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Neck' Thall
post Aug 10 2005, 03:59 AM
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Now This is my first fan fic and im just seeing if people like my idea.

Prologue

Ryan was walking down a PC game isle when he saw the game.... “Morowwind”. He loved all RPG games since his first D&D game six years before and this would top them all. Even better was the cheap price, $ 29.95!! He immediately took out his wallet and went to the cashier to buy the game. Then he and his parents went home, them to watch an R rated film (Ryan was only 14 at the time), and he to load Morrowind.

Unfortunately, he was unable to load it until 10:00 because he had some parent assigned homework to do. When he was finally finished, he charged down to ground level and then went in to his houses sub-basement, where his families four computers (one for each person) were each seated.

He practically punched the “ON” button and waited anxiously for the Computer to boot. When it was done booting he ripped the Morrowind box open, put the CD into the drive, and began reading the manual, clicking occasionally when asked. He was finished with the manual by the time it was fully loaded and double-clicked on the sun-and-moon icon on his desktop.

When he started it up he realized that it was 11:00 PM, but kept on playing, even though he was very groggy. He fell asleep just as his cursor landed on new game. He had the strangest dream that night. He heard a kind, motherly voice saying:

"Ryan, the outlander from above, they have taken you from the Imperial City's Prison, first by carriage and now by boat, to the east, to Morrowind. You have been chosen, you are the first, and others will follow. Fear not, I will guide you...."

He was roughly shaken awake and tried to stay asleep but was force to open his eyes when the shaking continued. When he looked up he was startled to full wakefulness. Standing above him was a man who was so dark he could be called black except for the tint of blue in his skin.

"Hey wake up laddie. What happened? Were you having a bad dream?" said the man as
he stuck out his hand

Ryan took his hand and stood up.

"What? What is this place? Who are you? What are you? Why is the ground moving?"

The man gave him a wooden cup of a dark red liquid, which he drank. It had a sweet taste to it. After he drank it the man said,

"I am Jiub the Dunmer, or Dark Elf as you Imperials call us, and we are on a ship from Cyrodiil that has docked at Morrowind..."

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post Aug 16 2005, 09:50 PM
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Your take on things are quite different, Neck' Thall. I like that you include the other fan fic characters and their previous actions, although I still like to read about every character's reflections on the usual Morrowind quests. Even though the quests are often the same, each writer adds something new and with their own individual perspective. So either way, inventing new quests or doing the 'normal' quests, would personally be fine for this reader. smile.gif You have good descriptions and it's easy to follow your character's thoughts on events and people.


