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The Story Of Kiln The Wanderer, Chapter 7 and on... |
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Kiln |
Aug 18 2005, 08:04 PM
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Joined: 22-June 05
From: Balmora, Eight Plates

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Alright for anyone who wishes to read the first six chapters, here's the link: http://www.waiting4oblivion.com/forums/ind...p?showtopic=675I would recommend reading them, they're likely the best of the story. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 7Kiln walked around town pointlessly until dark, he wasn't tired. He couldn't help but wonder what trouble York was in and how he needed his help. He walked back towards the Eight Plates and entered. Tomorrow he would go to the fort. It would be an awkward return even though he'd heard Larrius had left days before, off to Gnisis for his evaluation. Larrius was quite corrupt, perhaps he'd been discovered. Kiln sat with Rami and the drunks listening to them laugh and sing. He stared at Rami's face when she wasn't paying attention, amazed at her beauty. The most popular drink was likely flin but he drank what he always had, the bitter but effective mazte. He poured more of the drink for himself, watching the brown liquor flow softly from the opening and into the tall mug. At the moment everything seemed perfect but things never stayed like that for long in his experience. In the morning he would get his armor repaired, buy some supplies and food and wait until the following day to meet York at the fort. Kiln opened the journal and read more of it's pages, "Today I talked to Caius again, he wants me to speak with some stupid orc in the mage's guild about doing a favor or something, I'm nothing but an errand boy I swear..." Kiln thought for a moment, he'd met with the same orc...strange how their paths had led together so many times but it was probably nothing. For now he would sleep and worry more about that later, he put the journal back into it's pouch and lied it beside the bed. Rami walked in lying down beside him and he fell into a deep sleep holding her close to him. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sorry it's so short but my pain meds suck and I'm getting off soon. This post has been edited by Kiln: Feb 16 2006, 05:15 PM
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He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche
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Kiln |
Aug 19 2005, 02:20 AM
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Kiln awoke the next day and slowly crawled out of bed trying not to wake Rami from her sleep. He collected his things and slowly closed the door behind him.
The drunks were back already, Kiln laughed as he walked to the doorway and left the building. It was already past noon by the look of things, he'd definately slept in later than he'd hoped.
He staggered through the street towards the armorer's shop nearby and opened the door slowly. He was greeted by the elf behind the counter,
"Hello, welcome to my shop...do you need something in particular sir?" he asked politely
"I'll just have a look about if you don't mind." Kiln replied looking over the various types of armor
"So...why do you need a new set of armor? If you don't mind me asking that is..." the wood elf said trying to start a conversation
"No reason...just thought I might get into a little mercenary work." Kiln said not revealing anything, mostly because he didn't know
"Really? Are you searching for new armor or would you like repairs on that chestplate of yours?" he asked clearly trying to find any way to make a profit
Kiln looked down at his chestplate, untied the straps, and lied it on the counter.
"How soon could you have this done and how much would it cost me?" Kiln asked
"I could have it done by sunset at least...maybe sooner. I could do it for about eighty gold." he said looking the armor over
"Eighty gold? I could buy a new chestplate for less than that. Forty." Kiln said trying to get a better price
"Fifty...sounds fair to me." the armorer said
"Fourty five and no higher." Kiln said
"Fine then, fourty five it is...I'll have it done by sundown" he said as he picked up the chestplate looking it over
Kiln was satisfied so he went to the next order of business, new clothing. His current clothing was horribly ripped and torn all over, it was time for a change. He walked up the stairway in the center of town and into the clothier's shop.
Milie was such a nice woman and he regreted all the times he'd stolen from her previously but those days were behind him now. After a while of looking around the shop and asking prices and such he agreed to pay her for some common looking brown pants, a shirt, and new shoes.
They weren't anything special but they were a step up from what he'd been wearing so he was happy, he went around looking at various shops until nightfall when he went to pick up his chestplate.
"Here you go." the short bosmer said as he handed Kiln the chestplate
"This is...very good." Kiln said, amazed at the work
"It's as good as new, spread the word of my work friend." he said as he accepted the money for the repairs
Kiln paid him sixty gold instead of the agreed fourty five and left the shop towards the Eight Plates. He walked in and laughed as the drunks danced and Dulnea glared at them,
"Get off my table!" She yelled madly at the drunks
The random things that happened at the pub made it Kiln's favorite spot to stay. He watched as Dulnea went upstairs into the store room and came down with a broom, swatting at the three men dancing on the table until they came down.
She continued to yell as he went down to his room where Rami was sitting on the bed. He knew he would have to explain to her that he was leaving soon, but could not find the words. He laid down, worried and unable to sleep. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I hated having to go through these days in my story...I wish I'd had York say "Meet me tomorrow" rather than two days...just slows things down too much...
