 08:24 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Jepp.. Agree with Kiln, your story is very good a...   Jul 19 2005, 08:26 PM
Konradude   Another update for you....shock horror in this one...   Jul 19 2005, 09:12 PM
minque   ah..finally caught up on this story....very good K...   Jul 20 2005, 08:47 AM
Fuzzy Knight   Agree with Minque.. :D Very good written indeed..   Jul 20 2005, 10:06 AM
Kell-Reevor   I just read your story, very nice :D Hehe, its b...   Jul 20 2005, 03:14 PM
Konradude   A bit of comic relief before my next update. ---...   Jul 31 2005, 02:58 PM
gamer10   Nice. Poor Konrad, but he deserves it. :P :lol:...   Jul 31 2005, 03:01 PM
Konradude   Heh, very long awaited update. -----------------...   Aug 15 2005, 05:54 PM
Konradude   I've left my uh....0 readers on a cliff hanger...   Aug 16 2005, 04:53 PM
minque   yeah! woah.....several additions to catch up w...   Aug 16 2005, 06:54 PM
Konradude   Another update. ---------------------------------...   Aug 16 2005, 06:54 PM
Konradude   Here ends chapter 1 of Konrad's story. -----...   Aug 16 2005, 07:24 PM
BobV   Niiiicesss...   Aug 16 2005, 07:26 PM
Konradude   How constructive. ;D   Aug 16 2005, 07:27 PM
BobV   Conssstructive? Konradsess, issss good story...   Aug 16 2005, 07:29 PM
Konradude   :) It just looks like you've got a lisp. And y...   Aug 16 2005, 07:32 PM
BobV   What?! They givesss ussss cheap imitationssses...   Aug 16 2005, 07:33 PM
Konradude   Be politically correct, they are called Dwarfs. :)   Aug 16 2005, 07:37 PM
BobV   Halflingses, not Dwarfses.   Aug 16 2005, 07:43 PM
Neck' Thall   Nice...Hey what does drizzt do when he is pleased/...   Aug 17 2005, 12:29 AM
Konradude   I would answer you if I knew who the hell these pe...   Aug 17 2005, 12:54 AM
Konradude   Ok, the next update. ---------------------------...   Aug 18 2005, 04:19 PM
Fuzzy Knight   Finally caught up with your story Konrad, your wri...   Aug 18 2005, 05:27 PM
minque   Yes...what he just said...very good! :cake: ...   Aug 18 2005, 08:19 PM
Lucidarius   Interesting story. I like how Konrad is discoverin...   Aug 22 2005, 12:22 PM


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