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Dantrag
post Aug 15 2005, 03:39 AM
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"Is that it?" Cali asked impatiently. they had been scouring the ashlands for days looking for the Urshilaku.

"Possibly." Ahnaressu answered, squinting his eyes to try to tell whether or not those tiny dots on the horizon were yurts. "I can't tell until we get closer."

They kept walking, but Ahnaressu stopped to pick up a tiring Relgar.

In a matter of minutes, Ahnaressu was sure that this was indeed his tribe. He took a deep breath and continued walking. Would his tribe accept him anymore after leaving for so long? He would find his answer soon enough, he decided.

An ashlander ran out from behind a rock and stood ahead of them, obviously one of the perimeter guard. His hand was resting easily on the hilt of a chitin blade.

"You are not allowed here. you are no friend of the Urshilaku." the elderly dunmer said with authority.

"You are wrong, Yassour." Ahnaressu said with a smile, recognizing the kindly but stern old mer. "I am of this tribe."

The dunmer was astonished that this young stranger knew his name, but didn't show it. Who did he think he was?

"What is your name?"

"Ahnaressu Sul-Khar." he answered.

Yassour squinted, trying to find similarities between this mer and the one he knew six years ago. "Hmmm, yes." he said, "Son of Zaldin."

Ahnaressu smiled. "So is he." he said, nodding his head towards the sleeping Relgar he was carrying.

"We thought the baby was dead in the raid. I'm glad he wasn't." Yassour said solemnly, remembering that fateful day. "Oh, where are my manners? Who is this young lady?"

"I am Cali, nice to meet you." she said with a slight curtsy.

"Well, Cali, Ahnaressu; come sit in my yurt for awhile while I speak to the ashkhan of your return."

"Thank you." Ahnaressu said while Yassour led them to his yurt.

They all sat down by the fire while Yassour went to inform Sul-Matuul.

"Nice place." Cali remarked, trying to start some conversation.

"Yeah - not exactly the welcome I was expecting though." Ahnaressu said sadly. "When we walked through the camp, nobody even recognized me."

"It's been a few years..." Cali said, trying to reason with him.

Ahnaressu was about to answer, but Yassour came back in. "Sul-Matuul wishes to speak with you." he said flatly.

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It seems I neglected this story since I started writing parodies...well here you go.

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Dantrag
post Aug 23 2005, 06:14 PM
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Wow. I have been slacking, huh?

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Ahnaressu entered the yurt, to see the ashkhan himself, the gulakhans, and none other than Nibani Maesa, the wise woman, sitting around a fire that was blazing in the middle of the yurt.

"Sit down, Ahnaressu." Sul-Matuul said, pointing to an open place around the fire.

Ahnaressu obeyed, wondering why exactly he was here.

"Nibani has discovered something that may interest you." he continued, once Ahnaressu took his place.

Stop beating around the bush and tell me! Ahnaressu thought impatiently, but composed himself and politely said, "And what is that?"

"A prophecy." Nibani cut in.

Ahnaressu raised an eyebrow. "The nerevarine prophecy? I've heard that it is near to its complet-"

"No, the Nerevarine prophecy is irrelevant to this one." Nibani said, cutting Ahnaressu off. "This one is not even written in the Elder Scrolls, to my knowledge. It is merely a vision I have had ever since the attack." With that explained, Nibani asked Ahnaressu to tell her everything that had happened to him since the attack. As he did so, Nibani would nod, as if everything was becoming clear. When he was finished with his story, Nibani began telling him of the prophecy.

Ahnaressu sat, listening, as Nibani told him of the visions. One particular scene was quite familiar; one with Valnor swinging at him after killing the ashkhan; possibly the entire tribe. she also told him of the voice that spoke while she was seeing the vision.

"You are the one to kill this exiled ashlander, if my visions are correct. I can sense the lust for revenge in you, I can see it in your eyes. You might even be able to stop him from destroying all of the tribes. My visions are sometimes what could be, and sometimes what will be. I never know until it happens, or something else happens to prevent it."

"But you can't see beyond that last scene can you? You can't see if I will defeat him, hell, you can't even see if I will fight him." Ahnaressu said, just to be argumentative; he didn't like seeing his future as predetermined, he liked to think that he controlled his own future.

"No, I can't." Nibani replied. "But you know as well as I that there will be a fight, but the winner has not yet been determined."

"Tell me one more time," Ahnaressu said, "What did the voice say?"

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Dantrag   Ahnaressu's Travels Ch.10   Aug 15 2005, 03:39 AM
Kiln   Yes, you need to find a way to juggle your parodie...   Aug 15 2005, 05:27 AM
Neck' Thall   Nicee....But u havn't commented on my updates....   Aug 15 2005, 05:27 AM
treydog   Still one of my favorite stories.... I wonder if ...   Aug 16 2005, 03:10 PM
Konradude   Really good Dantrag, I haven't read the others...   Aug 16 2005, 03:20 PM
minque   Dantrag! I´m very happy to see this, I agree w...   Aug 16 2005, 06:52 PM
Kiln   What did the voice say Dantrag? Tell me, tell me,...   Aug 23 2005, 06:21 PM
minque   I thought I´ve seen the worst cliffie..but THIS on...   Aug 23 2005, 07:34 PM
Dantrag   It says --- minque, be patient Or you may invoke ...   Aug 23 2005, 07:35 PM
minque   Oooops..... :O :ph34r: :whistle: OK I´ll bribe...   Aug 23 2005, 07:37 PM
Neck' Thall   I up that bribe to a :cake: :cake: :cake: :cak...   Aug 24 2005, 06:03 AM
treydog   I bow my cliff-hanger posting head in acknowledgem...   Aug 24 2005, 04:03 PM
Dantrag   Ahnaressu walked out of the tent, the words echoin...   Sep 4 2005, 09:09 PM
Neck' Thall   Kool...hey will Cali and Anheressu get married, cu...   Sep 4 2005, 09:24 PM
minque   It was.....and I thank you for that.....it´s alw...   Sep 4 2005, 09:33 PM
mplantinga   I was very excited when I found this story here. I...   Sep 21 2005, 11:57 PM
Dantrag   Hmmm, yeah. I stopped posting in the official fo...   Sep 22 2005, 01:50 AM
minque   If I remember correctly .....I too was reading ...   Sep 22 2005, 10:54 PM
Dantrag   Wow. So much for that weekend. September. Wow. I d...   Dec 7 2005, 12:12 AM
minque   YAAYY....an update! Nice Danny....now continue...   Dec 7 2005, 12:37 AM
mplantinga   It's good to see that Ahnaressu has left for t...   Dec 7 2005, 01:32 AM
pixiewoo   I can't wait!   Dec 12 2005, 07:20 PM
Jonajosa   Can't believe I missed this! I was waiting...   Dec 16 2005, 07:46 AM
Honorius   Where is the rest!?!?! its been over ...   Jan 23 2008, 05:14 AM
raggidman   it's very sad when a potential writer just ......   May 1 2008, 06:57 PM
Dantrag   Surprise. ----- Ahnaressu's trek was fairly...   May 15 2008, 05:50 AM
mplantinga   Surprise hardly begins to describe me feelings at ...   May 15 2008, 03:49 PM
treydog   This is an excellent pre-birthday present. I am s...   May 16 2008, 06:32 PM
minque   Ahh Danny! This makes me happy! I'm so...   May 17 2008, 12:14 AM


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