This post has been edited by Kiln: Aug 19 2005, 07:21 AM
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He who fights with monsters should be careful lest he thereby become a monster. And if thou gaze long into an abyss, the abyss will also gaze into thee. - Friedrich Nietzsche
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Kiln The Story Of Kiln The Wanderer Aug 18 2005, 08:04 PM minque Very nice Kiln....really . Good descriptions....I ... Aug 18 2005, 08:14 PM Kiln I fixed it Minque, I'm getting off for now...s... Aug 18 2005, 08:19 PM minque Awww are you ill? and still makes wonderful update... Aug 18 2005, 08:20 PM Kiln Nope no illness...I just got back from ear surgery... Aug 18 2005, 08:22 PM Soulseeker3.0 well good update Kiln, and hope you feel better. Aug 18 2005, 10:05 PM Soulseeker3.0 lol oh well that was good kiln, granted you had th... Aug 19 2005, 03:25 AM BobV Very good updatesesss. Aug 19 2005, 10:17 AM minque Nice details here, the business with the armorer a... Aug 19 2005, 12:18 PM treydog Don't be too concerned about the "extra... Aug 19 2005, 01:35 PM Dantrag I think I've gotten rid of six years in a sent... Aug 19 2005, 01:46 PM Kiln Kiln hadn't slept a bit, he was worried about ... Aug 19 2005, 05:04 PM Kell-Reevor My usual statement....
Good as usual, keep it up... Aug 19 2005, 05:10 PM Soulseeker3.0 lol I wonder if he would have opened up you said y... Aug 19 2005, 07:20 PM minque Interesting development in this story I must say..... Aug 19 2005, 07:44 PM Kiln Warning:After reading this you'll never think ... Aug 19 2005, 10:28 PM minque Hehe......now wasnīt that sweet.....Kiln the Dance... Aug 19 2005, 10:57 PM Soulseeker3.0 lol ha good job kiln. Aug 19 2005, 11:28 PM Neck' Thall HELP ME!!!!! I MUST THINK OF S... Aug 20 2005, 12:18 AM Soulseeker3.0 don't know if this will help but banana phone? Aug 20 2005, 02:27 AM Lucidarius I really like your story, Kiln. Great idea to weav... Aug 20 2005, 03:25 PM treydog "The Story of Kiln the Not-Dancer" Hmm-... Aug 22 2005, 03:01 PM Kiln As they arrived at the silt strider and paid for t... Aug 22 2005, 05:42 PM Lucidarius Good update where we learn more about Kiln's b... Aug 22 2005, 07:47 PM Kiln There, all fixed. Thanks for pointing that out. :... Aug 22 2005, 08:04 PM Soulseeker3.0 Good job kiln please keep it up Aug 22 2005, 10:54 PM Neck' Thall Ditto...Thats now my favorite word cuz i cant wrig... Aug 23 2005, 12:49 AM Kiln If you have a complaint, feel free to voice it. I... Aug 23 2005, 01:07 AM Neck' Thall no i said compliments! Thats as in i like it b... Aug 23 2005, 01:11 AM Kiln The door creaked open slowly and a tall dunmer man... Aug 23 2005, 03:55 PM minque Ahh..ok so he met his old friend...well he surely ... Aug 23 2005, 04:00 PM treydog Nice additions showing Kiln's past. A very im... Aug 23 2005, 05:51 PM Soulseeker3.0 I was gonig to say something like when Trey said S... Aug 23 2005, 09:40 PM Neck' Thall I like...but a guy is wearing a skirt?!? i kn... Aug 24 2005, 06:06 AM Lucidarius Really good update. I like how Kiln at first doesn... Aug 24 2005, 09:12 AM Kiln A skirt is the piece of clothing he wears in the g... Aug 24 2005, 01:47 PM Kiln The clothing mission with my own little twist to i... Aug 24 2005, 02:47 PM Neck' Thall kool...but i'm wondering if the men are just s... Aug 24 2005, 03:40 PM treydog Interesting twist- I guess Kiln really can't ... Aug 24 2005, 04:09 PM minque Ayye......Poor Kiln, thatīs what you get when you ... Aug 24 2005, 07:29 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job kiln keep it up