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Neck' Thall   Morrowind   Aug 10 2005, 03:59 AM
Channler   heh, thats a unique idea.. Awsome, could be pretty...   Aug 10 2005, 04:15 AM
Neck' Thall   Thank you. :D I got one persom who likes it!...   Aug 10 2005, 04:18 AM
Channler   You might have to simplify the story for Dantrag :...   Aug 10 2005, 04:20 AM
Dantrag   I'm just a punching bag for insults. :( T...   Aug 10 2005, 05:14 PM
Neck' Thall   Yeah, Ive been wondering about that..... :( Edit:...   Aug 10 2005, 04:21 AM
Sir Radont   I liked it, it was a quick read which is all I hav...   Aug 10 2005, 10:44 AM
minque   Heey!! That´s a nice approach..very intere...   Aug 10 2005, 11:15 AM
Kiln   This is truly an original way to start your story....   Aug 10 2005, 12:42 PM
Neck' Thall   Thx guys (and Girl) :cake: :cake: :cake: ----...   Aug 10 2005, 04:47 PM
Soulseeker3.0   not bad reminds me of something else i've seen...   Aug 10 2005, 05:05 PM
Kell-Reevor   Cool. I thought about doing a story like this onc...   Aug 10 2005, 05:42 PM
Neck' Thall   Thx for the compliments :D please tell me if there...   Aug 10 2005, 08:43 PM
Dantrag   You misspelled "grammatical" Sorry, ...   Aug 10 2005, 10:05 PM
MerGirl   It's good. I do not see glaring grammar errors...   Aug 10 2005, 09:42 PM
Neck' Thall   THx alot mergirl...i didn't know that about fa...   Aug 10 2005, 09:56 PM
MerGirl   It depends... Do you feel more comfortable writi...   Aug 10 2005, 10:09 PM
Dantrag   Not entirely true. First person is easier in tha...   Aug 10 2005, 10:12 PM
MerGirl   Well, for me, 3rd person is easier in terms of, ...   Aug 11 2005, 12:13 AM
Neck' Thall   Thx for pointing that out :whistle: THX Mergirl il...   Aug 10 2005, 10:10 PM
Soulseeker3.0   not bad Neck' Thall   Aug 10 2005, 10:33 PM
Dantrag   Yep - limited and omniscient. limited is when ...   Aug 11 2005, 12:22 AM
Soulseeker3.0   I though i exaped this with english >:( >:...   Aug 11 2005, 12:37 AM
treydog   Although the start might be considered "gener...   Aug 11 2005, 05:51 PM
Neck' Thall   Treydog, thats exactly what my dad told me about t...   Aug 11 2005, 06:17 PM
Kiln   You really should try and set your own goals rathe...   Aug 11 2005, 07:13 PM
Neck' Thall   Thx everyone but I've decided to continue with...   Aug 11 2005, 10:04 PM
minque   good.....Ryan has apparently accepted he´s in the ...   Aug 11 2005, 10:15 PM
Soulseeker3.0   good job and let me guess the other two people you...   Aug 11 2005, 10:50 PM
Neck' Thall   Right on the dot... though i may have to mention l...   Aug 11 2005, 10:54 PM
minque   Oops.....I was reading too fast..didn´t grasp the ...   Aug 11 2005, 11:14 PM
Wolfie   Hehe Jonacin can't get mentions because his st...   Aug 11 2005, 11:22 PM
Neck' Thall   Umm...I haven't read Jonacin's story can i...   Aug 11 2005, 11:24 PM
minque   Here jonacin´s story   Aug 11 2005, 11:27 PM
Neck' Thall   THX minque   Aug 11 2005, 11:28 PM
treydog   Hey- I think I know that "nice Breton." ...   Aug 12 2005, 08:10 PM
Konradude   Ahem -Oblivion-Just a thought-Konradude's mult...   Aug 12 2005, 08:44 PM
Neck' Thall   Here's and Update Also Konraddude wha do you m...   Aug 12 2005, 08:54 PM
BobV   Nioce. Would the third arrival happen to be a dun...   Aug 12 2005, 08:57 PM
Neck' Thall   Mabey... what is house Dren Btw i know what Indori...   Aug 12 2005, 08:59 PM
BobV   Dres are even more criminal than Locke. They'r...   Aug 12 2005, 09:00 PM
Neck' Thall   Ohhh...Then he won't be Dren cuz he hates slav...   Aug 12 2005, 09:03 PM
minque   Heey Neck! He didn´t learn from Serene´s encou...   Aug 12 2005, 09:07 PM
Neck' Thall   Thx Minque i fixed them but what was the fourth mu...   Aug 12 2005, 09:14 PM
BobV   Hypha Facia   Aug 12 2005, 09:17 PM
Konradude   As in read topic oblivion.....I only know 3, bungl...   Aug 12 2005, 09:15 PM
Neck' Thall   Ohh...Unfourtunatly those where the ones i have...   Aug 12 2005, 09:16 PM
Neck' Thall   Thx BobV Now That iv'e fixed it i'll just ...   Aug 12 2005, 09:25 PM
Neck' Thall   Here's another Update! -------------------...   Aug 14 2005, 12:28 AM
Kiln   Very nice...I'd tell you what I liked best but...   Aug 14 2005, 02:01 AM
Neck' Thall   Thx Kiln, Though i must say you may need to change...   Aug 14 2005, 02:25 AM
minque   Niiice Neckie!.....you got the hang of it real...   Aug 14 2005, 11:41 AM
Soulseeker3.0   good job neck   Aug 14 2005, 06:48 PM
Dantrag   cool story. I like the way stuff comes naturally...   Aug 15 2005, 05:40 AM
MerGirl   *claps* Good job, me likey! :) I really like...   Aug 15 2005, 11:27 PM
Neck' Thall   Update!! --------------------------------...   Aug 16 2005, 01:47 AM
Kiln   Nice update, I like the human feel you give to the...   Aug 16 2005, 02:43 AM
Soulseeker3.0   YAY! good job Neck.   Aug 16 2005, 04:34 PM
minque   Very well written and lots of details......great w...   Aug 16 2005, 06:58 PM
Wolfie   An interesting read, nice to see the story from a ...   Aug 16 2005, 06:59 PM
treydog   Good updates. It is interesting to watch Ryan lea...   Aug 18 2005, 02:28 PM
Neck' Thall   Update! --------------------------------------...   Aug 19 2005, 05:09 AM
Konradude   Very very good! I like how you include simple ...   Aug 19 2005, 10:41 AM
treydog   Good addition- the reflection on his "real...   Aug 19 2005, 01:28 PM
Soulseeker3.0   good job Neck' Thall   Aug 19 2005, 02:23 PM
minque   Niiice Neckie...really nice...I almost felt sorry ...   Aug 19 2005, 07:45 PM
Lucidarius   Good update where we follow his reasoning and trai...   Aug 20 2005, 03:46 PM
Neck' Thall   Sry guys for being so long with this update. I wa...   Sep 4 2005, 08:49 PM
Soulseeker3.0   ??? what will happen next!? great update Neck.   Sep 4 2005, 09:14 PM
Neck' Thall   Dude its called a cliffhanger...   Sep 4 2005, 09:21 PM
Soulseeker3.0   yah I know but I couldn't help it :P   Sep 4 2005, 09:25 PM
Neck' Thall   Update!! and yeah i know its short. -----...   Sep 6 2005, 03:09 AM
Soulseeker3.0   nice one NEcky   Sep 6 2005, 03:11 AM
OverrideB1   I just caught up with this story ~ there are so ma...   Sep 8 2005, 07:26 PM
Neck' Thall   I'm sry if this part is bad but im not very go...   Sep 11 2005, 06:43 PM
Soulseeker3.0   not bad, continue please   Sep 11 2005, 08:26 PM
Kell-Reevor   Very good so far, I just caught up. I like how yo...   Sep 12 2005, 08:08 PM
minque   Very nice Neckie! keep it coming and you are g...   Sep 19 2005, 05:25 PM
Neck' Thall   Hope you guys like this update! --------------...   Sep 24 2005, 10:14 PM
Soulseeker3.0   not bad, make it a good fight with the leader :)   Sep 25 2005, 07:20 PM
Kiln   Very interesting, waiting for the next part.   Sep 25 2005, 11:54 PM
Neck' Thall   With a deafening roar, the massively armored body ...   Oct 9 2005, 03:58 AM
minque   ahh Neckie! just found out you updated! th...   Oct 13 2005, 11:34 PM
Kiln   Great addition to your story, I'd been waiting...   Oct 22 2005, 04:06 PM


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