stupid corrupt guards ... Aug 24 2005, 09:44 PM Kiln Completely inspired by him Minque, that's his ... Aug 24 2005, 09:51 PM Soulseeker3.0 LOL nice dream KIln. and keep up the good work... Aug 24 2005, 09:58 PM minque You continue this very well.....lots of good updat... Aug 24 2005, 10:05 PM Kiln While near the fire, Kiln removed the journal from... Aug 24 2005, 11:33 PM minque Ah another good one..just perfect before going to ... Aug 24 2005, 11:38 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job KIln :goodjob: Aug 24 2005, 11:40 PM treydog Interesting dream-sequence. Rotten Camonna Tong p... Aug 25 2005, 02:24 PM Lucidarius You update fast, great. I like the way you put in ... Aug 25 2005, 03:33 PM Kiln The dream sequence was somewhat meant to confuse y... Aug 25 2005, 07:00 PM minque O-o.....beware of the nixies......there are storie... Aug 25 2005, 07:05 PM Megil Tel-Zeke "He looked about as a treestump crashed nearb... Aug 25 2005, 07:32 PM Kiln Alright then, I'll have a look at those things... Aug 25 2005, 07:46 PM Megil Tel-Zeke For future reference, just now that instead of rep... Aug 25 2005, 08:28 PM Kiln Ahhhhhh....soooo hard to please Megil....read it a... Aug 25 2005, 10:02 PM Megil Tel-Zeke not hard to please, just trying to be helpful ^ ^.... Aug 25 2005, 10:07 PM Soulseeker3.0 well I thought it was nice.... Aug 25 2005, 10:49 PM Kiln Kiln glanced nervously from hound to hound, waitin... Aug 26 2005, 05:01 PM Megil Tel-Zeke Very impressive addition. i was acutally worried ... Aug 26 2005, 06:24 PM Soulseeker3.0 wow nice Kiln! Aug 26 2005, 09:53 PM treydog Some good action sequences there. I like the fact... Aug 27 2005, 12:41 PM Kiln Thanks everyone. :D
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"as he lie there" should be ... Aug 27 2005, 07:48 PM Soulseeker3.0 good job kiln. Aug 27 2005, 08:02 PM Kiln Fine then, I guess I'll put laid rather than l... Aug 27 2005, 08:04 PM minque Superb as always Kiln....You really put life into ... Aug 28 2005, 10:28 AM Kiln Chapter 8
York stood in the open doorway, waiting ... Aug 28 2005, 07:47 PM Megil Tel-Zeke alas, no complaints. at least none yet, I'll r... Aug 28 2005, 09:30 PM Lucidarius Your story is good and the character and actions o... Aug 28 2005, 10:14 PM Soulseeker3.0 very well done Kiln please keep it up. Aug 28 2005, 11:26 PM treydog More good additions; I particularly liked the way ... Aug 29 2005, 02:56 PM Kiln As York and Jinx rowed the boat closer and closer ... Sep 1 2005, 09:14 PM Kiln After some time of doing nothing, Kiln fell asleep... Sep 3 2005, 06:21 PM Fuzzy Knight Interesting... :)
Good writing as always, well w... Sep 3 2005, 06:26 PM Wurlon Heh I like it, especially since it's tied to t... Sep 3 2005, 09:56 PM Soulseeker3.0 wow great stuff kiln. please keep up the good work... Sep 3 2005, 10:59 PM mplantinga Great story. Please, sir, can I have some more? Sep 24 2005, 01:29 AM Neck' Thall Nice writing man. I wonder what'll happen nex... Sep 24 2005, 09:57 PM Megil Tel-Zeke I do believe kiln has said the story was postponed... Sep 28 2005, 06:28 PM mplantinga That would be very sad; but real life happens. All... Sep 28 2005, 08:20 PM Kiln I wasn't sure if I would continue this, but it... Oct 9 2005, 11:51 AM minque Ahhh! Iīm so happy you decided to continue....... Oct 9 2005, 12:08 PM Neck' Thall Yay!! great story! Oct 9 2005, 04:03 PM Soulseeker3.0 YAY! more Kiln! good job Oct 9 2005, 08:27 PM mplantinga Thanks for finding some time to continue the story... Oct 10 2005, 05:41 PM Kiln Kiln had walked for hours at and around the camp, ... Oct 21 2005, 01:39 AM Soulseeker3.0 very good Kiln, I like it alot. good thing you fou... Oct 21 2005, 02:04 AM mplantinga An interesting development. I like how you've ... Oct 21 2005, 06:00 PM Kiln They walked the dark tunnels before them slowly, t... Oct 27 2005, 11:43 PM mplantinga A great update, as always. I was a little worried ... Oct 27 2005, 11:55 PM Soulseeker3.0 I liked it Kiln, please continue the story. When w... Oct 28 2005, 10:54 PM Kiln York can't remember exactly where the bow is l... Oct 31 2005, 03:12 AM mplantinga Sounds like an excellent case of team effort; hope... Oct 31 2005, 09:28 PM Soulseeker3.0
well thats about right.... DITTO That was an exel... Oct 31 2005, 10:51 PM Kiln My own variant of the battle with the ghost in the... Dec 7 2005, 03:48 AM mplantinga Thanks for the great update. You captured quite we... Dec 7 2005, 07:11 PM Soulseeker3.0 wow, I agree with mplantinga. Very nice addition K... Dec 7 2005, 10:40 PM Kiln This scene was incredibly difficult for me to writ... Dec 31 2005, 04:02 AM Soulseeker3.0 I see how it was difficult, fight scenes are usual... Dec 31 2005, 04:50 AM
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